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杭州市保俶塔申花实验学校 2023 学年第一学期 12 月质量调研
九年级 英语
命题：九年级英语备课组 审核：八年级英语备课组
第 I卷
一、听力（共两节，共15小题，满分10分）
第一节（共5小题，每小题1分，满分5分）
听下面五段小对话，从每题中所给的 A、B、C 三个选项中选出最佳选项。每段对话仅读一遍。
1. Whose umbrella is it behind the door
A. Jack’s. B. Sara’s. C. Helen’s.
2. What time will the train leave
A. At 8:40. B. At 9:10. C. At 9:40.
3. How will Cindy go to the museum tomorrow
A. By bike. B. By car. C. By bus.
4. What kind of movie are the speakers probably talking about
A. Comedies. B. Scary movies. C. Documentaries.
5. What’s the probable relationship between the speakers
A. Workmates. B. Neighbors。 C. Classmates.
第二节（共5小题，每小题1分，满分5分）
听下面两段长对话，从题中所给的 A、B、C 三个选项中选出最佳选项，每段对话读两遍。
听下面一段对话，回答第 6 至 7 两个小题。
6. What will Ann buy for Eric’s birthday
A. A book. B. A cake. C. A pen.
7. How does Ann probably feel about Mike’s idea
A. Excited. B. Moved. C. Surprised.
听下面一段对话，回答第 8 至第 10 三个小题。
8. Where are the speakers talking
A. At a theater. B. In the classroom. C. On the phone.
9. Why does the girl think Peter might be interested in the theater group
A. Because he has a lot of free time.
B. Because she knows he likes acting.
C. Because he is looking for an acting job.
10. What can we know from the conversation
A. Peter has some really hard courses this term.
B. The theater group must practice twice a week.
C. Susan wants to join the group with Peter together.
第三节（共5小题，每小题2分，满分10分）
听下一篇短文，从题中所给的 A、B、C 三个选项中选出最佳选项，短文读两遍。
11. What did Jack use to be like
A. Humorous. B. Active. C. Patient.
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12. Why is the speaker angry with Jack now
A. Because he often fails his exams.
B. Because he is always absent from school.
C. Because he can’t get on well with his classmates.
13. Why was Jack unhappy
A. Because his father opened his email without asking.
B. Because his grades dropped a lot and he is worried.
C. Because his parents are busy and don’t care about him.
14. How will the speaker talk with Jack’s father
A. By email. B. By WeChat. C. By phone.
15. What does the listening material mainly tell us
A. Jack lives a poor life and can’t study well.
B. Jack is becoming better and better with the help of his teacher.
C. Jack’s changes and how the speaker will help him.
二、阅读理解（共15小题，每小题2分，满分30分）
阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中选出最佳选项。
A
Jane, a reporter, is collecting information for the local newspaper. She is interested in the
following things introduced in a magazine.
Smart Schoolbag
A schoolboy aged 11 has invented a schoolbag. It tells you which books to pack. A
small computer and a scanner(扫描装置) are fixed in the bag. As each book is put
into the bag, it is checked by the scanner. If any book is missing, a message will be
shown on the computer screen to remind you.
Weather Sweets
A university uses a 3D printer to create sweets according to the weather
information of a certain day. The shapes of the sweets are influenced by wind
speed. The colors of the sweets are decided by temperature. The sweets act as a
weather record of the day.
Sunrise Bed
It’s hard for you to get up in the morning, isn’t it To help you get up, a company
has created a sunrise bed. It wakes you up gently as a sunrise does. Lights built into
the bed turn on and start to get brighter and brighter. When the lights are fully on,
soft music will begin to play. It will be louder and louder until you turn it off. The
company explains, “The gentle light tells your body that it is morning, so it’s easier
for you to get up. “
16. What can the smart schoolbag do
A. Help you repair computers. B. Tell you when to pack books.
C. Record the weather of the day. D. Remind you of the missing books.
17. With the help of the weather sweets, what can you do
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A. Pack the sweets easily into the bag. B. Create sweets according to the weather.
