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Unit 7 Students should be allowed to choose their own clothes
单元话题满分范文必背
一、材料作文
1．升入九年级之后，你有没有经常和父母争执周末是否可以外出活动？请以“Are teenagers allowed to go out on weekends ”为题，根据所给提示写一篇英语短文。
写作提示：
1. What’s your parents’ opinion
2. What’s your opinion
写作要求：1.语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；
2. 100词左右，题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Are teenagers allowed to go out on weekends
I often argue with my parents about whether teenagers should go out on weekends after I am in Grade 9. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
【答案】参考范文：
Are teenagers allowed to go out on weekends
I often argue with my parents about whether teenagers should go out on weekends after I am in Grade 9. My parents think that teenagers should stay at home to go over their lessons. Teenagers should also have enough time to have a good rest on weekends. Also, teenagers are supposed to help their parents do some housework.
In my opinion, we teenagers need to go out with our friends for fun so that we can relax ourselves after a busy week. And we can share ideas with each other. What's more, we can also take some exercise together to keep healthy. So I think teenagers should be allowed to go out on weekends.
【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求我们以“Are teenagers allowed to go out on weekends ”为题，根据写作提示，谈一谈父母和自己各自的看法。
2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一、三人称和一般现在时为主来叙述，写作时要写出父母的观点及自己的观点，注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
2．“双减”政策出台之后，你校英语报通过问卷对校内200名学生开展主题为“How do you spend your time at weekends ”的调查。请根据下表内容描述调查结果，并提出你的建议和理由(至少1个)。
要求：1. 词数：80字左右(文章的开头已给出，不计入词数)
2. 短文必须包括所有要点，并适当拓展；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
How do you spend your time at weekends
Recently we did a survey among 200 students in our school in order to learn more about how students spend their time at weekends.
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【答案】One possible version:
How do you spend your time at weekends
Recently we did a survey among 200 students in our school in order to learn more about how students spend their time at weekends. 25% of the students choose to do some voluntary work. They want to be a volunteer and help others through the work because they think it is quite meaningful. 40% of the students like to do some housework at the weekend and help their parents in this way. They want to do something in return and show their gratitude to their parents. 50% of the students choose to do more physical training to keep healthy. They think they need to spare some time in a week to do some exercise, for health is the most important thing in their life. 75% of the students like to stay at home and do some reading. They think it can help them learn more knowledge and broaden their horizon.
As for me, I like to climb Baiyun Mountain with my family. Breathing fresh air can make me relaxed. And I also enjoy the time with my family.
【详解】题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。写作时注意一定要围绕“‘怎样度过周末”这一主题展开叙述。内容包括根据图表描述调查结果，并提出自己的做法和理由，即题目要求的内容和图表的内容都要写到。内容要积极向上，条理要清晰。
写作指导：本文写作应该使用第一人称和第三人称。时态应根据情境运用一般现在时和一般过去时。可以根据要求分三部分叙述。第一部分开门见山，提出最近进行了关于“如何度过周末”的调查；第二部分根据图表展开叙述调查结果，要具体并简单阐明他们如此度过周末的理由；第三部分表达自己的看法和做法，并说明理由。
3．你已经升入九年级了，即将面临毕业，三年的初中生活你肯定有了很大的变化。请你以How I Change为题，写篇短文，描述你这三年里前后的变化。写作要点包括形态、兴趣爱好、行为感受等方面。
要求：
(1)词数在80个左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；
(2)短文中不能出现真实的校名、地名和人名，否则不得分；
(3)所给的写作要点都必须用上，紧扣主题，适当发挥。
How I Change
My life has changed a lot in the past three years. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My life has changed a lot in the past three years. I was fat and short when I came to the middle school. At that time, I was interested in computer games and I spent most of time on it. My parents were worried about me.
Now, I like sports and I often play basketball with my classmates after school. So I become taller and stronger than before. I like reading too. I usually go to the library to read some interesting books. Good habits help me to study better and make me healthier. My parents and my teachers are both pleased with me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意包含“形态、兴趣爱好、行为感受等方面”的变化，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，描述过去的状况；
第二步，介绍与过去相比，现在发生的变化；
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣；
②be worried about担心……；
③be pleased with对……满意
[高分句型]
①So I become taller and stronger than before.（比较级的应用）
②I was fat and short when I came to the middle school.（when引导的时间状语从句）
4．爱好可以成就一个人的梦想。在读书期间，你有时会因爱好与学业在时间安排上产生的矛盾而烦恼，妥善处理好这些矛盾可以使你的生活更加丰富多彩。请你结合自己的例子，谈谈对这个矛盾的看法和解决方案。
内容包括：
1. 简单描述你的一个爱好和影响；
2. 如何处理好爱好和学习的关系？（给出至少两点建议）
作文要求：
1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Hobbies play an important role in everyone’s life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hobbies play an important part in everyone’s life. I have many hobbies. One of them is singing. I always sing in my free time. Singing brings me a lot of joy.
