2024届高考英语作文答题模板与解题技巧——道歉信学案(含解析)

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2024届高考英语作文答题模板与解题技巧——道歉信学案(含解析)

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道歉信
第一段 表明写作意图,对某事表示歉意。
第二段 说明道歉的具体事由,希望对方谅解或再次约定。
第三段 再次表明歉意,请求谅解 并提出补救措施。
【满分词汇模板】
单词 apologize道歉; forgive原谅; pardon原谅; inconvenience不便; appointment约定; negligence疏忽大意; engagement约定; indeed确实; sincerely真诚地;
短语 much to one’s regret令某人非常遗憾的是; make up 和解; make a choice选择; apologize to sb.for sth. 因某事向某人道歉 ; say sorry to sb. 对某人说抱歉; be absent/present from 缺席/出席; beg your forgiveness for 恳求你的原谅; cause inconvenience 造成不便; miss/cancel the appointment错过/取消约会; make up for.…弥补; express my regret表达我的道歉; be considerate of 体谅; accept my apology接受我的道歉; conflict with... 与……冲突; make an apology to sb.for sth. 因某事向某人道歉
【满分句型模板之开篇“风头”句】
I'm truly sorry to tell you that.…., and I’m writing to express/convey my deepest apology to you...
很抱歉告诉你……,我写信向你表达我深深的歉意。
2. I am writing to owe you an apology for being unable to...
我没能……,我写信向你道歉。
3. I am terribly sorry for what I did, but believe I didn't mean to...
对于我做的事,我感到十分抱歉。但请你相信,我并非有意要……
4. I apologize most sincerely for what I said that day. I didn't mean to hurt you.
我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉。我不是有意伤害你的。
5. Please forgive me for not being able to inform you.
请原谅我没能通知你。
6. I owe you an apology for being unable to help you.
我没能帮助你,应该向你道歉。
7. I am indeed sorry for what I said, but believe I had no intention to...
对于我说的话,我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信,我并非故意要......。
Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.
请原谅我说话欠妥。
【满分句型模板之开篇“猪肚”句】
I feel awfully sorry about it and I wonder if it's convenient for you to make it another time.
为此我感到非常抱歉,我想知道你是否方便另约时间。
Much to my regret, I was unable to.….and I wish that my apology could help to some extent.
很遗憾,我不能够……希望我的道歉在某种程度上能起到作用。
I’m afraid I have brought you too much trouble and I want you to know how regretful I am feeling.
恐怕我给你带来了太多麻烦,同时我也想让你知道对此我觉得很抱歉。
I just do not know what to say about the matter.
关于这件事我不知该说些什么。
I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now.
我想让你知道现在我是多么遗憾。
I did not mean to hurt your feelings.
我不想伤害你的感情。
I feel you are displeased at my failing to keep my promise, but I hope you will forgive me.
恐怕你会因为我的失约而不高兴,但是希望你能原谅我。
It would be very kind( considerate)of you to give me another chance to do sth. I promise it will never happen again.
你太好了,再给我一次机会做某事。我保证不会再发生这种事情。
If it is convenient for you, let's have another appointment to do sth.
如果方便的话,我们再约去做某事。
By the way, can we have dinner together some time next week
顺便说一下,我们在下周的某个时间一起吃晚饭好吗
【满分句型模板之结尾“豹尾”句】
1. Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused .
对于造成的不便,我再次表示歉意。
2. I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apologies.
我衷心希望你能理解我的处境,并接受我的道歉。
3. Please allow me to say sorry again
请允许我再次表示歉意。
4. I'm sorry for all the inconvenience.
我为引起的所有不便表示歉意。
5. Please accept my sincere apology once more for any inconvenience caused.
对于任何带来的不便,请再次接受我真诚的道歉。
【满分作文模板一】
Dear ________(对象),
I'm writing to express my sincere apologies to you for _____________________ (未能去书店with you at our appointed time. I’m sorry for the inconvenience it may cause you.
______________________________(我会缺席的原因是因为)my grandfather ________________________________(突然生病) yesterday and now he is in hospital. My family are taking turns to take care of him in the hospital. So I have to stay with him that day. _____________________________(我真诚地希望) you can accept my apologies. Meanwhile, __________________________________(我将感激不尽) if you could allow me to fix another date.______________________________________(如果你方便的话), shall we meet at 8:00 am next Saturday If not, please ________________________________(让我提前知道)what time suits you best.
Sorry again for the inconvenience ______________________________所引起的.
Yours,
Li Hua
【满分作文模板示例】
Dear __________(称呼),
I am writing this letter to say sorry to you for my fault that got you injured. It was more than I could expect the knock on you would have your leg broken when I tried to pass you on the basketball court.
