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Unit 1 Life Choices
单元话题满分范文必背
一、建议信
1 ．王明现在是高一学生。进入高中以来，他常常感到身体不舒服，易疲倦，为此他很苦恼。作为朋友的 你针对其现象提了几点建议：每天早点睡觉；不要学习得太晚；多做运动；多吃健康的食物。你可以参考
以下的提示词，给王明写一封信。
提示词： go to bed early；exercise more ；study too late
注意：
(1)请写一篇 100 词左右的短文，收信人和写信人的名字已给出，不计入词数；
(2)信中不能出现真实的学校、班级和姓名；
(3)句子及语法结构准确、连贯，书写规范。
Dear Wang Ming,
Yours,
Li Hua
(
【答案】
Dear Wang Ming,
I’m sorry to hear that you haven’t been feeling well lately. As your
friend,
I
care
about you
very
much.
People need to adjust their state to adapt to the changing
environment.
So
I have
a
few
suggestions
for
you.
First of
all, go to bed early every day and
don’
t
study
too
late.
As
a
student, you
need
6-8
hours
of
sleep
every
day
to ensure that you are energetic the next day, and
abundan
t
energy
in turn promotes
learning
efficiency.
Secondly,
you can do more exercise. Exercise can strengthen your body
and
delight
your mind.
In
this
way,
you
won’t
get
tired easily after a day’s school life.
Fi
nally,
it
is
also
good to
eat
more
healthy
foods,
including
green
vegetables,
fresh fruits, and protein
foods such
as meat,
eggs
and milk.
I hope my advice is helpful to you. Look forward to receiving yo
ur good news
soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
)
(
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友写封建议信。针对于朋
友最近的苦恼，提出建议：每
天早点睡觉；不要学习得太晚；多做运动；多吃健康的食物。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
关心：
care about→be concerned
about
适应：
adapt to→acclimatize oneself
to/ be accustomed to
建议：
suggestion→advice/proposal
保证：
ensure→make
sure
有用的：
helpful→useful/beneficial/valuable
2.
句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：
Secondly, you can do more e
xercise. Exercise
can
strengthen your body
and
delight your
mind.
拓展句：
Secondly, you can do more
exercise, which
can
strengthen your body
and
delight
your
mind.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
As a student, you need 6-8 hours of
sleep every
day to
ensure that
you
are
energetic
the
next day, and abundant energy in turn promotes
learning
efficiency.
（运用了
that
引导宾语从句）
【高分句型
2
】
Finally, it is also good to eat m
ore healthy
foods, including
green
vegetables,
fresh
fruits,
and
protein foods such as meat, eggs and
milk.
（运用了
it
作形式主语，动词不定式做真正宾语）
)
2 ．假设你叫李华，现是某中学的一名高一学生。你的美国笔友 Jack 来信谈及汉语学习的困难，并请你提
出一些汉语学习的建议。请你根据以下提示，给 Jack 写一封回信。
提示： 1.学习汉语一定要有兴趣，不怕困难；
2.不要怕犯错误，多听，多读，多练；
3.创造和利用学习汉语的机会，如：结交中国朋友等；
4.其他建议……
注意： 1.词数 80 左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.信的开头已经写好，但不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
_
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. My advice is as follows:
Firstly, develop your interest in learning Chinese if you want to be good at it. Difficult as Chinese may seem, you are sure to make progress if you put your heart into learning it. Secondly, it is natural to make mistakes when
learning a new language, so don’t worry about mistakes. More listening and reading will be of great help in
learning Chinese. Only practice can make perfect. Thirdly, you should try to get yourself into a Chinese
environment and seize every opportunity to learn and practice your Chinese. For example, try to make friends
with Chinese and communicate with them in Chinese; or you may attend Chinese training classes in your place. I
am sure your Chinese will improve soon.
Good luck to you!
Yours,
Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。美国笔友 Jack 来信谈及汉语学习的困难， 要求考生回信提出一些汉语
学习的建议。
【详解】 1.词汇积累
建议： advice → proposal/suggestion
虽然： as → though
正常的： natural → normal
机会： opportunity → chance
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句： Difficult as Chinese may seem, you are sure to make progress if you put your heart into learning it.
拓展句： Although Chinese may seem difficult, you are sure to make progress as long as you put your heart into
learning it.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] Firstly, develop your interest in learning Chinese if you want to be good at it. (运用了 if 引
导条件状语从句)
[高分句型 2] I am sure your Chinese will improve soon. (运用了省略 that 的宾语从句)
3 ．假定你是李华， 你的英国朋友 Peter 刚到广州学习， 他来信说， 很难适应在广州的学习和生活， 十分沮
丧，请你给他回信表示安慰并提出建议，内容包括：
1 ．表示安慰；
2 ．针对问题提出建议；
3 ．表达希望。
注意：
1 ．词数 80 左右；
2 ．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3 ．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
Learning that you are feeling it hard to adapt to the study and life in Guangzhou, I’m writing to offer you
some suggestions.
