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主题续写微情节关爱动物之悉心照顾
常见情节
初次接触
帮助陪伴
温馨结局
相遇
受困
受伤
救治
帮助
照顾
共同生活
依依惜别
收获感悟
1. 几只硕大的鹿赫然伫立在他面前。
2. 黎明时分，我被窗外一只鸟的叽叽喳喳声吵醒了。
3. 在围栏里，她看到了那匹马，毛柔软油黑，有一只脚是白色的。
初次接触：相遇
In front of him stood several large deer.
At dawn, the twittering of a bird just outside my window woke me up.
At the pen, she saw the horse with a soft black coat and one white foot.
4. 那匹马的眼睛里没有了生命迹象。
5. 我们可以看出那只狗正遭受着酷热的折磨。
6. 其中一匹马掉了很多毛，尾巴也掉了大部分。
7. 很明显那只躺在地上的熊宝宝正因为缺水而饱受煎熬。
初次接触：受困
There was no sign of life in the horse’s eyes.
We could tell the dog was suffering from the extreme heat.
One of the horses had lost much of his hair while most of his tail was missing.
It was clear that a baby bear lying on the ground was suffering from a lack of water.
8. 那只鹿很快就喘不过气来了。
9. 那头小象内心充满了恐惧和痛苦。
10. 那只狗躺在地上，睁着眼睛，耳朵耷拉着。
初次接触：受伤
The deer was out of breath in an instant.
The little elephant was full of fear and pain.
The dog lay on the ground, with his eyes open and ears flat.
11. 那只可怜的鸟儿伤了翅膀，努力想飞却无济于事。
12. 当靠近湖中的鸭子时，我们发现它的脖子上缠着一条细铁丝。
Even though its wing was hurt, the poor bird attempted to fly, but in vain.
Approaching the duck in the lake, we found a thin wire wrapped around its neck.
初次接触：受伤
13. 轻轻地，他纤细的手指将钩子从小鸟身上拔出来。
14. 猴子得到了输氧，受到了工作人员的精心照料。
15. 他把小鸟捧在手中，小心地用绷带给它包扎伤口。
帮助陪伴：救治
Gently, his slim fingers removed the hook from
the bird’s flesh.
The monkey was given oxygen, receiving good care
from the staff.
Holding the little bird in his hand, he carefully bandaged its injury.
16. 他用剪刀剪掉了鸭子脖子上的钓鱼线。
17. 他日夜寸步不离小象，每隔几个小时给它换一次绷带。
With a pair of scissors, he cut away the fishing line from the duck’s neck.
He kept close to the little elephant day and night, changing its bandages every few hours.
帮助陪伴：救治
18. 他弯下腰，捧着小鸟，轻轻地把它举起来。
19. 我打算在墙上钉一个架子，用于固定鸟巢。
帮助陪伴：帮助
He bent over, cupped the little bird in his hands and raised it gently.
I intended to hammer a shelf into the wall to hold the nest.
20. 看到狗爬到了我的脚边，我给他盖上了
毯子让他暖和一些。
21. 他给每匹马的脖子套上缰绳，开始领着它们穿过隧道。
帮助陪伴：帮助
Seeing the dog crawling up around my feet, I covered him with a blanket to keep him warm.
With a rope fastened around the neck of each horse, he started to lead them down the tunnel.
While the horses ate greedily, he poured in some water.
She gave the horse some carrots and patted his head fondly.
Every day, they talked to the horses while feeding and watering them.
22. 当马儿们狼吞虎咽时，他倒了一些水进去。
23. 她给马喂了一些胡萝卜，怜爱地拍了拍他的头。
24. 每天给马喂食喂水时，他们都会和马儿们说说话。
帮助陪伴：照顾
25. 每顿饭后，我都把桌布上的食物残渣喂给麻雀。
26. 我把火鸡带到我们建的窝棚里，给它留了一些食物和水。
27. 这头鹿努力地抬起头来，舔着男孩手上的水。
帮助陪伴：照顾
After every meal, I fed the leftovers from the tablecloth to the sparrows.
Having taken the turkey to the shelter we had built, I left it with some food and water.
With great effort, the deer lifted its head and licked the water from the boy’s hand.
28. 小猫默默地陪伴着我。
29. 尽管我们生活得很艰难，但这只狗的陪伴让日子过得有了意义。
温馨结局：共同生活
The kitten kept company with me in her silent way.
Though we’d had a tough life, the dog’s company made the days count.
30. 每天，小鸡都会跟着我们在院子里走来走
去，发出清脆的叫声。
Every day, the chick would follow us around the yard, making crisp sounds.
温馨结局：共同生活
31. 在挣扎着做出决定后，他最终还是把小鸟放生了。
32. 他红色的眼睛直视着我们，舒展开身体，在湖面拍打着翅膀。
温馨结局：依依惜别
After struggling to make a decision, he eventually let go of the bird.
With his red eyes fixed on us, he stretched his body and beat his wings on the lake.
33. 猴子一跳到树顶上就消失在森林中了。
34. 当狼朝森林跑去时，他回头看了看，脸上露出了感激的表情。
温馨结局：依依惜别
No sooner had the monkey jumped onto the top of the tree than it disappeared into the forest.
As the wolf ran off into the forest, he looked back with a thankful expression on his face.
35. 这只快乐的狗让我内心的沮丧化为了生命力。
36. 儿子的努力让我感动。我从来没有像现在这样为他感到骄傲。
温馨结局：收获感悟
The happy dog replaced my depression with the strength of life.
The efforts my son had made touched my heart. Never before had I been prouder of him.
