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妻子收养流浪狗
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表达积累
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原文分析
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续写扩展
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续写赏析
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I'm retired and not responsible for much these days.I don't have school-age children who require help with their homework.I sleep in when I choose,do a little writing and repair a few things around the house.My wife's work,on the other hand,is never ending.Dana takes care of her parents in their mid-nineties,tends to home and garden,volunteers for various community organizations,and is a gold-star grandmother.She is also a dedicated cat lover,and cats have always been her pet of choice.
All that changed when two small black-and -brown dogs scampered into our yard and melted Diana's heart.It happened not long ago.The dogs appeared unannounced and had been seen by hikers on numerous occasions,roaming the woods like tiny lost souls.They were homeless dogs,as wild as the wind.No one could get within 100 yards of them.In their struggle for survival,the two had figured out a way to avoid people and find food and shelter in the wilderness.
They were undeniably cute and appealing.Many of our neighbors tried to lure them in with treats,but the tiny dogs remained unapproachable.My wife began leaving tasty food out,slowly moving the food bowl closer with each feeding.As days passed,they ventured closer and closer. Diana made a conscious effort not to frighten them.She called them to dinner with a comforting voice,letting them know they were safe.It was important that they trusted her.Why She was looking for something to mother.For Diana,love is the medicine to everything,and nothing tugged at her heartstrings more than a hungry and homeless animal.
Diana named them“Emma”and“Daisy”and she called the dogs her “little wolves.”Initially, they would not let her touch them.As days turned into weeks,their bond slowly grew.Soon,Diana was peting them.Next,they were eating from her hand.Before long,she had them siting in her lap and following her around the yard.And poof!My wife was instantly transformed from cat lady to dog lady
Para. 1It wasn’t long before the dogs were sleeping in the house and assuming their role as “watchdog”
Para.2 Time in the yard feels like a second childhood with Daisy and Emma playing about our feet.
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原文分析
I'm retired and not responsible for much these days.I don't have school-age children who require help with their homework. I sleep in when I choose, do a little writing and repair a few things around the house. My wife's work, on the other hand, is never ending. Dana takes care of her parents in their mid-nineties, tends to home and garden, volunteers for various community organizations, and is a gold-star grandmother. She is also a dedicated cat lover, and cats have always been her pet of choice.
All that changed when two small black-and -brown dogs scampered into our yard and melted Diana's heart. It happened not long ago.The dogs appeared unannounced and had been seen by hikers on numerous occasions,roaming the woods like tiny lost souls.They were homeless dogs,as wild as the wind.No one could get within 100 yards of them.In their struggle for survival,the two had figured out a way to avoid people and find food and shelter in the wilderness.
They were undeniably cute and appealing.Many of our neighbors tried to lure them in with treats,but the tiny dogs remained unapproachable.My wife began leaving tasty food out,slowly moving the food bowl closer with each feeding.As days passed,they ventured closer and closer. Diana made a conscious effort not to frighten them.She called them to dinner with a comforting voice,letting them know they were safe.It was important that they trusted her.Why She was looking for something to mother.For Diana,love is the medicine to everything,and nothing tugged at her heartstrings more than a hungry and homeless animal.
Diana named them“Emma”and“Daisy”and she called the dogs her “little wolves.”Initially, they would not let her touch them.As days turned into weeks,their bond slowly grew.Soon,Diana was peting them.Next,they were eating from her hand.Before long,she had them siting in her lap and following her around the yard.And poof!My wife was instantly transformed from cat lady to dog lady
如何快速梳理故事情节线与情感线？
Tip 1:找时间线索,时间的变化带来情节的发展
Tip 2:找地点线索，地点的变化带来情节的发展
Tip 3:通过逻辑连词来推动情节的发展
I'm retired and not responsible for much these days.I don't have school-age children who require help with their homework.I sleep in when I choose,do a little writing and repair a few things around the house.My wife's work,on the other hand,is never ending.Dana takes care of her parents in their mid-nineties,tends to home and garden,volunteers for various community organizations,and is a gold-star grandmother.She is also a dedicated cat lover,and cats have always been her pet of choice.
