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期末专练之单元话题满分范文必背25篇
1．（2023上·广东深圳·九年级深圳第三高中校考期中）第19届杭州亚运会中，20位深圳健儿参赛，拿到了10金5银4铜的好成绩。假如你是小记者李华，采访了乒乓球团体赛冠军林高远，请根据你的采访写一篇报道。内容包括：
1．1995年，林高远出生于广东省深圳市一个普通家庭。
2．4岁时，爱上乒乓球运动。5岁时，正式乒乓球训练。
3．从2009年至今，在国际赛事中拿下超过20个冠军。
4．给大家的建议：保持好心态，永不言弃。
5．补充2点自己对林高远的评价。
参考词汇：普通的ordinary 银牌silver medal 铜牌bronze medal
要求：1．要点齐全，条理清楚，语句通顺，衔接连贯。
2．文中不得出现真实校名、姓名等信息。
3．短文不少于80词。
The 19th Asian Games Hangzhou 2022 turned out to be a great success. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】范文：
The 19th Asian Games Hangzhou 2022 turned out to be a great success. We have the pleasure of interviewing Lin Gaoyuan, the champion of the table tennis team competition. He was born in an ordinary family in Shenzhen, Guangdong Province in 1995. At the age of 4, he fell in love with table tennis. Then when he was 5 years old, he began his formal table tennis training. Since 2009, he has won more than 20 international titles, which makes us be proud of him.
He thinks whatever difficulties we meet, we should keep a good attitude and never give up.
I think he is very modest and honest. He never shows off what he has achieved. Instead, he sticks to practicing every day.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇新闻报道，属于材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍林高远的个人信息；
第二步，阐述林高远的建议；
第三步，阐述自己对其的评价；
[亮点词汇]
①fall in love with爱上
②be proud of骄傲
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①Since 2009, he has won more than 20 international titles, which makes us be proud of him（定语从句）
②He never shows off what he has achieved. （宾语从句）
2．（2023上·广东深圳·九年级深圳实验学校校考期中）步入初三，学生与家长们都倍感压力，在学习与生活方面都容易发生争吵。假设你是李华，你的好朋友Jack就有这方面的烦恼，他给你写信说他跟父母关系不好，并向你寻求帮助。请你根据以下要点给Jack回信，给他一些关于如何与父母沟通的建议。
一、分析可能出现问题的诱因 1.彼此都很忙碌，没有沟通 2.父母制定很多规矩 3.请自行发挥一点
二、提出与各诱因相对应的解决措施 1.在父母方便的时候和他们谈谈 2.请自行发挥至少一点
要求：100 词左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数内，可适当增加细节。
Dear Jack,
Don’t worry! It is common for teenagers to have trouble getting on well with their parents.
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【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
Don’t worry! It is common for teenagers to have trouble getting on well with their parents. The reason for these problems may be that you are both busy and not communicating with each other. It may also be because parents set many rules. Finally, it may be a generation gap caused by age issues.
I suggest you first talk to your parents at their convenience. Secondly, if the rules set by your parents are unreasonable, you should also share your thoughts. Finally, everything has two sides, and it is correct for everyone to have different opinions. As long as it is right, we should accept it seriously.
I hope my suggestions are helpful to you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容给Jack回信，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，分析可能出现问题的诱因；
第二步，提出与各诱因相对应的解决措施；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with each other相互交流
②a generation gap代沟
③talk to与……交谈
④be helpful to对……有帮助
[高分句型]
①Secondly, if the rules set by your parents are unreasonable, you should also share your thoughts.（条件状语从句）
②I hope my suggestions are helpful to you.（宾语从句）
3．（2023上·广东广州·九年级广州市南武中学校考期末）许多人喜欢在闲暇时观看有趣的电视节目来放松自己。假设你是李华，请根据以下提示，介绍自己喜欢的一个电视节目。
节目名称 《动物世界》
喜欢该节目的原因 1. 释放压力； 2. 开阔视野（broaden one’s horizons），可以了解更多关于动物的知识； 3.……（请补充至少1个原因）
注意：1. 词数：80词左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
A lot of people like watching interesting TV programmes to relax when they have spare time.
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【答案】 A lot of people like watching interesting TV programmes to relax when they have spare time. There are many different kinds of TV programmes every day. Some of them are cooking shows, and some of them are soap operas. My favourite programme is called Animal World.
Firstly, it is a good way for me to relax myself, especially after long hours of studying. Secondly, with this amazing TV programme, I can see various living things from different places. Finally, it not only broadens our horizons, but also give us a lot of useful knowledge about animals and plants.
