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一轮复习 读后续写 写作指导
目 录/contents
文本
一、
解题指导
写作思路
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三、
四、
参考范文
文本
Almost all the possessions had been sold to buy food and clothing for the family. At last nothing was left but the pet lamb, Daisy. At the thought of Parting with the little creature.Mrs Grant's heart feel sad because the children loved it very much.Having struggled hard she had to make up her mind to sell the lamb. But she could not ask any child to go for the butcher(屠夫).Finally she went herself with a heavy heart,dragging her leaden(沉重的)feet and bargained(讨价述价)with the butcher for the sale of Daisy.
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文本
While the children were all playing with the lamb,the butcher and his boy came to the door."You see l am here for the lamb"said the butcher in a loud voice. Hearing this one child ran to her mother's side, and asked what was happening in alarm.Mrs Grant gently pushed the child aside, bent down and was about to tell the truth."That's my lamb now,Charlie!" said the butcher’s boy in a playful tone,going up to Daisy with a rope in his hand.
"No, it is not your lamb.It is ours!"said Charlie placing himself in front of it.
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文本
But the boy, pushing him aside,threw a rope round Daisy’s neck,and began to drag the little creature away.The poor lamb bleated(咩咩叫)very sadly.The cry of grief which fell upon the mother's ears was too much for her,and her heart sank within her. In a moment after,the children were all around her begging with tearful eyes, and voices choked with sobs for their little pet.
"Please tell your boy to stop a moment"she said in husky(沙亚的)tones to the butcher.
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文本
The boy, at a word from the butcher, stopped dragging the lamb, and the little creature stopped its bleating.
In a trembling voice,Mrs Grant explained to her children how badly off they were after their father died. She also added that the kind butcher had given the money for Daisy.With this money,she could buy them bread to eat.
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Paragraph 1:But the more she explained the stronger her children begged for Daisy. ________________________
Paragraph 2:The butcher, who had been watching all,was touched in his heart.
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解题指导
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文体 记叙文
人称 第人三称
时态 一般过去时
Ⅰ. 文本解读
文章大意：单亲妈妈格兰特夫人独自带着几个孩子艰难度日，家里唯一的一只小羊羔黛西成了孩子们的玩伴。一天，当孩子们正在和黛西玩耍时，屠夫和他的孩子一起过来要把黛西带走，因为他们已经买下了黛西并且已经把钱给了格兰特夫人。当孩子们发现黛西要被带走时，他们极力乞求妈妈不要卖掉它，格兰特夫人对此感到非常难过。
one day, after school
Ⅱ. 记叙文的六要素
When
Where
Who
What
Why
How
Mrs Grant, children, the butcher, Charlie
Mrs Grant had to sell the lamb but her children begged for Daisy
Almost all the possessions had been sold to buy food and clothing for the familly. At last nothing was left but the det lamb, Daisy.
Mrs Grant explained to her children how badly off they were
Ⅲ. 梳理故事情节线
Beginning
nothing was left but the det lamb, Daisy.
Build-up
Mrs Grant had to sell the lamb
Conflict
her children begged for Daisy
Ending

Resolution

Mrs Grant explained to her children how badly off they were
The butcher was touched in his heart.
Ⅳ. 分析人物性格和情感
Mrs Grant:
Finally she went herself with a heavy heart,dragging her leaden(沉重的)feet and bargained(讨价述价)with the butcher for the sale of Daisy.
Mrs Grant gently pushed the child aside, bent down and was about to tell the truth.
→kind, caring
Ⅳ. 分析人物性格和情感
the butcher’s boy:
"That's my lamb now,Charlie!" said the butcher’s boy in a playful tone,going up to Daisy with a rope in his hand.
→unfriendly 、indifferent
Paragraph 1:
But the more she explained the stronger her children begged for Daisy.
Ⅴ. 研究所给首句，寻找原文线索，推断续写框架, 构思续写情节
1. 研究所给首句, 寻找原文线索
TIP2: 原文细寻续写线索
TIP1: 两段首句定框架
→ 思路1：What would the children do and say to stop selling Daisy
→ 思路2：What would Mrs Grant feel seeing her
children’ struggling
→ 思路3：How would Mrs Grant respond to her
children’ s begging
Paragraph 2:
The butcher, who had been watching all,was touched in his heart.
→ 思路4：What would the butcher say and do next.
→ 思路5：What would the children feel and say after hearing the butcher’s words
→ 思路6：What’s the ending
2.写作线索
续写线索：伤心——祈求——归还——赠与———高兴
参考范文
Paragraph 1:
But the more she explained, the stronger her children begged for Daisy.“No!-No!-No! " they dashed to Daisy and threw their arms around her, begging, “ Please, mother! We would rather go hungry than lose her! "Hearing this, Mrs. Grant was in great sorrow, her heart bleeding. After all, she clearly knew that the children had devoted so much love to Daisy and that Daisy was more than a pet lamb to them, she was, in their eyes, a family member! Having struggled hard, she tuned to the butcher and decided that she would not sell Daisy and would retum the money.
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参考范文
Paragraph2:
The Butcher, who had been watching all, was touched in his heart. When Mrs. Grant took out the money and gave it back, he just waved his hand and announced, “I will not rob the children of their pet! ”He approached the children, patted them on the shoulders gently and promised that he would buy Daisy from their mother and then gave it back to them as a gift. The word left the children standing stunned. Then, looking up at him, one asked seriously, “Sir, do you really mean that ” The butcher just replied seriously, “I mean every word of it. She is OUR Daisy. My boy and I will come to see her occasionally. ”Hearing this, all the children gathered round and stroked the pet, their little hearts filled with joy.
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