All that changed when two small black-and -brown dogs scampered into our yard and melted Diana's heart.It happened not long ago.The dogs appeared unannounced and had been seen by hikers on numerous occasions,roaming the woods like tiny lost souls.They were homeless dogs,as wild as the wind.No one could get within 100 yards of them.In their struggle for survival,the two had figured out a way to avoid people and find food and shelter in the wilderness.
They were undeniably cute and appealing.Many of our neighbors tried to lure them in with treats,but the tiny dogs remained unapproachable.My wife began leaving tasty food out,slowly moving the food bowl closer with each feeding.As days passed,they ventured closer and closer. Diana made a conscious effort not to frighten them.She called them to dinner with a comforting voice,letting them know they were safe.It was important that they trusted her.Why She was looking for something to mother.For Diana,love is the medicine to everything,and nothing tugged at her heartstrings more than a hungry and homeless animal.
Diana named them“Emma”and“Daisy”and she called the dogs her “little wolves.”Initially, they would not let her touch them.As days turned into weeks,their bond slowly grew.Soon,Diana was peting them.Next,they were eating from her hand.Before long,she had them siting in her lap and following her around the yard.And poof!My wife was instantly transformed from cat lady to dog lady
My wife is already busy with various responsibilities
wife gradually gains the trust of the dogs and forms a bond with them
the dogs become part of their family
caring, responsible
Joyful
dedicated, compassionate, motherly
Read for plots
Background
Rising action
Climax
Falling action
Ending

Analyze the Plot and Emotion
Para.1:It wasn’t long before the dogs were sleeping in the house and assuming their role as “watchdog”
Para2: Time in the yard feels like a second childhood with Daisy and Emma playing about our feet.
I and my wife retired. I do a little things but my wife was busy.
Two little dog appeared
My wife wife gradually gains the trust of the dogs and forms a bond with them.
Close bond
joyful
Read for Characters
my wife:
I'm retired and not responsible for much these days. I don't have school-age children who require help with their homework. I sleep in when I choose, do a little writing and repair a few things around the house. My wife's work, on the other hand, is never ending. Dana takes care of her parents in their mid-nineties, tends to home and garden, volunteers for various community organizations, and is a gold-star grandmother. She is also a dedicated cat lover, and cats have always been her pet of choice.
All that changed when two small black-and -brown dogs scampered into our yard and melted Diana's heart. It happened not long ago. The dogs appeared unannounced and had been seen by hikers on numerous occasions, roaming the woods like tiny lost souls. They were homeless dogs, as wild as the wind. No one could get within 100 yards of them. In their struggle for survival, the two had figured out a way to avoid people and find food and shelter in the wilderness.
They were undeniably cute and appealing. Many of our neighbors tried to lure them in with treats, but the tiny dogs remained unapproachable. My wife began leaving tasty food out, slowly moving the food bowl closer with each feeding. As days passed, they ventured closer and closer. Diana made a conscious effort not to frighten them. She called them to dinner with a comforting voice, letting them know they were safe. It was important that they trusted her. Why She was looking for something to mother. For Diana, love is the medicine to everything, and nothing tugged at her heartstrings more than a hungry and homeless animal.
Diana named them “Emma” and “Daisy” and she called the dogs her “little wolves.”Initially, they would not let her touch them. As days turned into weeks, their bond slowly grew. Soon, Diana was peting them. Next, they were eating from her hand. Before long, she had them siting in her lap and following her around the yard. And poof! My wife was instantly transformed from cat lady to dog lady
The dogs:
Dedicated,
Caring,
Patient,
loving
Cautious,
Disciplined,
I'm retired and not responsible for much these days. I don't have school-age children who require help with their homework. I sleep in when I choose, do a little writing and repair a few things around the house. My wife's work, on the other hand, is never ending. Dana takes care of her parents in their mid-nineties, tends to home and garden, volunteers for various community organizations, and is a gold-star grandmother. She is also a dedicated cat lover, and cats have always been her pet of choice.