For these reasons, Animal World is an interesting and valuable TV programme. This show opens the door to a brand-new world that I don’t know. I really enjoy watching it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意不要遗漏要点，写作过程中要适当地进行补充，注意上下文的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的电视节目是什么；
第二步，具体阐述喜欢该节目的原因；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①favourite最喜欢的
②especially尤其，特别
③knowledge知识
④brand-new崭新的
[高分句型]
①Finally, it not only broadens our horizons, but also give us a lot of useful knowledge about animals and plants.(not only…but also…)
②This show opens the door to a brand-new world that I don’t know.(that引导的定语从句)
4．（2022上·广东广州·九年级校考期末）最近，初三学生 Tom 写信给学校的心理咨询老师，说他和父母关系相处得不够融洽，觉得父母不理解自己而产生消极情绪，这些在一定程度上对健康和学习都产生了影响。假如你是学校的心理咨询老师 Anna，请根据以下提示，给他提些建议。
1. 把和父母意见不一致的内容列个清单，寻找最佳解决办法。
2. 帮做家务，让父母开心。
3. 彼此倾听交流，不要争吵。
4. 请你补充……
注意：
1. 词数：80 左右(文章的开头已给出，不计入词数)；
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to learn that you can’t get on well with your parents. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Anna
【答案】例文：
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to learn that you can’t get on well with your parents. I suggest you make a list of the contents that are inconsistent with your parents’ opinions and find the best solution.
You should try your best to help your parents do housework and make them happy. You should also listen to each other and not quarrel. If you think what your parents said is wrong, please listen carefully to their ideas and then express your ideas.
Everything your parents do is for you, so don’t make them sad.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Anna
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要就亲子关系提出建议；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍了建议内容，注意不要遗漏要点；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①make a list of列清单
②solution解决方案
③quarrel吵架
[高分句型]
①I suggest you make a list of the contents that are inconsistent with your parents’ opinions and find the best solution. (宾语从句；定语从句)
②If you think what your parents said is wrong, please listen carefully to their ideas and then express your ideas. (if引导的条件状语从句)
5．（2022上·广东广州·九年级校考期末）高尔基说过：“书籍是人类进步的阶梯。”为提高学生阅读兴趣，学校英语社将组织一场读书分享会，请您根据以下信息，用英文写一篇读书心得与同学分享，心得包括以下内容：
读书心得 1. 读书的好处 a. 增长知识，开阔视野 b. 独立思考 c. ……
2. 介绍一本喜欢的书 a. 书名、作者 b. 内容简介 c. 喜欢的原因
注意：1. 词数：不少于80字；
2. 不得透露班级姓名等个人信息。
Hello, everyone. The great writer Gorky once said, “Books are the ladder of human progress.” ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. The great writer Gorky once said, “Books are the ladder of human progress.” I think reading books is good for us. Reading is wonderful. We can get knowledge by reading. Reading can open our minds. Reading can make us think independently. It also can improve memory. Reading makes us confident and happy.
Of the books I have read, I like Journey to the West best. Its author is Wu Chengen. The Monkey King or Sun Wukong is the main character in the traditional Chinese book Journey to the West. I am interested in reading the book because the clever Monkey King keeps fighting to help the weak and never gives up.
Read good books. A book that suits you is a better choice. You should read in a right way. Try to think about more while reading.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：要点内容已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍读书的好处；
第二步，介绍自己喜欢的一本书，包括书名、作者、内容简介及喜欢的原因；
第三步，呼吁大家读好书。
[亮点词汇]
① be good for对……有好处
② be interested in对……感兴趣
③ give up放弃
[高分句型]
① I am interested in reading the book because the clever Monkey King keeps fighting to help the weak and never gives up.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② A book that suits you is a better choice.（that引导的定语从句）
6．（2022上·广东广州·九年级校考期末）三年的初中生活即将结束，我们在学校度过了美好的三年，也成长了不少。新学期初一新生即将到来，请你按照下列表格的要点，写一篇短文向校报投稿，给新生们提出关于如何适应初中的学习生活建议。
方面 身 体 学 习 心 理
建议 均衡饮食 多做运动 ？请你补充 认真听课 按时完成作业 ？请你补充 学会放松 培养兴趣 ？请你补充
注意：
1.文章必须包含表格中的全部要点，并自行补充其他的一个方面。
2.字数：100 词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Welcome to our school! You must be very excited about the new school life here. However, how to lead a meaningful life in the coming three years Here I’d love to ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Welcome to our school! You must be very excited about the new school life here. However, how to lead a meaningful life in the coming three years Here I’d love to give some suggestions about how to adapt to middle school life.