Although it happened accidentally, I do feel very terrible for this and blame myself. Anyway, it’s my roughness that brought you so much hurt and trouble! How I wish I hadn’t rushed so quickly or knocked you down! I sincerely hope you will get better as soon as possible. If you forgive me and don’t mind enjoying playing basketball with me after your recovery,I will be happy.
Please allow me to express my regret once again.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【译文】
亲爱的____:
我写这封信是为了为我的过错使你受伤而向你表示抱歉。当我在篮球场上试图超过你时,我对你的撞击会打断你的腿。
虽然这是偶然发生的,但我确实为此感到很糟糕,并责怪我自己。总之,是我的粗暴给你带来了这么多的伤害和麻烦!我真希望我没有这么快就把你撞倒!我真诚地希望你能尽快好转。如果你原谅我,也不介意在你康复后和我一起打篮球,我会很高兴的。
请允许我再次表示遗憾。
李华
1.假定你是李华,你的朋友Sarah曾邀请你参加她下个星期四的生日晚会,可是弟弟生病了,需要人照看,不能去参加。请根据以下要点给他写一封道歉信。
1.表达歉意;
2.解释原因;
3.提出弥补的办法。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sarah,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sarah,
I’m indeed very sorry that I won’t attend to your birthday party as I was planned before.
As for the sudden change, I have to admit it has an unavoidable reason. My little brother are being sick for days. So it is necessary for him to be cared. I am responsible for looking after him while my parents are working. Therefore, I have to stay to accompany him that day. I hope you can understand my situation and forgive my absence.
Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeing at this weekend I do long for a pleasant chat with you and give the present to you.
It is much to my regret that I miss the chance of such a happy get-toghther. Once again, please accepte my secere apology.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生向朋友Sarah写一封道歉信。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
出席,参加:attend → take part in
承认:admit → concede
原因:reason → cause
必需的:necessary → essential
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I do long for a pleasant chat with you and give the present to you.
拓展句:I do long for a pleasant chat with you and give the present to you, which stands for my best wish to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
As for the sudden change, I have to admit it has an unavoidable reason. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】
It is much to my regret that I miss the chance of such a happy get-toghther.(运用了it作形式主语)
2.假定你是李华,你的外教老师 David 与你约定每周六晚上一次口语课,但是你身体有不适的症状,按照规定要居家隔离,因此,请你给 David写一封道歉信,
内容包括:
1.表达歉意;
2.说明理由;
3.提出补救方案。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear David,
I’m indeed sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to attend the oral class this Saturday as scheduled.
Recently, I’m not feeling well and required to stay at home according to the rules. However, I am very fond of your classes and would like to make up for the lost lessons. So I’m wondering whether it’s possible for the lesson to be recorded and if so, I may have the chance to learn and review through the video.
Please allow me to say sorry again. I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apology.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教老师David写一封道歉信,因自己身体不适需要居家隔离而不能按照原定计划上口语课进行道歉,并提出补救方案。
【详解】1.词汇积累
确实、非常:indeed→terribly
喜欢:be fond of→be keen on
弥补:make up for→compensate for
机会:chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:However, I am very fond of your classes and would like to make up for the lost lessons. So I’m wondering whether it’s possible for the lesson to be recorded and if so, I may have the chance to learn and review through the video.
拓展句:However, because I am very fond of your classes and would like to make up for the lost lessons, I’m wondering whether it’s possible for the lesson to be recorded and if so, I may have the chance to learn and review through the video.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m indeed sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to attend the oral class this Saturday as scheduled.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】So I’m wondering whether it’s possible for the lesson to be recorded and if so, I may have the chance to learn and review through the video.(运用了whether引导的宾语从句和if so结构的省略句)
3.假定你是李华,作为芝加哥大学(Chicago University)的交换生正在美国学习。今天早晨你骑车上学时不小心刮擦到了一辆停在路边的汽车。由于着急上学,你无法在原地等候车主。请用英语写一张留言条,内容包括:
1.表明身份;
2.简述事情经过;
3.道歉并表示愿意赔偿;
4.联系方式:Tel: 5893677;E-mail: lihua@
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China, studying at Chicago University. I’m so sorry that my bike scratched your car when I was riding to school this morning.
I understand it will certainly put you in a very bad mood. I sincerely apologize for what I did and promise I will cover all the relevant costs. As school will start soon, I can’t wait on the scene for you. Please contact me at 5893671 or lihua@windmillco.org. Many apologies again for all the inconvenience I’ve caused you!