Yours,
Li Hua
(
【答案】
Dear
Peter,
Learning that you are
feeling it hard to adapt to the
study
and
life
in
Guangzhou
，
I’m writing
to
offer you
some suggestions.
In fact, it’s normal for a new comer to
feel uncomfortable
in
a
new
environment.
Don’t
worry.
Firstly,
try
to
join your classmates in various activities, which can help you further understand the
local
cultu
re
and
customs.
Besides, listen to your teacher’s lectures carefully and often discuss the
relevant
topic
wit
h
your
classmates.
Last
but not least, smile to the people around you and they may retur
n you
a happy
day.
I hope my advice will be helpful f
or you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你的英国朋友
Peter
刚到广州学习，他来信说，很难
)
(
适应在广州的学习和生活，十分沮丧，请你给他回信表示安慰并提出建议，内容包括：
1.
表示安慰；
2.
针
对问题提出建议；
3.
表达希望。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
各种各样的：
various→a variety of
有关的：
relevant→concerned
建议：
advice→suggestion
此外：
Besides=In addition
2.
句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：
In fact, it’s norma
l for a new comer to
feel
uncomfortable
in
a
new
environment.
Don’t
worry.
拓展句：
Don’t worry, because
it’s normal for a new
comer to
feel uncomfortable
in
a
new
environment.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1] Firstly, try to
join your classmates in various activities, which can
help you
further
understand the local culture and cu
stoms.(
运用了
which
引导的非限制性定语从句
)
[
高分句型
2] I hope my advice will be helpful
for you.(
运用了省略连接词的宾语从句
)
)
4 ．假如你是你们班的班长，你发现大多数同学学习非常努力在课间十分钟除了上厕所以外，很少活动。
因此，你打算给同学们提出一些建议。内容包括：
1.课间的目的是让大家身心放松；
2.就如何度过课间十分钟提出一些建议。
请你根据以上提示，写一篇发言稿。
课间十分钟休息： ten-minute break
注意：词数 80 左右。
(
【答案】
Dear classmates,
I notice that most of
us spend the ten-minute break reading books or working on problems. I
don’t think
it
is
wise to do so. Here are my opinions on
how
to
spend
t
he
ten-minute break.
Personally, the ten-minute break is designed for us to relax our brai
ns and
stretch
our muscles
so that we
can
keep our attention f
ocused on our lessons
during the next period.
So
it
is
a
good
idea
to
stand up
and
move
around
)
(
in the classroom. And we can also look out of
the
windows
to
let
o
ur
eyes
have
a rest,
which
is
helpful
for us
to
relax our eyes
. Besides, having a small ta
lk with others
can
also
make
us
relaxed.
In conclusion, the ten-minute break is very important because it can make us refr
eshed.
That’s all. Thank you.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇发言稿。要求考生以你班班长的身份，
针对你发现大多数同学学习非常努力
在课间十分钟除了上厕所以外，很少活动的现
象，提出几点建议。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
注意到：
notice→ catch
sight
of
休息时间：
break→
interval
保持：
keep→ maintain
有益的：
be helpful→ be beneficial
2.
句式拓展
同义句
原句：
I notice that most of
us spend the ten-minute break reading books or work
ing
on problems.
拓展句：
It is a common phenomenon that most
of
us
spend the ten-minu
te break
reading
books
or
working
on
problems.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
Personally, the ten-minute break is designed for us to relax our brains and
stretch our
muscles so that we can keep our attentio
n focused
on
our
lessons
during the
next period.
（
so
that
引导的目的状
语从句）
【高分句型
2
】
Besides, hav
ing a small talk with others can
also make us relaxed.
（动名词短语做主语）
)
5 ．假设你是李华，你班交换生 John 发来邮件说他想在抖音(TikTok)上注册一个号并分享自己的学校生活，
他想听听你的意见。请你给他回复，内容包括：
1. 你的观点；
2. 说明理由；
3. 提出注意事项。
注意： 1. 写作词数为 80 词左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John,
I’m glad to receive your email. Knowing that you want to share your school life on TikTok, I’m all in favor
of it.
As far as I am concerned, it is a good way to communicate with other people as TikTok is growing in
popularity in China. In addition, it will also bring you great pleasure. However, I still have some suggestions for you. First of all, pay much attention to your privacy when you use TikTok. In addition, you’d better manage your
time reasonably, in case TikTok affects your study.