All that changed when two small black-and -brown dogs scampered into our yard and melted Diana's heart. It happened not long ago. The dogs appeared unannounced and had been seen by hikers on numerous occasions, roaming the woods like tiny lost souls. They were homeless dogs, as wild as the wind. No one could get within 100 yards of them. In their struggle for survival, the two had figured out a way to avoid people and find food and shelter in the wilderness.
They were undeniably cute and appealing. Many of our neighbors tried to lure them in with treats, but the tiny dogs remained unapproachable. My wife began leaving tasty food out, slowly moving the food bowl closer with each feeding. As days passed, they ventured closer and closer. Diana made a conscious effort not to frighten them. She called them to dinner with a comforting voice, letting them know they were safe. It was important that they trusted her. Why She was looking for something to mother. For Diana, love is the medicine to everything, and nothing tugged at her heartstrings more than a hungry and homeless animal.
Diana named them “Emma” and “Daisy” and she called the dogs her “little wolves.”Initially, they would not let her touch them. As days turned into weeks, their bond slowly grew. Soon, Diana was peting them. Next, they were eating from her hand. Before long, she had them siting in her lap and following her around the yard. And poof! My wife was instantly transformed from cat lady to dog lady
Read for conflicts
The dog was unapproachab-le.
My wife was
transformed from cat lover to dog lover.
I'm retired and not responsible for much these days. I don't have school-age children who require help with their homework. I sleep in when I choose, do a little writing and repair a few things around the house. My wife's work, on the other hand, is never ending. Dana takes care of her parents in their mid-nineties, tends to home and garden, volunteers for various community organizations, and is a gold-star grandmother. She is also a dedicated cat lover, and cats have always been her pet of choice.
All that changed when two small black-and -brown dogs scampered into our yard and melted Diana's heart. It happened not long ago. The dogs appeared unannounced and had been seen by hikers on numerous occasions, roaming the woods like tiny lost souls. They were homeless dogs, as wild as the wind. No one could get within 100 yards of them. In their struggle for survival, the two had figured out a way to avoid people and find food and shelter in the wilderness.
They were undeniably cute and appealing. Many of our neighbors tried to lure them in with treats, but the tiny dogs remained unapproachable. My wife began leaving tasty food out, slowly moving the food bowl closer with each feeding. As days passed, they ventured closer and closer. Diana made a conscious effort not to frighten them. She called them to dinner with a comforting voice, letting them know they were safe. It was important that they trusted her. Why She was looking for something to mother. For Diana, love is the medicine to everything, and nothing tugged at her heartstrings more than a hungry and homeless animal.
Diana named them “Emma” and “Daisy” and she called the dogs her “little wolves.”Initially, they would not let her touch them. As days turned into weeks, their bond slowly grew. Soon, Diana was peting them. Next, they were eating from her hand. Before long, she had them siting in her lap and following her around the yard. And poof! My wife was instantly transformed from cat lady to dog lady
Read for hint foreshadowing
暗示两只狗未来和Diana越来越亲近，成为这个家庭的一份子。
Themes
故事的主题：
爱动物，有责任有爱心
原文分析
原文分析
故事概要：作者描述了退休后的生活和妻子Diana的忙碌生活，收养两只流浪狗最终使她从一位猫奴转变为狗奴。
I'm retired and not responsible for much these days. I don't have school-age children who require help with their homework. I sleep in when I choose, do a little writing and repair a few things around the house. My wife's work, on the other hand, is never ending. Dana takes care of her parents in their mid-nineties, tends to home and garden, volunteers for various community organizations, and is a gold-star grandmother. She is also a dedicated cat lover, and cats have always been her pet of choice.
