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英语写作指导—介绍旅行计划
1．审题
本单元的写作主题是介绍旅行计划。写作时，先读懂写作要求，然后确定人称和时态。介绍旅行计划往往用第一人称，时态用一般现在时。
2．谋篇布局
首段：开门见山，引入主题。
主体段落：具体介绍自己的旅行计划安排，如出行人员、目的地、时间、路线、行程安排等。
结尾段：询问对方意见或表达期待。
3．形成初稿
构思完成后，开始写作时可以用“三段式”结构。写作时，注意要点的完整性，句与句之间的连贯性及段与段之间的衔接性。
4．修改润色
通读全文，先改正拼写错误和语法错误，然后进一步优化语言，看看能否在一般表达的基础上升级短语或句式表达。
Dear ××，
I can't wait to tell you that I'm going to ________ (某个旅游城市) during the summer vacation! For a better experience, I will make a brief introduction for this travel.
Accompanied by ________ (同行人员), we will take ________ (交通工具). Upon arriving, we will visit ________ (景点一) for it's famous for ________ (游览原因). The next scenic spot will be ________ (景点二) definitely, otherwise we will ________ (备用计划). In order to avoid rush hours, we will book a hotel, ________ (住宿安排)．
I hope this travel ________ (表达期待). By the way, what's your plan for the summer vacation
Yours，
××
开头常用句式：
1．Interested in traveling, I'm writing to tell you some places of interest that attract me most.
我对旅行很感兴趣，写信告诉你一些最吸引我的名胜古迹。
2．Now I'm more than willing to tell you some relevant information about traveling.
现在我非常愿意告诉你一些旅游的相关信息。
3．Of all the places of interest in China, The Forbidden City is worth visiting.
在中国所有的名胜古迹中，故宫是值得参观的。
4．Knowing that you are to pay a visit to China this summer vacation, I'm more than willing to share an ideal travel route with you.
知道你将在今年暑假前往中国旅游，我非常乐意和你分享一条理想的旅游路线。
主体段落常用句式：
1．Thanks to the high speed railway, it is convenient for us to travel to many cities in China within a day.
多亏了高铁，我们几乎可以在一天之内到达中国的许多城市，这是很便利的。
2．Of course, no tourists will miss the local food in Xi'an, nor will we.
当然，去西安的游客都不会错过当地美食，我们也不例外。
3．Instead of having a travel agency arrange our accommodation, we could book the train tickets and hotel rooms on the Internet by ourselves.
与其让旅行社安排住宿，我们可以自己在网上订车票和酒店。
4．Generally speaking, riding a bike helps promote the harmony between human beings and nature.
一般来说，骑车有助于促进人与自然的和谐。
5．The first day of our trip saw us around the Great Wild Goose Pagoda, famous for its history and leaning shape.
第一天我们游览了大雁塔，该塔以悠久的历史和倾斜的外观而出名。
6．Attracted by its natural beauty, we couldn't help taking lots of pictures, cherishing the wonderful memories close to nature and history.
被自然美景所吸引，我们忍不住拍了很多照片，珍藏与自然和历史亲近的美好记忆。
7．I'm going to set off before 8：00 am, after which I take a bus to the destination.
我将在早上八点之前出发，然后坐公交车去目的地。
8．Besides, we will enjoy Peking Opera, which will surely help us understand Chinese culture more deeply.
此外，我们将欣赏京剧，这的确会有助于加深我们对中国文化的理解。
结尾常用句式：
1．It was through this traveling that I realized not only were we equipped with more knowledge, but we also broadened our horizons.
正是通过此次旅游，我认识到我们不仅增长了知识，还开阔了视野。
2．I am sure it will be a wonderful and fruitful journey.
我确信这将会是一次很棒的，收获满满的旅行。
3．Though very tired, but I indeed enjoy the beautiful vacation!
尽管很累，但我真的享受到了美好的假期！
4．Since New Year is coming, what's your traveling plan
新年就要到了，你的旅行计划是什么呢？
假定你是李华，你计划从广州出发到北京进行为期一周的旅游，发邮件将你的旅行计划告知你的朋友Terry。内容包括：
1．从广州到北京的交通方式；
2．两到三处北京的景点；
3．表达期待。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Terry，
I'm going to Beijing for vacation, and I'm more than pleased to tell you my plan.
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Yours，
Li Hua
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Dear Terry，
I'm going to Beijing for vacation, and I'm more than pleased to tell you my plan.
I will take the high speed train to Beijing from Guangzhou. For one thing, it's comfortable and convenient. For another, I can enjoy the wonderful scenery along the way. After I arrive in Beijing, the first place I am going to go is the Great Wall. As a symbol of ancient Chinese civilization, it is one of the world's oldest and most magnificent man made scenes. The next place of interest I cannot miss is the Summer Palace, which is the largest and best preserved royal garden in the world.
May I have an unforgettable tourist experience!
Yours，
Li Hua

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