C. Change the weather with sweets. D. Predict the weather the next day.
18. Which of the following shows how a sunrise bed wakes you up
A. lights on→music on→lights brighter→music louder
B. music on→music louder→lights on→lights brighter
C. lights on→lights brighter→music on→music louder
D. music on→lights on→music louder→lights brighter
B
In the summer between my first year and second year in college, I was invited to be an
instructor(辅导员) at a high school camp. On the first day, when we were dancing and playing
games, I noticed a boy under the tree who was small and thin. His shyness made him appear weak. I
walked towards him, introduced myself and invited him to join in the activities and meet some new
people. He quietly replied, “No, I really don’t want to do this. “I could understand that he was in a
new world but I knew it wouldn’t be right to force him, either. Actually, the boy didn’t need a close
talk but a friend.
At lunch the next day, I was leading camp songs when I saw the boy under the tree sitting
alone. I tried again with the same invitation, but he said no once again. That evening I was told the
boy’s name was Tommy. Then I asked the campers to pay special attention to the boy and spend
time with him when they could.
The days went by and the time came when we had to leave. We held a big, warm party to
celebrate the closing of the camp. All the campers shared their wonderful moments. To my surprise
I found the boy from under the tree dancing joyfully with two girls. I couldn’t believe it was the
same person.
In October of my second year, I received a phone call from Tommy’s mother. She told me that
Tommy was hit by a car and killed. I offered my deep sadness. The mother said “Tommy mentioned
you so many times. I want you to know that he went back to school and made new friends with
confidence. You made a difference for Tommy during his last months. “
At that moment, I realized how easy it was to give a bit of yourself every day. You may never
know how much each small action may mean to someone else. I hope that everyone can pay
attention to their own “boy under the tree”.
19. How many times did the writer invite the boy to join in the activities
A. Once. B. Twice. C. Three times. D. Four times.
20. What is Paragraph 4 mainly about
A. Why Tommy died. B. Why Tommy refused the writer.
C. Tommy’s mother’s sadness. D. Tommy’s mother’s thanks to the writer.
21. Which is the correct order about the story
①The boy danced happily with two girls.
②The boy went back to his own life with confidence.
③The boy refused to join in the activities.
④The boy’s mother made a phone call to the writer.
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A. ①②③④ B. ①③②④ C. ③①②④ D. ③①④②
22. What’s the best title of this article
A. Boy Under the Tree B. A Mother’s Call
C. How to Help Others D. A Sad Summer Camp
C
Zhou Chuna,a normal 15-year-old girl, shared her experience of cosmetic surgery(整容手术)
on the Internet recently and caused a hot discussion. She said she started getting cosmetic surgery at
the age of 13. Ever since then she has spent about 4 million yuan on more than 100 surgeries.
Although Zhou’s story is rare, more and more young people in China are having cosmetic surgery.
It was reported that 19 percent of Chinese medical beauty customers in 2020 were aged 18 or under.
Many beauty clinics(诊所) say that being more beautiful gives people an advantage in society,
but the truth is that failed examples of cosmetic surgery are common to see. Once a teenage girl
named Zhang had double eyelid surgery, but after that she couldn’t open her eyes because of the
mistakes made by the doctor.
Moreover, a large number of beauty care centers actually open against the law. It is said that
China has about 13, 000 beauty clinics, with 15 percent offering surgeries which are not allowed by
law.
More worrying, there is heated competition among the medical beauty clinics to win more
teenage customers. Some businesses use catchphrases like “Only by becoming prettier can you be
more loved” to spread “appearance stress”. And many beauty clinics advertise directly to teenagers,
encouraging them to “make some changes and let your classmates be amazed by your beauty in the
new term”. Some beauty clinics mislead their teenage patients by advertising low costs. One
Internet user said she saw an advertisement for a 15-yuan treatment for pimples but the staff at the
beauty clinic gave her a year’s surgery plan which cost 8, 000.
Many experts have said it’s dangerous for teenagers to have cosmetic surgery. Teenagers are
more at risk to advertisement and social pressure, not to mention their level of physical maturity(成
熟). That’s why they are calling for stricter rules on the beauty clinics when it comes to the
treatment of teenagers.