Firstly, to keep physically healthy, you’d better have a balanced diet, do lots of exercise and have enough sleep every day. Secondly, you should listen carefully to teachers and finish your homework on time. Also, whenever you have any problem in your study, you can ask your teachers for help. Thirdly, as for mental health, you must learn to relax and take up some hobbies. What’s more, you should always share your problems with your parents, teachers or friends. They will always be there to help you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作内容提示已给出，考生要注意不要遗漏内容提示中的信息，并且要在内容提示的基础上适当发挥，文章内容更加丰满。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据已给出开头，引出下文；
第二步，分别介绍在身体、学习、心理方面的具体建议。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②had better do sth.最好做某事
③ask sb. for help向某人求助
④what’s more而且
[高分句型]
①Firstly, to keep physically healthy, you’d better have a balanced diet, do lots of exercise and have enough sleep every day.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②Also, whenever you have any problem in your study, you can ask your teachers for help.（whenever引导的让步状语从句）
7．（2023上·广东广州·九年级统考期末）你是英语校报编辑李华，校报收到初三学生Angela的来信，她提出了最近所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，说明Angela的问题，提出你的建议及理由。
Angela’s problems Your advice and reasons
problems with parents 1. listen and communicate — know each other better
2. (请补充)
study stress 1. live a healthy life — take care of your body
2. (请补充)
注意：
1. 内容包括表格中的所有内容，可适当发挥；
2. 词数：80词左右（短文的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Angela,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble during the online course. In your letter you said that __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Angela,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble during the online course. In your letter you said that you have problems with parents and much study stress. Here are some helpful advice for you.
As for the problems with your parents, you should try to listen to and communicate with them. In this way you can know each other better. You also can take a walk with them or help them with housework, which may give you more chances to talk with and understand each other.
What’s more, as for your study, don’t put too much stress on yourself. You should live a healthy life. Take care of your body, which is the most important thing to you. Have a healthy diet and exercise every day. In your free time, you can listen to some relaxing music.
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇书信作文，为应用文；
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点表格中已经给出，包括两个方面，每个方面至少两点，需要补充；表格中已给出的英文是短语，注意要表达成句子。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单描述对方的问题；
第二步，给出对于“与父母之间问题”的建议；
第三步，给出对于“学习压力大”的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②listen to some relaxing music听一些令人放松的音乐
③have a healthy diet有健康的饮食
④understand each other互相理解
[高分句型]
You also can take a walk with them or help them with housework, which may give you more chances to talk with and understand each other.（定语从句）
8．（2022上·广东广州·九年级广州四十七中校考期末）假如你的学校正在举办“好书伴我成长”的活动。请根据以下内容提示，以“Growing up with good books”为题，用英语写一封倡议书， 向全校同学发出读书的倡议。
读书的益处 获取知识，增长见识，使人快乐
存在的现象 听音乐、看电视、上网，占用了大部分业务时间
发出倡议 多读书，读经典好书；弘扬中国传统文化让读书成为生活得一部分
注意：
1、词数不少于80词，开头不计入总词数。
2、可适当发挥，但需注意语言通顺、流畅、准确。
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【答案】例文
Growing up with good books
My dear friends,
Reading is very important, we can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn, and the brighter our future will become.
However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games. It takes much of their spare time. I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.
Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍读书的益处；
第二步，介绍存在的现象；
第三步，发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also…不但……而且……
②spend much time in doing sth.花很多时间做某事。
③would like to do sth.想做某事。
④start doing sth.开始做某事
[高分句型]
①The more we read, the more we will learn, and the brighter our future will become.（the+比较级，the+比较级：越……就越……）
②I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.（that引导的宾语从句；so that引导的目的状语从句）
9．（2022上·广东广州·九年级统考期末）寒假即将到来，为帮助同学们愉快度过假期，丰富假期家庭生活，学校英文报以“Family activities during the winter holiday”为题，向同学们征稿。请根据以下内容图示写一篇短文，推荐自己喜爱的家庭活动，向校报投稿。
Family activities
an educational activity a relaxing activity
1. What are the two activities 2. What can family members do in each activity 3. What can family members get from each activity
注意：1. 词数80-120个左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数，请根据要点适当发挥）
