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Module 5 Museums 书面表达 专练（含解析）外研版版英语九年级上册
1．书面表达
假如你陪你的外籍老师去某音乐厅，在门口的布告栏里看见一张观众须知，内容如下:
观众须知:1. 一人一票凭票人场；
2. 场内严禁吸烟；
3. 食品和饮料请勿带进场内；
4. 演出时请勿照相；
5. 演出时请勿使用电话；
6. 提前30分钟入场。
Smith先生不懂中文，他很想知道布告栏里写的什么。现在，请你把观众须知的内容用英文告诉Smith先生，并把要讲的话写下来。
Mr Smith，it is a notice to the audience.
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2．书面表达
76．中国丝绸博物馆位于浙江杭州，占地5万平方米，是世界上最大的丝绸博物馆。请你根据下面提示及要求写一篇英语短文，简要介绍一下该博物馆。
提示：1.于1992年2月26日对外开放，可免费参观；
2．共有8个展厅(展示了中国五千年的丝绸历史及文化)；
3．游览时间：中午12点到下午5点(周一)；上午9点到下午5点(周二至周日)。
要求：1.短文必须包括以上要点，可适当发挥；
2．80词左右。
参考词汇：have an area of 面积为……；exhibition hall 展厅
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3．书面表达
根据提示写一篇日记，记录十月一日（星期一）。你和你的朋友曹刚一起去参观上海博物馆的事。词数：70左右。
1. 距离：博物馆离家约两公里；
2. 交通工具：决定骑自行车去；
3. 时间：八点出发，十点回家；
4. 内容：见到了许多照片、实物等，学到了很多内容。还看见了许多游人。
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4．你最喜欢的地方是哪里呢？那里有什么特色或有什么事情使你最难忘？请你以“The Best Place I’ve Ever Been to”为题写一篇英语短文。
提示：(1) What and where the place is;
(2)Why you like it.
注意：(1)不得在短文中出现真实的校名、人名等；
(2)语句连贯，词数80个左右。
The Best Place I’ve Ever Been to
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5．书面表达
假设你是Ronnie的学生李明，本周末很乐意当他的向导。请你根据Ronnie的出行意向，选择一种你喜欢的方案，用英语写一封email发给Ronnie。80词左右。
Plan A Plan B
Where to visit Art Museum Culture Village
How to go … …
What to do Enjoy Chinese paintings; Learn about paper cutting … Watch traditional shows; Enjoy local food …
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6．上周末，小红一家参加了为期两天的“山区宿营之旅(A trip camping in the mountains)”。下面这幅图画呈现了小红一家宿营后的情景。请根据提示信息和你对图画的理解，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。
内容包括：
1. 描述图画内容；
2. 简要陈述你的看法。
注意：
1. 可以进行适当的想象；
2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
（参考词汇：collecting-bags 收集袋)
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7．“研学旅行 (study tour)”就是综合实践活动。请根据以下图片提示，结合自己的经历，谈谈“研学旅行”的收获和感受。
要求: 1.词数不少于80词；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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参考答案：
1．Mr Smith，it is a notice to the audience. It says that we should enter the concert hall 30 minutes earlier before the concert starts. One person one ticket， Admission by ticket only. As a rule， food or drink should not be taken into the hall. Of course，smoking is not allowed in the hall， either. Please don't bring your digital cameras with you because no photos can be taken during the concert. And what is more， mobile phones must be turned off during the concert.
【详解】这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下观众须知。所提供的材料中列举了观众须知的内容。主要从1. 一人一票凭票人场；2. 场内严禁吸烟； 3. 食品和饮料请勿带进场内；4. 演出时请勿照相；5. 演出时请勿使用电话；6. 提前30分钟入场。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】It says that we should enter the concert hall 30 minutes earlier before the concert starts. 它说我们应该在音乐会开始前30分钟进入音乐厅。
句子that we should enter the concert hall 30 minutes earlier before the concert starts.是由that引导的宾语从句。
【高分句型二】Please don't bring your digital cameras with you because no photos can be taken during the concert. 请不要随身携带数码相机，因为音乐会期间不能拍照。
句子because no photos can be taken during the concert.是由because引导的原因状语从句。
2．China National Silk Museum lies in Hangzhou, Zhejiang.It opened to the public on 26th February 1992.As the largest silk museum in the world, China National Silk Museum has an area of 50，000 square metres.There are eight exhibition halls in it.If you are interested in China's 5，000 years' silk history and culture, this museum is a great place for you.And it is free.
The museum is open between 9 am and 5 pm from Tuesdays to Sundays.On Mondays, it doesn't open until twelve noon and closes at 5 pm.
