资源简介

2024高考英语读后续写——高考新题型例题讲解
Ⅰ. Our aims:
1.We need to know the three steps of doing continuation writing.
2.We can finish the whole writing by ourselves.
Ⅱ. Class procedures:
Three steps
Step1. Read
Step2. Think
Step3. Write
Make the story clearer (梳理情节)
事件线
时间线
地点线
物品
3. Make sure the theme (确认主题)
主题 人与自我
识别问题 John Smith 很健忘，打算带孩子去海边小镇，却忘了小镇名字，回家找到名字，又忘了自己该做什么。
问题解决 顺利想起自己忘记的事情
解决途径 妻子和朋友的帮助
Tips：
(1) If John Smith thinks of what he is going to do
(2) Who did the“cry” in the second paragraph
5.Make a route of the following story (确定后续故事的大致走向)
阶段结果
Para 2 首句 Hearing the cry, out rushed their neighbors, trying to find out what had happened.
阶段结果
6.确定每段的具体情节
Paragraph 1: “What’s the matter now ” asked his wife.
发出者 与上个情节衔接点 动 情
微情节1 John Smith 妻子问怎么了 解释为什么站在那里 害怕,焦急
微情节2 解释
微情节3 John Smith 被质问
微情节4 妻子 得知实情 生气
Homework
课下完成paragraph2 续写。
Paragraph 2: Hearing the cry, out rushed their neighbors, trying to find out what had happened.
发出者 与上个情节衔接点 动 情
微情节1 朋友 邻居听到争吵 打电话 生气
微情节2 John Smith 接到朋友的电话 开车去接孩子 焦急
微情节3 妻子 丈夫离开 打车跟上丈夫 担心
原文
A friend of mine whose name was John Smith had a bad memory，which made him famous. He was so forgetful that he sometimes forgot what he was talking about in the middle of a sentence. His wife had to constantly remind him about his meetings, his classes—even his meals! Once he forgot he had eaten breakfast twice, at home and at school. His wife liked to remind her neighbors, “If John didn't have his head tied on, he would forget that too！” Since Smith was a professor at a well-known university, his forgetfulness was often an embarrassment to him. It wasn't that he was not clever, as some critical people tended to say, but just very, very absent minded.
One hot summer day, professor Smith decided to take his children to a seaside town about a three hour train ride away. To make the trip more interesting for his young children, he kept the name of the town a secret. However, by the time they arrived at the station, Smith forgot the name of the town he was planning to visit. Luckily, a friend of his happened to be in the station. He offered to take care of the children while Smith hurried back home to find out where he was going.
The professor's wife was surprised to see him again so soon.
“Oh, my dear, I forgot the name of the town.”
“What You forgot the name Maybe one day you will forget my name! Now I'll write the name of that town on a piece of paper, and you put it in your pocket and please, please don't forget where you put it.”
Satisfied that she had solved the problem, she sent her husband off again. Ten minutes later she was astonished to see him outside the house for the third time.
注意：1.所续写短文词数应为150左右 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已给出，不计入总词数；
Paragraph1:
“What’s the matter now ” asked his wife.
Paragraph2:
Hearing the cry, out rushed their neighbors, trying to find out what had happened.

展开更多......

收起↑