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The Solution to the Conflict
in Continuation Writing
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思
议
展
评
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Learning Objectives
In this class, we are supposed to:
Read and analyze the reading material.
Apply what you have learnt to the Continuation Writing
Share your writings in groups and evaluate it.
n
Why didn’t Sun Wukong carry his master to the west directly
Conflict
Maybe we can say: To make the story dramatic, thought-provoking(令人深思的） …..
Lead-in
To learn the conflict in continuation writing from:
1
2
3
4
5
setting
背景
plot
情节
suspense
悬念
solution
解决
Reflection
反思
Conflict
to find
to solve
to reflect
b
1
Find the conflict
Task1. Read for setting. Find out the five elements:
who
where
when
what
why
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
Paragraph 1：Suddenly a little rabbit ran in front of my horse.
Paragraph 2：We had no idea where we were and it got dark.
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Read for setting
who
where
when
what
why
Uncle Paul’s farm house
Beginning
Process
Climax

Story Mountain
Ending
Task2. Read for plot. Find out the beginning, process, and climax
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
Paragraph 1：Suddenly a little rabbit ran in front of my horse.
Paragraph 2：We had no idea where we were and it got dark.
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Uncle Paul picked us up at the airport and we experienced farm life.
process
begining
climax
My father took me on a trip for the summer holidays.
My father accompanied me on a horse ride and we met a little rabbit.
Beginning
Process
Climax

Story Mountain
Ending
(how things end up )
2. Read for plot
My father took me on a trip for the summer holidays.
Uncle Paul picked us up at the airport and we experienced farm life.
My father accompanied me on a horse ride and we met a little rabbit.
suspense
What did I do
2
Solve the conflict
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
1
2
We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark
(3) What happened next
（动作描写）
（心理描写）
（语言描写）
the chain of action
(1) How did the rabbit react when it suddenly jumped in front of my horse？
(2) How did my dad and I do
We got lost
Nervous/excited
freeze/run
My horse panicked and run away./
I chased the rabbit.
(2) How did we find the way out
(1) How did I feel and what did Dad react
（心理描写）
（动作描写）
the multi-perspective description
2
We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark
（环境描写）
(3) How could Paragraph 2 be ended
reasonably and creatively
(4) what did we learn from my experience
worried/calm
darkness/beautiful
call for help/try to find way out
According to these questions to create a story based on your imagination.(In Chinese)
Paragraph 1：[开端] 兔子突然冲出。[故事发展] ______________________ → ___________________________ → ___________________________ → ________________。
我们迷路了
胆战心惊的我死死地抓住缰绳
爸爸大声喊着，紧追不舍
马受惊了四处狂奔
The horse became scared and started to run crazily.
Frightened, I gripped the reins tightly.
Dad shouted, trying to catch up with me.
We got lost.
Paragraph 2：
[高潮]我们不知道在哪里，天黑了.
→_________________________________
→
________________________________________。
我大声呼救，但是没有回应，又累又饿
爸爸安慰，我们找寻出路
听到远处的呼喊声
Uncle Paul找到我们
Hearing the sound in the distance.
Tired and hungry, I kept shouting for help, but no reply.
Dad comforted and we tried to find the way out.
Uncle Paul found us.
Reflect on the conflict
3
the words or understanding of a character
a statement of the theme
Finally, we got to the farm, safe and sound. What a trip like never before!
1
1
1
2
1
3
Frankly speaking, what a thrilling but memorable experience it was!
Reflecting on this memory, I regarded this experience as my special adventure with my dad.
1
4
It turns out there’s always a way out of any difficulty as long as we stay calm.
In the end
Task 3. Try to complete the continuation writing.
Paragraph 1：Suddenly a little rabbit ran in front of my horse. The horse became scared and started to run crazily.
Frightened, I gripped the reins tightly.
Dad shouted, trying to catch up with me.
We got lost.
Paragraph 2：We had no idea where we were and it got dark.
Tired and hungry, I kept shouting for help, but no reply.
Dad comforted and we tried to find the way out.
Hearing the sound in the distance.
Uncle Paul found us.
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Instinctively, ①I yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse from hurting the little creature. ②However, it became scared and started to run crazily. Then my dad tried to keep up with us, shouting “Don’t let go the rope! Keep calm!” I followed what he told me to. To my relief, it slowed down and then stopped beside a river. I looked around and realized ③that we had been off the track and got lost.
We had no idea where we were and it got dark. ④Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back. I kept shouting for help, hoping my shouts could be heard by someone, but there was no reply. ⑤Luckily the stars came out and gave us a weak light as we were wandering through the woods. After several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance. My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound. ⑥As we got closer, we saw Uncle Paul with a flashlight waving us over. At that moment, ⑦all of us burst into a sweet smile. Finally, we got to the farm, safe and sound. What a trip like never before! It turns out there’s always a way out of any difficulty as long as we stay calm.
Setting
背景
plot
情节
Suspense
悬念
Solution
解决
Reflection
反思
Conflict
to find
to solve
to reflect
the chain of action
the multi-perspective
description
the words or understanding of a character
a statement of the theme
Summary
Homework
Students in Group 1 use what we have learnt to write an another article.
Students in Group 2 recite the possible answer.
Students in Group 3 read it by heart.
conflicts
practice can defeat
Thanks for your listening!

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