I have some advice about how to deal with the relationship between study and hobbies.
First, schoolwork should come first. We should study hard at school and finish our homework carefully after school. Second, make a plan for study and hobbies. On schooldays, we spend the most time learning our subjects. On weekends, we can spend more time on hobbies.
In a word, both study and hobbies make a difference in our life. Let’s enjoy our life by studying hard and developing some good hobbies.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示信息谈谈爱好和学习之间的关系。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二段引出话题；第三段给出如何处理好爱好和学习的关系的建议；第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
5．Loving English杂志社计划进行一些针对中学生对在家生活看法的调查。假如你叫林森，请你就邮件中所提出的问题，给该杂志社的编辑回一封电子邮件，发表自己的意见，并说明喜欢或者不喜欢的理由。
Dear students， There must be some rules in your family，right？How do you like them？ What's the best rule and what's the worst rule？ Please e-mail us and share your thoughts with our readers. Loving English
要求：1.回答邮件中提出的所有问题，并表达你的看法。
2.词数90左右，电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Editor，
There are many rules in my family，some good and some bad.
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Yours
Lin Sen
【答案】例文
Dear Editor，
There are many rules in my family，some good and some bad. My parents are very strict with me. For example，I have to get up at six every morning and I have to be in bed by ten. It's hard for me but I think it's necessary. Thanks to these rules，I am always in good health. Also，I can't play computer games before I finish my homework. I think this is the best rule, because I can play computer games for a while after all, and it always leads me to do my homework first.
But I can't go out on the night of weekdays, and on weekends, I have to go home before seven. I think that is unfair! Students should be allowed to have their own spare time with friends. We can study together and exercise together. This is the worst rule I have ever met!
Yours,
Lin Sen
【详解】题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，要求学生以林森的身份给杂志社回一封邮件。邮件内容要包括描述自己家的家规、你是如何看待它们的、其中最好和最差的家规分别是什么、你喜不喜欢这些家规并给出理由。
例文分析：例文用第一人称展开介绍，时态采用一般现在时为主。文章详细列举了一些家规以及“我”对它们的看法，特别点明了我认为最好的和最差的家规是什么，并给出了原因。文章内容符合材料要求，语言很有条理，文章层次分明。
高分亮点：
短语：be strict with；thanks to；for a while；after all。
句型：before引导的时间状语从句；because引导的原因状语从句；省略关系代词的定语从句。
二、讲稿
6．假如你是Lin Tao，你的父母对于你要求过多，过于严格，你有点感到厌烦。你准备在家庭会议上发表自己的看法以及解决方法。请根据下列提示，准备一篇发言稿。90词左右。
提示：
1.父母的要求：每天打扫房间，不能玩电脑，晚上10点之前必须睡觉.....
2. 你的看法：太过于严厉，但是有些能理解.....
3. 解决方法：与父母多多交流，希望他们相信自己，允许自己做一些自己的决定....
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【答案】例文：
Dear parents,
I know you love me very much.But there are too many rules in my family.For example,I have to clean the room every day. I am not allowed to play computers in my free time.I can’t go out on school nights.I have to go to bed by 10 pm.I know you worry about me.However,I think you are too strict with me.Sometimes I feel unhappy.I think I should be allowed to make my own decisions.I understand you.I will communicate with you as much as possible.And I often help do housework.Please trust me.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以林涛的身份写一篇发言稿，在家庭会议上就父母要求过多，过于严格的做法发表自己的看法以及解决方法。
2.写作指导：本文是一篇发言稿，发表的是自己的看法和解决方法，时态上主要以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。结构上，主要从提示的三方面来写：父母的要求，自己的看法以及解决方法。
三、话题作文
7．当今社会，很多家庭对孩子过分溺爱，导致当他们面对问题时手足无措。因此对孩子们来说，学会自立相当重要。请根据以上所述，结合表格所提供的图片及文字信息,以“Learn to Be Independent”为题写一篇100词左右的短文。
社会现象
你的观点 ◆家长应相信孩子，不要包办一切； ◆提出合理建议，让孩子自己做决定； ◆…… ◆孩子不要过度依赖父母，学做家务，照顾自己； ◆勇于面对并解决困难； ◆……
要求:
1.短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当发挥；
2.题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇:1.make decisions　2.depend on　3.look after　4.on the one hand...on the other hand...Learn to Be Independent
Nowadays, many children are treated as“little emperors”at home.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Learn to Be Independent
Nowadays, many children are treated as“little emperors”at home. Parents show so much love for their children that when they face problems, they don't know what to do. So it's important for children to learn to be independent. In my opinion, parents should believe their children and never do everything for them. It's necessary to give children proper advice and more chances to make their own decisions.
As for children, they shouldn't depend on their parents too much. On the one hand, they should learn to do chores. It helps to develop their independence and teaches them how to look after themselves. On the other hand, they ought to face difficulties bravely and try to solve them.
In a word, the earlier children learn to be independent, the better it is for their future.
