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英语书面表达指导-演讲稿
真题回顾
（2012年，安徽卷）假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流，主题是高中生对文，理科的选择。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，向他们介绍你所做的选择，并说明选择的理由。
注意： 1.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.词数120左右；
3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。
参考词汇：文科 arts; 理科:science
Good afternoon, everyone.
Welcometo our school! ______________________________________________
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Thanks！
【参考范文】
Good afternoon,everyone.
Welcome to our school! High school students are faced with a choice between arts and science.it was not an easy choice for me to make. After careful consideration,though,I decided on science as my main subject of study.
First ,science graduates are in greater demand than arts ones in China. Second,the science major can help me achieve my childhood dream of becoming a scientist. Third,my parents wish me to study science at college because they believe i will have a brighter future as a science student. Last but not least,my physics teacher is my role model,whose influence on me had a lot to do with my decision.
It is for these reasons that I finally made my choice.
Thanks!
【解析】
本文要求写一给美国朋友的回信，介绍你对高中文、理科的选择。要把你的选择和选择的理由说清楚。所以要用一般现在时或一般过去时，情态动词表达应该怎么做。字数要求100词左右。注意使用较高级的词汇和句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如,It was not an easy choice for me to make.和It is for these reasons that I finally made my choice.，还运用了 whose 引导的定语从句等复合句。并注意了句子句子之间的衔接如用First, second, Last but not least等。
必背句式
1.I appreciate... 我感谢……
　　I really appreciate your making time in your schedules to attend the meeting today.
　　我非常感谢你们今天抽空来参加这个会议。
2.thank you for... 感谢您……
　thank you for giving me this opportunity to speak about myself in this special occasion.
　　感谢您给我这个机会在这个特别的场合介绍我自己。
3. it is/was my honor... 我很荣幸……
　　it is my honor to introduce the president of our pany, mr. jones.
　　我很荣幸介绍我们公司总裁琼斯先生。
4. on behalf of... 代表……
　　on behalf of our entire company, i want to thank you for inviting us to such an enjoyable Christmas party.
　　我代表全公司，我想感谢您邀请我们参加这样一个令人愉快的圣诞晚会。
5.I’d be happy to... 我很高兴……
　　I’d be happy to tell you about my experiences.
　　我很高兴和你们分享我的经验。
　6. what I am going to talk about today is... 今天我想讲的是……
　　what I am going to talk about today is the energy conservation issue.
　　今天我想讲的是节能问题。
　7. how can we... 我们怎样才能……
　　how can we work more efficiently
　　我们怎样才能工作得更有效率呢
　8.you from the bottom of my heart for... 我从心底感谢……
　　thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you today.
　　我从心底感谢你们今天给了解这个机会在你们前面讲话。
　9. so long as... 只要……
　　so long as we work together, we can achieve great results.
　　只要我们一起努力，我们就能取得巨大的成就。
10. working together... 一起努力…
　　working together, we can make the future better.
　　一起努力，我们将把未来变得更加美好。
11. I should like to pay tribute to... 我想对……表示敬意
　　I should like to pay tribute to the dedication of all the professionals who worked on this project.
　　我想对参与这个项目的所有专家的奉献表示敬意。
12. I want to leave you with... 我想留给你们……
　　I want to leave you with one final word to remember, “teamwork”.
　　我想让你们记住最后一个词：“团队合作”。
13. we sincerely hope... 我们衷心希望……
　　we sincerely hope that you will have a wonderful time tonight.
　　我们衷心希望你们今晚过的开心。
14. I look forward to... 我期待……
　　I look forward to seeing you again.
　　我期待着再次见到你们。
15. best wishes for... 对……致以良好的祝愿
　　best wishes for a very successful exhibition!
　　祝贺展览会圆满成功!
必背模版
模板①
Dear teacher and classmates:
I am very glad to say something here. At this time, I’d like to talk about my hobbies.
