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--兄弟姐妹情
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兄弟姐妹之间的矛盾、包容、接纳和学会分享
兄弟姐妹之间的关爱、互助和共同成长
三步法
问题/矛盾的产生或事情的缘起
在父母/兄弟姐妹的帮助或鼓励下找到问题/矛盾的解决办法
兄弟姐妹之间矛盾的化解,学会包容、分享、互助,关爱彼此……实现共同成长或亲情变得更深
Ali's Running Shoes
A Practical Guide
to
English Continuation Writing
Why do they change their shoes
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02
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Reading for information
Reading for plot & Inferring
Sentence structure
Writing
Ali's Running Shoes
Reading for information
01
Ali and his younger sister,Zahra,lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood. Their mother was sick and their father was sparing no efforts to find a job, and they had only a little money with which to buy food. As they had not paid the rent for several months, the landlord（房东） was breathing down their necks.(盯着他们）
One day, Ali took Zahra's shoes to a shoe repairman to be fixed,but he lost them on the way home. It wasn't until he got home that he realized he had lost the shoes. He was afraid that his parents would be angry and disappointed, so he begged his sister to keep it a secret. Zahra agreed and the two decided to share Ali's running shoes. Zahra's school hours were in the morning,so she would wear them first. After school, she would rush back and give them to Ali. He then ran to his school, which began in the afternoon.Although he ran as fast as he could, Ali often arrived late and was warned by the school.Ali heard about a long distance race that was held for the boys in the city. When he heard that the third prize was a new pair of shoes, he decided to take part in. He ran home excitedly and promised his sister he would win her the new shoes.
The day of race arrived.Ali had a strong start,but halfway through the race he began to get tired and his legs began to ache.Getting more and more exhausted he thought only of Zahra and his promise to her.Dreaming of the new shoes he would win for his sister gave him strength and he stayed right behind the two fastest runners,determined to finish third. Suddenly, as the finish line drew near, another runner collided with Ali from behind and he crashed to the ground.
Reading for information
What is the type of this passage
Exposition
Narration
Argumentation
Who
Where
When
Ali and his younger sister,
Zahra.
Lived in a poor neighborhood.
A long distance race in the city.
。
What
The day of race
Ali lost Zahra's shoes so they
had to share Ali's shoes.
Reading for information
How
Ali took part in a long distance
race for the third prize--a new
pair of shoes,but was collided.
Ali and his younger sister,Zahra,lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood. Their mother was sick and their father was sparing no efforts to find a job, and they had only a little money with which to buy food. As they had not paid the rent for several months, the landlord（房东） was breathing down their necks.(盯着他们）
One day, Ali took Zahra's shoes to a shoe repairman to be fixed,but he lost them on the way home. It wasn't until he got home that he realized he had lost the shoes. He was afraid that his parents would be angry and disappointed, so he begged his sister to keep it a secret. Zahra agreed and the two decided to share Ali's running shoes. Zahra's school hours were in the morning,so she would wear them first. After school, she would rush back and give them to Ali. He then ran to his school, which began in the afternoon.Although he ran as fast as he could, Ali often arrived late and was warned by the school.Ali heard about a long distance race that was held for the boys in the city. When he heard that the third prize was a new pair of shoes, he decided to take part in. He ran home excitedly and promised his sister he would win her the new shoes.
The day of race arrived.Ali had a strong start,but halfway through the race he began to get tired and his legs began to ache.Getting more and more exhausted he thought only of Zahra and his promise to her.Dreaming of the new shoes he would win for his sister gave him strength and he stayed right behind the two fastest runners,determined to finish third. Suddenly, as the finish line drew near, another runner collided with Ali from behind and he crashed to the ground.
Ali
race
lost the shoes
Zahra
third prize
win her new shoes
collided
crashed to the ground
in the city
The day of race
share
What？
Ali lost Zahra's shoes so they
had to share Ali's shoes.
How
Ali took part in a long distance race for the third prize--a new pair of shoes,but he was collided.
02
Reading for plot & Inferring
04
Climax
Lost Zahra's shoes
Beginning
04
Reading for plot
Climax
Ending
Took part in the race for ___________________
_______________ to the ground
Continuation:Para. 1
Saw other boys rushing ahead
Continuation:Para. 2
Walked home quickly.
afraid & regretful
excited & hopeful
tired & anxious
the third prize
Crashed
Paragraph 1:
Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead.
Paragrap 2:
Filled with pleasure, Ali walked home quickly.
What was the result
Did Ali win the prize
Inferring the following plot
He got the new shoes
Zahra's reaction
Theme
Inferring the following plot
He got the new shoes.
how
his feelings
the third prize
determined,overjoyed
what actions
不放弃--站起来--往前冲-
Para.1
Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead.
Para.1
Actions
Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead.
How Ali got the new shoes
Mental/Facial description
不放弃--站起来--往前冲--结果
never gave up
struggled to his feet
rushed/ dashed forward,
chased after,
quickened his steps
heart beat wildly
with sweat dripping
a determined look
eyes brightened with joy
wore a satisfied expression
Feelings
tired
anxious
determined
persistent
Inferring the following plot
Zahra got the new shoes.
Zahra's reaction
excited, touched
theme
love , perseverance
Para.2
Filled with pleasure, Ali walked home quickly.
Para.2
Zahra's reaction
Filled with pleasure, Ali walked home quickly.
How was Zahra's reaction
What can we learn from the story
Theme
happy tears welled up in her eyes;
be overwhelmed by enormous joy;
throw herself into his arms;
Ali kept his promise because of his bravery,perseverance and his love for his sister.
Feelings
excited
happy
touched
Sentence structure
03
形容词作状语
非谓语动词
with的复合结构
倒装
Overjoyed and relieved,he eventually ...
Refusing to give up at this point,he...
...with his hands trembling
So thrilled was she that she...
定语从句
...the runner who/that collided with him was...
Writing
04
Para. 1 Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead.Refusing to give up at this point, he jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he could. He dashed across the finish line and won the fourth prize. Thinking he would let her sister down, Ali couldn’t help sobbing. Just then he suddenly heard the announcement from the broadcast that he won the third prize as the runner who collided with Ali was disqualified for breaking the rule. Holding the shoes close to his chest during the award ceremony, he eventually won the shoes for his sister,overjoyed and relieved.
Para. 2 Filled with delight, Ali walked home quickly. He could not wait to see his sister and share the thrilling news. On his arrival, Ali found Zahra was waiting outside. She was really nervous whether her brother had brought her what she was expecting. “Zahra, see what I have got for you.” he took the prize out of his bag with his hands trembling. The instant Zahra saw the shoes, her face lit up. So thrilled was she that she threw herself at Ali. “Thank you! Ali.” Tears of joy welled up their eyes as the brother and sister hugged tightly together.
THANK YOU
possibilities
He won the third prize.
He was awarded for his persistence.
The runner who collided him gave the shoes to Ali.
Others buy for him.
He finished first.
......
Whatever the result was, Ali eventually went home with a pair of new shoes for Zahra.
Inferring the plot

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