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Unit 5 Educational exchanges 写作 专练（含解析）牛津深圳 广州版 英语八年级上册
1．子曰：“学而时习之，不亦说乎？有朋自远方来，不亦乐乎？人不知而不愠，不亦君子乎？”这是孔子的“三乐”—学习之乐、交友之乐、修身之乐。
作为青少年，你在学习和生活中，不断成长着，也体验着各种各样的快乐。请在学习之乐、交友之乐、劳动之乐、运动之乐、爱好之乐、旅游之乐、助人之乐、环保之乐等中选其一，以“I am happy to ________”为题跟大家分享你快乐成长的一段经历。
写作要点：
1. The experience you are going to share。
2. Why does the experience make you feel happy
3. What have you learned from the experience
写作要求：
1.将标题补充完整，主题意义积极向上；
2.根据标题，自拟表达内容和框架；
3.思路表达清晰，文章结构完整；
4.词数100左右。
I am happy to _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．2021年已经过去，回顾这一年，你在学习与生活方面有哪些收获，还有哪些不足？在2022年，你将在那些方面做出改进，以变成更好的自己。请以“A better me in 2022”为题，写一篇短文。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，语法正确，内容完整。
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名。80词左右。
A better me in 2022
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3．Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “The importance of___________”（请以“……的重要性”为题写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，要求意思明确、内容连贯，标点符号不计字数）
（注意：作文中不得出现考生的中文姓名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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4．你的英国笔友Sally对中国很感兴趣，想利用假期来中国旅游。请你根据下列提示推荐一个好去处，并给她提供旅行建议。
内容提示：
1. Where is it and when is the best time to visit
2. What is special about the place
要求：
1. 中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 词数80词左右。
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5．2023年已经到来了，你一家人的新年打算是什么呢？请根据表格内容提示写一篇80词左右的短文，对全家人的新年计划进行介绍。要求语意连贯、语句通顺，不出现真实人名校名。
父亲 工作；运动；多陪伴父母……
母亲 业余爱好：烹饪；度假……
哥哥 大学，学医；多做户外运动……
妹妹 电影；运动；饮食……
我 学习；防疫有关的事情；筹备一次晚会……
The new year has come. Everyone in my family has their own plan. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．由于新冠肺炎疫情的爆发和延续，人们的生活有了很多改变，但同时也更加激发了人们对大自然的热爱。假如你是李明，上周你的学校举行了“热爱家乡，热爱大自然”主题活动，请你根据以下提供的信息并结合你的亲身经历，写一篇英语短文向你校英语报投稿。
宁波 浙江省第二大城市；历史悠久；900多万（常住）人口；人民勤劳，友好
旅游经历 时间；地点；人物；活动；感受
你的希望 保护环境；……
参考词汇：拥有……人口have a population of...
注意：
(1)内容应包括提示中所有要点，并适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等；
(3)字数80—100左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数。
Love Hometown, Love Nature
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7．假定你是李楠。为培养孩子们良好的劳动习惯，勉励他们过一个有意义的寒假，你校英文社团决定举办主题为“My Winter Vacation”的征文活动。请你根据下面图示写一篇英语短文。
注意：
1.短文须覆盖图示所有要点，并适当增加细节；
2.文中不得出现与你真实身份相关的信息；
3.词数： 80词左右； 短文开头已写好，供你选择使用。
My Winter Vacation
I’m going to do lots of meaningful things in the winter vacation.
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8．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是张明，本周日是你班国际生Peter的生日。你打算邀请他来你家度过一个有意义的中式生日。请你根据下面的地图，用英语给他写一封邮件，描述一下从学校到你家的具体路线，并告诉他生日会的具体活动。
提示词语: turn right, go across, opposite, eat noodles, play games
提示问题: How can you get home
What are you going to do at the party
Dear Peter,
Would you please come to my home to celebrate your birthday this Sunday _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Ming
9．你校将举办英语演讲比赛，号召同学们度过一个有意义的暑假，请你根据以下表格内容一篇发言稿参赛
Title:
√ ×
Activities Reasons Activities Reasons
注意:
（1）请根据以上内容提示，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文；
（2）所表述的内容须包含以上所有内容，但不能出现自己的真实姓名；
（3）书写工整，字数100词左右。
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10．幸福养老院（Happy Nursing Home）将在暑期招募志愿者。假如你是王爱华，想去应聘志愿者。请根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一封自荐信。
要点：1.你为什么要当志愿者；
2.你的优势有哪些；
3.你能为老人做些什么；
要求：1.文中不得出现所在学校、班级和个人的真实名称；
2.词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear sir/madam,
I am Wang Aihua. I’d like to be a volunteer at Happy Nursing Home. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11．学校的Buddy Club开始招募新成员了。假如你是李华，想推荐好朋友张军加入该社团。请根据下面的信息，写一封推荐信。
推荐信的内容包括：
1. How old is he and what does he look like
2. What’s his personality
3. What are his hobbies and abilities
4. What’s his future plan
要求：
1.写作要点齐全，紧扣要点，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实人名、或校名，否则不予评分；
3.不少于80词，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
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参考答案：
1．例文
I am happy to share my experience of helping others
As a student, I keep growing in my study and life, and also experience all kinds of happiness. This time I want to share my experience of helping others. It was a Friday morning. On my way to school, I met a blind man. I saw him crossing the road, so I went to help him at once. Finally, he thanked me a lot. Although I was late in the end, I was still very happy. Because helping others makes me feel good.