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Family activities during the winter holiday
In order to spend a happy winter holiday, I
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【答案】例文
Family activities during the winter holiday
In order to spend a happy winter holiday, I plan two great activities for my family. It is quite educational and meaningful for the whole family to do some voluntary work during winter holiday. We are going to volunteer at Guangzhou Museum as museum guides. In this way, we can not only help visitors better understand Guangzhou but also improve our social skills. What’s more, I also plan to have some fun with my parents and mountain climbing is our top choice. We will take a trip to Baiyun Mountain and have a picnic. The whole family can do some exercise together and enjoy the fresh air. Wonderful, isn’t it
I can’t wait for this coming holiday and I hope my parents will enjoy spending this meaningful and relaxing holiday with me!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是话题作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中“提示信息”的几个要点均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我计划为我家做两项活动”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的几个要点——两项活动名称、家庭成员做的事、收获等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“我希望我的父母将和我一起度过这个有意义又放松的假期”的美好。
[亮点词汇]
①In order to 为了
②have a picnic去野餐
③ do some exercise做一些锻炼
[高分句型]
① In this way, we can not only help visitors better understand Guangzhou but also improve our social skills. (not only...but also的用法）
② I hope my parents will enjoy spending this meaningful and relaxing holiday with me! (宾语从句)
10．（2023上·广东广州·九年级统考期末）为帮助七年级学生尽快适应初中生活，学校将举行“给七年级同学的一封信”的英语征文活动。假如你是李华，请根据以下内容提示写一篇短文投稿， 要求包含以下内容并适当发挥。
学习习惯 认真听课，做好笔记；
生活方式 健康饮食，请你补充；
人际关系 友好相处，请你补充；
你的寄语 （请补充至少2点）
注意：1. 词数80个左右（文章开头已给出, 不计入词数）；
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。
Dear fellow schoolmates,
Are you used to living in the junior high school Here are some personal suggestions to share with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】范文：
Dear fellow schoolmates,
Are you used to living in the junior high school Here are some personal suggestions to share with you. First, I suggest you form a good habit of studying. Listen to teachers carefully in class and take notes in time. When you have difficulty, please ask your classmates or teachers for help. Second, good life style is important. You need to get up early and go to bed early to get enough sleep. Besides, you’d better have a balanced diet and avoid eating junk food. Third, as we all know, a good relationship can make us happy and comfortable. Be friendly to others and help those who are in trouble. We should share sorrow and happiness with others. I hope you can enjoy your school life and have a bright future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出文章的目的；
第二步，从学习习惯、生活方式、人际关系方面提出建议；
第三步，表达美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①take notes in time及时记笔记
②ask sb for help寻求帮助
③share sorrow and happiness同甘共苦
[高分句型]
①When you have difficulty, please ask your classmates or teachers for help. （when引导的时间状语从句）
②Be friendly to others and help those who are in trouble. （定语从句）
11．（2022上·广东广州·九年级统考期末）假如你是知心栏目负责人Aunt Linda，你收到一名学生David的来信诉说他的烦恼，请你根据以下表格内容提示，给出建议。
David’s problems Aunt Linda’s advice
stay up late to complete his homework 不要熬夜，熬夜对身体健康不好，安排好时间做作业；
feel tired during the daytime and fall asleep in class 晚上要有足够的睡眠时间；
doesn’t have his personal time to relax himself 周末适当放松，例如锻炼身体或听音乐等；
Feeling: feel stressed and unhappy 希望：……。
要求：
1.表达清楚，语句通顺；
2.要点必须包括表格信息并适当发挥；
3.词数80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
What you said is common among some middle school students. Here are my suggestions for you.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Please let me know if you need more help.
Yours,
Aunt Linda
【答案】例文
Dear David,
What you said is common among some middle school students. Here are my suggestions for you.
I think you should change the ways of study. Don’t stay up late. Staying up late is bad for your health and will lead to memory loss. You should arrange your time reasonably and finish your homework at school as much as possible. To keep healthy, you should go to bed early. Too much pressure is not good for your health and schoolwork. You should do something to lower your pressure. For example, you can take more exercise. You can listen to music. You should have enough sleep at night.
Hope you can get out of your problems soon.
Please let me know if you need more help.