I have many hobbies. First, I like playing video puter games are cool. I could play it all day. Second, I like all kinds of sports. I love fresh air and sunshine. Playing football with friends is fun.
Swimming in the sea is my favorite. I also like to draw pictures at home. Further more, I like music. I like singing. I often sing film songs when I walk in the street. Of course, I learn English everyday. As you know, English is used everywhere in the world. So I learn English very hard. I hope I can travel around the world and speak English with foreigners some day.
There is more I like to do. There is more I want to say. Maybe I can tell you more next time. Thank you for listening.
模板②
Good morning, everyone!
My name is.... I’m a student of Great 7 from ....middle school. I’m very glad to stand here and give you a short speech today. My topic is “I love English”.
English is now used everywhere in the world. It has become the most common language on Internet and for international trade. More and more people has begun to learn English now .
As for me, I love English soon when I began to learn it. I find the great beauty of English language from English songs, English stories and English book. Learning English makes me confident and give me a new colorful world.
I love English. I hope I can travel around the world one day. I want to go to America, I also want to go to London. If I can ride my bike in New York University, how happy I’ll be!
I love English. I hope I can make friends with many people from different countries. I will introduce China to them proudly in English, Such as Great Wall and the Summer Palace.
I know Rome was not built in a day. I believe that I can speak English very well one day if I can study hard. At that time, my dream will come true.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
升级策略
从大的方面看，英语演讲词实际上是属于一种特殊的说明文或议论文，其基本组成部分是：
　　1)开始时对听众的称呼语 最常用的是 ladies and gentlemen，也可根据不同情况，选用 fellow students, distinguished guests, mr chairman, honorable judges(评委)等等。
　　2)提出论题 由于演讲的时间限制，必须开门见山，提出论题。提出论题的方法有各种各样，但最生动，最能引起注意的是用举例法。比如：你要呼吁大家关心贫穷地区的孩子，你可以用亲眼看到的或者收集到的那些贫穷孩子多么需要帮助的实例开始。另外，用具体的统计数据也是一个有效的引出论题的方法，比如：你要谈遵守交通规则的话题，你可以从举一系列有关车辆、车祸等的数据开始。
　　3)论证 对提出的论题，不可主观地妄下结论，而要进行客观的论证。这是演讲中最需要下功夫的部分。关键是要把道理讲清楚。常见的论洛基英语是中国英语培训市场上的一朵奇葩，是全球已被验证的东方人英语学习的最佳模式。洛基英证方法有举例法、因果法、对比法等等，可参见英语议论文的有关章节。
　　4)结论 结论要简明扼要，以给听众留下深刻印象。
　　5)结尾 结尾要简洁，不要拉拉扯扯，说个没完。特别是不要受汉语影响，说些类似“准备不足，请谅解”，“请批评指正”这样的废话。最普通的结尾就是：thank you very much for your attention。
技能指导
1．假如你是高三学生王琳，请写一篇演讲稿，准备代表全体学生在毕业典礼上发言，内容要点如下：
1. 毕业的心情；2. 高中三年的收获；3. 感谢和决心。
注意: 1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好, 不计入总词数。
Good morning everyone,
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2．假定你是高二学生李华，一名读书爱好者。学校英语读书社邀请你作一个主题为“Be A Lifelong Reader”的演讲。请你写一份英文演讲稿，内容包括：
1. 阐述学生阅读的现状（至少两点，如：阅读量少……）；
2. 分享个人阅读的收获；
3. 激励学生终身阅读。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．近年来，网络的高速发展给人们的生活带来了巨大的改变。假设你是李华，有意参加你校将举办的INTERNET TALK活动。请以“Internet and Lifestyles”为题，写一篇演讲稿，内容如下：
1. 网络的重要性；
2. 举例说明网络对人类生活的积极影响；
3. 你对网络应用的态度。
注意：词数100字左右。
Ladies and gentlemen,
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4．假如你是李华，将参加学校组织的“职业规划”演讲比赛，请以“My Career Planning”为题写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1.理想职业；
2.选择理由；
3.做何准备。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
My Career Planning.