37. 随着我对这些鸡越来越多的关注和照顾，我和它们建立起密切的关系。这些小动物教会我尊重和珍惜生命，感恩节也因此更加有意义。
温馨结局：收获感悟
With the increasing attention and devotion to the chickens, I formed a close bond with them. The little creatures taught me to respect and treasure life, for which Thanksgiving made more sense.
PART 03Exercise Consolidation
Complete the following sentences
1. 我们听到的只有远处鸟儿的叽叽喳喳声。
We heard nothing except the distant __________________.
2. 那只可怜的小狗正遭受着酷热的折磨，发着高烧。
The poor puppy that _____________________________ had a high temperature.
3. 很明显躺在地上的那匹马喘不过气来了。
It was clear that the horse _________________was ____________.
4. 她立刻带它进屋，用绷带包扎伤口。
She immediately took it into the house to _________________.
twittering of birds
was suffering from extreme heat
lying on the ground
out of breath
bandage its injury
Complete the following sentences
5. 她双手捧着鸭子，轻轻地把它举起来。
She ___________________________ and raised it gently.
6. 在我家，这只老狗一直陪伴着我的儿子和女儿。
At my home, the old dog _________________________________
___________.
7. 他们一点一点地把乌龟身上的渔网剪掉了。
Little by little, they _______________________ from the turtle’s body.
8. 虽然他非常想把这只鸟养作宠物，但他知道他必须把它放生。
Although he wanted very much to keep the bird as a pet, ___________________________.
cupped the duck in her hands
kept company with my son and
daughter
cut away the fishing net
he knew he had to let go of it
Complete the following sentences
9. 我给这位“不速之客”喂了一些剩菜剩饭，并倒了一些水给它喝。
I ______________________________________ and _____
_____________ for it to drink.
10. 望着它们飞来飞去，我感到内心的沮丧化为了生命力。
Seeing them flying around, __________________________
___________________________.
fed some leftovers to the unexpected guest
poured
in some water
I felt my depression was
replaced by the strength of life
Complete the following blanks
Suddenly, Grace stopped walking and pulled her brother towards the fence. Near the fence on the grass lay a little dog. It seemed to be injured and suffering from great pain. I went over to see how my kids would deal with the dog. ________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
With the day getting late, we had to leave. The two kids kept begging me to take the dog home. Touched by their kindness, I nodded in agreement. Wild with joy, Grace held the dog in her arms as we started going home.
Grace picked up the creature and put it gently on her lap. Having removed the ribbon from her hair, she wrapped it around the dog’s injury. Thinking it might be thirsty, Jack fetched some water for it. They petted the dog fondly, whispering some soft words to comfort it.
PART 04Topic Extension
Read the passage and get to know the details
My husband Erik and I had promised the kids a Labrador puppy. I’d seen an advert at the local hardware store, saying some dogs were available.
“There were thirteen puppies in all,” Sally, the owner, said when I called. “Now, there are only three left.” I said I’d pay her a visit the next day. The boys jumped and shouted excitedly as I copied down directions and hung up the phone. Early the next morning, still discussing possible names for a dog, Erik and I wound our way through the mountains to meet our family’s new best friend. Our boys had simple names: Ike, Sam, Ben, and Dom, so they wanted a simple name, like Rosy, for their pet.
Read the passage and get to know the details
Finally, we met the sweet little dog. “Rosy,” the boys said to it softly. Our little puppy cocked her head. “She likes it,” they cheered and set about making Rosy comfortable for the long drive home. They offered her a chew toy and lifted her up so she could see out of the window. They took turns lovingly holding her in their arms and offered her a snack.
Though small, Rosy grew strong and healthy beneath her shiny black coat. And, just as I’d hoped, she was a calming addition to our houseful of noisy boys. But something was wrong. “It’s like she doesn’t know how to play,” Sam commented one day after school. “Dogs have different personalities, just like people,” I said. “Besides, she’s still very young.”
Read the passage and get to know the details
“But her legs aren’t very long, and one eye is smaller than the other,’’ Ike added, trying to make sense of why Rosy was different from other puppies he’d met.
I looked across the room to where Rosy sat between the boys. The last golden rays of autumn sunshine shone brightly on her face. Sure enough, one eye was misshapen. Not only that, it didn’t glint in the afternoon light. I took a deep breath. Rosy, our puppy with a name as short as her four little legs, was blind in one eye.
Micro-plot design
According to the above passage, please design a micro-plot about our reaction and what we did with Rosy. Remember to use what we have learnt in this period.
Micro-plot design
发现小狗不正常以后，我们_______,我看到孩子们的失望，为了弥补，我可能_____________________________,但是善良的孩子们_________________________.
很失望
想归还小狗，换一只健康的小狗
拒绝，认为这对小狗不公平
Micro-plot design
Everyone in the room became serious and disappointed. Having hesitated for a little while, I finally made a difficult decision. I walked to them, petted the dog, and then suggested giving it back and getting another, healthy and lively, little puppy. Surprisingly, the boys refused to give the little puppy back. Sam held Rosy tightly in his arms and stroked its fur, saying “Mommy, it’s not fair for the little dog. We should love and care for her together.” Ike looked me straight in the eye, begging me to keep Rosy. The other boys agreed. Never had I expected my little boys to have such concern and love for an animal. I was very moved and nodded, “OK, we’ll keep Rosy.”
SummaryPART 05
Summary
words
phrases
sentences
paragraphs
Topic extension
Words & Phrases brainstorm
Sentence translation
Paragraph practice
Micro-plot design
topic extension
micro-plot design
金字塔渐进式
WPS之PTM模式
WPS
搭建语基基石
PTM构建微情节设计
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