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【话题分析】
本模块的话题是“问题”,与此相关的写作任务是陈述问题或提出建议。常用一般现在时态。写这类文章时可以遵循以下步骤：
1. 描述问题时,往往开头先说出“问题”是什么
2. 简要叙述问题产生的原因和经过等
3. 针对问题提出一些可行的解决办法
4. 最后表达希望或者祝福
【有用表达】
1. I have problems in ...我在.....有困难
2. I have trouble with...我在.....有困难
3. I can’t get along well with ... 我没法和......相处的好
4. I don't know what to do.我不知道做什么
5. l have to....when...当...时候，我不得不......
6. I hate...bacause....我憎恨......因为...
7. I can't understand why...我无法理解为什么......
8. I feel bored with...我对......感到厌烦
9. They are not satisfied with me. 他们对我不满意。
10. I am not good at... / I don’t do well in.... 我不擅长......
11. I fail in.../ I fail to do...我在...失败
12. Something goes wrong. 出了问题
13. I don’t know how to deal with.... 我不知道如何处理
14. My parents are always busy with work so that they spend little time companying me. 我的父母总是忙于工作结果是他们很少花时间陪伴我。
15. That’s why I feel lonely.那就是为什么我感到孤独的
16. Can you give me some advice/ suggestions.... 你能给我一些建议吗？
17. We feel stressed because the final eaxm is around the corner.我们感到有压力的，因为期末考试就要到了。
18.I wonder how I can deal with.... 我想知道我怎么样可以处理...
19. Can you tell me ....你能告诉我...
20. meet some problems遇到一些问题
21 . make mistakes 错误;出错
22. have few friends 几乎没有朋友
23. have pressure in study学习有压力
24. lose oneself 失去自我
25. feel sleepy 感到困倦
26.tell sb,the truth 告诉某人真相
27. ask sb,for advice 向某人寻求建议
28. take an active part in 积极参加
29. make good use of充分利用
30.explain to sb,sth.向某人解释某事
31. never give up 永不放弃
32.I always feel nervous because the pressure of study is too great for me我总是感觉紧张因为学习的压力对我来说太大了
33. You should choose proper ways to relax yourself 你应该选择适当的方法来放松自己。
34. You can talk with parents, teachers or friendsto ask them for suggestions.你可以与父母,老师或朋友们交谈,向他们寻求建议。
35. You can also listen to music and read booksIt's a good way to relax yourselves.你也以听音乐和读书。这是放松自己的好方法
36.If we have too much pressure,we'd better see a doctor.如果我们有太大的压力,我们最好看医生
【写作实例1】
根据下面提示，写一封信给Tom,字数100左右。
1. 假设你是 Amy,目前在九年级学习,和班上的其他同学一样,感到有压力。
2.一周上六天课,每天的作业很多,几乎没有时间做自己想做的事。
3.没有要好的朋友，感到很孤独。
4.同学中也有些人不知道如何处理这个问题。
5.请求Tom给你提供一些有益的建议。
【写作思路】
1.描述现象，引出话题 Like other students in my class, I often feel...
2.想法理由 We know it is very important to work hard and...
3.解决办法What should we do ...
【参考范文】
Dear Tom ,
My name is Amy and now I'm a student of Grade Nine. Like other students in my class , I often feel stressed. We have classes from Monday to Saturday and we always have a lot of homework to do.
We know it is very important to work hard and hand in our homework ontime , but the problem is that we spend so much time doing our homework that we cannot find any time for our hobbies, We need to do our homework but we also like our hobbies. We are busy doing our homework in the free time every day. So many of us have no close friends. We are very lonely. Some of us don’t know how to solve these problems.
What should we do Can you offer me some suggestions I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours
Amy
【写作实例2】
假如你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生 Ben 的来信，他提出了所而临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，说明 Ben 的问题，提出你的建议并陈述理由。
Ben's problems 问题1： 朋友少，感觉孤单 问题2：英语单词难记
Your advice and reasons 参加学校社团(club) 来结识朋友少,感觉孤单更多朋友 ...... 1.多阅读英语故事、新闻从而在运用中学单词
2....
【写作思路】
针对朋友少的问题提出建议:
问题1：felt lonely , few friends
建议：join some clubs , make more friends ,friendly , smile at others
问题2：英语单词难记
建议通过多阅读、写日记来记 remember English words, reading more English storics and news ,
keeping an English diary英语单词
2.表达希望和祝愿 hope,useful,good luck
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble
【参考范文】
Dear Ben，
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that you always felt lonelybecauso of havingfew friends. I think you should join some clubs in school. In this way, you can make more friends that share the same interest with you. Besides , you'd better be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are surcto get a smile in return. You also said that you found itdificult to remember English words . Reading more English stories and news can help you carn Englishwords in a practical way, In addition, if you get into the habit of keeping an English diary every day ,it will be easier for you to remember more words, I hope you will find these suggestions useful.Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
【写作实例3】
为了帮助学生迎接中考,在中考前几个月,老师一般都会进行复习教学。一家英语教学研究中心( English Teaching ResearchCenter)正在对中考英语复习教学现状进行调查。请你根据下面提示,写一篇英语短文,向他们介绍你们班的英语复习课的情况，谈谈你对英语复习课的感受及看法,并提出建议。
写作要点:
1. Your feelings about your Englishrevision classes.
2. Class activities: a. What did your Englishteacher usually do in class
b.What did you usually do in class
3.Your advice on English revision classes toyour English teacher.