All that changed when two small black-and -brown dogs scampered into our yard and melted Diana's heart. It happened not long ago. The dogs appeared unannounced and had been seen by hikers on numerous occasions, roaming the woods like tiny lost souls. They were homeless dogs, as wild as the wind. No one could get within 100 yards of them. In their struggle for survival, the two had figured out a way to avoid people and find food and shelter in the wilderness.
They were undeniably cute and appealing. Many of our neighbors tried to lure them in with treats, but the tiny dogs remained unapproachable. My wife began leaving tasty food out, slowly moving the food bowl closer with each feeding. As days passed, they ventured closer and closer. Diana made a conscious effort not to frighten them. She called them to dinner with a comforting voice, letting them know they were safe. It was important that they trusted her. Why She was looking for something to mother. For Diana, love is the medicine to everything, and nothing tugged at her heartstrings more than a hungry and homeless animal.
Diana named them “Emma” and “Daisy” and she called the dogs her “little wolves.”Initially, they would not let her touch them. As days turned into weeks, their bond slowly grew. Soon, Diana was peting them. Next, they were eating from her hand. Before long, she had them siting in her lap and following her around the yard. And poof! My wife was instantly transformed from cat lady to dog lady
Analyze language
没有对话描写
丰富动作描写
根据语篇协同性原则：
续写部分应该运用部分心理描写及丰富的动作描写
少量心理描写
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续写扩展
How did the dog watch the house
Analyse the given sentences
What was the scene
What lesson did I draw from this experience (THEME)
What can you infer from the two sentences
Para1: It wasn’t long before the dogs were sleeping in the house
and assuming their role as “watchdog”
Para2: Time in the yard feels like a second childhood with Daisy and Emma
playing about our feet.
How did I react and feel
How did my wife react
How did Dianna react and feel
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表达积累
微动作---狗的常见动作描写
1.狗吠交流或提醒主人。
1. Dogs bark to communicate or alert their owners.
2.他们在热或累的时候喘气。
2. They pant when they are hot or tired.
3.狗四处嗅一嗅，探索周围的环境。
3. Dogs sniff around to explore their surroundings.
4.它们摇着尾巴，跳起来迎接它们的主人。
4. They wag their tail and jump up to greet their owners.
5.它们发痒的时候会挠抓自己。
5. They scratch themselves when they are itchy.
微动作---狗的常见动作描写
6.他们舔主人或自己作为感情的象征或清洁自己。
6. They lick their owners or themselves as a sign of affection or to clean themselves.
7.狗在和主人玩耍时会取东西。
7. Dogs fetch objects when playing with their owners.
8.当他们感到无聊或试图埋什么东西时，他们就会在地上挖洞。
8. They dig in the ground when they are bored or trying to bury something.
9.狗会咀嚼玩具或骨头。
9. Dogs chew on toys or bones.
10.狗被弄湿后，会摇摆身子去擦干皮毛。
10. Dogs shake themselves off to dry their fur after getting wet.
微场景---狗守卫房子的场景
狗立着直直的，保持警惕，它的眼睛扫过院子，一直警惕着任何入侵者的迹象。每一刻，它都嗅了嗅空气，闻出最微弱的不熟悉的气味，这是一个保持警惕的信号。狗不时地停下来，目光盯着远处的身影或灌木丛中的沙沙声。它会放低身体，随时准备立即采取行动。尾巴高高立起，表现出令人惊人的力量和决心。单靠狗的出现就足以抵御任何潜在的威胁。
The dog stood tall and vigilant, its eyes darting across the yard, ever watchful for any signs of intruders. With each passing moment, it sniffed the air, detecting the faintest scent of unfamiliarity, a signal to remain alert. From time to time, the dog would pause, its gaze fixed on a distant figure or a rustling in the bushes. It would lower its body, ready to spring into action at a moment's notice. Tail held high, the dog displayed an air of impressive strength and determination. The dog's presence alone was enough to ward off any potential threat.