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5．假定你正在参加学校举办的一个英语演讲比赛，就如何应对全球变暖这一话题发表自己的见解，号召同学们过低碳生活，为节能减排做贡献。请就这一话题写一篇演讲稿，陈述你活自己的观点。演讲稿应包括以下内容：
1. 节能减排，低碳生活，人人可为；
2. 改变以往的家庭生活习惯（用电、用水等）；
3. 出行使用公共交通工具或骑自行车。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁。
参考词汇: 低碳生活low carbon life 碳排放carbon emission
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6．假如你是高中生李华，你校将举办一次以“音乐”为主题的演讲比赛，请你按照主题，写下你的演讲稿。内容应包括以下几点：
1. 放松我们身心
2. 帮助我们缓解压力
3. 有助于我们了解其他文化
注意：1. 写作词数应为100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
The Role of Music
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7．为传播中国优秀文化，你校将举办介绍中国传统节日的演讲比赛。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你最喜爱的中国传统节日。内容包括：
1.节日介绍；
2.喜欢该节日的理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Favourite Traditional Chinese Festival
Ladies and gentlemen,
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8．假如你是学校学生会主席李华，为了培养学生保护环境的意识，学生会计划围绕今年世界地球日（the World Earth Day）的主题“众生的地球” (Earth for All) 在校园内举办相关活动。请你拟一份演讲稿，向同学们简要介绍活动方案，内容包括：
1.活动的时间和内容；
2.活动的形式和意义。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning, my fellow students,
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9．劳动是我国的传统美德。假定你是李华，你校将举办劳动教育活动周，请以“Labor -A Traditional Virtue”为主题，写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1.一次劳动体验；
2.你对劳动的理解。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone.
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10．近年来，科技的高速发展给人们的生活带来了巨大的改变。假设你是李华，有意参加你校将举办的 TECH TALK活动。请以“Technology and Lifestyles”为题，写一篇演讲稿，内容如下：
1. 科技的重要性
2. 举例说明科技对人类生活的积极影响
3. 你对科技应用的态度
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11．你校将举办英语演讲比赛, 请你以“Be active in after-school activities”为题写一篇演讲稿参赛, 内容包括：
1.你喜欢的课外活动；
2.课外活动的益处。注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Be active in after-school activities
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12．假如你是李华，你校将举办主题为“Protecting wild animals”的英语演讲比赛，你将参加此比赛，请用英文写一份演讲稿。内容包括下列要点：
1. 野生动物减少的原因：(1)捕猎；(2)栖息地遭到破坏；(3)环境污染
2. 需要采取的措施
3. 合理的结尾
注意：1. 词数80-100左右(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Good morning, everyone!
My name is Li Hua.
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Thank you!
13．你校将以 8 月15日全国生态日(National Ecology Day) 为主题举办英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿参加比赛，内容包括：
1.生态的重要性;
2.提出倡议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好;
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
PROTECT OUR HOME
Good morning, everyone!
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Thanks for your attention.
14．在你的学校生活、家庭生活、社会活动及兴趣爱好等方面，一定有让你引以为豪的事情。请以“One Thing I’m Proud of”为题写一篇英文演讲稿。要点如下：
1. 一件引以为豪的事;
2. 自豪的原因。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80词左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One Thing I’m Proud of
Good morning, everyone!
What I am proud of is
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Thanks for your listening!
15．假定你是李华，你所在的班明天英语课前有一个简短的演讲。演讲的主题是对音乐的看法以及你喜欢的音乐类型及原因。请你写一篇演讲稿，词数80左右。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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参考答案
1．Good morning, everyone.