【详解】1. 题干解读：这是一篇话题作文。主要以“Learn to Be Independent为主题展开描写。本文要写的内容题目表格有提示。写作时要运用正确的英语把想要表达内容表达出来，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2.写作指导：文章主要用一般将来时，人称主要用第三人称展开详细阐述。文章可分三段描写。第一段提出观点并给出家长的建议；第二段从孩子角度出发给出对应的建议；第三段总结孩子学会独立是有好处的。写作时注意文章描写要具体，思路要清晰，语言表达要准确，意思要通俗易懂。
8．请你就如何做个文明的中学生，写一篇小短文，谈谈我们青少年应该怎么做。
How to be a civilized teenager
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【答案】例文：
How to be a civilized teenager
To be a civilized teenager is very important. We should try our best to do better. Here are my ideas.
Firstly, we should be honest and be nice to others. If everyone has good manners, our world will be warmer.
Secondly, we are supposed to dress neatly. We should not be allowed to dye hair or get our ears pierced.
Thirdly, as a student,we should study hard and get good grades at school. Also, we need to exercise to keep healthy. We should be ready to help others if they are in trouble.
Last, we should try our best to protect our environment. Smoking or littering should never be allowed around us.
In a word, everyone can do something to be a civilized teenager.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文就如何做个文明的中学生，写一段小短文，谈谈我们青少年应该怎么做。
2.写作指导：本篇短文是谈谈我们青少年应该怎么做才能做个文明的中学生，所以文中的句子多以表达建议的句型“We should...”为主。写作时，先写做文明青少年的重要性，我们应该尽力，再分几点具体分说，最后呼吁大家都可以为做文明青少年贡献一份力量。
四、书信作文
9．假设你是男生Andrew，梦想成为一名演员，可是父母不支持。请你根据以下要点，用英文给你的英国好友Simon写一封信。
我的想法 父母的想法
想当演员，有表演天赋 不是好的职业
学习赫本，为慈善出力 学习最为重要
参加选拔，想进俱乐部 纯粹浪费时间
我的打算……（至少一点）
参考词汇：赫本：Hepburn
注意：1. 词数在80～100词之间，开头已给的部分不计入总词数；
2. 短文中应包括所有要点，并适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3. 文章不得出现真实地名、校名和人名。
Dear Simon,
How are you doing I miss you a lot. I tell my parents about my dream in the future, but I don’t get any support from them.
I am looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Andrew
【答案】例文：
Dear Simon,
How are you doing I miss you a lot. I tell my parents about my dream in the future, but I don’t get any support from them. I want to be an actor, I have a gift for acting. I want to learn from Hepburn and work closely with charity. I’m good at telling stories and writing exciting plays. I want to join the drama club and have a chance to see how TV programs are recorded.
But my parents don’t think acting is a good career. And they think learning is the most important for me. So they think I’m a waste of time.
They also think that actors seem mysterious, but quite stupid. I’ll talk to my parents again. I’ll try to get them to agree with me. Can you give me some advice
I am looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Andrew
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。向好友Simon写一封信，简单介绍一下你的情况。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。首先承接短文开头，引出话题；接着介绍自己的想法和父母的想法；最后介绍自己的打算。
第三步，书写结语。期待很快收到对方来信。
[亮点词汇]
①in the future未来
②want to be想成为
③learn from从中学习
④be good at擅长
⑤a waste of time浪费时间
[高分句型]
①I’m good at telling stories and writing exciting plays.（动名词作宾语）
②They also think that actors seem mysterious, but quite stupid.（that引导的宾语从句）
10．目前，绝大多数的学校因为管理因素要求学生每天穿校服，然而处于青春期的中学生因为爱美等心理因素，拒绝或排斥这一规定。假如你叫李华，请你向编辑写一封求助信，请他们帮你解决这个难题。
要求：
1.阐述正方和反方的观点和立场，条理清晰，语句通顺，无语法错误。
2. 80词左右。
提示词：asks us to wear, argue with, a beautiful sight, concentrate… on …, feel uncomfortable, is bad for, have got no idea
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【答案】Dear editor,
Nowadays our school asks us to wear school uniforms every day. We don’t want to, but we have to. We have argued a lot about this with our teachers, but it didn’t work.
The teachers think that it’s a beautiful sight in school if we wear uniforms. While I think the uniforms are ugly. And our teachers are afraid that if we didn’t wear uniforms, we would concentrate more on our clothes than our studies. I disagree. If we wear uniforms, we would feel uncomfortable and that is bad for studying.
I have thought about this for a long time but have got no idea. What’s your opinion
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是写一封求助信。要求先阐述正方和反方关于学生要不要每天穿校服的观点和立场，然后再询问编辑的观点，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该分别用第一人称和第三人称阐述正方和反方的观点；由于是阐述现在发生的事情和实际情况，所以时态采用一般现在时为主；描述观点时，理由应充分合理，叙述完整，保证条理清晰。

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