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建议
A 问题+建议
Possible Version 1
As the picture shows, nevertheless, neither of them is not suitable for birthday. The dragon dance and the Chinese character “Chun” are used for celebrating the Spring Festival, which indicates a prosperous and happy new year.
As far as I know, it’s a better idea to send one with Chinese characters which means "Happy Birthday" or send one which looks like a birthday cake. As for how to cut it well, here are some simple steps you should follow. First and foremost, search online and download one pattern that is appropriate. After that, put it on a piece of red paper and use an engraving knife to cut the blank part and preserve the outline, Most importantly, extraordinary patience and carefulness are required.
There’s no doubt that it will leave a remarkable impression on Daisy and hope it can help you. (129 words)
Possible Version 2
However, it’s not appropriate to send these two copies of paper cut to your friend as a birthday gift. The dragon dance and the Chinese character “Chun” are for celebrating the Spring Festival, which indicates a prosperous and happy new year.
From my perspective, I strongly recommend you to choose a paper cut with the Chinese zodiac sign of your friend since she is quite keen on traditional Chinese culture. As for how to cut it well, here are some simple tips for you. First and foremost, search online and select one pattern that is appropriate. A variety of videos that include detailed carving methods are also available online. If further help is required, just call me anytime.
I do hope my advice will be helpful for you. (128 words)
B. 问题+建议
Possible Outline
Para1. Everything is fine with me. I’m so glad to hear that you are coming to my hometown. According to your question, I advise you to take the CRH/plane./ I suggest you (should) take the …
Para2. Firstly/First of all/First and foremost/To begin with, Besides/What’s more/Furthermore/Moreover, Last but not the least; One reason is that … (至少2个reasons)
Para 3. I believe that taking the CRH will leave a remarkable impression on you. /I do hope my suggestions can help you and I’m looking forward to your coming/arrival.
Possible Version
Everything is fine with me. It’s great to hear that you are coming to my hometown. As for your questions, here is my advice.
As far as I’m concerned, CRH is a better choice. To begin with, there’s no doubt that the price of its tickets is much lower than that of planes. Meanwhile, the arrivals and departures of CRH are always assured确定的 while a plane is delayed frequently due to bad weather. Last but not the least, it goes without saying that traveling by CRH is much more interesting than by plane. At least, the Internet is available on CRH, which makes it possible for you to entertain yourself as well as brings convenience to your work with network.
I do hope that will help. I’m looking forward to your coming. (135 words)
Possible Outline
Para1 续写According to your question, here is my advice.
Para2 To begin with, make friends with new classmates by ...
Moreover, joining clubs is also a useful way to ...
Last but not the least, I strongly recommend you to learn Chinese culture so that you may better fit into the local school life.
Para3 I do hope that my suggestions will help you out.
Possible Version 1
Dear Ellen,
I'm glad that you are coming to study in China soon. According to your questions, here is my advice.
As far as I'm concerned, starting a new friendship is of great significance to a newcomer. Therefore, you'd better be optimistic and enthusiastic and make sure to form a close relationship with your new classmates, which will bring happiness and convenience to your new school life. Moreover, it's obvious that having a good knowledge of Chinese culture and customs ahead of your arrival will benefit you a great deal. Last but not the least, I strongly suggest you enlarge your Chinese vocabulary by having online lessons in order to better integrate yourself into the school life in China.
I do hope that my suggestions will help you out. Looking forward to your arrival. (122 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible Version 2
Dear Ellen,
I’m glad that you are coming to study in China soon. There’s nothing to worry about if you follow my suggestions.
As the saying goes, “When in Rome, do as the Romans do.” Therefore, when you’re unfamiliar with the environment and not sure about how to chat with others, do as Chinese do. It’s also commonly recognized that being warm-hearted, patient and friendly will be beneficial for you to be included in a new circle of friends.
There’s also a saying, “There’s no success without efforts.” For your schoolwork. There’s no doubt that the more effort you make, the more you will gain. Besides, its an effective way to learn Chinese well by communicating with classmates as you're in class if you are confronted with spoken Chinese trouble.