Last but not least, I think we should help others more. Helping others is helping yourself.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。首先补充题目，从学习之乐、交友之乐、劳动之乐、运动之乐、爱好之乐、旅游之乐、助人之乐、环保之乐等中选其一，然后和大家分享你快乐成长的一段经历。
2.写作指导：本文在叙述经历时，用一般过去时，介绍从这段经历里学到的东西用一般现在时。人称以第一人称为主。写作时确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误，正确运用好两种时态。
2．例文
A better me in 2022
In the past year, I have made many friends. I’ve lost weight. My grades are not good, so I want to improve my grades. I make some efforts to improve my grades. First, I plan my time carefully. I make a list of things that I have to do every day. Second, listen carefully in class. I often take notes to help myself remember what the teacher says. I think listening carefully in class means less work later. Although I try my best to study, I still have some problems in learning English. For example, I can’t remember the English words quickly and my English grammar is not very good. It usually takes a long time to remember a new word. I know I should do more practice about it. I will make full use of the morning reading time to remember English words.
And I will try to read more English articles to learn English grammar. All in all, I won’t give up and I will make full use of every minute to improve myself.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇命题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点提示已给出，考生应紧扣“A better me in 2022”这一主题，描述自己在学习与生活方面的些收获和不足，并提出改进措施，写作时可适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述自己在学习与生活方面的些收获；
第二步，提出在学习上的不足并写下详细的提高方法；
第三步，书写总结，表达自己希望在英语学习能有所提升，变成更好的自己。
[亮点词汇]
①make some efforts to 做出努力
②try my best to 尽我最大的努力做
③make full use of 利用
④improve myself 提升自我
[高分句型]
①I make a list of things that I have to do every day. （使用定语从句）
②I often take notes to help myself remember what the teacher says.（使用宾语从句）
③Although I try my best to study, I still have some problems in learning English.（使用although引导让步状语从句）
3．例文：
The importance of Confidence
Confidence is very important in daily life. It can help you to develop a healthy attitude. It can bring us courage to stick to what we do. A study shows that the confident people are much happier. They can have more chances to make themselves successful. So confidence is valuable to us.
When I was in Grade 7, once my teacher asked me to make a speech in class. Although I practiced it many times at home, I still felt nervous and forgot the words at the beginning of it. Then I breathed deeply and relaxed myself. You can’t believe how happy I was when I recalled the speech and finished it successfully. My teacher thought highly of my performance and I got much encouragement from my classmates. From then on, I have become more and more confident.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，谈论自信的重要性以及自己的一次经历以及从经历中的收获是什么，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
4．例文
It’s a good idea to go travelling during the summer vacation. I think the best place to visit is the Palace Museum. You’d better go there in spring, because it’s neither too cold nor too hot. As we all know, the Palace Museum, also known as the Purple Forbidden City, is wonderful and famous for its long history in the world. You can see a lot of ancient buildings, including palaces, temples and towers. If You want to visit to the Palace Museum, you should pay attention to our safety. You had better go with your friends or our family. What’s more, if you can speak some simple chinese, it will be easy for you to communicate with locals.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最佳去处；
第二步，介绍这个地方的特别之处。
[亮点词汇]
①the best place to do sth做某事的最佳地方
②neither nor既不……也不
③be famous for因……而出名
④pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
①It’s a good idea to go travelling during the summer vacation（动词不定式作定语）
②I think the best place to visit is the Palace Museum. （省略that的宾语从句）
5．例文
The New Year has come. Everyone in my family has their own plan. My father is going to find a good job to make more money. Also, he is going to get more exercise to keep healthy. He is going to spend more time with his parents. My mother is going to learn to sing and dance and learn to cook more delicious food. My brother plans to study harder and learn to study medicine. Also, he is going to do more outdoor sports. My sister is going to eat less junk food and watch more movies and exercise more. I plan to work hard to learn about epidemic prevention and prepare for a party.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先承接短文开头。
第二步，根据表格的提示内容，用英语写一篇短文，对全家人的新年计划进行介绍。
[亮点词汇]
①find a good job找到一份好工作
②keep healthy保持健康
③study harder更努力学习
④prepare for准备
[高分句型]
①My father is going to find a good job to make more money.（be going to结构）
②My mother is going to learn to sing and dance and learn to cook more delicious food.（to sing和to cook动词不定式作宾语）
6．例文
Love Hometown, Love Nature
Hello, everyone. Do you know Ningbo, the second largest city in Zhejiang Province It is my hometown, which has a long history. It has a population of about 9 million. The people here are not only hard-working but also friendly.