Best regards!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生李华今天早晨骑车上学时不小心刮擦到了一辆停在路边的汽车。由于着急上学,无法在原地等候车主。请李华用英语写一张留言条。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚地:truly →sincerely
支付:pay →cover
联系:touch→ contact
开始:start→begin
2.句式拓展
陈述句变强调句
原句:As school will start soon, I can’t wait on the scene for you.
拓展句:It is as school will start soon that I can’t wait on the scene for you.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Many apologies again for all the inconvenience I’ve caused you!(运用了省略that的定语从句)
[高分句型2]As school will start soon, I can’t wait on the scene for you.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句)
4.假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Tom写信告诉你由于他最近迷上电脑游戏而熬夜,忽视学业,并受父母责骂,和父母发生了争吵,心里很烦恼。你回信劝说他正确解决这个问题。
内容包括:
1.表示理解;
2.指出玩手机游戏的危害(至少两点);
3.建议向父母道歉。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tom,
I’ve heard that recently you are obsessed with computer games and your parents are not happy with that because you stay up at night to play computer games and pay less attention to study.
To be honest, what you did is not right thing. I understand you and also think computer games are interesting. However, we are students. Study is our main task. We have to study hard so that we can go to top university and find a decent job in the future. Please don't argue with your parents, since they are just concerned about your health and study. I think you should apologize to them sincerely. You are supposed to focus on your study instead of mobile phone games, which have negative effects on your health. I suggest that you finish your homework first and find a balance between study and entertainment.
I hope that my suggestion can help you. Expecting your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定考生是李华,你的美国笔友Tom写信告诉你由于他最近迷上电脑游戏而熬夜,忽视学业,并受父母责骂,和父母发生了争吵,心里很烦恼。你回信劝说他正确解决这个问题。
【详解】1.词汇积累
沉迷于:be addicted to→be obsessed with
对……满意:be satisfied with→be happy with
关心:be worried about→be concerned about
建议:advise→suggest
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:I understand you and also think computer games are interesting. However, we are students.
拓展句:Although I understand you and also think computer games are interesting, we are students.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’ve heard that recently you are obsessed with computer games and your parents are not happy with that because you stay up at night to play computer games and pay less attention to study. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] To be honest, what you did is not right thing. (运用了what引导主语从句)
5.假如你是李华,你本来和好友汤姆约好今天一起吃晚饭,但你因忙而意外爽约了。现请你根据下面的内容要点,用英文给汤姆写一电子邮件表示道歉,内容包括:
1、表示歉意;
2、说明爽约的原因;
3、提出补救的办法。
注意:1、 词数80左右;
2、 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Tom,
I’m awfully sorry about forgetting our dinner date.
For the whole day, I, together with several other students in charge, was fully engaged in preparing for the Art Festival to be held next week. We discussed the theme for the festival, checked all the arrangements, adjusted some programs and later interviewed some 20 volunteers. So busy was I at work that the dinner date slipped my mind.
How about treating you to a lunch next Friday at the Italian restaurant Again, I apologize for missing the dinner date.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生用英文给汤姆写一封道歉信,表示歉意、说明爽约的原因以及提出补救的办法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
和……一起:along with→together with
一些:some→several
忙于:be busy doing sth.→be fully engaged in
道歉:make an apology→apologize for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:For the whole day, I, together with several other students in charge, was fully engaged in preparing for the Art Festival to be held next week.
拓展句:For the whole day, I, together with several other students in charge, was fully engaged in preparing for the Art Festival, which will be held next week.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I’m awfully sorry about forgetting our dinner date. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] So busy was I at work that the dinner date slipped my mind. (运用了倒装句)
6.假定你是李华,你校组织的“英语交流到山区”活动将于下周一举行。你是志愿者,但因生病不能参加,请你用英语给组织者Mr. George写一封道歉信,内容包括:
1.表达歉意;
2.解释原因;
3.已将志愿工作安排他人完成。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. George,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. George,
I am Li Hua, a volunteer of the activity "English Communication to the Mountains". Now, I'm writing to express my sincere apology to you for not being present at the activity to be held next Monday.
The reason for my absence is that I suddenly fell ill. My parents sent me to hospital, and I have to stay there for a week. As for my volunteer work, I have asked my classmate Tom to do it.
Sincerely hoping that you can accept my apologies.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给给组织者Mr. George写一封道歉信,解释自己不能去校组织的“英语交流到山区”活动当志愿者的原因。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
表达:express→convey
真诚的:sincere→heartfelt
生病:fall ill→get ill
至于:as for→with regard to
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Now, I'm writing to express my sincere apology to you for not being present at the activity to be held next Monday.