要求:
1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3.词数不少于 80,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数
【参考范文】
I think my English revision classes were boringand tiring.
In class, my English teacher kept talking from the beginning to the end,which made me bored and sleepy.She explained the rules of words and grammar, We did nothing but listen and take notes, She always asked us to memorize all the words we had learned. There were somany exercises to do and exams to take, which made me stressed out.
I hope English revision classes can be more interesting and useful. Teachers should organize different kinds of activities to help us practice English, such as playing games，role-playing conversations, watching English videos and so on, What's more, I don't like serious teachers. I hope they can be more friendly to us.
【写作实例4】
假如你是李华,你的朋友 Peter 来信说自己太胖了,经常感到不舒服。他对于自己的肥胖感到异常焦虑。请你参考下面的提示信息,为他提几条建议帮助他健康减肥.要求:1.要点齐全,可适当发挥;
2.语句连贯,100 词左右(开头已给出,不计人总词数)。
How to become thin and healthy
Food : don't eat too much; don't eat snacks
Sleep：go to bed early
Exercise：one hour every day
【参考范文】
Dear Peter，
I'm sorry to hear that you are worried because you are too fat and don't feel well. I'd like to give you some advice.Firstly, you'd better not eat too much and you shouldn't eat any snacks either. Secondly,doing exercise will be good for your health, It is necessary for you to exercise for about an hour aday. Finally, it is important to have enough sleep. Go to bed early so that you have enough energytostudyandexercise.
You may find it a little difficult in the beginning, but you will get into the habit of living a healthy life day by day,I hope you'll get thin and healthy soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作实例5】
假如你是李华,你的好朋友 Lily 不久前参加选秀节目被淘汰了,她被这次失败困扰,无心学习。请你给她写一封 100 词左右的电子邮件,就发生在她身上的问题给予合理化建议:
1.正确看待选秀节目,享受参与的过程而不必太在意结果;
2.提醒她实现理想的途径有很多，只有努力才能获得成功;
3.鼓励她好好学习,也不要放弃个人爱好,开心地度过每一天。
【参考范文】
Dear LiLy,
I'm sorry to hear that you are feeling down because of your failure in this talent show. I'd like to share my thoughts on this matter with you.
Yes, talent shows may change one's future. They offer the opportunity to show one's talents, and give people a way to make their dreonly some people are truly talented, there is no need to take the result seriously. It may not be good for us teenagers to become famous overnight.So just enjoy the process.
In addition,there are many ways to success, and only by working hard can you chieve your goals. As a teenager you should spare no effort to study and develop your interests at the same time, which, without doubt, will enrich your future life.
Hope you'll be happy every day.
Yours.
Li Hua
【写作实例6】
随着年龄的增长,青少年越来越想摆脱父母的束缚,但是遇到烦恼和问题的时候又需要有人提供建议。那么从青少年的角度,你觉得如何才能和父母沟通得更好 请根据以上提示写一篇英语短文100词左右。
【参考范文】
With the growth of teenagers,they don't want to depend on their parents.But when they face problems,they need someone to give them suggestions.Should teenagers share their secrets with their
parents
As far as I am concerned,parents are the right persons to share secrets with.We teenagers are too young to make important decisions,or at least,we need suggestions when we need to make a decision.Parents have rich experience and their rich experience can help us take the right direction. Therefore,we need to have better communication with our parents.There is no doubt that the older we grow,the better understanding we should have with our parents.
【写作实例7】
假如你是李梅，你的美国好友Alice给你发来一封邮件。请你根据邮件中罗列的问题给她写一封信，帮她排忧解难。要求：1.文中应包括所给要点，可适当发挥；2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；3.词数80-100。
Alice's problems Suggestions
1.学习压力(pressure)大； 1.与老师、同学交流学习问题；……
2.在新的班级感到孤单； 2.尝试交新的朋友；……
3.缺少睡眠时间，总是感到疲倦。 3.合理安排时间，多锻炼……
【参考范文】
Dear Alice,
I'm sorry to know that you are not happy these days.Now,I will give you some advice on how to solve theseproblems.
First of all,you feel that you are under too much pressure.In my opinion,you can ask your teachers for help.You are supposed to communicate more with your teachers and your classmates about your study problems.And I think they can help you a lot.Besides,sometimes you feel alone in your new class.As far as I'm concerned,you can try to makenew friends with your classmates.You are in a new school,new class.Everything is different.It's a good chance for youto make new friends and start a new life.What's more,you are short of sleep and you are always tired.I suggest you arrange your time properly.And do more exercise in your free time.Last but not the least,listening to music can alsohelp you relax yourself.
l hope my suggestions can help you.I'm looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Mei

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