I’m Wang Lin. It’s my great honor to stand here to deliver my speech. It has been three years since I started my high school. At this moment, I can’t bear to part but I am also eager for my new life in university. During the three years, not only have I made some true friends who shared sorrows and joys with me, but also I have gained various knowledge.
Before leaving, I’d like to express my sincere gratitude to my teachers. It was they who patiently answered our endless questions. Besides, I owe many thanks to my dear classmates. Without their help and encouragement, I couldn’t have overcome so many difficulties. Now I’ve been determined to lead a more meaningful life in university and I will live up to the expectations of my teachers and my parents.
Thank you for your listening.
【写作指导】本文是应用文。假如你是高三学生王琳，请写一篇演讲稿，准备代表全体学生在毕业典礼上发言，内容要点如下：1. 毕业的心情；2. 高中三年的收获；3. 感谢和决心。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
各种各样的：various→varied
表达：express→convey
此外：Besides→In addition
下定决心去做某事：be determined to→make up one’s mind to do
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Without their help and encouragement, I couldn’t have overcome so many difficulties.
拓展句：It is their help and encouragement that have helped me overcome so many difficulties.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】During the three years, not only have I made some true friends who shared sorrows and joys with me, but also I have gained various knowledge.(not only...but also连接句子时，not only位于句首，该部分用部分倒装)
【高分句型2】It was they who patiently answered our endless questions.(运用了强调句型)
2．范文
Be A Lifelong Reader
Hello, everyone! I am Li Hua, an enthusiastic reader.
It is a great shame that students nowadays have so little time for leisure reading as most of them are burdened with huge academic pressure. This invariably leads to their narrow scope of reading as well as highly restricted reading time.
As a veteran book lover, I will, no matter how busy I am, squeeze at least 15 minutes to read. Through reading, I am transported back to different dynasties and countries, enjoying a totally different lifestyle and meeting people I would never meet in real life. In a sense, reading provides me a safe harbor where I can escape from worries in real life, rest my soul and immediately get recharged.
Therefore, I would like to inspire every one of you to join me in pursuing the habit of lifelong reading, which I believe will benefit you on all fronts.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求考生写一篇以“Be A Lifelong Reader”为题的演讲稿，阐述学生阅读的现状、分享个人阅读的收获、激励学生终身阅读。
【写作分析】1. 词汇积累
非常遗憾的是：It is a great shame that→It is a great pity that
导致：lead to→result in
有限的：restricted→limited
在某种意义上：in a sense→in a way/in some ways
鼓励：inspire→encourage
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句：
原句：This invariably leads to their narrow scope of reading as well as highly restricted reading time.
拓展句：Not only does this invariably lead to their narrow scope of reading but also highly restricted reading time.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】It is a great shame that students nowadays have so little time for leisure reading as most of them are burdened with huge academic pressure.(使用了that引导主语从句和as引导原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】Through reading, I am transported back to different dynasties and countries, enjoying a totally different lifestyle and meeting people I would never meet in real life. (使用了现在分词短语作状语和省略关系词的定语从句)
3．Ladies and gentlemen,
Today, I would like to talk about the importance of the internet and its impact on our lives. The internet has become an integral part of our daily routines, connecting people from all over the world and providing us with endless opportunities.
Firstly, with just a few clicks, we can instantly connect with friends and family, no matter where they are. Secondly, the internet has transformed the way we access information. Lastly, the internet has opened up new avenues for entertainment and creativity.
In conclusion, the internet has had a profound impact on our lives. However, it is important to use the internet responsibly and be aware of its potential drawbacks. Let us embrace the internet as a tool for growth and connection, while also being mindful of its impact on our well-being.
Thank you.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校举办的INTERNET TALK活动，写一篇以“Internet and Lifestyles”为题的演讲稿。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
影响：impact→influence
必不可少的：integral → essential
首先：firstly→first of all
缺点：drawback→ disadvantage
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The internet has become an integral part of our daily routines, connecting people from all over the world and providing us with endless opportunities.