拓展句:Now, I'm writing to express my sincere apology to you for not being present at the activity that will be held next Monday.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The reason for my absence is that I suddenly fell ill. (运用了that引导的表语从句)
[高分句型2] Sincerely hoping that you can accept my apologies. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
7.假定你是李华,你的英国朋友David 本周六即将结束在中国的旅行,乘飞机返回英国,你因有事无法按原定计划取机场为他送行,只好写信向他道歉,内容如下:
1.表达歉意;2.说明不能送行的原因。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear David,
I 'm terribly sorry to inform you that I cannot make it to see you off at the airport this Saturday as promised . Thus, I am writing to apologize for not keeping my word.
The reason why I can't get away is that I have to help make preparations for the English Speaking Contest to be held this weekend. Actually, I have just been informed of this plan by the schoolmaster. Moreover, as the chairman of the Student Union, I feel responsible for this job. How I wish I could have the chance to talk with you once more about the happy days we spent together before you leave!
I hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.
Wish you a safe journey.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写信向英国朋友David 道歉,自己因有事无法按原定计划去机场为他送行,并告知不能送行的原因。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.表达歉意;
2.说明不能送行的原因。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
see you off, apologize for,get away,make preparations for, inform of, feel responsible for,understand my situation,accept my apology
第三步:连词成句
1.I 'm terribly sorry to inform you that I cannot make it to see you off at the airport this Saturday as promised .
2.I am writing to apologize for not keeping my word.
3.The reason why I can't get away is that I have to help make preparations for the English Speaking Contest to be held this weekend.
4.I have just been informed of this plan by the schoolmaster.
5.As the chairman of the Student Union, I feel responsible for this job.
6.How I wish I could have the chance to talk with you once more about the happy days we spent together before you leave!
7.I hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.
8.Wish you a safe journey.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
表并列补充关系: Moreover
表因果关系:Thus
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1]
I 'm terribly sorry to inform you that I cannot make it to see you off at the airport this Saturday as promised .(that从句为宾语从句)
[高分句型2]
The reason why I can't get away is that I have to help make preparations for the English Speaking Contest to be held this weekend.(运用了固定句型:The reason why...is that...)
8.假定你是李华,你原与留学生朋友Bob约好周六下午一起去看电影,现因故不能赴约,请写一封电子邮件。
主要内容:1表示道歉; 2 说明原因; 3 另约时间
注意::
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.结束语已为你写好。
Dear Bob,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【答案】
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to tell you tell that I cannot go to see the movie with you this Saturday as planned. I’m writing to make an apology for any inconvenience I caused.
Our school will hold a Literature Festival next week and invite some foreign poets to attend the festival. By coincidence, I’ve been assigned to pick them up at the airport this Sunday. I hope the sudden change won’t cause you too much trouble.
Shall we make it another time, for example, this Sunday The tickets are still available. If it’s not convenient for you, please let me know what time suits you best. By the way, I’ll be free any time next week.
I’m terribly sorry again for any inconvenience. And look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
9.假设你是李华,作为交换生(an exchange student)正在英国 windmill College 学习。今天早晨你骑车上学时不小心刮擦到了一辆停在路边的汽车。由于急着上学,你无法在原地等候车主。请留一张便条,内容包括:
1. 表明身份;2.简述事情经过;3.道歉并表示愿意赔偿;
4. 联系方式(Tel:5893671 E-mail: lihua@windmillco.org)。
1. 表达歉意 2. 解释原因 3. 另约时间
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【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm Li Hua, an exchange student from China studying at Windmill College. I'm truly sorry that my bike scratched your car when I was riding to school this morning. I understand it will certainly put you in a very bad mood. I sincerely apologize for what I did and promise I will cover all the relevant costs. As school will start soon, I can't wait on the scene for you. Please contact me at 589367 or lihua@ windmillco.org. Many apologies again for all the inconvenience that I have caused.
Best regards!
Li Hua
10.假设你是李华,英国留学生Jim邀请你本周日参加他的“我与中国”(@ China)摄影展,但你因故不能参加。请你给他写一封信,内容包括:
1. 表示感谢;
2. 表示道歉并说明原因;
3. 预祝成功。
注意:1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可以增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Jim,
I feel excited to know that you are having your personal photography show and thank you so much for your invitation and concern. However, I regret to tell you that I am unable to attend it.
Frankly speaking, I have been preparing for IELTS test. Coincidentally, the oral test part is scheduled next Monday. Therefore, I’ll make some preparations and set off for Beijing this weekend. What a pity it is that I should miss such a special moment with you. Besides, “@China” is absolutely an awesome theme to show your talent in photography and love for China. It’s certain to be a success.
Looking forward to your good news.

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