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Have you ever had trouble with your study
Have you ever had trouble in getting on with your
classmates
Persuasive writing :
letter of advice
ways to make friends
Be honest
...
Brainstorm
Be friendly to others
listen to others patiently
Take part in more activities
Learn to share
suggestions reasons
2. 2.
3. 3.
4. 4.
5. 5.
1. to ask people their likes and
dislikes
to join in discussions and show
interest in other people’s ideas
to learn to smile at people
to say something nice about your
classmates
to share things you enjoy with
your classmates
1.to find classmates with the same
interests
to get to know different people and
let them see you are friendly
to let people know you are nice
and easy to talk
People like to make friends with
the one who is kind to them
to help your friend know you
better
Make a list of suggestions
and give your reasons .
Work in group
1. I advise you to …
2. You’d better …
3. It would be a good idea if …
4. If I were you, I would…
5. You are supposed to…
6. Why not …
7. In my opinion, the most suitable
way for you is to ….
8. It is very important for you to ….
Useful sentence patterns
I advise you to ask people their likes and dislikes . By doing this you can find classmates with the same interests.
How to give advice
1. I advise you to …
2. You’d better …
3. It would be a good idea if …
4. If I were you, I would…
5. You are supposed to…
6. Why not …
7. In my opinion, the most suitable
way for you is to ….
8. It is very important for you to ….
I advise you to ask people their likes and dislikes . By doing this you can find classmates with the same interests.
suggestions
1.to learn to smile at people.
2. to share things you enjoy with
your classmates .
3.to join in discussions and show
interest in others’ ideas
1.to let people know you are nice
and easy to talk.
2.to help your friend know you
better
3.to get to know different people and let them see you are friendly .
reasons
You’d better learn to smile at people. Then you’ll let people know you are nice.
2. It would be a good idea if you share things you enjoy with your classmates. That way you’ll let them know you better.
重庆市綦江中学高一年级13班学生因不适应新的学校生活最近感觉非常孤独，他不擅长与同学交流，而且在交朋友方面遇到了困难特向你求助。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。首尾段已给出。
内容要点：
1、对该同学存在的问题提出建议并给出理由
注意：
1. 词数70左右
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
writing
writing
Knowing that you have trouble in making friends, I’m writing to give you some suggestions .Here are some tips.
First, why not … If you do this, … Secondly , you should/can … Then/That way, you will .... Finally , it would be a good idea if... By doing this, you will …
I hope you find these ideas practical.
items
Structure (结构)
Language
body (正文)
(suggestions & reasons)
good words & expressions
sentence (祈使句, 条件句, 倒装句...)
transitions (连接词)
neat, beautiful… (整洁美观…..)
Hand-
Writing
Very
good
Good
Ok
Assessments （评价）
1. swap your composition with your partner.
2. Make an assessment. （进行评价 ）
Shining places (出彩处): “____________”
Imperfect places (不足之处): “~~~~~~~~~ ”
Missing places (所缺之处) : “ ∧ ”
Assessment
Knowing that you have trouble in making friends, I’m writing to give you some suggestions .Here are some tips.
First, why not go and talk to people standing on their own I agree that this is difficult but that person may be lonely too. If you do this I’m sure you’ll soon have a new friend . Second , you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes . That way you will soon find people whom you have something in common with. Finally , you should try to join in a discussion . Only by doing this will you let people know how friendly you are.
I hope you find these ideas practical.
Sample writing
Sample writing
Structure
Knowing that you have trouble in making friends, I’m writing to give you some suggestions .Here are some tips.
First, why not go and talk to people standing on their own I agree that this is difficult but that person may be lonely too. If you do this, I’m sure you’ll soon have a new friend . Second , you’d better begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes . That way you’ll find people whom you have sth. in common with. Finally , it’s a good idea to try to join in a discussion . Only by doing this will you let people know how friendly you are.
I hope you find these ideas useful.
Beginning:
Ending
Body
Suggestions & Reasons
(建议&理由)
Wishes(祝愿)
Writing purpose
(写作目的)
Knowing that you have trouble in… , I’m writing to share with you some advice. Here are my suggestions.
why not +V(原)… (建议1) . If you do this, …原因1 . You’d better +V(原)… (建议2). That way you will, …原因2 . It’s a good idea to +V(原)… (建议3). Only by doing this, …原因3 .
I hope you find these ideas useful.
First, why not go and talk to people standing on their own I agree that this is difficult but that person may be lonely too. If you do this I’m sure you’ll soon have a new friend . Second , you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes . That way you will soon find people whom you have something in common with. Finally , you should try to join in a discussion . Only by doing this will you let people know how friendly you are.