Last month, I went to Zhaobao Hill with my friends. We did a lot of things such as climbing the hill, picking up the rubbish and so on. When we saw the hill, it was so clean that we felt very excited.
I really hope we can protect the environment. Also, we should exercise more to keep healthy to enjoy the nature more happily.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。针对自己的家乡宁波进行介绍。具体的内容要包含所给的提示，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段介绍宁波整体的情况；第二段针对自己的旅游经历进行详细介绍；最后一段表达自己的希望。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
7．例文
My Winter Vacation
I’m going to do lots of meaningful things in the winter vacation.
First of all, I will get up early and make the bed in the morning. I’m going to do more housework. I will cook delicious lunch and dinner for my parents. Sometimes I will help my mom wash clothes. On weekends, I like helping to clean up the city park with my classmates. What’s more, reading more books is a good choice.
I believe I will have meaningful vacation.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于看图作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，介绍我将如何过一个有意义的寒假。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般将来时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据图画提示具体介绍我将如何度过一个有意义的寒假：早起，做家务，帮助妈妈洗衣服，打扫公园以及多读书；文中一定要包含图画中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
8．参考范文：
Dear Peter,
Would you please come to my home to celebrate your birthday this Sunday Now let me tell you how to get to my house.
Go along Chaoyang Road, cross a crossing and turn left at Jingtai Road. Then keep walking along Jingtai Road. My house is 100 metres ahead. It’s on your right, opposite the bank. We will have many interesting activities, such as singing, dancing and so on. We will also eat birthday cakes and long noodles. Eating noodles is a symbol of long life.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于看图作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一封邮件给Peter，邀请他来你家度过一个有意义的中式生日。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体描述一下从学校到你家的具体路线，并告诉他生日会的具体活动；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
9．例文
How to have a meaningful summer vacation
Summer vacation is coming. I plan to have a meaningful holiday.
First, I’m going to be a volunteer. I want to help the children in the poor areas, which might be able to change their lives because of our help. Second, I will help do housework, such as cleaning the house. I will refuse to do bad things. I’m going to avoid staying up late because it’s bad for my health. I will finish my homework on time instead of leaving it until the day before school starts.
I’m sure my holiday will be happy.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于看图作文写作，要求按照图中所给的要点提示写一篇短文，介绍如何度过一个有意义的暑假。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般将来时；写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍我暑假要从事的活动以及原因；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
10．例文
Dear sir/madam,
I am Wang Aihua. I’d like to be a volunteer at Happy Nursing Home. I think it’s meaningful to help the old. And I am sure I can do the work well because I have learnt some knowledge about nursing care. I can help the old people with housework like doing the dishes and taking out the rubbish. Besides, I am good at singing, dancing and playing games. I can sing, dance and play games with the old people, which may make them happy. I can also work as a listener to know what the old people’s past life was like. I think it will be interesting to exchange some ideas with the old people. I will take good care of them. I must be patient with them. I will be honored if I realize my dream.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容写一封自荐信，应征去养老院当志愿者。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，说明应征当志愿者的理由；
第二步，介绍自己当志愿者的优势；
第三步，罗列能为老人做的具体事项。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb. with sth.在某方面帮助某人
②be good at...擅长……
③work as当……
[高分句型]
①I can sing, dance and play games with the old people, which may make them happy.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
②I think it will be interesting to exchange some ideas with the old people.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）
③I will be honored if I realize my dream.（if引导条件状语从句）
11．例文：
Dear Chairperson,
I am Li Hua, and I am a member of the Buddy Club. I’d like to recommend my best friend Zhang Jun to join the club.
Zhang Jun is a 13-year-old boy and we are in the same class. He has a round face and short hair. A pair of round glasses makes him look smart. Everyone gets along well with him.
He is always helpful and honest. He often goes to the home for the elderly to do some cleaning and shopping for the old people. He never tells lies or says a bad word about others. He is good at playing the guitar and singing. The old people like listening to his music.
He hopes to be a great singer and bring people happiness. So he would like to be a member of the Buddy club.
Thanks for your time. I hope you can think about my recommendation. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【详解】［总体分析］
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主，介绍未来计划时也可用“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏内容提示中有关被推荐人的信息要点，适当添加细节，注意条理要清晰。
［写作步骤］
第一步，简单自我介绍并表明写作意图。引出被推荐人，为下文的阐述作铺垫；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“年龄、外貌、性格、爱好、能力等”几个方面重点介绍被推荐人的信息，注意要突出优势；
第三步，书写结语。表达感谢及对对方反馈的期待。
［亮点词汇］
① recommend推荐
② get along well with与……相处融洽
③ say a bad word about sb.说某人的坏话
④ be good at擅长，善于
⑤ look forward to期待
［高分句型］
① A pair of round glasses makes him look smart.（不带to的动词不定式作宾补）
② He often goes to the home for the elderly to do some cleaning and shopping for the old people.（动词不定式作目的状语）
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