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读后续写技巧：不同的场景需要采用不同的表现手法
一篇卓越的记叙文，无论在塑造角色、推动故事情节展开，还是传达主题上，都离不开栩栩如生的场景描绘。场景是由人物、事件与环境相互交融而构成的一幅立体画卷。因此，对场景的刻画既要全面展现，又不能平均使用笔墨，而是要集中笔力，突出重点。既要描绘出场景的整体轮廓，又要刻画出细腻的细节；既要展现出场景的全貌，又要凸显出其特色之处，做到点面结合，主次分明。
不同的场景需要采用不同的表现手法，侧重点也会有所差异。在描绘自然环境、社会环境以及人物活动场景时，甚至是远景、近景（视觉）、声音（听觉）、气味（嗅觉）、味道（味觉）和触觉这些感官角度和表现手法中，如何选择最合适的一种或几种来诠释场景，是我们需要深入探讨和学习的。
拟人法（无灵主语）
风吹开窗户了。The wind blew open the window.
花在点头。The flowers nodded.
雪花在跳舞。 Snowflakes danced.
雷声在咕哝着。Thunder grumbled.
雾悄悄地挤了进来。 Fog crept in.
风呼啸着。 The wind howled.
2.明喻
这个城市是一个巨大的蜂巢，充满了忙碌的人们。The city is a huge beehive, full of busy people.
他的笑声如同春天的阳光一样温暖。His laughter is as warm as the spring sunshine.
夜空像最深处的海洋一样黑暗。The night sky was as dark as the deepest ocean.
星星像钻石一样闪闪发光。The stars sparkled like diamonds.
暗喻
你的心情淹没在绝望的海洋中。 A sea of despair engulfed your emotions.
恐惧之浪席卷了他。 A wave of terror washed over him.
这个城市充满了生机和活力。 The city was alive with energy and activity.
他的心中充满了希望。 His heart was filled with hope.
她的眼睛里闪烁着泪花。 Tears sparkled in her eyes.
多个形容词
熠熠生辉的星空。Shining, twinkling, starry sky.
碧绿如玉的山谷。Emerald, jade-like, Valley.
瑰丽绝伦的珊瑚礁。Magnificent, gorgeous, coral reef.
色彩斑斓的彩虹。Colorful, rainbow-like.
香气扑鼻的花海。Fragrant, overflowing, flower sea.
晶莹剔透的雪花。Gleaming, glistening, whispery flakes of snow
否定描述
没有垫子，没有地毯，没有温暖，没有光线，也没有舒适感。There was no cushion, no carpet, no warmth, no light and no comfort.
房间里没有窗户，没有门，没有灯光，只有一盏摇摇欲坠的烛光。The room had no windows, no doors, no lights, only a trembling candle.
荒原上没有树木，没有水源，没有生命的迹象，只有无尽的干旱和寒冷。The wasteland had no trees, no water, no signs of life, only endless drought and cold.
街角处没有灯光，没有行人，没有声音，只有寂静和黑暗。The corner had no lights, no pedestrians, no noise, only silence and darkness.
花园里没有花朵，没有蝴蝶，没有蜜蜂，只有枯萎的植物和寒风。The garden had no flowers, no butterflies, no bees, only wilted plants and cold winds.
6.名词
The rooms were crowded with lanterns fastened on oak paneled walls, tables laid with silver candlesticks and goblets.
房间里挤满了灯笼，挂在橡木镶板墙上，桌子上摆着银烛台和高脚杯。
7. 五感官法
Wafts of salt-laden air were in her nostrils as the skittery sand on her feet led her to the edge of the waves.
当她脚上凌乱的沙子把她带到海浪边缘时，她鼻孔里飘着含盐的空气。
心理活动描写套路：动作描写、思考、问句
句式：主语＋动作＋状语，-ing。
1.John clenched his fists in frustration, pondering what he could have done differently to win the game. Why did I miss that shot He wondered with dismay.约翰沮丧地握紧拳头，思考着他可以做些不同的事情来赢得比赛。为什么我错过了那个球？他沮丧地想。
2.Mary bit her lip nervously as she stared at the test paper, trying to recall the answer to the difficult question. Could it be B instead of C She asked herself anxiously.玛丽一边紧张地咬着嘴唇，一边盯着试卷，试图回忆起这个难题的答案。它可以是B而不是C吗？她焦急地问自己自己。
3.Peter tapped his fingers on the table, deep in thought as he tried to solve the complex math problem. Is there a simpler method I’m missing He wondered doubtfully.彼得用手指敲着桌子，心里试图解决这个复杂的数学问题。我缺少一个更简单的方法吗？他怀疑地想。
4.Sarah blinked back tears as she looked at the empty chair across from her, wondering if she would ever see her best friend again. What if this is the last time I’ll ever see her She thought fearfully.萨拉望着对面的空椅子，眨着眼泪，想着她是否能再见到她最好的朋友。如果这是我最后一次见到她呢？她害怕地想。
5.Tom sighed heavily as he stared at the pile of laundry waiting for him, trying to find the motivation to start folding. How will I ever get through this mountain of clothes He asked himself wearily.汤姆沉重地叹了口气，盯着一堆等着他的衣服，试图找到开始折叠的动力。我怎样才能穿过这成堆的衣服呢？他疲倦地问自己。
6. Jane stared into the darkness in terror, digging in her mind for a way to get through the night. What if I hadn’t quarreled with Jack She thought with regret.简惊恐地盯着黑暗，心里想过过黑夜的路。如果我没有和杰克吵架怎么办？她后悔地想。
场景二：说话动作：说话+对方的反应
附加状语：in a rush of word快速说；in a soft voice; in an encouraging tone; with enthusiasm; with a smile；stressing each word / paused on each word一字一顿地说道
附加从句：as if...似乎
说：“...” sb exclaimed大喊道/said / replied / stammered结结巴巴说
例子：
As if he could read my thoughts, he said in a rush of words.
'Sit down,' she replied, stressing each word.“坐下，”她一字一顿地说道。
但说话往往可以伴随场景一的动作的，组合拳也不错，但不要都是这么长的句子，譬如：
“Don’t panic!” he handed each one a wet towel, helping them clean the mess quickly.
特别提醒：大部分说话前都有took a long/deep breath
场景三：情感表达：Adj.短语作状语；感情名词+in one’s eyes；eyes shining with...
由于此类表达非常多，而且很容易搞成套路句，反而不好，不如重点用句型展示语法的娴熟。
Nervous yet determined, I raised my head, deciding to... （形容词短语状语，现在分词）
Excited, he pulled the boy close, gratitude/joy in eyes. （形容词短语状语，独立主格）
场景四：时间过渡
副词：
1.immediately 立刻，马上
2.instantly立即，即刻 = soon
3.shortly马上，立刻〔尤指知道某事即将要发生〕
句型：
1.upon + n. / doing刚做某事
2.cannot wait to迫不及待去做
3.before未等某人做某事，常见：before sb knew what was happening; before sb could say / ask / reply / think
4.as soon as/the moment +从句，主句；no sooner...than；hardly/barely also hardly had sb. done...when...“一……就……”
5.That’s when sth. happened. 就在那时，发生了某事。
6. Everything settling down / Everything ready, 主句. 一切完成/就绪后，……
4.It句型: It was/took +时间（a long moment/a day...)before sb did sth.过了一段时间后，某人开始做某事
其它: 介词+that
At that, Jenna and Jeff almost jumped to their feet, joy in eyes.
With seconds ticking by, my worry gave way to fear, my head spinning.
With that（说完或做完后），he rushed out.
场景五：意外和突围：

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