Yours,
Aunt Linda
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据表格提示有条理的给出对方建议；
第二步，希望对方能尽快解决自己的问题。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up late熬夜
②be bad for对……有害
③keep healthy保持健康
[高分句型]
①Staying up late is bad for your health and will lead to memory loss.（动名词作主语）
②To keep healthy, you should go to bed early. （动词不定式作目的状语）
12．（2022上·广东广州·九年级统考期末）假设你的英语老师布置了关于减轻学生压力有效建议的调查活动，收集同学们的意见。请根据以下表格内容写一篇英语短文，汇报你对三位同学的采访结果。报告中需包含表格中的所有要点，补充一点你的建议并解释原因。
From Bob Tom Rose You
Advice （请补充）
Why keep healthy have a close relationship feel relaxed （请补充）
注意：1.词数：80词左右(短文的开头已给出，不计入词数)；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Recently, we did a survey on how to help students reduce the pressure.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Recently, we did a survey on how to help students reduce the pressure. Some students share their useful advice. First of all, Bob thought it was helpful for us to do some exercise every day, which could help us keep healthy. Besides, Tom suggested that we should keep in touch with our friends so that we can have a close relationship with each other. What’s more, Rose mentioned that doing some reading regularly also made us feel relaxed. As for me, I thought talking to our parents and teachers was a nice way to reduce our pressure.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，根据提示内容分享对三位学生的采访结果，并且补充自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②be helpful for对……有帮助
③keep in touch with与……保持联系
④each other彼此
[高分句型]
①Recently, we did a survey on how to help students reduce the pressure.（“疑问词+动词不定式”结构）
②First of all, Bob thought it was helpful for us to do some exercise every day, which could help us keep healthy.（定语从句）
13．（2021上·广东广州·九年级统考期末）初三第一学期即将结束，针对学习、生活中遇到的问题，请以“Prepare for the next term”为题写一篇作文，并提出建议。
Problems Advice
学习任务太多 做好计划
身体吃不消 （请补充）
（请补充） （请补充）
注意：
1. 词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入词数）。
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Prepare for the next term
Being students of Junior Three, we should think about___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Being students of Junior Three, we should think about problems and try our best to solve them.
We have too much homework now, so we have too much pressure. This pressure not only comes from the school but also from our parents. We have to stay up late to finish our homework. It’s not good for our health. Our parents sometimes don’t understand us. They always give us too many family rules. I think we should find solutions to the problems. First of all, we should make a study plan so as to improve our study efficiency. Second, we should ecercise everg day. In this way, we can study better. Third, we’d better communicate with our parents more and let them know what we think.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据表格信息，介绍学习、生活中可能遇到的问题并提出建议，不要遗漏要点，表格空白处需要补充发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的。作为初三学生，我们要努力解决学习、生活中遇到的难题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体针对学习、生活中遇到的问题并提出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①pressure压力
②stay up late熬夜
③efficiency效率
④communicate with与……沟通
[高分句型]
①This pressure not only comes from the school but also from our parents.（not only…but also…连接并列成分）
②We have to stay up late to finish our homework.（动词不定式作目的状语）
14．（2022上·广东广州·九年级统考期末）本学期你参加了学校组织的“英语文化节”活动。你的英语老师请你在班内做一次分享，请根据以下要点准备一份英文的发言稿。
1）目的：弘扬中国优秀文化，用英语讲好中国故事
2）地点：学校大厅
3）内容：
演讲：用英语介绍中国名人
制作海报：用英语介绍中国传统文化
（请补充至少1点活动）
4）意义（活动对你个人和社会的意义）
注意：
1）参考词汇：弘扬promote；
2）词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear classmates,
I went to the School Hall to join in the English Cultural Festival this term.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Dear classmates,
I went to the School Hall to join in the English Cultural Festival this term. This activity aimed to promote great Chinese culture and tell Chinese stories well in English. We gathered in the School Hall. There was a lecture on introducing Chinese celebrities in English. Then, we made English posters to introduce Chinese traditional culture. What’s more, we appreciated some red songs and tried to sing songs by ourselves.
In my opinion, it is a really good experience for us to take part in this activity. We can not only develop our ability to communicate with others in English, but also pass on our great Chinese culture to people from all over the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动的目的；
第二步，介绍活动的内容；
第三步，谈谈你对这次活动的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①try to do sth尝试做某事
②by oneself亲自
③In my opinion在我看来
④take part in参加
⑤communicate with sb与某人沟通
⑥all over the world全世界
[高分句型]
①There was a lecture on introducing Chinese celebrities in English.（There be句型）
②We can not only develop our ability to communicate with others in English, but also pass on our great Chinese culture to people from all over the world.（not only…but also…不仅……而且……）
15．（2023上·广东深圳·九年级校考期末）每年的3月21日是世界睡眠日。今年世界睡眠日的中国主题是：“良好睡眠，健康同行”。假设你是李华，是一名九年级的学生。在英语课上，你们将进行关于睡眠的讨论。请你根据以下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，为讨论做好准备。
提示：
1. 你的睡眠状况怎样；
2. 你认为好的睡眠环境是什么样的；
3. 号召大家关注睡眠。
Hello, everyone. I’m happy to share something about sleep with you.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Hello, everyone. I’m happy to share something about sleep with you. I sleep very well. I go to bed at 10 o’clock every day, and then I get up at 7 o’clock. We need to know that a sleep environment includes three aspects: the bedroom environment, the quilt environment, and our own body environment. The quality of the sleep environment will also directly affect our sleep quality. We should pay more attention to sleep.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，介绍你的睡眠情况如何；
第二步，介绍你认为好的睡眠环境是什么样的，可分点介绍，也可列举具体的事例；
第三步，号召大家关注睡眠并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①pay more attention to更关注……
[高分句型]
①We need to know that a sleep environment includes three aspects: the bedroom environment, the quilt environment, and our own body environment.（that引导的宾语从句）
16．（2022上·广东深圳·九年级深圳中学校考期末）本学期，我们通过课文浅尝了英语文学作品之美，假如你所在的校英语社团准备举办一次线上英语沙龙，沙龙主题为Mark Twain，作为团长李华，请你以主持人的身份写一段开场白，内容包含以下要点：
关于Mark Twain 1.最有天赋美国小说家和幽默家之一。 2.一生写了20多部小说和很多短篇故事：他的历险故事世界闻名。
关于沙龙 活动一：就Mark Twain及其作品进行小组讨论； 活动二：欣赏《汤姆索亚历险记》电影片段； 此次沙龙的目的（至少两点）。
参考词汇：humorist.幽默家
English Salon 英语沙龙
The Adventures of Tom Sawyer 汤姆索亚历险记
要求：
1.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。
2.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3.书写工整；要点齐全：意思连贯；条理清楚：标点正确。
Hello, everyone! Thank you all for attending this online English Salon. I am Li Hua, your host today. The topic of today’s salon is Mark Twain.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my introduction! Hope you enjoy today’s salon!