23. Where may we read this passage
A. A cookbook. B. A traveling guide.
C. A science book. D. Newspaper.
24. What does the underlined word “them” in paragraph 4 refer to
A. Beauty clinics. B. Classmates. C. Teenagers. D. Experts.
25. Which of the following best shows the structure of the passage
A. B. C. D.
26. What’s the writer’s purpose by writing this passage
A. To call for stricter rules on beauty surgery on teenagers.
B. To point out the danger of the false advertising to teenagers.
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C. To ask the government to pass laws to stop the cosmetic surgery.
D. To remind parents to give more attention to the growth of teenagers.
D
Pet parrots that are allowed to make video calls to other birds show signs of
feeling less isolated, according to scientists.
The study, which involved giving the birds a computer that they could use to
make video calls, found that they began to engage in more social behaviors including
preening, singing and playing. The birds were given a choice of which “friend” to
call on a touchscreen computer and the study showed that the parrots that called other birds most
often were the most popular choices.
Ilyena Hirskyj-Douglas, of the University of Glasgow and a co-author of the study, said that
video calls had helped many people feel less isolated in the last few years. She added, “There are 20
million parrots living in people’s homes in the USA, and we wanted to explore whether those birds
might benefit(受益) from video calling too. If we gave them the chance to call other parrots, would
they choose to do so, and would the experience benefit the parrots and their caregivers ”
Their study of 18 pet parrots suggested that there were, indeed, benefits for the birds. In the
wild, many species of parrots live in large groups, but as pets they are kept alone or in a small group.
Living alone can cause birds to develop mental problems, which include rocking, walking back and
forth, or self-harming behaviors such as feather-plucking.
The parrots first learned to ring a bell and then touch a photo of another bird on the screen of a
computer to make a call to that bird, with the help of their owners. In total the birds made 147 calls
to each other during the study, while owners took detailed notes on the birds’ behavior and the
researchers later reviewed the video footage.
Jennifer Cunha of Northeastern University said that the parrots “seemed to know” that they
were communicating with other birds. “All the bird owners in the study said they valued the
experience, and would want to continue using the system with their parrots in the future,” she said.
“I was quite surprised at so many different behaviors,” said Hirskyj-Douglas. “Some would
sing, some would play around and go upside down, others would want to show another bird their
toys.”
27. The main purpose of the study is to find out .
A. if parrots can benefit from video calling B. if parrots can learn to make video calls
C. why parrots can develop mental problems D. why parrots can have so many benefit
28. What can we learn about the pet parrots
A. Most of them used to live in large groups. B. Their way to communicate is singing.
C. They can make video calls by themselves. D. The most popular ones made most calls.
29. Which word has the closest meaning to “isolated”
A. Amazed. B. Calm. C. Scared. D. Lonely.
30. The following paragraph can best go after .
Video calling could reproduce(再现) some of the social benefits of living in a group,
according to Rebecca Kleinberger, of Northeastern University and first author of the study.
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A. Paragraph 1 B. Paragraph 2 C. Paragraph 3 D. Paragraph 4
三、任务型阅读（共 5 小题，每小题 2 分，满分 10 分）
阅读下面短文，根据所读内容在表格中的空白处填入恰当的单词。注意：每个空格只填一个单词。
How do you find happiness every single day How do you get more out of life and live life to
the fullest There are three easy ways to help you to enjoy your daily life.
One way to find happiness within you is to show your appreciation(感激) to others. Showing
appreciation gives happiness to others，at the same time，we can receive happiness in return by
writing a letter of appreciation and for the reply we get.
Often maybe you are strict with yourself by telling yourself you could have done things better.
Have a look at your life and think about what you have achieved today. So take 5 minutes right now
to write down what you have achieved in life and what you take pride in.
Have you ever kept a diary？Sometimes writing things down will give you a clear thinking
and allows you to let go of things. When you write in a diary，you have the ability to express
yourself as you truly would like to be.
Each of the above three easy steps takes only 15 minutes. Not only can it produce happiness
for you，but also it will help others be in good feelings. Why not have a try right now
Title: 31 to Find Happiness
Write 32 to give happiness to others and
Showing appreciation to others
receive happiness in return.
Write down your achievements and what you are
Appreciating yourself
33 of.
Having a conversation with yourself Writing in diaries will make you think 34 .
Do as any of the three steps above，and you will find
Conclusion(结论)
more 35 .
