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Eva spent the first week of high school trying to keep her head above water. One of the major headaches for her was finding her way in the huge school building. It was a six-story building. On each floor, hallways stretched in four directions, leading to classrooms, laboratories, and teachers’ offices. Somewhere in the building, there was also a library, a cafeteria, and a gym.
Having a poor sense of direction, Eva found it impossible to get around in such a huge building. All the different hallways and rooms were too much to think about, let alone commit to memory. She decided that she would memorize where her classes were and then pretend that the rest of the place didn't exist.
In her first P.E. class, Eva was shocked when Coach Pitt announced that everyone had to run one mile around the track outside. She searched the faces of her classmates for signs of panic. There was nothing she feared more than having to run a whole mile. To Eva, “a mile” was used to describe long distances. It was ten miles from her home to her grandfather’s, and that always seemed like a long way, even in a car!
When Coach Pitt blew his whistle (睛子). Eva figured she would be left in the dust. However, while some of her classmates edged ahead, others actually fell behind. “It’s just the beginning.” she thought. “I’ll come in last for sure.”
Soon Eva began to breathe hard, with her heart pounding and legs shaking. Feeling desperate, Eva started using a mind trick on herself. She stopped thinking about the word “mile.” Instead, she focused on reaching the shadow cast on the track by an oak tree up ahead. Then she concentrated on jogging to the spot where the track curved (拐弯). After that, she tried to see if she could complete her first lap. One lap turned into two, then three, then four.
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When Coach Pitt said “Nice work!” to her at the finish line, Eva was surprised._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Eva decided to use the same trick to deal with the school building._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
注意：
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好；
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When Coach Pitt said “Nice work!” to her at the finish line, Eva was surprised. She never thought that a mile would go by so fast and that she would accomplish running one mile. “Huh,” she thought, “I guess this trick really worked! If I make little goals and just focus on what is right in front of me, finishing these incremental goals can add up to overcoming one big challenge.”
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Eva decided to use the same trick to deal with the school building. She decided to focus on familiarizing herself with the school building one floor at a time, starting from the first floor. She broke each floor down to 4 quadrants and set out to explore each quadrant and all its rooms and hallways. In less than two weeks, Eva knows the building like the back of her hand. Now, she navigates around her school building confidently, armed not just with the knowledge to navigate the school building but also a new little trick to overcome any challenge that may come her way.
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When Coach Pitt said “Nice work!” to her at the finish line, Eva was surprised. Such an encouraging acknowledgement extinguished and replaced her initial anticipation of criticism. She not only felt accomplished by these two simple words but also realized that she had overcome a physically daunting task that she found impossible. This moment marked a turning point in her life where she learned the importance and technique of perseverance. Furthermore, this life-changing instance was also where she discovered that she no longer needed to wish away all her troubles in life as long as she could exercise the technique of mind over matter.
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Eva decided to use the same trick to deal with the school building. Rather than brainwashing herself with self-defeating comments, she focused on positive feedback from her every attempt at trying out a new path. Instead of succumbing to negative thoughts, she paid attention to different memorable features within the campus grounds so she could form a visual mental map. Similar to the old saying that practice makes perfect, she told herself that practice makes proficient!
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When Coach Pitt said “Nice work!” to her at the finish line, Eva was surprised. She did not expect herself to be able to run for a full mile, not to mention that she did not finish in the last place, as many of her classmates were still behind her. She felt very accomplished and began to reflect what helped her to finish this run. “It is the mind trick! This mind trick really works!” she thought to herself “Perhaps I should apply this mind trick to other challenges, and maybe I can conquer them as well.”
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Eva decided to use the same trick to deal with the school building. She stopped thinking about how big the school is and her poor sense of direction, and instead, she kept on reminding herself to not feel stupid even when she got lost and reward herself for every new location and route she became familiar with. Sooner than she expected, she knew the routes to all the rooms and facilities in the building, and the fear that she might get lost in the building never appeared again.
哲理式结尾
哲理性结尾往往总结出文章中心思想，并用客观语言表述，它能使作文具有一定的思想含量，能给读者送去一份宝贵的精神财富。它可以通过以小见大、从物到人、由事及理、从点到面、由一及众等方式升华文章主题。
哲理性结尾佳句欣赏：
1. Shy and silent as Abe was, he gave his mum a big hug and whispered, “I love you!” Love may be silent, but it was always there.
2. I believe God is glad to help someone who wants to help himself.
3. Life is full of dilemmas and conflicts, but we should smile and never give up, just like Kelly.
4. She returned the seven dollars and I was sure there was something glorious shining in her eyes. I got to know it is the grace of forgiveness.
5. Many years has gone by, but whenever I look back to that day, I am still grateful for the lesson in forgiveness that she taught me.
6. The thankful words I heard from the boy and the girl after they recovered from the hospital made one thing strike my 19-year-old mind—rose given, fragrance in hand!