【答案】例文：
Hello, everyone! Thank you all for attending this online English Salon. I am Li Hua, your host today. The topic of today’s salon is Mark Twain.
As far as we know, Mark Twain is one of the most gifted American novelists and humorists. He wrote more than 20 novels and many short stories in his life. In order to understand and learn more about the great novelist Mark Twain and his life, today we’ll have two online salon activities. The first event is a panel discussion on Mark Twain and his works. The other activity is watching clips from The Adventures of Tom Sawyer. We also hope that everyone can learn more through our English salon.
That’s all for my introduction! Hope you enjoy today’s salon!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍关于Mark Twain的信息；
第三步，介绍有关沙龙的信息。
[亮点词汇]
①thank you for doing sth因某事感谢你
②as far as we know据我们所知
③more than超过
[高分句型]
①In order to understand and learn more about the great novelist Mark Twain and his life, today we’ll have two online salon activities.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②We also hope that everyone can learn more through our English salon.（宾语从句）
17．（2023上·广东深圳·九年级校考期末）David最近很烦恼，临近一模考试，他觉得自己的学习压力很大，可是在家里父母依然要求他做家务。他认为做家务就是浪费时间。假如你是李华，David写信向你求助，请你给David写一封回信，帮助他解决烦恼。
要点：1. 家务劳动的意义：1. 教会我们独立，可以自己照顾自己（再补充至少1条）；
2. 合理安排学习和家务劳动的建议：1. 合理安排时间；2. 用劳动去放松自己的学习压力（再补充至少1条）。
要求：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
Dear David,
I am sorry to hear that you are upset these days. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope these suggestions may help you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I am sorry to hear that you are upset these days. You feel a lot of pressure in your studies, but your parents still expect you to do chores at home. You believe that doing chores is a waste of time.
In fact, doing chores is meaningful. Firstly, it teaches us independence and the ability to take care of ourselves. By doing chores, we learn some important life skills, such as cooking, cleaning, and organizing. These skills are good for our daily lives. Additionally, doing chores helps us develop a sense of responsibility.
Here are some suggestions for balancing studies and household chores. Properly managing time for both studying and household chores is important. You can relax and relieve study pressure by doing chores. Create a good plan for studying and household chores.
I hope these suggestions may help you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点介绍，可以适当增加，注意保持主谓一致性，无语法和标点错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。以“他觉得自己的学习压力很大，可是在家里父母依然要求做家务”来引出问题；
第二步，写出家务劳动的意义：教会我们独立，可以自己照顾自己；
第三步，写出合理安排学习和家务劳动的建议：合理安排时间；用劳动去放松自己的学习压力，制定计划。
[亮点词汇]
①pressure压力
②independence独立
③chores家务
④a waste of time浪费时间
[高分句型]
①You believe that doing chores is a waste of time.（that引导的宾语从句）
②Here are some suggestions for balancing studies and household chores.（倒装句）
18．（2022上·广东深圳·九年级红岭中学校考期末）假如你是某校九年级学生李想，下个月打算竞选校广播站的英语广播员。在准备竞选演讲的过程中你遇到了一些问题。请你根据下面的提示，给学校英语俱乐部的外教Mr Brown写一封邮件求助。
提示：
1.参加竞选的原因；
2.请Mr Brown帮助纠正发音并给出一些建议；
3.约定拜访时间和地点。
要求:
1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅；
3.不少于 80 词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。参考词语：pronunciation 发音
Dear Mr Brown,
I hope this email finds you well. I am Li Xiang, a Grade 9 student of our school. Next month, I’m going to compete for the English announcer of our school’s radio station. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Xiang
【答案】例文
Dear Mr Brown,
I hope this email finds you well. I am Li Xiang, a Grade 9 student of our school. Next month, I’m going to compete for the English announcer of our school’s radio station. I think it can help me improve my spoken English. I can also share something useful about English with others. My pronunciation is not good, so I want to practice my pronunciation by communicating with others. I hope you can give me some advice on how to make a good presentation. I have time this weekend afternoon. Is it convenient to go to your house
I would be very thankful if you can give me a hand.
