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In the spring sun, my aunt and I headed for her flower shop. Normally I would be delighted to help in her shop, but not recently because of Rosa. Rosa was my sister, just one month old, who was settled in my old bedroom. For ten years, the small room was full of my toys and books. But now it was transformed into her baby room, decorated like a garden with pinks and yellows. My space, my old life, was gone.
“Here we are!” We arrived at the shop, a wave of colour and sweet smell washing over me. My aunt said I could pick some flowers for Mum and Dad. I used to love this, but today I was so overcome with tiredness and envy. Why bother to bring them flowers when they were enjoying Rosa at home without me
Silently I helped my aunt arrange flowers. “Your mum told me there hasn’t been much shut eye recently for any of you.” “Not much, since Rosa the alarm clock was installed(安装),” I complained with a huge yawn(哈欠).
“I remember having to creep(蹑手蹑脚地走) around like a worn-out mouse when your mum was a baby. I spent the first months hating her so much.” “But you and Mum seem so close,” I said, guiltily hiding away my envy of Rosa.
“Now we are. But it took me years to grow into the role of big sister. Few flowers blossom (绽放) overnight, you know.” She pulled me in for a side hug, glancing up at the clock, and suggested I take a walk outside.
Behind her shop was a field dotted with spring flowers. Stepping into the field, I began to pick little flowers. It was like gathering my childhood memories. I remembered how I’d sit with Dad, making flower chains, crowning(授予) each other with the silliest titles: Queen of Junk Food and King of Mess. My smile grew wider. The shining yellow flowers reminded me of the color in Rosa’s baby room. Was she awake I wondered.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para 1: Suddenly I saw two familiar figures walking towards me.
Para 2: Rosa was wide awake in her baby basket beside the picnic blanket.
试题分析:
本文是一篇记叙文，主题是人与自我，话题为家庭温情类。过去“我”有-一个幸福的童年，但是现在，家里添了--个小妹妹，的卧室被改成我”妹妹的婴儿房我”自认为受到冷落，失去了生活空间和父母的爱。-一个春日，我”在姨妈家的花田里采花时的阿姨提到了她自己作为姐姐的经我历，并解释了亲密关系的建立需要时间。该故事告诉我们: 家庭幸福离不开个人角色的承担。
续写文章体现了要承担责任和关爱家人的道德观与价值观，适合高中生写作
续写情节发展：
-爸爸妈妈来到我身边，还有Rosa.回想阿姨的话，我想我需要时间来接纳我的小妹妹，成为一名合格的姐姐。我小心翼翼地插花，为爸爸妈妈还有我那可爱的妹妹。
-妹妹醒了。她那可爱的神态将我的心融化了。我温柔地将她抱起，感受她地温暖和香气，当我看向她的眼睛，我感觉她比这世上的一切都珍贵。
官方范文，
Suddenly I saw two familiar figures walking towards me. “Look who's here!” my dad exclaimed with a smile, holding Rosa with a baby basket. The yellow flowers in my hand seemed to glow even brighter as I gazed at the beautiful little girl, I couldn't help recalling what my aunt told me. I knew that it would take time for me to adjust to sharing my parents’ attention and my old room, but I was determined to be the best big sister I could be. Then I carefully arranged the yellow flowers into a small bouquet and handed it to my mom with a smile. “These are for you and Dad, and also for Rosa," I said, feeling a warmth in my chest that had been missing earlier.
Rosa was wide awake in her baby basket beside the picnic blanket. Her big blue eyes were open, taking in the world around her. As I watched my little sister, I couldn't help but feel a sense of wonder and amazement at how perfect she was. I gently picked her up and held her close, feeling her warmth and breathing in the sweet scent of her hair. I knew that from now on, my life would never be the same. I would no longer be the center of attention, and I would have to share my parents with this beautiful little creature. But as I looked into Rosa's eyes, I knew that it was all worth it. She was my family, and I loved her more than anything in the world.
参考范文一，
Suddenly I saw two familiar figures walking towards me. It turned out to be Mom and Dad, with a big basket and other bulky bags hanging on their arms. “They didn’t even ask me to be here, ” I thought bitterly, feeling like an abandoned child. Out of anger and frustration, I hid behind a big tree, determined to see how cold they would be. Mom and dad soon stopped at a grassy field, put down their baggages, took out a blanket, and produced more fruits and snacks one by one. They talked and laughed, which made me more jealous. Suddenly, a loud cry came from the basket.
Rosa was wide awake in her baby basket beside the picnic blanket. Mom hurriedly stopped what she was doing, hugged her gently and hummed a song to comfort her, while dad made faces, trying to make her smile again. But Rosa kept crying so intensely that I began to worry about her. Before I knew it, I came from behind the tree and comforted, “Rosa, I’m here.” As if in magic, Rosa stopped crying and giggled at me, which made all of us sign with relief. It was at that moment that I felt the bond between she and me and the love began to take root in me. It might take me a long time to accept her and share my life with her but I knew I was on the way.
参考范文二，
Suddenly I saw two familiar figures walking towards me. It was mom and dad, one pushing the stroller and the other carrying a lot of picnic stuff. On seeing me, they waved at me happily and shouted warmly, “What a surprise!” Surprisingly, my anger and envy were immediately put out. I jogged forward and presented them proudly the flowers I had just picked up. “How beautiful they are! Thank you!” Mom sniffed and stroked my hair gently. Then we found a place to set the picnic blanket and I was eager to check Rosa.
Rosa was wide awake in her baby basket beside the picnic blanket. Mum handed me Rosa, and I couldn’t help but marvel at her tiny fingers and curious eyes. Then mom shared stories of my early days, highlighting the challenges they faced and the joys they experienced. Dad added, with laughters bursting from time to time. Immersed in the stories, I felt happiness and sometimes shame jigsawing in me. As the sun dipped below the horizon, I understood that Rosa was not a replacement but a new addition bring more love to our family and our family bond was bound to bloom, integrating the old and the new.
小婴儿的神态描写：
With her large, innocent fixed on me. 她大大无辜的眼睛看着我。
Her small hands clumsily reached out, creating an adorable struggle of determination. 她小小的手笨拙的往前伸，可爱努力的挣扎着
Her tiny toes wiggled with delight as the baby discovered the joy of feeling cool grass beneath their feet. 当她发现脚下凉嗖嗖的草的快感后，她的小脚丫开心的扭来扭去
The baby’s face lit up with joy, creating a heart-eating display of genuine happiness.
小婴儿的脸开心的亮了，真心的快乐让人心都化了

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