I hope my response will be helpful to you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文， 假设你是李华， 你班交换生 John 发来邮件说他想在抖音(TikTok)上注 册一个号并分享自己的学校生活，他想听听你的意见。请你给他回复，内容包括： 1. 你的观点； 2. 说明
理由； 3. 提出注意事项。
【详解】 1.词汇积累
高兴的： glad→pleased
建议： suggestion→advice
此外： In addition→Besides
就我而言： As far as I am concerned =Personally speaking
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句： In addition, it will also bring you great pleasure. However, I still have some suggestions for you.
拓展句： In addition, it will also bring you great pleasure, but I still have some suggestions for you.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] Knowing that you want to share your school life on TikTok, I’m all in favor of it. (运用了
现在分词作状语及 that 引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型 2] First of all, pay much attention to your privacy when you use TikTok. (运用了 when 引导的时间状
语从句)
6 ．假定你是李华，最近收到了你的美国笔友 Mike 的来信。他在信中说他一直没能适应高中的学习生活，
希望你能结合你自身的经验给他一些建议。请你给他写一封回信。
注意：
1.至少写出三条建议；
2.词数 100 词左右。
Dear Mike,
I’m delighted to receive your letter.
______
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
I’m delighted to receive your letter. I don’t think it unusual for you to have such worries. The same things
happened to me. Here is how I have got myself on an easy way to the new school life.
Firstly, make every day a regular day. I make it a rule when to bed, when to rise, and when to exercise. While
in class, I listen attentively and take down where I can’t understand. After class, I turn to the teacher with it until
I’ve got it. A regular day has made a regular me. Secondly, make every day a full day. Apart from attendance at
lessons required for graduation, I join as many clubs as I can, such as drama club and music club, which allow me
chances to release myself from a day of stressful study. A full day brings me a full enjoyment. Thirdly, make
every day a meaningful day. I am a member of the volunteer club. After school, my fellows and I offer help to
those in need. A meaningful day teaches me what a meaningful life is.
If my experience helps, that will be a pleasure for me.
Yours,
Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友 Mike 写一封回信，结合自身的经验给他一些关
于如何适应高中的学习生活的建议。
【详解】 1.词汇积累
(
高兴的：
delighted→pleased
担心：
worry→concern
写下：
take down→write down
向某人求助：
turn to
sb→ask sb for
help
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
After school, my fellows and I offer help
t
o
those
in
need.
拓展句：
After school, my fellows and
I
offer help
to
t
hose who
are
in
need.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
Here is how I
have got myself
on an easy way to
the
new
school
life.
（运用了
how
引导
的表语从句）
【高分句型
2
】
Apart from attendance at le
ssons required for graduation,
I
join
as many
clubs
as
I
can,
such
as
drama club and music club, which allow me chances to
release
myself
from
a
day
of
stressful
study.
（运用了
which
引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型
3
】
A meaningful day teaches me what a meaningful life is.
（运用了
what
引导的宾语从句）
)
7 ．假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国好友 Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他最近沉迷于使用电子设备，
想做出改变但不知该怎么办，特来信向你寻求建议。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
1.表示理解;
2.提供合理使用电子设备的建议;
3.祝愿他生活重回正轨。
注意： 1.词数 100 左右。
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：电子设备 digital devices
Dear Jim,
______
Yours,
Li Hua
(
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to learn that you have been obsessed with using your digital
devices
lately.
It’s
surely
natural
for
you to find the virtual world appealing. And don’t worry!
I will
fully
support you
in
dealing with
it.
First of
all, start some other hobbies, such
as reading,
listening
to music
,
or playing
chess,
etc.,
which
will
take your mind off
your digital devices.
Secondly, make more friends. Friends will help you when you
can’t res
ist
the temptation of
your digital devices. Thirdly, do more sports.
Sports
can
not
only
ke
ep
you
healthy, but
also
enrich your life and help you forget your
digital
devices.
I hope it will all work out. Cheer up! Let me know if
I
can help
fur
ther.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国好友
Jim
最近沉迷于
使用电子设备提出合理使用电子
设备的建议。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
痴迷于：
be obsessed with→
be
addicted to
有吸引力的：
appealing→attractive
其次：
Secondly→What’s more
抵制：
resist→oppose
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
And don’t worry! I will fully support you
in
dealing with
it.
拓展句：
I want you to know t
hat I will provide my
full
support to you
as you
deal
with
it,
so
please
don’t
worry!
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
I’m sorry
to learn that you have been obsessed with using your digital devices
lately.(that
引导的宾语从句
)
【高分句型
2
】
First of
all, start some other hobbies, such
as re
ading,
listening
to
music,
or playing
chess,
etc.,
which will take your mind off
your digital devices. (which
引导的非限制
性定语从句
)
)
二、其他应用文
8．假定你是某国际学校高一学生李华， 你的美籍同学 Alice 在课堂上看起来非常沮丧， 放学后， 她匆忙离
开教室。请你写封信表达关心。内容包括：
1. 描述你注意到的身体语言；
2. 询问情况并表达关心；
3. 表示愿意提供帮助。
提示： 1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 80 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
I noticed this morning that you seemed very upset.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Alice,
I noticed this morning that you seemed very upset. When you came into the classroom, you just keep your
face down and wouldn’t speak. It looked as if you had been crying.