The dog wagged its tail excitedly as the owner approached, their faces beaming with joy. With a gentle pat on the head, the owner knelt down to meet the dog's level. They exchanged warm gazes, their eyes filled with love and trust. The owner extended their hand, and the dog eagerly licked it, expressing his affection. They embarked on a playful adventure, chasing a ball together. Laughter filled the air as they shared moments of pure happiness. The owner embraced the dog, feeling the warmth of their furry companion.
微场景-狗和主人亲密互动1
当主人走近时，狗兴奋地摇着尾巴，脸上洋溢着喜悦。主人轻轻地拍了拍狗的头，跪下来和狗保持同一高度。他们相互温暖地看了看对方，眼睛里充满了爱和信任。主人伸出他们的手，狗急切地舔着它，表达了他的爱意。他们开始了一场好玩的冒险，一起追着一个球。当他们分享纯粹幸福的时刻时，空气中充满了笑声。主人拥抱了狗，感受着这个同伴毛茸茸的温暖。
The owner’s eyes light up as the dog enters the room, wagging its tail in excitement. The owner's face breaks into a wide smile, and his heart fills with a profound affection for his furry companion. He tenderly stroke the dog's soft fur, feeling the warmth and comfort it brings. Their connection transcends words, as the owner finds solace in the unconditional love and unwavering loyalty that only a dog can provide.
微场景-狗和主人亲密互动2
当狗进入房间时，主人的眼睛亮了起来，狗兴奋地摇着尾巴。主人的脸上露出了灿烂的笑容，他的心里充满了对这个毛茸茸的同伴的喜爱。他温柔地抚摸着狗柔软的皮毛，感受到它带来的温暖和舒适。他们之间的联系超越了语言，只有狗才能提供的无条件的爱和坚定的忠诚，主人从中获得了安慰。
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It wasn't long before the doers were sleeping in the house and assuming their role as "watchdogs". They became fierce protectors of our home, a comforting presence. Each day, they would police the property whole-heartedly and then return to the house expecting a sweet treat and a gentle pat on the head for a job well done. Their love and devotion were unquestioning. They quickly became integrated into our daily lives. Where did they come from That was a question I never stopped asking myself. Maybe an unavoidable tragedy brought the little wolves to us, or maybe they had been adopted by a misguided human. Whatever it was, our furry friends are the essence of happiness. They display absolute joy in simply being alive. Their wagging tails and cold little noses always lift my spirits.
Time in the yard feels like a second childhood with Daisy and Emma playing about our feet. Filled with so much energy, they race around the yard, barking and chasing each other, and then sprint back to us for another love session of pets and hugs. When my wife goes shopping, she comes home to find the dogs waiting patiently in the driveway, perched on a nest of her shoes. Those who rescue abandoned animals are the best people in the world. Diana is one of them. She can win the hearts of two wild animals with love and kindness. The "little wolves" are now so important in our lives that we can't imagine being without them. The dogs have taught us to savor every moment spent in their company. I've also learned that it's highly possible to turn a cat lady into a dog lady with two little wolves and a whole lot of love.
范文赏析
It wasn't long before the dogs were sleeping in the house and assuming their role as "watchdogs". They became fiercely protective of our property, barking at any unfamiliar noise or movement. Their once-wild nature transformed into loyalty and devotion towards us. Diana's days became filled with walks in the park, training sessions, and endless playtime with her newfound companions. She had found a new purpose, a new responsibility that brought her immense joy and fulfillment.
Time in the yard feels like a second childhood with Daisy and Emma playing about our feet. Their energy and enthusiasm are infectious, reminding us to appreciate the simple pleasures in life. We laugh as they chase each other, tails wagging frantically, completely carefree. Their presence has injected a sense of liveliness into our home, and we couldn't imagine our lives without them. They have not only brought happiness to Diana but also to our entire family. As we enjoy this chapter of our lives with our furry companions, I am grateful for the unexpected joy they have brought us and the lessons they continue to teach us about the importance of kindness and unconditional love.