If further help is required, just call me anytime. I hope your new school life will leave you a remarkable impression. (138 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
C. 看法+建议
Possible Outline
Para 1 Describing the picture
Para 2 Analyzing the phenomenon and reasons
Para 3 Advice
Possible Version 1
The picture presents us a thought-provoking scene, in which Tony’s mother keeps a close watch on Tony while he is doing homework. Unhappy and distracted as Tony is, he has to go on studying.
What an ironical drawing it is! It reveals an increasing number of parents tend to put too much pressure on children’s learning by supervising them doing homework. As a result,/Due to that, children are easy to distract themselves from studying. Another even worse impact is that children will probably get into the habit of depending too much on parents in the long run.
In view of the above, I suggest parents give more personal space to children, which is a good way to educate them to learn more effectively and be more independent. (127 words)
Possible Version 2
The picture presents us a thought-provoking scene, in which Tony’s mother keeps a close watch on Tony while he is doing his homework. Unhappy as Tony is, he has to go on his learning.
What an ironical drawing it is! It reveals an increasing number of parents tend to put too much pressure on children’s learning by supervising them doing homework. The reason why such a phenomenon occurs can be interpreted as follows. On the one hand, from the parents’ perspective, children are likely to study better under their supervision. On the other hand, children are easy to distract themselves from doing homework, which may make them fall behind when competing with their counterparts. As a matter of fact, what parents do will lead to awful results. For example, children can’t focus on studying while someone is standing behind. Another even worse impact is that children will probably depend too much on parents.
In view of what has been mentioned above, I suggest parents should give more personal space to children, which is a good way to educate them to be more independent and make their learning more effective. (192 words，这篇篇幅过长，但里面的衔接过渡是很好的学习材料)
D. 看法+建议
Possible Outline
Para1
According to Li Hua’s weekend plan, mobile game takes up the biggest part on the to-do list, which doesn’t make any sense, and even results in mental exhaustion精神疲劳 and worsening of myopia.近视加重
Para 2
Much like coming up with a weekday routine, a weekend plan requires proper arrangement as well.就像精心规划学习日常一样，周末计划也需要合理安排。
One the one hand, we had better identify确认 and schedule critical work安排好重要工作, which needs at least one third of the time. …
On the other hand, leisure time also plays an important role in de-stressing. …
Para 3
Only when we schedule our weekend life properly can we enjoy a both meaningful and relaxing weekend.
Expressions
When scheduling your tasks for the weekend, take into account that learning comes first. At least one third of our weekend ought to be spent on various learning activities, such as reading and practicing speaking.
Weekends are perfect for going over lessons or learning new skills.
With the time remaining, we can pursue our hobbies and invite friends to gatherings.
The key is to set boundaries on the leisure time. 给休闲时间设限是关键。
We have to uncompromisingly avoid the events that directly conflict with our priorities. 我们必须坚决抵制与首要任务冲突的事。
Possible Version 1
According to Li Hua’s weekend plan, mobile game takes up the biggest part on the to-do list, which doesn’t make any sense, and even results in mental exhaustion and worsening of myopia.
Much like coming up with a weekday routine, a weekend plan requires proper arrangement as well.
First and foremost, we had better identify and schedule critical work, which needs at least one third of the time.
With the time remaining, physical activities and sufficient sleep instead of mobile games are also in need, which is essential for growth and health. The key is to set boundaries on this leisure time.
Only when we schedule our weekend life properly can we enjoy a both meaningful and relaxing weekend. (119 words)
Possible Version 2
According to Li Hua’s weekend plan, mobile game takes up the biggest part on the to-do list, which doesn’t make any sense, and even results in mental exhaustion and worsening of myopia. What are we supposed to do with so much free time
On the one hand, when scheduling your tasks for the weekend, take into account that learning comes first. At least one third of our weekend ought to be spent on various learning activities, such as reading and practicing speaking.
On the other hand, leisure activities and enough rest are also in need, which is essential for destressing. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”
The more properly you manage your time, the more enjoyable and meaningful your weekend is. (129 words)

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