【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍中国丝绸博物馆。
【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：It opened to……，China National Silk Museum has……，There are……，this museum is……，it doesn't……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了中国丝绸博物馆的位置以及占地面积，接下来介绍中国丝绸博物馆展览的东西，最后指出中国丝绸博物馆的游览时间。此处lie in, an area of, be interested in, between..and…,from..to…等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
3．Monday, Oct. 1 Fine
Today is the first day of the National Day. My friend Cao Gang and I went to visit Shanghai Museum. It is about 2 kilometres away from my home. So we decided to go there by bike. We set off at 8 o’clock. At the museum we saw many photos and other things. We learned a lot. There we saw a lot of children with their parents. At ten we left the museum for home. We had a wonderful time today.
【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，根据所给提示根据提示写一篇日记，记录十月一日（星期一）。你和你的朋友曹刚一起去参观上海博物馆的事，写作中能正确运用时态，注意了应用文体日记的书写格式，语句通顺，符合逻辑。
4．例文
The Best Place I’ve Ever Been to
The best place I’ve ever been to is Hainan. It’s in the south of our country. On Hainan Island, I could enjoy bright sunshine, fresh air and beautiful scenery. I will never forget that.
Haikou city is the capital of Hainan while it is also the biggest city on the island. There, I could either go to visit the flower markets or enjoy the delicious seafood. There, I could find many beautiful beaches. People love walking along the seaside or swimming in the sea. There are many tall coconut palm trees to see.
Travel to Hainan Island if you have a chance. I’m sure you will have a good time there.
【详解】1.题干解析：本题是一篇材料作文写作。要求写一篇80字左右的英语短文介绍去过的最喜欢的地方，题目已经给出，书写中要包含提示的全部要点，可以适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以第二人称和第一人称为主。时态以一般现在时主。第一段引出主题，第二段介绍当地的景色和特点，最后一段总结。在介绍内容时，要求语言准确，内容完整，不要出现单词和语法错误，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
5．Dear Ronnie，
I'm very glad to be your guide this weekend. The place I advise you to visit is the Culture Village. I think it's the best place to learn about Chinese culture that you're interested in. We'd better go there by bus, because it's a little far from our school.
The moment we get there, we can watch traditional shows which may be different from those in your country. They are so interesting that you'll know a lot about the lifestyle in villages. Then we can enjoy local food, for example, jiaozi. If you prefer, you can learn to make it in person.
How about taking a camera with you so that we can take some photos I'm sure we'll enjoy ourselves there.
Yours，
Li Ming
【详解】这是一篇电子邮件，根据Ronnie的出行意向和表格中的相关信息，选择一种你喜欢的方案，用英语写一封email发给Ronnie。主要从去哪里参观、交通方式和做什么三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意邮件中必须包含表格中的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词和过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】I think it's the best place to learn about Chinese culture that you're interested in. 我认为这是学习你感兴趣的中国文化最好的地方。it's the best place to learn about Chinese culture是省略了that的宾语从句。that you're interested in.是由that引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】They are so interesting that you'll know a lot about the lifestyle in villages. 它们很有趣，你会对乡村的生活方式了解很多。so…that…从句，如此……以至于……。
6．例文
Last weekend, Xiao Hong’s family took a two-day trip. This picture shows what happened when they arrived in the mountains. After they arrived in the mountains, they found the scenery was beautiful, the mountains were green and the water was clear. But because so many tourists come, there is a lot of rubbish in this area. Xiao Hong thought of what she had learned recently to protect the environment, so she found some collecting-bags and sorted the garbage around her. Her parents also agreed with her and accompanied her, even the dog helped. After their cleaning up, the area became more beautiful.
This reminds us that we should pay attention to protecting the environment when we travel.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。假定你是小红，和父母去山区宿营之后发生的事情；根据图片内容描述，注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据图片的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
7．One possible version:
Without doubt, the study tour plays an important part in our school life. It makes our life meaningful and helps us be knowledgeable. I’d like to share one of the most impressive experiences.
Last term, I took part in a study tour with my classmates. We visited the history museum. The guide led us to different halls to learn about the history of CPC. Seeing the pictures of different wars, we were deeply moved. When we watched the videos about how the soldiers fought against the enemies and achieved success, we were so shocked by their strong will that we couldn’t control the tears. All of us showed our respect to our ancestors because of the peaceful life they fought for. At the end of the trip, we took a special photo.
As teenagers, we should try to learn in various ways. Only in this way can we improve in different ways.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，根据导图内容，介绍自己曾经的一次研学旅行经历。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般过去时。写作时可分为三段式，首先开篇点题，介绍研学是学校生活中很重要的一部分，进而点出分享自己的一次研学经历；其次是具体介绍这段研学经历；最后是表达感受。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证提示内容完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。
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