以景结情
以景结情是诗歌绝句的一种技巧，也是借景抒情的方式之一，可以使读者在景物描写中，驰骋想象，体味诗的意境，产生韵味无穷的艺术效果。在记叙文读后续写中，使用以景结情，同样能以景作结，寓情于景，达到不言情而情无限、言有尽而意无穷的效果。
以景结情式结尾佳句欣赏：
1. In the heavy snow, passion and love burnt as they hugged and smiled.
2. No matter how cold the winter was, all that they could feel now was the surpassing warmth.
3. Everything went smoothly and quietly, so in the dark night, a boy was reading while his mother was eating. Though it was snowing heavily outside, it just couldn’t stop the warmth filling up the whole room.
4. I believe in full blossom, Grandma’s sitting peacefully in the sun, every flower carrying her previous hope, with Grandpa beside her giggling like a child.
5. Being surprised and overjoyed a great deal, Jane held him tightly and told him how much she loved him. At the moment, the mountain was filled with love.
6. The wind murmured in the trees and the sunlight flooded in through the window, warming the whole room, as if the freezing ice was all melted.
7. The crow still fluttered around the window, as the sun melted toward horizon, watching the son hugging sweetly with his dad against the awesome sky.
8. A pair of slim hands giving him a hug, he rested in his father’s warm embrace. Outside, the crow flew away, and the rays of the setting sun shone slantwise (倾斜地) through the trees onto the window.
自然结尾
自然结尾是顺着文中所叙之事的自然发展，以它的必然结果作结尾，没有套话，没有空话，简单、自然，可使文章的结构显得十分完整。作为读后续写的文章，常常不一定含有某种深刻的道理，这时只要将故事补充完整就足够，因此自然结尾法是续写故事中最常见的结尾方式。
自然性结尾式佳句欣赏：
1. Emma’s eyes began to fill with excitement, like the light in the breaking dawn, with strange radiations of joy. She hugged and kissed her mum again and again, whispering to her, “I love you.”
2. Laughing and smiling, Emma rushed out, shouting, “What are we waiting for ”
3. Satisfied, Mom nodded at Emma, with a joy bubbling from her heart.
4. The smile bubbled from heart showed Mum’s satisfaction.
5. Satisfied, Emma ate the cake, not only because of the surprise, but also for the pride bubbling from the bottom of her heart.
6. Heart beating (racing/pounding) wildly, Emma rushed to her mum and hugged her tightly.
7. Many years later, Abe still held this book. He couldn’t forget how his stepmother loved him.
8. With tears dropping from his eyes, he ran to his mum’s warm hug, smiled and said gently, “Mum, thank you.”
9. With my trembling hands, I opened the envelope, inside which I found seven dollars and a note. On the note there were the words, “It’s for your honesty.”
10. At that moment, with tears, I hugged her tightly, saying “thank you” for her forgiveness.
11. Haunted by a strong sense of horror, I heard Mom screaming, “I forgot the tent!”
助人结尾句
Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future.
只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。
感动感悟结尾句
Whether rich or poor, we should be happy to do something for society. This is because giving is the source of happiness.
无论贫富，我们都应该为社会做点什么。这是因为给予是幸福的源泉。
脱险结尾句
That unforgettable experience was carved into my heart and nothing would be able to erase it. It turns out that there's always a way out of any trouble as long as we never give up our hope.
那段难忘的经历刻在我的心里，没有什么能够抹去它。事实证明，只要我们不放弃希望就总有办法摆脱困境
成长改变结尾句
1.学习知识促“改变’
It’s never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.
学习永远为时不晚。每人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。
2.发挥天赋促“改变”
Actually, each of us possesses a unique talent that we are born with. As long as we are good at discovering it and developing it to the fullest, and also make efforts, we can create miracles in the end.
事实上,我们每个人都拥有与生俱来的与众不同的天赋，只要我们善于发现它并将其发挥到极致,加上努力,最终你就一定能创造奇迹 。
3.追逐梦想促“改变”
It’s never too late to pursue your dream. As long as you seize every opportunity and take full advantage of it, and also make every effort, you are sure to realize your dreams.
追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住并充分利用机会，加上努力，你就一定会实现梦想。
4.克服困难促“改变”
The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and hardships. We should be brave to face them. As long as we don't give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goal finally.
通往成功的路不会平坦，充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，我们最终会实现我们的目标。
5.战胜恐惧促“改变”
Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear,build your confidence and reach your goal.
战胜恐惧、建立自信和实现目标，需要决心和乐观。
6.战胜自卑促“改变”
I smiled as I eventually realized the real source of confidence. Now, I am proud of what I look like, because I have come to realize that it is your personality that decides who you really are.
我笑了，因为我最终意识到了自信的真正来源。现在，我为我的样子感到骄傲,因为我已经意识到，决定你真正是谁的是你的个性...
7.战胜消极促“改变”
Attitude is more important than facts for us. We cannot change our past; we cannot change the fact. However, the only thing we can do is hold a positive attitude.
对我们来说，态度比事实更重要。我们不能改变我们的过去，我们不能改变事实。然而，我们唯一能做的就是保持积极的态度。

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