Yours,
Li Xiang
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：文章为“第一人称”，介绍自己想竞选英语广播员，但口语发音不好，希望得到布朗先生的帮助，提示内容描述完整，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，自我介绍，引出写电子邮件的原因；
第二步，具体介绍在竞选准备中遇到的问题，约定拜访的时间和地点；
第三步，表达感谢如果对方能够提供帮助。
[亮点词汇]
① share with分享
② something useful一些有用的
③ want to do sth.想要做某事
④ convenient方便的
⑤ give sb. a hand帮助某人
[高分句型]
①I think it can help me improve my spoken English.（宾语从句）
②I hope you can give me some advice on how to make a good presentation.（宾语从句+how+动词不定式）
③I would be very thankful if you can give me a hand.（条件状语从句）
④My pronunciation is not good, so I want to practice my pronunciation by communicating with others. （so并列句+by+动词ing的方式状语）
19．（2021上·广东深圳·九年级期末）假如你是Tony，你校英语节英文演讲比赛即将举行，主题是A healthy lifestyle。你在日常生活中发现许多同学正被不良生活习惯所困扰。请你就此为演讲比赛写一篇英文演讲稿。
要点：1.列举不良的生活习惯，如熬夜、吃垃圾食品等(至少两条)。
2. 就上述问题给出你的建议(至少两条) 。
3. 呼吁同学们健康生活。
要求: 1. 80词左右。开头已给出。不计入总词数内；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4.标点正确，书面整洁。
Dear friends,
Recently, I’ve noticed that many students are suffering from some bad habits. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Dear friends,
Recently, I’ve noticed that many students are suffering from some bad habits. In my school, some students often stay up late watching TV, playing computer games or chatting on the Internet. Some students prefer eating junk food to eating healthy food. As a result, they may become unhealthy.
To give up these bad habits, we should take more exercise with our friends instead of sitting in front of TV in our free time. Besides, we ought to eat different kinds of vegetables and fruits, which are quite good for us. If we stick to the healthy habits, we will become healthier and healthier. What’s more, we can also be better at our study.
I hope all of us can live a healthier life.
Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为讲稿；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：结合要点提示来完成这篇讲稿，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯，注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：列举校园中出现的不良习惯；
第二步：就如何改正上述不良习惯，给出你的建议；
第三步：希望同学们养成良好的习惯，健康地生活。
[亮点词汇]
①prefer doing sth. (A) to doing sth.(B) 宁愿做A也不愿做B
②instead of 代替
③ought to 应该
[高分句型]
① To give up these bad habits, we should take more exercise with our friends instead of sitting in front of TV in our free time. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②Besides, we ought to eat different kinds of vegetables and fruits, which are quite good for us. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
20．（2022上·广东深圳·九年级统考期末）现如今，越来越多学生的视力正在减退，许多学生从小学开始就戴上眼镜了。这一现象引起了你校老师的高度重视，假设下周一你们班的英语课上将针对这一现象进行讨论，请你根据下列提示内容写一篇如何保护视力的英语发言稿为下周的讨论做准备。
要点提示：
1. 一些学生过度使用眼睛的现状；
2. 介绍一些如何保护眼睛的方法；
3. 号召大家一起保护眼睛。
参考词汇：
eyesight 视力
写作要求：
1. 短文须包含所有提示信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 条理清楚，语言流畅，语句通顺，标点正确；
3. 80词左右。
As we all know, eyes are important to us.
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【答案】例文
As we all know, eyes are important to us. But many students are experiencing declining eyesight and wearing glasses from a young age. To solve this issue, we must take action to protect our eyes.
Firstly, we should give our eyes a break while using digital devices, and ensure proper lighting and safe distance from the screen. Secondly, we should also maintain a suitable reading distance and spend time outdoors. Additionally, a healthy diet rich in vitamins A and C is important for eyesight.