Is there anything wrong I heard that your mum has been ill and that you are very tired from doing all the
housework. Is that true
I really would like to help you if I can. Can I come to help you with your housework Please let me help you.
We are good friends.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考写信对同学 Alice 表达关心，需包括对同学身体语言的描
述，询问同学具体情况并表达关心，表示想提供帮助的意愿。
【详解】 1. 词汇积累
生病的： ill→sick,/unwell
哭泣： cry→weep
真地： really→genuinely
帮助： help→assit/aid/do sb. a favor
2. 句式拓展
(
合并简单句
原句：
Please let me help you. We are
good
friends.
拓展句：
Please let me help you bec
ause we are
good
friends.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
When you came into
the classroom, you
just keep your face down and
wouldn’t
speak.
（运用了
when
引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型
2
】
It looked as if
you had been crying.
（运用了
as if
引导的方式状语从句）
【高分句型
3
】
I heard that your mum has been ill and that you are very
tired from
doing
all the housework.
（运
用了
that
引导名词性从句作
heard
的宾语）
)
9 ．假设你叫李华， 请根据所提示的信息， 给你同样也上高一的美国笔友 Charles 写一封电子邮件， 向他介
绍你高中生活第一天的所见所闻及感受：
1 ．新学校比原来的学校大两倍；
2 ．每个教室都配有电脑和白板(whiteboard)；
3 ．老师都很热情，同学们也都很友好；
4 ．对高中生活充满了信心。
要求：词数 100 左右；可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
(
【答案】【参考范文】
Dear Charles,
I am writing to tell you
something about my first
day
at
Senior High
school.
My
new
school
is
twice
larger
than my previous one. The classrooms have installed computers and whiteboards.
Our
new teachers
are
enthusiastic and the new classmates are friendly. I have m
ade
several
friends now.
Our teachers
taught us
some
learning methods. I am sure I can
make progress
in
this
school.
Looking forward to knowing something about your new
school
life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你叫李华，
请根据所提示的信息，
给你同样也
上高一的美国笔友
Charles
写一封电子邮件，向他介绍你高中
生活第一天的所见所闻及感受。
)
(
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
告诉：
tell→inform
方法：
methods→means
确信的：
be
sure→be conv
inced
友好的：
friendly→kind
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
Our new teachers are enthusiastic
and the new classmates
are
friendly.
I have
made
several
friends
now.
拓展句：
Since our new teachers are
enthusiastic
and the new
classmates
are
friendly,
I
have
made
several
friends
now.
【点睛】
[
高分句型
1] Looking forward to knowing someth
ing about your new school
life.
(
运用了动名词作宾
语
)
[
高分句型
2] I am sure I can make progress in
this
school.
(
运用了省略
that
的宾
语从句
)
)
10 ．假定你是李华，收到朋友 David 的来信。信中 David 向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日考试没考好。请用
英文给该朋友写一封回信。
内容要点如下：
1. 表示理解并给予安慰；
2. 提出建议并说明理由。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
I’m sorry to know that you didn’t do well in the exam recently.
___
Yours,
Li Hua
(
【答案】参考范文
Dear David,
I’m sorry to know that you didn’t do well in the
exam recently.
I
truly understand you
and
you
don’t
have
to
be so worried about it. Here are three useful tips to help you
deal with
your
problem.
First of
all, you can turn to your teachers, your classmates or parents, who can
give you
som
e useful
suggestions.
Second, you need do more practice to better understand the knowledg
e. Last but not least, be
confident about yourself
because everything will come out all right in the
end.
I sincerely hope my suggestions will be of
help to you, and you
can make
it
in
the n
ext
examination.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给没
有考好的朋友
David
写一封回信，向
David
表示安慰并
提些建议。
【详解】
1.
词汇积累
为
……
担心：
be worried about→be concerned about
处理：
deal with→cope
with
真诚地：
sincerely→genuinely
成功：
make it→succeed
2.
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：
Here are three useful tips to help you deal with your problem.
拓展句：
Here are three us
eful tips that may help you deal
with
your problem.
【点睛】【高分句型
1
】
First of
all, you can turn to your tea
chers, your classmates or parents, who can
give you
some useful suggestions.
（运用了
who
引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型
2
】
Last but not least, be confident about yourself
because everything wi
ll come
out
all right
in
the
end.
（运用了祈使句和
because
引导的原因状语从句）
)

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