下水范文赏析
类似话题拓展---202301浙江1月高考读后续写
I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired Or too thirsty
As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.
Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.
During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.”
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.
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I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. I rushed back to the deserted house. It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. Leaving the house, I couldn’t help wondering how it was getting on now. Had it managed to find its way back home, or was it still out there somewhere struggling to survive
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention. I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air. It seemed that the bird was waiting for me, its beady eyes locked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away.
202301浙江1月高考读后续写 范文
When I arrived home from school , night was falling . A call came from the public : a bird of unknown species was being attacked by a group of noisy children in his front garden . He scared them off and grabbed their victim . I immediately called for my classmate Jack to the spot .
We were standing in front of a stranger ' s house in an unfamiliar street , rescue box in hand , my head full of instructions to follow ." The bird would be our first test as a volunteer wildlife rescuer !" Jack said excitedly . We had completed the two-day intensive training course the previous month and learned the basic skills of rescuing animals in various situations.
But we were anxious , too . After all , it was the first time for us to rescue a bird . Would I be able to transfer the bird neatly into my rescue box Many worries flashed in my mind . Sensing my unease about the act ahead , Jack said ," These things are pretty easy to deal with !"
I was wondering what kind of bird it was when a kind - looking man appeared and led us inside to see our very first patient . I lifted the edge of the shoe box very slightly to see an angry - looking bird standing to attention on very thin and long legs , together with a slice of banana and a small dish of water . He didn ' t know its true name but the folks called the creature Red Fan ." It ' s eaten some banana ," said the man proudly . The poor soul seemed rather nervous , so I decided not to grab it by hand but just transfer the whole shoebox into my rescue box .
Back home , we could only see some minor injuries in the left wing , but there was no blood on its feathers . Jack managed to treat the injuries with some iodophor(碘伏药水） . We assessed its condition to find out if it was appropriate to release the bird the next day . How could we help it spend the night peacefully We hadn ' t seen this species of bird before , let alone its habits .
Para 1： " Why not do a search on the Internet " suggested Jack .
Para2: The next day , we were glad to see the bird was well enough .
类似话题拓展--202304山东潍坊二模
" Why not do a search on the Internet " suggested Jack . We acted quickly and surfed the Internet to figure out the relevant information about the bird , such as its species and habits . Following the given advice , we put some cotton at the bottom of the box to keep it warm and placed it near the fireplace . In order to recover its energy , we gave it some food and water . The bird looked a bit more comfortable , and soon it fell asleep . Having ensured the bird was in good condition , we felt relieved .
The next day , we were glad to see the bird was well enough . It was singing and bouncing around in the rescue box . Obviously , it had regained its energy ! Realizing it was fully ready for freedom , we took the box outside , placed the bird in my palm and petted it softly with mixed feelings . I held the bird up and let it go . The bird was circling above us as if to express gratitude . Jack and I looked at each other with a broad smile , feeling that we were qualified volunteer wildlife rescuers now .
范文赏析
" Why not do a search on the Internet " suggested Jack . We acted quickly and ___________________________(上网查找有关这只鸟的信息, 比如它的种类和习性) Following the given advice, ___________________________________
________________(我们在盒子底部放了一些棉花来保暖, 并把它放在壁炉附近). In order to recover its energy , we gave it some food and water . The bird looked a bit more comfortable , and soon it fell asleep . ______________________
__________________(在确保了鸟的状况良好后，我们松了一口气).The next day , we were glad to see the bird was well enough . ________________________
__________________________(它在救援箱里唱歌跳舞). Obviously , it had regained its energy ! __________________________________________________
____________________(意识到它已经完全准备好迎接自由了，我们把盒子拿到外面，把它放在我的手心里，怀着复杂的心情轻轻地抚摸着它). I held the bird up and let it go . _______________________________(这只鸟在我们头顶盘旋，好像在表达感激之情). Jack and I looked at each other with a broad smile , feeling that we were qualified volunteer wildlife rescuers now .