四、完形填空（共15小题，每小题1分，满分15分）
阅读下面的短文，掌握其大意，然后从短文后各题所给的A、B、C、D 四个选项中，选择最佳选项。
I always think my daughter Kendall is the best – that’s just what parents do. When she was only
three, she 36 for the people, like a little angel. When Kendall was five, we noticed that
she 37 had a tic(抽搐 ). When the problem got worse, we took her from doctor to
doctor. 38 the treatment, Kendall didn't give up singing. 39 , her tics disappeared as soon
as she sang.
When Kendall was sixteen, we thought she would be cured soon. However, a(n) 40 thing
happened. At a party, Kendall jumped on her brother for a piggyback ride. Kendall flew
over 41 back and landed on the floor. She was sent to hospital, paralyzed(瘫痪) from the neck
down. She couldn’t move. But her biggest 42 wasn’t whether she would walk again, but was
whether she could 43 for a TV show called American Idol.
As the days went on, feeling on her left side 44 , but she was still paralyzed on the right.
We weren’t sure how much of her 45 would come back. A friend brought a microphone and
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put it on her bed. Every day, Kendall tried hard to pick it up. It was more 46 for her to pick up
that microphone than a knife or a fork.
Sometimes she had to bite a toothbrush to take her mind 47 the pain. We all cried because
of the pain we saw. But on the day -- only three months after her accident -- we cried full of joy
when she sang on the TV show, 48 she didn’t enter the Top 24 of American Idol.
When she was a little girl，she asked me 49 she had tics. My heart hurt, but I told her,
“Kendall, you have a pure heart, a fantastic voice, a strong 50 . And you are a beautiful
presence.”
36. A. sang B. danced C. jumped D. painted
37. A. never B. sometimes C. hardly D. always
38. A. During B. Before C. After D. Until
39. A. Unluckily B. Honestly C. Surprisingly D. Sadly
40. A. useful B. exciting C. meaningful D. terrible
41. A. his B. her C. its D. their
42. A. plan B. task C. dream D. worry
43. A. come out B. try out C. hand out D. take out
44. A. stopped B. control C. returned D. disappeared
45. A. experiment B. treatment C. instrument D. movement
46. A. interesting B. important C. amazing D. dangerous
47. A. on B. in C. off D. over
48. A. though B. because C. if D. so
49. A. where B. what C. why D. when
50. A. body B. habit C. order D. mind
第II卷
五、语法填空（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（一个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。
A lot of parents change their plans for their children’s weekend activities because of the new
strict rules for after-school tutoring(课后补习). Many parents choose sports or other projects 51
(develop) their children’s interests instead.
So far, Chinese government 52 (introduce) a lot of rules about homework and
after-school tutoring. For example, homework for children below 53 third grade is not
allowed, while homework for junior high students should take less than 90 minutes. Primary and
middle school 54 (ask) to offer after-school services, including homework tutoring, sports,
arts and so on.
Many parents show their support for these new powerful policies. “We feel very satisfied
because too much homework makes children less 55 (interest) in their studies and stops
them attending other activities after school. We hope our children enjoy 56 (them) after
school,” a parent from Shanghai said. However, there are also some 57 (worry). A mother
from Hangzhou said that 58 she agreed with the new moves, she worried about her son,
“What would he do if both my husband and I had no time to be 59 him on weekends ”
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Generally speaking, the moves will 60 (true) solve many social problems such as
students’ falling levels of physical fitness, more mental health problems and huge family cost.
六、词汇运用（共两节，每小题1分，满分15分）
A. 根据下列句子及所给首字母或汉语注释，写出空缺处各单词的正确形式，每空限填一词。
61. As is known to all, Confucius is a _________(先驱) in the field of education.
62. The earthquake b_________ damaged the town. Everything was in a mess!
63. The reason why my grandma s________ to writing till 79 was her love for Chinese language.
64. It’s getting popular that several _________(导演) make one movie together in China now.
65. There is an _________(电子) map in my car. It can even tell us which way is less crowded.
66. There are many people _________(表演) lion dance on the Spring Festival for all to see.
67. -- What should we do if the rain doesn’t stop in an hour
-- In that c_________, we have to put off our plan.