Sample writing
Language
A. v-ing
B. transitions
连接词
C. advanced
expressions
高级词汇
D. attributive
clause 定语从句
E. conditional
sentence 条件句
F. inverted
sentence 倒装句
Sample writing
First, why not go and talk to people standing on their own I agree that this is difficult but that person may be lonely too. If you do this I’m sure you’ll soon have a new friend . Second , you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes . That way you will soon find people whom you have something in common with. Finally , you should try to join in a discussion . Only by doing this will you let people know how friendly you are.
Sample writing
Language
A. v-ing
B. transitions
连接词
C. advanced
expressions
高级词汇
D. attributive
clause 定语从句
E. conditional
sentence 条件句
F. inverted
sentence 倒装句
Sample writing
B
C
A
First, why not go and talk to people standing on their own I agree that this is difficult but that person may be lonely too. If you do this I’m sure you’ll soon have a new friend . Second , you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes . That way you will soon find people whom you have something in common with. Finally , you should try to join in a discussion . Only by doing this will you let people know how friendly you are.
Sample writing
Language
A. v-ing
B. transitions
连接词
C. advanced
expressions
高级词汇
D. attributive
clause 定语从句
E. conditional
sentence 条件句
F. inverted
sentence 倒装句
Sample writing
B
C
A
D
E
F
Polish your composition.
Self-improvement
Appreciation in group
Share your compositions in groups and choose the best one in your group for us to appreciate together.
Further polish your composition after
class.
2. Try to write a letter of advice to your friend in trouble.
Homework
Sometimes life may give us trouble, but we can just take them as a friend who helps
us become stronger and better.
Thank you !
Thank you !
Knowing that you have trouble in making friends, I’m writing to give you some suggestions .Here are some tips.
First, why not go and talk to people standing on their own I agree that this is difficult but that person may be lonely too. If you do this, I’m sure you’ll soon have a new friend . Second , you’d better begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes . That way you’ll find people whom you have sth. in common with. Finally , it’s a good idea to try to join in a discussion . Only by doing this will you let people know how friendly you are.
I hope you find these ideas useful.
Sample writing
Structure
A. body (主体)
B. beginning(开头)
C. suggestions(建议)
D. ending (结尾)
E. reasons (理由)
F. Writing purpose
(写作目的)
G. wishes(祝愿)
C
A
B
D
E
F
G
Knowing that you have trouble in… , I’m writing to share with you some advice. Here are my suggestions.
why not +V(原)… (建议1) . If you do this, …原因1 . you’d better +V(原)… (建议2). That way you will, …原因2 . it’s a good idea to +V(原)… (建议3). Only by doing this, …原因3 .
I hope you find these ideas useful.
1. I advise you to …
2. You’d better …
3. It would be a good idea if …
4. If I were you, I would…
5. You are supposed to…
6. Why not …
7. In my opinion, the most suitable
way for you is to ….
8. It is very important for you to ….
suggestions
1.to learn to smile at people.
2. to share things you enjoy with
your classmates .
3.to join in discussions and show
interest in others’ ideas
1.to let people know you are nice
and easy to talk.
2.to help your friend know you
better
3.to get to know different people
and let them see you are friendly .
reasons
I advice you to listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class. If you do this,you can master your lessons as soon as possible.
It is a good idea to develop the habit of keeping a diary. It helps improve your written English and review the words and expressions that you have learnt.
Why not try to speak with your classmates in English out of class. In this way you’ll improve your listening and spoken English quickly.
___ an old saying goes where there is a will, there is a way. _____you stick to the
good learning habits _____you greatly improve your English learning.
As
Only if
will
Listening to the teacher carefully and ______notes in class is ____ important
that you can ….
taking
so
It is a good idea to develop the habit of keeping a diary,_____ helps improve ...
which
Try to communicate with your classmates in English out of class. _____in this
way ______ you improve ….
Only
will
To begin with, listening to the teacher carefully and taking notes in class is so important that you can master your lessons as soon as you can. Secondly, as is known to all, vocabulary is of great importance. You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud. What’s more, try to communicate with your classmates in English out of class. Only in this way can you improve your listening and spoken English quickly. Last but not least, it is a good idea to develop the habit of keeping a diary, which helps improve your written English and helps you review the words and expressions that you have learnt. In addition , as an old saying goes where there is a will, there is a way. Only if you stick to the good learning habits will you greatly improve your English learning.
Firstly, I advice you to listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class. If you do this,you can master your lessons as soon as possible. Secondly, It would be a good idea if you spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud. That’s because vocabulary is important. Thirdly, why not try to speak with your classmates in English out of class. In this way you’ll improve your listening and spoken English quickly.
Polish
Imitate
excellent words and phrases
(词汇短语的选择灵活新颖)
a variety of sentence patterns
(句型结构运用高级多变）
1
2
COMPARISON
Write a short passage about 60 words.
The beginning is given; try to use the following words:
Task Writing
After I helped Mandela blow up some buildings, ...
