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A Bike race
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A man’s voice came suddenly from the loud speakers: “Participants in the Five-Mile Junior Fat-Tire Race, please gather behind the orange flags.”
Hannah was very excited. First prize was a blue mountain bike. On such a bike, she’d fly through the woods. “Good luck, junior mountain bikers,” the loud-speaker voice came again. “Three, two, one, and go!”
The lead-out was a girl with red braids (辫子). She pedaled off hard down the dirt road. The racers followed behind.
The girl with red braids made a turn onto a part of single track and gathered speed. Hannah pulled up behind her, who sped up again. Hannah followed close behind her.
Hannah watched for the orange arrows (箭头) marking the course and biked through the muddy fields. At the edge of the forest, the girl was kneeling (跪) by her bike. She must have gotten a flat tire. Hannah biked faster. She wiped the sweat from her eyes, breathless. Now Hannah was close enough to see the girl putting the chain on the chain ring.
Hannah felt a jolt of energy as she passed the girl into the woods. Maybe she could win.
In the middle of a small meadow, Hannah looked back. The girl was coming up behind her at a fast speed. Hannah entered the woods again. At a fork (岔口) in the trail, to her left, was the sign with the orange arrow.
When she turned, her foot slipped off the pedal, and she accidentally kicked the sign over.
I need to stop and fix the sign, she thought. The other racers might get lost. But even as she was thinking this, her feet kept moving faster, faster.
“Hannah Anderson, winner of the Five-Mile Junior Fat-Tire Race!” a voice announced as she passed the finish line.
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“Hey!” Hannah turned and saw the girl with the braids jumping off her bike.
Looking at the new mountain bike, Hannah made a decision.
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“Hey!” Hannah turned and saw the girl with the braids jumping off her bike. “Congratulations!” the girl panted, offering her a high-five. “But you could have won the race if it had not been for the the flat tire,” Hannah replied, with a mixture of sympathy and guilt in her voice. “A sign was kicked over and I stopped to put it back in place,” the red-braided girl added, which further put Hannah in an extremely embarrassing situation. At the very moment, the blue mountain bike was not a witness to her victory, but a reminder of her selfishness and dishonesty. With her cheeks burning with shame, her eyes fell on the girl’s bike. It was a worn and rusty bike, in sharp contrast to brand-new her blue mountain bike.
Looking at the new mountain bike, Hannah made a decision. She stepped forward and apologized, “Sorry! It was I who accidentally upset/tipped the sign. And it was because I badly wanted to win the race that I didn’t stop to replace/fix the sign.” The world suddenly fell silent but Hannah’s heart was pounding wildly and her mind racing. “Maybe I can do something right now and here,” she thought to herself. And the next moment the mountain bike was in the girl’s hand. “It’s for you!”, Hannah said sincerely and seriously. Though in disbelief at first, the girl gladly accepted the prized gift, something she had been dreaming of. The two girls even decided to together participate in the next year’s Five-Mile Junior Fat-Tire Race. Reflecting, Hannah was delighted that the race offered her a golden opportunity to grow to be a responsible person.
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“Hey!”Hannah turned and saw the girl with the braids jumping off her bike. “Good job,” the girl called to Hannah, panting.“I thought I almost had you, but I must have missed a trail marker.” “You would have won if it hadn’t been for your bike chain and getting lost,” Hannah mumbled. The girl was smiling, saying it was all part of racing. Hannah swallowed hard. The girl’s bike was rusty. No wonder her chain had jumped. Leading her new bike away after the award ceremony, Hannah felt like crying. She looked around for the girl with the braids and found her by the water stand.
Looking at the new mountain bike, Hannah made a decision. “I accidentally kicked the sign over,” Hannah said softly. The girl was quiet. “You know, at the fork in the trail. I tipped the sign,” Hannah said, a little louder. As she handed over the bike to the shocked girl, Hannah felt the lump in her throat disappear. “Are you sure... ” the girl asked. Hannah nodded. She was never so sure that she was doing the right thing in her life. The girl was beaming now, her finger moving along the shiny blue frame. Excited and Earnest, she invited Hannah to race in Copper Harbor taking place the next weekend. Hannah grinned, “Yes. Let’s see who wins then. Fair and square.”
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