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高考英语读后续写语篇练习
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——好友借鞋
Part 1
题目呈现
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续写原文
① Grace and Ellen, both promising in their school's dance competition, were fierce competitors. They both had great passion for dancing and dreamt for bigger stages. They were both friends and competitors. They had similar taste in music, and had similar dressing styles. Even they wore shoes of the same size. They had both committed themselves to preparing for the upcoming contest. ② Grace's journey to the competition was marked by countless hours of practice and determination. She would rise before the sun, and the studio lights were her only company. Every movement was perfected with unwavering commitment. She knew that this competition wasn't just about personal success; it was also about upholding her school's honor. “Grace, you're incredible! ” Grace's dance instructor, Mrs. Anderson, often praised her. Your hard work will pay off. ③ Ellen had been practicing hard for this competition, as well. Her love for dance was her driving force. After school, she would head straight to the dance studio, tirelessly perfecting every step and twirl. Her dance shoes had become an extension of her feet, and her heart burned with a strong desire for victory. " Ellen, you're a natural," her fellow dancers would often say. You've got this!
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续写原文
④The day of the competition finally arrived, and there were five competitors fighting for the championship title. Ellen was scheduled to perform before Grace.
⑤As Ellen stood backstage , the butterflies in her stomach seemed to have turned into a whirlwind ( 漩涡). She checked her dance shoes one last time and realized a huge mistake. The shoes themselves were a size too small.It turned out she took her little sister's shoes by mistake. Panic set in as her mind raced for a solution.
⑥“Ellen, you’re up next!” the stage manager announced.
⑦In the dimly lit（灰暗的）backstage area , Grace overheard Ellen's whispers to her friend , Sarah.
⑧“I brought the wrong shoes, Sarah ," Ellen's voice trembled（颤抖）. They are too small. What am I going to do ”
⑨Grace's heart sank as she overheard the conversation.
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续写段首语
Paragraph 1：Grace knew that her shoes would fit Ellen perfectly, but she was hesitant to lend a helping hand.
Paragraph 2：Tears of gratitude welled up in Ellen's eyes as she slipped into Grace's shoes.
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Part 1 读懂大意，理清脉络
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1.Read for information
要素 关键信息
（1）Who are the main characters
（2）When did the story happens
（3）Where did the story happens
（4）What happened
Grace, Ellen
The day of school’s dance competition
backstage
Ellen found that she took a wrong dance shoes before performance.
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Paragraph How
Para. 1&3
Para. 4
Para. 5&9
Grace and Ellen were perfect dancers and they both joined the school’s dance competition.They were also friends and competitor.
The day of the competitin arrived and Ellen was scheduled to perform before Grace.
Ellen found that she took a wrong dance shoes before performance but Grace’s shoes were fit Ellen.
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1. Read for plots
A. Grace lent her dance shoes to Ellen.B. Grace and Ellen were both friends and cpmpetitors of school’s dance competition. C. Ellen slipped into Grace’s shoes.D.Ellen found that she took a wrong dance shoes before performance but Grace’s shoes were fit Ellen. E. The day of the competitin arrived and Ellen was scheduled to perform before Grace.
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点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；
点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；
点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；
点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。
情节构建的重点
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Grace knew that her shoes would fit Ellen perfectly, but she was hesitant to lend a helping hand.
Tears of gratitude welled up in Ellen's eyes as she slipped into Grace's shoes.
Q1 ____________________________（与首句衔接）
Q2_____________________________(情节推动1)
Q3_______________________________(情节推动2)
Q4_______________________________(与第二段首句衔接)
Q1 ____________________________（与首句衔接）
Q2_____________________________(情节推动1)
Q3_______________________________(情节推动2)
Q4_______________________________(与原文首句回应/主题升华)
4句确定框架
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Part 2 写作思路
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4步定框架
Step 1确定第二段结局情节提示:Ellen 穿上了Grace的鞋子，说明舞蹈比赛顺利进行，但结果具有开放性，可以是Grace赢，也可以是共享一等奖。
Step 2确定第一段结尾情节提示:第二段首句的Tears of gratitude welled up inEllen’s eyes，说明第一段结尾处Grace 最终还是把鞋借给了Ellen。
Step3构思第一段中间情节提示:由第一段首句可知， Grace 犹豫要不要帮助Ellen，之后到第二段首句的Ellen slipped into Grace’s shoes,中间发生了什么 可尝试用思维导图法构思。
Step 4构思第二段中间情节提示:Grace 借了舞蹈鞋给Ellen 之后发生了什么？比赛情况怎么样？最终谁赢？他们的感受是怎么样的？升华主题是什么？可些试用思维导图法构思。
Grace hesitated
If she lent her shoes
If she refused
Grace made a decision
Ellen rushed onto stage
They shared the first-place
Ellen thanks Grace
the meanig of competition and friendships
续写建议
Grace知道她的鞋子非常适合Ellen，但她犹豫要不要伸出一只皮套。Grace犹豫了一下，她的内心挣扎在脸上很明显。如果她把鞋子借给Ellen，她就是在给她最大的对手力量。另一方面，如果Grace拒绝，她可以获得冠军，并代表学校参加下一级别的比赛。这个选择对她影响很大。经过长时间的停顿，Grace做出了决定。她带着温暖的微笑把鞋子递给Ellen。“走出去，全力以赴。”。
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续写建议
当Ellen穿上Grace的鞋时，感激之情溢于言表。带着新的决心，她穿着Grace的鞋子冲上舞台，进行了精彩的表演。比赛很激烈，但Grace的表现同样出色。最后，Grace和Ellen并列第一。在裁判宣布结果并解释了发生的事情后，观众爆发出掌声，庆祝他们非凡的友谊和体育精神。然后Ellen向Grace说：“谢谢你，Grace。你今天教会了我竞争和友谊的真谛。”Grace笑着回答：“Ellen，我们互相提升，这就是我们成为冠军的原因。”。
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Part 3
范文呈现
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范文呈现
Grace knew that her shoes would fit Ellen perfectly, but she was hesitant to lend a helping hand. Grace hesitated, her internal struggle evident on her face. If she lent her shoes to Ellen, she would be lending strength to her biggest rival. On the other hand, if she refused, Grace could secure the championship and represent the school in the next level of competition. The choice weighed heavily on her. After a long pause, Grace made her decision. She handed her shoes to Ellen with a warm smile. Go out there and give it your best.
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Tears of gratitude welled up in Ellen's eyes as she slipped into Grace's shoes. With newfound determination, she rushed onto the slage, wearing Grace's shoes, and delivered a remarkable performance. The competition was fierce, but Grace's performance was equally outstanding. In the end, Grace and Ellen shared the first-place title. After the judges announced the result and explainedwhat happened, the crowd erupted in applause, celebrating their remarkable friendship and sportsmanship. Then Ellen turned to Grace and said, Thank you, Grace. You taught me the true meaning of competition and friendship today. " Grace smiled and replied, Ellen, we lift each other up, and that's what makes us champions.
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