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
difficult; guidance; help; grateful
Content Standard Evaluation( )
structure Is the letter divided into parts ( )
Dose each paragraph have a topic ( )
content Are all the details stated ( )
Is everything to the point(切题) ( )
language Dose the writer use any linking words ( )
Are there few spelling mistakes ( )
Is there any advanced vocabulary(高级词汇)？( )
Are there any good sentence patterns (句式)？( )
Evaluation Form
Please give a star to each item if you meet the requirement in the form(8 stars in total).
Dear Wang Mei,
Knowing that you have trouble in learning English, I’m writing to share with you some advice on how to learn English. Here are my suggestions.
Firstly, I advise you to listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class. If you do this,you can master your lessons as soon as possible. Secondly, It would be a good idea if you spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud. That’s because vocabulary is important. Thirdly, why not try to speak with your classmates in English out of class. In this way you’ll improve your listening and spoken English quickly.
I do hope you will find these suggestions helpful .
Theme:
A letter of advice on how
to learn English
structure:
Ending:
wishes
Body:
advice＆reasons
Beginning:
purpose
Firstly, I advise you to +V(原形)… (建议1) . If you do this, you can…. (原因1).Secondly, it would be a good idea if you +V(原形) …(建议2).That’s because …(原因2). Thirdly, why not +V(原形) … (建议3). In this way, … (原因3) .
Knowing that you have trouble in___________, I’m writing to share with you some advice on _____________. Here are my suggestions.
I do hope you will find these suggestions helpful.
Dear Wang Mei,
Yours,
Dear Wang Mei,
Knowing that you have trouble in learning English, I’m writing to share with you some advice on how to learn English. Here are my suggestions.
Firstly, I advise you to listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class. If you do this,you can master your lessons as soon as possible. Secondly, It would be a good idea if you spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud. That’s because vocabulary is important. Thirdly, why not try to speak with your classmates in English out of class. In this way you’ll improve your listening and spoken English quickly.
I do hope you will find these suggestions helpful .
Theme:
A letter of advice on how
to learn English
structure:
Ending:
wishes
Body:
advice＆reasons
Beginning:
purpose
Dear XXX
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I hope that my suggestions are of help to you, and please feel free to contact me for more questions.
Yours,
XXX
You have asked for my advice on how to make friends with the new classmates and I will try to make some suggestions.
your advice
Write a draft(草稿)
1.Knowing that you have trouble in …, I’m writing to share with you
some advice on…
2.I am sorry to hear that you have trouble in ….. Here are some tips to
help you.
3.You have asked for my advice about… and I’ll try to give you some
suggestions.
4. Regarding that you have trouble in …., I’m writing to give you some
advice on …
Knowing that you have trouble in learning English, I’m writing to share with you some advice on how to learn English. Here are my suggestions.
Useful sentence patterns
Knowing that you have trouble in____________, I’m writing to share with you some advice on _____________. Here are my suggestions.
Beginning:
purpose
I do hope you will find these suggestions helpful .
Useful sentence patterns
1.I hope you will find these proposals/ suggestions practical/ useful/ helpful.
2. I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration .
3. I hope that my suggestions are of help to you, and please feel free to contact
me for more questions.
4. I am looking forwards to your consideration about my proposals / suggestions.
I will be more than happy to see improvements later.
5. If you could take what I suggest seriously, I would appreciate it very much.
Ending:
wishes
Firstly, I advise you to listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class. If you do this,you can master your lessons as soon as possible. Secondly, It would be a good idea if you spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud. That’s because vocabulary is important. Thirdly, why not try to speak with your classmates in English out of class. In this way you’ll improve your listening and spoken English quickly.
1. I advise you to …
2. you’d better …
3. it would be a good idea if …
4. if I were you, I would…
5. you are supposed to…
why not +V(原) … (建议3) .
In this way, …原因3 .
I advise you to +V(原)… (建议1) .
If you do this, you can…. (原因1)
6. why not …
7. in my opinion, the most suitable way for
you is to ….
8. it is very important for you to ….
Firstly,
Secondly,
it would be a good idea if you
+V(原) … (建议2). That’s because … (原因2) .
Useful sentence patterns
Thirdly,
Body:
advice＆reasons
I advise you to +V(原)… (建议1) .
1)first ;to begin with / to start with; second ; next ; what’s more/
in addition ; finally ;last but not least
2)on one hand , on the other hand ; for one thing ,for another
3)however, but ; therefore ; as a result ,
4)in a word ; to sum up; in other words
Useful conjunction words
Key words:
TROUBLE
Guiding questions:
Do you have any trouble with your new school life What kind of trouble are you in
When you are in trouble , whom will you turn to for help (parents, close friends , classmates or teachers)
3. How do they help you get out of
trouble
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