拓展句：The internet has become an integral part of our daily routines, which is connecting people from all over the world and providing us with endless opportunities.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】Firstly, with just a few clicks, we can instantly connect with friends and family, no matter where they are.（运用了with的介词短语作状语以及状语从句）
【高分句型2】Let us embrace the internet as a tool for growth and connection, while also being mindful of its impact on our well-being.（运用了状语从句的省略结构）
4．My Career planning
I have been dreaming about being a teacher to help students with their learning as my teachers do.
Teachers are those who encourage students to overcome difficulties. I still remember that when I was in trouble, it was my teachers who inspired me to keep trying and helped me solve the problems. I still feel grateful for their kind help and constant encouragement.
In order to master some necessary teaching skills, I work hard every day. Besides, I always have talks with my teachers to learn how to communicate with students. In a word, I will try my best to get fully prepared to be a good teacher.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校组织的“职业规划”演讲比赛，写一篇名为“My Career Planning”的演讲稿。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
克服：overcome → conquer
解决：solve → resolve
感激的：grateful → appreciative
此外：besides → what’s more
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I have been dreaming about being a teacher to help students with their learning as my teachers do.
拓展句：I have been dreaming about being a teacher who can help students with their learning as my teachers do.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】 Teachers are those who encourage students to overcome difficulties. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 I still remember that when I was in trouble, it was my teachers who inspired me to keep trying and helped me solve the problems. (运用了that引导的宾语从句，when引导的时间状语从句，以及强调句结构)
5．Good morning, everyone,
My topic today is how to live a low carbon life. As we all know, the earth is becoming warmer and warmer due to the global climate change. Many people may think that low carbon life is far away from us. However, every one of us can reduce our daily carbon emission by doing something.
Firstly, changing our previous living habit of wasting is the first step. We can use energy saving electric lights instead of the traditional lights, and turn them off when we don’t use them. Never leave the water running when we don't use it. When we need to contact someone, it’s better to send an e mail than use paper to write letters.
Use the public transport or ride your bicycle instead of driving private cars when we travel somewhere. Even if we have to drive, we’d better plan it well in advance to avoid wasting fuel.
It is believed that the global climate change is due to the human activities. Only if we know what we can do in our daily life and live a low carbon life can we make a difference.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在学校举办的一个英语演讲比赛中，就如何应对全球变暖这一话题发表自己的见解，写一篇演讲稿，号召同学们过低碳生活，为节能减排做贡献。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
关闭：turn off→switch off
提前：in advance→ahead of time
而不是：instead of→rather than
因为：due to→because of
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Many people may think that low carbon life is far away from us. However, every one of us can reduce our daily carbon emission by doing something.
拓展句：Although many people may think that low carbon life is far away from us, every one of us can reduce our daily carbon emission by doing something.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] When we need to contact someone, it’s better to send an e mail than use paper to write letters.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Only if we know what we can do in our daily life and live a low carbon life can we make a difference. (运用了部分倒装)
6．The Role of Music
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning! I am honored to have an opportunity to give a speech about “The Role of Music” here.
As we all know, music plays an important role in our life. First, it can make us feel relaxed both mentally and physically, thus helping reduce our pressure at work and in life. Second, music can excite and encourage us as well when we meet various troubles and feel sad. Moreover, music can have a comforting impact and help us step out of difficulty when we're worried. In addition, music, as a universal language, can be of great help in learning other cultures.
As far as I'm concerned, music is part of our life. We can't live a happy life without the company of music. Thank you very much for your attention.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校所举办的以“音乐”为主题的演讲比赛，写一篇演讲稿。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
发表演讲：give a speech→deliver a speech
首先：first→first of all
此外：second→ what’s more
影响：impact→influence
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am honored to have an opportunity to give a speech about “The Role of Music” here.