68. Lily, a _________(加拿大) girl, has been living in China since three years ago.
69. The l_________ temperature here was -5℃ yesterday, while the highest temperature was 8℃.
70. Jim did best in the exam and the teacher p_________ him three times in class.
B. 用方框中所给单词的适当形式填空，每词仅用一次。
prefer sad pain lock smooth
71. A true friend can share the happiness and _________ with you.
72. Although it seemed to be a _________ experience, he still found it fun.
73. Make sure the door is _________ when you leave the room
74. The interview went _________ with the manager’s help.
75. Jim _________ city life to country life when he was young, because it’s more convenient.
七、书面表达 (满分 20 分)
为适应时代发展，很多同学从小开始勤学苦练，培养各种技能。你认为哪些技能是重要的？请根据提
示选择或自拟 2 至 3 种技能，以“Core(核心) skills” 为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的看法并阐述你的理由。
communicating
thinking learning
Core
skills
... ...
注意：（1）词数 80-100 词，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。（2）文中请勿提及真实姓名。
Core skills
To go with the development of the times, everyone must learn all kinds of skills. ____________
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听力材料
第一部分：听小对话回答问题。 本题共有五个小题，在每一小题内你将听到一个小对话，我们把对话念一遍。请你从试卷的 A、B、C 三个选项中，找出能回答这个问题的最佳选项。 （现在你有 15 秒钟的时间阅读第 1 至 5 五小题） （停顿 15 秒）
1. W: Jack, may I use your umbrella
M: Sorry, Helen. I didn’t take mine this morning. Maybe you can use Sara’s. Look at the umbrella behind the door. It’s hers.
（停顿 5 秒）
2. W: The train is leaving soon. Let’s hurry.
M: Don’t worry. It’s only nine ten. There’s half an hour left.
（停顿 5 秒）
3. W: Tomorrow is Saturday. Do you have any plans
M: No. What about you, Cindy
W: I’m going to visit the museum. My father will drive me there.
（停顿 5 秒）
4. W: Did you have a good weekend
M: Yes, I did. I watched a new film by the famous actor Stephen Chow in the Great Cinema with my brother. It was so funny that we laughed all the time.
W: Really Comedies interest me too. I’d like to watch it this evening.
（停顿 5 秒）
5. W: Lily is absent today. It’s said that she is ill in hospital.
M: That’s true. Shall we go to see her after school
W: Good idea. And she probably needs our help with her lessons.
（停顿 5 秒）
第二部分：听长对话，回答问题。本题共有两段较长的对话，我们把对话念两遍。请你根据对话内容从 A、B、C 三个选项中，找出一 个最佳选项。听下面一段较长的对话，回答第 6 至 7 两小题。
（现在你有 8 秒钟的时间阅读第 6 至 7 两小题）
（停顿 8 秒）
M: Hi, Anna. Shall we go to the library together after school
W: Sorry, Mike. I have to do some shopping in the supermarket then. It’s my cousin Eric’s birthday tomorrow. I want to buy a present for him.
M: Have you decides what to buy
W: Yes. I want to buy a big cake. He has a sweet tooth.
M: Sweet food is not good for Eric. He is a little fat. Why not buy him a book
W: A book You can’t be serious He hates reading very much.
M: That’s why he needs a book. You can help him develop interests in reading.
W: You are right, Mike. Eric must begin to do some reading. Thanks for your advice.
（停顿 3 秒后，朗读第二遍）
（停顿 8 秒）
听下面一段较长的对话，回答第 8 至 10 三小题。
（现在你有 12 秒钟的时间阅读第 8 至 10 两小题）
（停顿 12 秒）
M: Hello.
W: Hello, this is Susan . May I speak to Peter Robinson, please
M: Hi, Susan. It’s Peter. What can I do for you？
W: I’m calling about the theater group I belong to. We are looking for more students to join us, especially boys. And I thought you might be interested.
M: Oh, you know how much I love acting, but I’m taking some really hard courses this term. So I’m afraid I won’t have much time for practice.
W: Well, we only practice once a week. Thursday from seven to ten.
M: Only once a week. Can you give me more time to think it over
W: Sure. And you can come and watch us play this Thursday. I think you’ll like the way we work.
M: Great, I’ll come if I have time.
