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高考英语读后续写语篇练习竞赛故事——跨栏比赛的成功，关键在于自己，而非钉鞋题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文“Number 7, Jobie Nymble, takes the lead,” cried the announcer. “Just one more hurdle (跨栏) and-Jobie Nymble from Riverside Middle School takes first place in the girls’ 100-meter hurdles！”“County championships, here we come.” yelled Jobie, patting (轻拍) her worn green track spikes (钉鞋). They were her lucky shoes and she loved them. “Next Saturday, we’re taking the gold home,” Jobie whispered to her spikes.“Don’t forget, guys.” said Marisol, one of her teammates. “My birthday party is next Friday at Hidden Park. You should all come.”The day of Marisol’s party came. Jobie put on her favorite clothes: her blue shorts, an old track T-shirt, and her lucky spikes. The party had begun when Jobie arrived at Hidden Park. She stopped by the track first, planning to do some running exercise. Even at that end of the park, music and the smell of grilled food filled the air.Two of Jobie’s teammates rushed toward her, breathless and barefoot. “Come on,” they shouted. “You have to try the slide.” Jobie’s eyes shot toward the party area. “Slide What sli ... ”续写原文Suddenly, she saw it. The BIGGEST inflatable (充气的) slide she had ever seen was on the far side of the park. Smiling kids zoomed down the slide at unspeakable speeds.Without thinking twice, Jobie threw off her spikes and ran fast toward the slide. Its ladder rose to the sky, but she reached the top in no time. She slid down, sped to the edge, and closed her eyes as she let go. Jobie couldn’t get enough fun from the slide.When it was finally time to go home, she unwillingly made her way back to the track where she’d left her shoes. As she eyed the area from a distance, panic set in. Jobie picked up the pace, her heart pounding louder the closer she got. When she reached the place she’d left them. her heart stopped.“They’re gone!” she screamed. “My lucky spikes are gone.” Jobie’s teammates helped her search the park. No lucky spikes. “So long, gold,” Jobie groaned (叹息).段首句Para 1：The next day, the best track teams in the county gathered at Hidden Park for the championships.Para 2：Buhhhhh (比赛的信号声) went the starting signal.Part 2题目分析点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了在女子100米跨栏比赛中获得第一名的Jobie Nymble踌躇满志，对于周六的县冠军志在必得，岂料，周五去公园参加队友生日派对时，因沉迷于玩滑梯而丢了幸运钉鞋。第二天参加锦标赛，Jobie Nymble因没了幸运钉鞋而失魂落魄，队友鼓励她。最终她穿上了新鞋，走上赛道。比赛开始信号响起，Jobie Nymble刚开始拉在后面，但是她奋起直追，超过了一个个强劲的对手，凭实力成为幸运的新晋县冠军。续写思路分析Para 1：The next day, the best track teams in the county gathered at Hidden Park for the championships.由第一段首句内容“第二天，本县最好的田径队聚集在隐蔽公园参加锦标赛。”可知，第一段可描写Jobie Nymble因没了幸运钉鞋而不自信，队友鼓励她，她最终穿上了新鞋，走上赛道。续写思路分析Para 2：Buhhhhh (比赛的信号声) went the starting signal.由第二段首句内容“比赛开始信号响起。”可知，第二段可描写Jobie Nymble刚开始落在后面，但很快，她奋起直追，超过了一个个强劲的对手，成为幸运的新晋县冠军。续写思路分析续写线索拿着新鞋——不在状态——受到鼓励——穿上新鞋走上赛道——落后——超越——夺冠续写素材可用词汇：行为类①激励：encourage/inspire/stimulate/motivate/urge②放弃：give up/abandon/withdraw③超越：surpass/exceed/defeat情绪类①失魂落魄的：absent-minded/lose one’s wits②困惑：puzzle/confuse续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1] So absent-minded was she that she even didn’t notice when her match would begin. (运用so引导的倒装句，when引导的时间状语从句)[高分句型2] Jobie didn’t regain her sense until two seconds later, which puzzled her teammates. (运用not...until...结构，which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型3] Soon, she caught up with her competitive opponents, and then surpassed them, leaving them far behind. (现在分词做伴随状语)Part 3范文呈现范文呈现The next day, the best track teams in the county gathered at Hidden Park for the championships. Jobie turned up, a new pair of spikes under her arm. As a girl lacking in confidence, the loss of her lucky spikes meant the loss of the gold medal. So absent-minded was she that she even didn’t notice when her match would begin. Noticing her blank expression, all her teammates came around. “Next up is the girls’100-meter hurdles,” said the announcer again. Her teammates encouraged her as she bent down to put on her new spikes. Then she took several deep breaths, nodded her head to them and walked down to the starting line.范文呈现Buhhhhh (比赛的信号声)went the starting signal. Jobie didn’t regain her sense until two seconds later, which puzzled her teammates. Anyway, rather than give up, she began to run desperately and cleared hurdle after hurdle. Soon, she caught up with her competitive opponents, and then surpassed them, leaving them far behind. She got closer and closer, and cheers broke out. Wearing a wide smile, Jobie whispered,“No lucky spikes. Lucky me.”范文译文第二天，该县最好的田径队聚集在隐藏公园参加锦标赛。乔比出现了，胳膊下夹着一对新钉。作为一个缺乏自信的女孩，失去幸运的钉鞋意味着失去金牌。她心不在焉，甚至没有注意到比赛什么时候开始。注意到她茫然的表情，所有的队友都围了过来。“接下来是女子100米栏，”播音员再次说道。当她弯腰穿上新钉鞋时，队友们鼓励她。然后她做了几次深呼吸，向他们点了点头，然后走到起跑线上。范文译文Buhhhhh(比赛的信号声)启动信号响起。直到两秒钟后，乔比才恢复理智，这让她的队友们感到困惑。不管怎样，她并没有放弃，而是开始拼命地奔跑，一个又一个地越过障碍。很快，她赶上了竞争对手，然后超越了他们，把他们远远甩在了后面。她越来越近，欢呼声爆发了。乔比笑容满面，低声说：“没有幸运的钉子，我很幸运。”Part 4努力方向高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）Thank you!

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