拓展句：I am honored to have an opportunity to give a speech about "The Role of Music" here, which is a greatly interesting topic.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】First, it can make us feel relaxed both mentally and physically, thus helping reduce our pressure at work and in life. （运用了现在分词作结果状语的结构）
【高分句型2】 Moreover, music can have a comforting impact and help us step out of difficulty when we're worried. （运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
7．One possible version;
My Favourite Traditional Chinese Festival
Ladies and gentlemen.
It is my honor to give a speech on my favorite traditional Chinese Festival, the Spring Festival.
It starts from the late days of the 12 th lunar month and lasts till the mid-lst lunar month of the next year. Chinese people attach great importance to Spring festival Eve, when all family members eat dinner together and enjoy the Spring Festival gala. As for me, I love the Spring Festival most because during the festival, not only can I set off fireworks, but I can also get lucky money. Besides, it symbolizes unity, prosperity and raw hopes for the future,
Hope the excitement of the celebration will reach more people across the world. Thank you for your listening.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇介绍中国传统节日的演讲稿。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
发表讲话：give a speech→ make a speech
高度重视：attach great importance to→ think highly of
吃晚饭：eat dinner→ have dinner
对我来说：as for me→ to me
2.句式拓展
/同义句转换
原句：It is my honor to give a speech on my favorite traditional Chinese Festival, the Spring Festival.
拓展句：It is my honor to give a speech, which is about my favorite traditional Chinese Festival, the Spring Festival.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】Chinese people attach great importance to Spring festival Eve, when all family members eat dinner together and enjoy the Spring Festival gala. （运用了时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】Hope the excitement of the celebration will reach more people across the world. （运用了祈使句和宾语从句）
8．范文
Good morning, my fellow students,
Today, I am here to introduce to you the plan for our upcoming activities on the occasion of this year’s World Earth Day, with the theme of “Earth for All”.
The activities will take place on the World Earth Day, which falls on April 22nd. We have planned various activities to raise awareness about environmental protection and the importance of preserving our planet. We will organize a campus cleanup and hold an environmental awareness campaign. We will work together to pick up litter, separate recyclable materials, and clean our school environment.
By participating in these activities, we will learn the importance of environmental conservation and develop a sense of responsibility towards our planet’s well-being.
Thank you for your attention.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是学校学生会主席李华，为了培养学生保护环境的意识，学生会计划围绕今年世界地球日（the World Earth Day）的主题“众生的地球”(Earth for All) 在校园内举办相关活动。请你拟一份演讲稿，向同学们简要介绍活动方案。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
举行：hold→host
培养：develop→foster
重要性：importance→significance
参加：participate in→take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Today, I am here to introduce to you the plan for our upcoming activities on the occasion of this year’s World Earth Day, with the theme of “Earth for All”.
拓展句：Today, I am here to introduce to you the plan for our upcoming activities on the occasion of this year’s World Earth Day, whose theme is “Earth for All”.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] The activities will take place on the World Earth Day, which falls on April 22nd. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] By participating in these activities, we learn the importance of environmental conservation and develop a sense of responsibility towards our planet's well-being. (运用了动名词作宾语)
9．范文
Labor -A Traditional Virtue
Good morning, everyone.
Today, I would like to talk about the theme “Labor-A Traditional Virtue” in the context of the upcoming Labor Education Week at our school.
Recently, I had the opportunity to participate in a labor experience program organized by our school. We spent a whole day working at a local farm, planting vegetables, and doing various physical tasks. Although it was tiring, I felt a great sense of accomplishment at the end of the day.
Through this experience, I gained a deeper understanding of the value of labor. Labor not only helps us develop a strong work ethic but also teaches us essential life skills such as teamwork, responsibility, and perseverance.