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Most of us never forget t he person that was there for us in our darkest times. Apparently penguins(企鹅)don’t either.
On a typical day, off the coast of a small Brazilian island Joao Pereira de Souza headed out fishing. He was disheartened to find that an oil leak had polluted the waters. Staring out at the oily waves, he decided it was not a good day to fish. But walking on the beach that day. he found a struggling penguin, covered in oil and starving.
Joao took the penguin home, and spent a whole week gently cleaning it and nursing it back to health. He named it Dindim,a Portuguese word meaning “ice pop.”Dindim is a Magellanic penguin a species known for living in the seas of South America. In order to breed(繁殖),they must return to Patagonia, 5,000 miles from Joao’s home.
After a week of rehabilitation(康复)Joao patiently took Dindim back to the sea and taught it how to swim again. When Dindim could swim quite well,Joao took it out into the sea by boat and dropped it off to encourage it to swim back to its home.But when he was back to shore, he found the penguin waiting for him. Joao made two more attempts later,but each time the bird would just return to Joao’s home. It seemed that Dindim had already formed a family bond with Joao and wouldn’t leave.
Joao had no choice but to keep the little creature. During the following months, Dindim would follow behind Joao to fish on the coast joyfully. Dindim also liked to lie on Joao’s lap, letting Joao give it showers, allowing Joao to feed it fish and to pick it up. Joao and his family enjoyed the company of Dindim. But deep inside Joao’s heart, he knew Dindim belonged to the wild .Gradually the hot summer days witnessed the change of its new feathers. Was it time to say “goodbye”
Suddenly one morning, Joao found Dindim disappeared.
A few months later, Joao heard some familiar cries in his backyard.
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Suddenly one morning, Joao found the Dindim disappeared. He searched all through the house and the coast, and even rowed a boat to the ocean. But the penguin was nowhere to be found. Joao was relieved as he knew it was likely that Dindim had returned to its breeding area at its best condition. However, deep inside he was sad to realize Dindim, who he regarded as a family member left for sure. Now when Joao went out fishing. he became alone. He was told Dindim would never return but he still held some hopes.
A few months later, Joao heard some familiar cries in his backyard. It was Dindim! The moment Joao turned around Dindim hurried towards him and threw itself into his arms. It traveled 5.000 miles from its breeding area to visit Joao! Happy tears sprang from Joao’s eyes. He just held Dindim up like a baby, ready to bring its favourite fish.The later days saw the house full of laughter again Since then, Joao has been receiving visits from his feathered friend every yearHuman activities may threaten wildlife, but in the special case of Dindim,it was evident that a close relationship can be built between animals and humans.
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Suddenly one morning, Joao found the Dindim disappeared. He _________
____(搜寻了整个房子和海岸), and even rowed a boat to the ocean. ________
____(但是这只企鹅却无处可寻). Joao was relieved as he knew it was likely that Dindim had returned to its breeding area at its best condition. However, _______________________(在内心深处，他感到很难过)Dindim, who he regarded as a family member left for sure. Now when Joao went out fishing. he became alone. He was told Dindim would never return but _______（心怀希望）
A few months later, Joao heard some familiar cries in his backyard. It was Dindim! The moment Joao turned around, ______________(丁迪姆急忙向他走来，扑进了他的怀里). It traveled 5.000 miles from its breeding area to visit Joao! ______(约雄的眼睛里涌出了快乐的泪水). He just held Dindim up like a baby, ready to bring its favourite fish. ____(后来的几天里又充满了笑声) Since then, Joao has been receiving visits from his feathered friend every year. Human activities may threaten wildlife, but in the special case of Dindim, ___________(很明显，动物和人类之间可以建立一种密切的关系。)

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