（停顿 3 秒后，朗读第二遍）
（停顿 12 秒）
第三部分 听短文回答问题。 本题是一篇短文，短文后有五个问题，我们把短文念两遍。请你根据短文内容从 A、B、C 三个选项 中，找出一个最佳选项。
（现在你有 15 秒钟的时间阅读第 11 至 15 两小题）
（停顿 8 秒）
As the head teacher of Class Two, Grade Nine, I love my job and all of my students. Jack, one of my students, used to be very outgoing and always answered the questions loudly. His father is a guard and his mother is a worker. They are both very busy with their work.
These days, Jack has changed a lot. He is always absent from school and I am very angry with him. So today, I asked him to come to the office and had a long talk with him. He told me that his father opened his private email and that it made him very unhappy. He could not put his heart into his study, so his grades dropped a lot.
After I learned about Jack’s situation, I decided to talk with his father on the phone. I want to advise him to say sorry to his son and learn to understand and protect children’s privacy. I hope our talk will be helpful to Jack.
（停顿 3 秒后，朗读第二遍） （停顿 10 秒）
听力测试到此结束，请同学们继续做笔试部分
参考答案
一、听力
1-5 BCBAC 6-10 ACCBA 11-15 BBACC
二、阅读理解
16-18 DBC 19-22 BDCA 23-26 DCCA 27-30 ADDA
三、任务型阅读
31. How/ Ways 32. letters 33. proud 34. clearly 35. happiness
四、完型填空：
36-40 ABACD 41-45 ADBCD 46-50 BCACD
五、语法填空：
to develop 52. has introduced 53. the 54. are asked 55. interested
56. themselves 57. worries 58. though/although59. with 60. truly
六、词汇运用：
A. 单词拼写
pioneer 62. badly 63. stuck 64. directors 65. electronic
66. performing 67. case 68. Canadian 69. lowest 70. praised
B. 选词填空
71. sadness 72. painful 73. locked 74. smoothly 75. preferred
七、书面表达
1、总分为20分，按五个档次给分，中档属于第三档（9分—7分）。
2、根据内容的完整性、语言的标准性及文章结构的合理性确定所属档次。
3、词数少于40个的，从本题总得分中减去1分。
4、内容要点：
① 安抚宽慰收信人（2分）
② 理科学习建议（6分）
③ 周末规划建议（6分）
④ 卷面整洁、词数符合要求（1分）
5、各档次的给点分范围及要求：
一等（很好）：（20分—17分）① 完全完成了试题规定的任务。② 覆盖所有内容要点。③ 应用了较多的语法结构。④ 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致，具备较强的语言运用能力。⑤ 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，是全文结构紧凑。⑥ 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
二等（好）：（16分—14分）① 完成了试题规定的任务。② 虽漏掉了1或2个次要点，但覆盖所有的主要内容。③ 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。④ 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂的语法结构或词汇所致。⑤ 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文架构紧凑。⑥ 达到了预期的写作目的。
三等（还好）（13分—10分）① 基本完成了试题规定的任务。② 虽漏掉了一些内容，但覆盖了所有的主要内容。③ 应用的语法结构和词汇能够满足任务的要求。④ 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。⑤ 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，是全文内容连贯。⑥ 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
四等（较差）：（9分—6分）① 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。② 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。③ 语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。④ 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。⑤ 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。⑥ 信息未能清晰地传达给读者。
五等（差）：（5分—1分）① 未完成试题规定的任务。② 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。③ 语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。④ 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。⑤ 缺乏语句间的连贯成份，内容不连贯。⑥ 信息未能传达给读者。
等外：（0分）
抄袭试题内容或语段，写的内容均与多要求内容无关或所写内容无法清楚、看懂。
参考范文：
Core skills
To go with the development of the times, everyone must learn all kinds of skills. Of all the skills I have learned, I consider the following skills to be the most important.
Above all, communication skills are necessary because we have to interact with people. With them, we can make ourselves understood easily. Besides, time management skills are also important. They can help us focus on the most important things. More importantly, they help us lead a healthy life. Finally, we should have the skills to learn. There isn't always a teacher who can help us in our life. Therefore, we should have the skills to learn by ourselves and solve problems independently.
I think with the help of these skills, we can better prepare ourselves for the future.
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