Thank you for your attention.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。劳动是我国的传统美德。假定你是李华，你校将举办劳动教育活动周，请以“Labor -A Traditional Virtue”为主题，写一篇演讲稿。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
主题：theme→topic
参加：participate in→take part in
机会：opportunity→chance
重要：essential→vital
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Recently, I had the opportunity to participate in a labor experience program organized by our school.
拓展句：Recently, I had the opportunity to participate in a labor experience program, which was organized by our school.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] Although it was tiring, I felt a great sense of accomplishment at the end of the day. (运用了although引导让步状语从句)
[高分句型2] Recently, I had the opportunity to participate in a labor experience program organized by our school. (运用了过去分词作定语)
10．Ladies and Gentlemen,
I’m Li Hua. I am delighted to speak on the topic of “Technology and Lifestyles” at the TECH TALK event.
The development of technology has brought a massive transformation to our lives.
Technology has impacted our lives in so many areas, including healthcare, communication, and transportation. For example, medical technology has advanced treatments, allowing us to save more munication technology enables us to connect across the globe, further expanding our horizons. Additionally, transportation technology has made travel more efficient and cost -effective.
However, in spite of its many advances, technology has some limitations and negative impacts. Over-dependence on technology can create social and personal problems, such as addiction and mental issues.
To conclude, technology plays a critical role in society, and we must use it wisely and responsibly. We must utilize the benefits of technology while also being mindful of its potential negative consequences. By working together, we can create a healthier and more sustainable future.
【写作指导】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生以“Technology and Lifestyles”为题，写一篇演讲稿。
【写作分析】1. 词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→pleased
巨大的：massive→huge
影响：impact→affect
另外：additionally→furthermore
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：For example, medical technology has advanced treatments, allowing us to save more lives.
拓展句：For example, medical technology has advanced treatments, which allows us to save more lives.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1]Communication technology enables us to connect across the globe, further expanding our horizons.(不定式作宾语补足语)
[高分句型2]For example, medical technology has advanced treatments, allowing us to save more lives.(现在分词作状语)
11．参考范文：
Be active in after-school activities
Hello, everyone! It is my great honor to be here. While academics are important, it is unnecessary to spend all of our time on it. Personally, I prefer playing football and reading novels during my after-school time, which not only benefits me physically but also mentally.
More importantly, participation in after-school activities is linked to higher academic performance. We will be able to work more efficiently and effectively in our studies. In addition, students who devote some of their time and energy to after-school activities will allow them to further develop their talents by diving deep into a topic of interest and be of benefit to their future life.
So after-school activities are a necessary part of our overall life experience.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校将举办英语演讲比赛， 请你以“Be active in after-school activities”为题写一篇演讲稿参赛。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
重要的：important→significant
参加：participate in→take part in
与……有关：be linked to→be related to
此外：in addition→furthermore
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：More importantly, participation in after-school activities is linked to higher academic performance. We will be able to work more efficiently and effectively in our studies.
拓展句：More importantly, participation in after-school activities is linked to higher academic performance, which will make us able to work more efficiently and effectively in our studies.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】 I prefer playing football and reading novels during my after-school time, which not only benefits me physically but also mentally.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】In addition, students who devote some of their time and energy to after-school activities will allow them to further develop their talents by diving deep into a topic of interest and be of benefit to their future life.（运用了who引导的定语从句）
12．Good morning, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. Today, I’d like to address an urgent issue - the protection of wild animals. They are declining due to excessive hunting, habitat destruction, and environmental pollution.
To counteract these threats, we must enforce strict laws against illegal hunting and trading. We should also establish more nature reserves and strive to control pollution.
In conclusion, we must remember that wild animals are valuable treasures of the earth. Each of us has a role to play in preserving wild animals. They are an integral part of our ecosystem and it’s our duty to ensure their survival.
Thank you!
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的演讲稿。要求考生用英文写一份演讲稿，参加学校举办的主题为“Protecting wild animals”的英语演讲比赛。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
由于：due to → thanks to/owing to/because of
宝贵的：valuable→ priceless
争取做某事：strive to → try to
最后：in conclusion→ finally/last but not least/to conlude
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To counteract these threats, we must enforce strict laws against illegal hunting and trading.
