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I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. it was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes.I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired Or too thirsty
As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.
Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.
During the cookout, I told my host the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, myfriends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “ She must have come to say good-bye.”
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A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.
范文1：
A few weeks later, I went back to the farm. As my car neared it, my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I had rescued the tiny poor creature - the hummingbird from the spider's web. I couldn’t help hurrying back to the deserted house where it accidentally flew in and was trapped, helpless and desperate. It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. Leaving the house, I couldn't help but wonder how it was getting on now. Had it managed to find its way back home, or was it still out there somewhere, struggling to survive These questions weighed heavily on my mind as I unwillingly made my way to my car.
I was about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention. It must be HER! I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air, its tiny wings beating rapidly as it surveyed the scene. It seemed almost as if the bird was waiting for me, its beady eyes locked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. I couldn't help but feel a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away.
范文2：
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. My car pulled into the track leading to the milking house and braked in front of the window, which apparently had been fixed. When I was enjoying the refreshing scent of grass along the blueberry-lined path, my friend came along and we shared about the busy fleeting days.Then he mentioned that the hummingbird paid regular visits to the farm, which would hover around for a long time before flying away. “She would come today, I suppose.” added the host in a mocking and expectant voice. Anticipation instantly triggered, I waited for her appearance as I had dinner, chatted, and took a walk, but she didn’t come. My heart seemed to be hollowed out, and I thought to myself jokingly, “Am I waiting for a hummingbird ”
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. There she was beside my car! With great ecstasy, I moved closer. Upon seeing me approaching, she took wing, circled around me for a while, then dived down and landed on my hand. Just like before, this tiny creature looked straight into my eyes and chanted a cheering song as if to celebrate our “reunion”. Perhaps she had been waiting here for such a long time just to “reunite” with me! So was I! Immersed in the merry get-together, I couldn’t help tickling her cute little head and cupped her to my heart. With a tab on the phone, the host froze this cozy moment for me, which would always remind me of this miracle encounter and that we can live in harmony with different species as long as we show some sympathy and respect.
范文3：
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. I rushed back to the deserted house. It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. Leaving the house, I couldn’t help wondering how it was getting on now. Had it managed to find its way back home, or was it still out there somewhere struggling to survive
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention. I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air. It seemed that the bird was waiting for me, its beady eyes locked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away.
范文4：
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. When I happened to pass the milking house, I decided to check out the window there. To my relief, the broken window had already been fixed. Yet, the sight of the scene immediately reminded me of the hummingbird. Where was the hummingbird Was she in good shape Hoping she wouldn’t get herself into another sticky situation anymore! Thoughts like these just kept flooding in on me. To be honest, I was so eager to meet her again, even though I knew it was like a mission impossible to find such a tiny hummingbird in such a big world. With a mixture of relief and disillusionment, I paced my way towards my car for departure.
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. She swooped down to my eye level, hovering real close to me, gazing at me with her sparkling eyes. Then she emitted a squeaky sound as if she had realized that it was I who had rescued her from the sticky spider-webs. Hey! Little hummer, it’s you!”So exhilarated was I that I couldn’t help exclaiming. Watching her flapping wings rapidly and making the humming sound, I couldn’t help but reach out my hand, unexpectedly, this time, she stopped hovering but perched on my cupped hand, with no caution at all. My heart lurched, then a surge of warm current flooded into my heart. For the first time in my life, I started to believe there really existed a spiritual bond between we human beings and other animals in the world.
范文5：
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. After greeting my old friend and chatting with him for minutes, I began to go for a walk on the farm. I hanged alone along the blackberry-lined path, breathing the fresh air and remarkable scenery alongside. Suddenly, I saw the old milking house again. Despite the weathered walls, a new shining glass window caught my attention, reminding me of the hummingbird that had been saved. I reflected on the creature hovering in front of me and not willing to fly off. How I wished to see her again! But searching for a while, it turned out to be in vain. Disappointed, I thought of saying goodbye to my friend.
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. Flying up and down, she hovered and swirled. I couldn't help laughing and called her gently. With uncontrollable excitement, I watched her slowly landing on my palm. She looked again directly into my eyes and let out some squeaky calls. Though I couldn’t understand what she meant, I could tell from her voice that she was also happy to see me again. I fed her some food and gazed at her until she vanished from my sight, reluctant but satisfied. Sunlight dropped down through the car window as I drove back home. Bathed in the sun, I thought what a miraculousfriendship I had owned.
范文6：
A few weeks later, Iwent back to the farm. A few weeks had passed since I had stumbled upon the hummingbird, trapped and helpless in the abandoned house. As I returned to the farm, my thoughts were flooded with memories of that day - the way the bird had looked at me with such gratitude, its tiny body trembling in my hands as I carefully freed it from the spider's web. I couldn't shake the feeling that the hummingbird and I had formed some kind of bond, and I was driven by a sense of curiosity as I approached the house, wondering if the little bird was still around and if it had managed to find a new and secure home.
I was about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. Hearing a faint buzzing sound, I instantly turned to see the familiar hummingbird hovering gracefully in the air. It seemed as if the bird was trying to capture my attention, its beady eyes settling on mine. I felt a sense of awe and pride washing over me. Miraculously, I could feel its gratitude to me for saving its life. How could I believe that this little creature had remembered me and sought me out to bit farewell It was a truly heartwarming moment and one that would never vanish.
范文7：
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. Strolling up the blueberry-lined path toward the farm, I could not help but recall the hummingbird incident of my last visit. Did she make it safely back to her nest Would I be blessed enough to have another magical encounter with her Intentionally or not, I passed the milking-house, where I found the broken window perfectly repaired. It was a relief to know that no other poor creature would be trapped inside. During the cookout, I asked my hosts if the hummingbird had returned. They shrugged their shoulders, leaving me a little disappointed. With the setting of the sun, my explorations on the farm were drawing to a close.
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. The moment I opened the car door, I heard a familiar squeaking call. It was the hummingbird hovering before me! Amazed beyond words, I remained tongue-tied for a good while. Meantime the dear little bird kept hovering, moving nearer and nearer, until she was within a few inches of my face. Gracefully buzzing, she looked me straight in the eye again, as if trying to convey something. After circling around me, the beautiful hummingbird disappeared into the sunset. My friends and I were dumbfounded, unable to explain what had happened. But one thing was for sure - this little bird made a lasting impression on me that will warm my heart for years to come and remind me that even a small act of kindness can make a huge difference in the lives of living things.
范文8：
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. When passing the familiar deserted milking house where I last met my hummingbird friend, I instantly noticed the broken window had been replaced as promised. I could not help but fondly recall the lovely hummingbird that charmed everyone of us with its determination to bid farewell. What a cute and intelligent creature it was! As a matter of fact, I secretly made a wish to see her once again somehow and somewhere in this expedition though I knew deep down in my heart it was an extravagant idea.Things went as planned and as usual, cheerfully but not surprisingly.
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. Its energetic wings flipped with unusual frequency and its shining crystal eyes constantly searched for a familiar face, until she spotted me. We looked into each other's eyes and something supernatural and unspeakable like a kind of communication occurred between us. It came to grant me the luxury to see her again.This amazing little bird with shocking memory used its unique way to express her gratitude to a human friend. Nature was so adorable and mysterious that we all felt awed and humble when faced with it.

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