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高考英语读后续写语篇练习科技故事——高科技机器狗给艾格尼丝奶奶带来了陪伴和爱题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向Part 1题目呈现续写原文Grandma Agnes is ninety-nine years old and still live in the same house a he's lived in for more than sixty years. She was one of thirteen children raised on a farm. And now. she is rather set in her ways,For twelve years, Grandma ages enjoyed the c or up any of her dog, Snoopy. The black and white spotted must was a constant presence in her home and her yard. During the time that she had Snoopy, Grandma Agnes started showing signs of dementia. My family worked together to keep her living independently but safe.It was difficult for my dad the day he pulled the battery from her car to keep her from using her still valid driver's license, Every visit after that day, Grandma Agnes would insist that he buy her a new car battery because hers was dead again. Dad nodded and agreed to do it, knowing that the conversation would soon be forgotten.续写原文Three years ago. Snoopy passed away, My dad. Aunt Carol and Uncle Ed thought of ways to ensure that Grandma Agnes would know that Snoopy was gone, They had burial service in the back yard with Grandma. Uncle Ed printed a picture of Snoopy with “Rest in Peace” written across the bottom and stuck it to the refrigerator, But on the daily visits. Grandma Agnes still asked about Snoopy, She accused the neighbors of taking her dog because she was sure that she heard bin barking from their yard.Having a family member with dementia is heartbreaking and trying. For every visit I've made in the past five years, my dad has made a point to tell me that she probably won't remember who I am nor that my kids are her great grandchildren, I've sat through conversations where we patiently repeated answers to questions that were answered a few moment sago. Grandma Agnes is still there. and she's still her stubborn self. but she doesn't grasp the world around her, And yet she insists on living independently and asking about Snoopy constantly.段首句Paragraph 1：A few months ago, Uncle Ed came up with good idea and bought a robotic dog for Grandma Ages.Paragraph 2：A few months ago, Uncle Ed came up with good idea and bought a robotic dog for Grandma Ages.Part 2题目分析点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了艾格尼丝奶奶已经99岁了，还住在已经住了60多年的那所房子里，奶奶很喜欢她养的狗史努比，但是三年前史努比去世了，于是艾德叔叔给她买了一只高科技机器狗，奶奶和这只机器狗相处很愉快。作者的家人很感激这只高科技机器狗给艾格尼丝奶奶带来了陪伴和爱。续写思路分析Para 1：A few months ago, Uncle Ed came up with good idea and bought a robotic dog for Grandma Ages.由第一段首句内容“几个月前，艾德叔叔想出了一个好主意，给艾格尼丝奶奶买了一只机器狗。”可知，第一段可描写艾格尼丝奶奶和机器狗的相处经过。续写思路分析Para 2：Everyone in our family is pleased that Grandma Agnes has been so kind to Snoopy.由第二段首句内容“我们家的每个人都很高兴艾格尼丝奶奶对史努比这么好。”可知，第二段可描写艾格尼丝奶奶如何照顾机器狗以及作者一家对机器狗的看法。续写思路分析续写线索买机器狗——奶奶相信机器狗是真狗——奶奶照顾机器狗——家人感激机器狗带来的陪伴续写素材可用词汇：行为类提出：come up with/put forward购买：buy/purchase习惯于：get used to / get accustomed to情绪类真实：real /true/actual高兴：pleased /glad续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1] It has soft fur and barks when it senses motion nearby. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)[高分句型2] Our family is grateful that the robotic dog has brought Grandma Agnes companionship and someone to love. (运用了that引导宾语从句)Part 3范文呈现范文呈现A few months ago, Uncle Ed came up with a good idea and bought a robotic dog for Grandma Agnes. It has soft fur and barks when it senses motion nearby. Grandma quickly adopted the dog as her new Snoopy. Her condition has led her to believe that he is an animal and not a robot. She got used to Snoopy's barks and regarded them as requests for food or a nap. The food disappearing every night helped convince Grandma that Snoopy was a real dog. We found from the camera that the neighbor cat climbed over the fence and ate all the dog food.范文呈现Everyone in our family is pleased that Grandma Agnes has been so kind to Snoopy. She would pet him gently and carefully prepare food and water for him. Once, when the dog didn't move, eat and bark, she anxiously phoned Uncle Ed. She was afraid Snoopy was ill, Uncle Ed found he just needed changing battery. Our family is grateful that the robotic dog has brought Grandma Agnes companionship and someone to love. It's beautiful that her love of dogs can continue through this time in her life.范文译文几个月前，埃德叔叔想出了一个好主意，给艾格尼丝奶奶买了一只机器狗。它有柔软的皮毛，当它感觉到附近的运动时会吠叫。奶奶很快收养了这只狗作为她的新史努比。她的状况让她相信他是动物而不是机器人。她习惯了史努比的吠叫，并把它们视为对食物或小睡的请求。每天晚上消失的食物让奶奶相信史努比是一只真正的狗。我们从摄像机上发现，邻居的猫翻过围栏，把所有的狗粮都吃了。范文译文艾格尼丝奶奶对史努比这么好，我们家的每个人都很高兴。她会温柔地抚摸他，仔细地为他准备食物和水。有一次，当小狗不动、不吃东西、不叫时，她焦急地打电话给埃德叔叔。她担心史努比生病了，埃德叔叔发现他只需要换电池。我们全家都很感激机器狗给阿格尼斯奶奶带来了陪伴和爱。在她生命中的这段时间里，她对狗的爱能够持续下去，真是太美好了。Part 4努力方向高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）Thank you!

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