拓展句：If we want to counteract these threats, we must enforce strict laws against illegal hunting and trading.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】In conclusion, we must remember that wild animals are valuable treasures of the earth.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】They are an integral part of our ecosystem and it’s our duty to ensure their survival.（运用了and连接的并列句）
13．It’s my great honor to stand here. What is the most important in our life As a matter of fact, there is nothing more important than our health, but without the great environment, how can we be healthy Therefore, it’s high time that everyone of us should participate in the environmental protection.
First, never should we drop litter around. Second, we can call on more people to protect the environment. Last, we can contact environmental protection departments in time if we find factories are polluting our environment.
In a word, it’s the effort of everybody that makes our world better.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以 8 月15日全国生态日(National Ecology Day) 为主题举办英语演讲比赛，写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
事实上：As a matter of fact→ In fact
好极的：great → terrific
参与：participate→ take part in
总之：In a word→ In short
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Second, we can call on more people to protect the environment.
拓展句：Second, we can call on more people to protect the environment, which can make a difference.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】Therefore, it’s high time that everyone of us should participate in the environmental protection.（运用了虚拟语气。）
【高分句型2】Last, we can contact environmental protection departments in time if we find factories are polluting our environment.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句。）
14． One Thing I’m Proud of
Good morning, everyone!
What I am proud of is how I became an excellent speaker. Shy as I was, I was always dreaming of becoming a good public speaker. Amazed at my classmates’ fluent and skillful speaking, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often consulted them with modesty to learn their techniques. Continuous practice made me confident enough to challenge speaking. As a result, I became one of the best speakers in my class, which made me realize that our goals can be achieved through hard work. This experience also helps me better understand “Practice makes perfect.”
Thanks for your listening!
【写作指导】这是一篇应用文。要求考生以“One Thing I’m Proud of”为题写一篇英文演讲稿。
【写作分析】1. 词汇积累
优秀的：excellent → brilliant
羞怯的，胆小的：shy → timid
感到惊讶的：amazed → surprised/shocked
持续的：continuous → constant
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Later on, I often consulted them with modesty to learn their techniques.
拓展句：Later on, I often consulted them with modesty to learn their techniques, which brought me great benefits.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】
Shy as I was, I was always dreaming of becoming a good public speaker. （运用了as引导的让步状语从句）
【高分句型2】
As a result, I became one of the best speakers in my class, which made me realize that our goals can be achieved through hard work.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
15．Good morning, everyone!
I’m Li Hua from Senior 1. It’s an honor to be here to share my opinion about music with you.
Music makes great difference to our life. Music can not only make us relaxed and refreshed whenever we are tired, but it can stimulate us when we are confronted with difficulties. Besides, music enables us to gain insight into other cultures.
As for me, I prefer pop music and classical music. I am always in good mood as long as I play pop music. When I have a hard time dealing with stress, I choose peaceful and beautiful classical music, which clams me down and improves my mood. In conclusion, music plays an important role in my life.
So much for my speech. Thanks for your listening.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文，要求考生写一篇演讲稿，主题是对音乐的看法以及你喜欢的音乐类型及原因。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
面对：confront→encounter
此外：besides→in addition
选择：choose→select
处理：deal with→cope with
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Music can not only make us relaxed and refreshed whenever we are tired, but it can stimulate us when we are confronted with difficulties.
拓展句：Not only can music make us relaxed and refreshed whenever we are tired, but it can stimulate us when we are confronted with difficulties.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1]
I am always in good mood as long as I play pop music.(运用了as long as引导条件状语从句)
[高分句型2]
When I have a hard time dealing with stress, I choose peaceful and beautiful classical music, which clams me down and improves my mood.(运用了when引导时间状语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句)

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