Together, we can protect our eyes and enjoy clear vision for a better future. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇应用文，为发言稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：要点提示已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍一些学生过度使用眼睛的现状；
第二步，介绍一些保护眼睛的方法；
第三步，呼吁大家一起保护眼睛。
[亮点词汇]
① take action采取行动
② digital devices数码设备
③ rich in vitamins富含维生素
[高分句型]
① To solve this issue, we must take action to protect our eyes.（动词不定式作目的状语）
② Firstly, we should give our eyes a break while using digital devices, and ensure proper lighting and safe distance from the screen.（while引导的时间状语从句）
21．（2022上·广东深圳·九年级深圳市龙岗区龙城初级中学校联考期末）深圳特区成立40 多年，深圳的发展历程和成就令世界瞩目，让世人赞叹。深圳的快速发展来自于每个深圳人的努力奋斗和无私奉献。作为深圳的中学生，我们也应该尽一己之力，为我们的城市发展贡献自己的力量。假如你是班长，请写一篇演讲稿，号召大家用实际行动表达对深圳的爱。包括以下要点：
爱深圳的原因 美丽宜居（自然环境、公共设施）
表达爱深圳的方式 1. 参加志愿服务 2. 践行垃圾分类 3. 做好疫情防控 4. 自行补充一点
发出倡议
要求：
1. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Good morning, boys and girls! Shenzhen is home to us all. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Good morning, boys and girls!
Shenzhen is home to us all. With beautiful natural environment and complete public facilities, it is very suitable for home. So how can we make it better First of all, we can participate in voluntary service. We can clean up, distribute leaflets, and let people love its environment. Second, we also need to classify garbage. Third, we need to do a good job in epidemic prevention and control. Finally, we should ride more to reduce air pollution.
I hope all of us can take action together to make Shenzhen better and better!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍深圳并号召大家用实际行动表达对深圳的爱，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍爱深圳的原因；
第二步，表达爱深圳的方式；
第三步，发出倡议，号召大家用实际行动表达对深圳的爱。
[亮点词汇]
①be home to是……的所在地
②be suitable for适合于
③participate in参与
④take action采取行动
[高分句型]
I hope all of us can take action together to make Shenzhen better and better!（省略that的宾语从句）
22．（2022上·广东深圳·九年级校考期末）假设你是Charles，你所在的小区正在进行”模范家庭”的评选活动，请根据所给图表的内容，给社区中心写一封英文推荐信，向他们推荐你的家庭。
注意事项：
1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数) ；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
Dear sir,
I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighborhood this year. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.
Yours faithfully,
Charles
【答案】例文
Dear sir,
I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me. We are hardworking and glad to take on new challenges. We care for and respect each other. We get on well with our neighbors and often help each other. When we have problems, we are always ready to help. People here are like a big family. We think it’s important to live a green life. We always protect the environment. We never throw litter everywhere. We often help to clean the garden in our neighborhood. We have a balanced diet to keep healthy. We often take an active part in volunteer activities to help people in need. My mother and I used to work in the old people’s home as volunteers. We have sent food and clothes to the students in the poor villages.
I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer.
Yours faithfully,
Charles
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封推荐信；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的家庭成员之间的关系。
第二步，介绍与邻居之间的关系。
第三步，介绍如何为环境保护做出的努力。
第四步，表达愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①take on new challenges迎接新的挑战
②care for照顾
③get on well with和……相处融洽
[高分句型]
①When we have problems, we are always ready to help. (when引导时间状语从句)
②We think it’s important to live a green life. (省略that的宾语从句)
23．（2023上·广东深圳·九年级校联考期中）10月5日，日本东京电力公司宣布，已于当日启动第二批福岛核污染水排海工作。众所周知，向海洋排放核废水对海洋环境十分有害。假如你是李华，请你给学校的英语报写一篇演讲稿，介绍此举的危害，并呼吁同学们一起保护海洋。（提示词语：核废水 nuclear waste water)
要点：
1.向海洋排放核废水的危害；
2.我们可以如何保护海洋，如不往海洋倾倒垃圾……(至少写出三条措施)；
3.你的观点。
1.80个词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.适当增加细节，文章条理清楚、行文连贯；
4.标点正确，书面整洁。
How to protect the sea
On October 5, Tokyo Electric Power Company announced that it had launched the second batch of Fukushima nuclear waste water discharging into the sea.
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【答案】例文
How to protect the sea
On October 5, Tokyo Electric Power Company announced that it had launched the second batch of Fukushima nuclear waste water discharging into the sea. By doing so, the sea water will be polluted. If the sea is polluted, Marine life will be dying. Humans can also get sick or die from eating seafood.
In order to protect the ocean and ourselves, first of all, we can’t throw litter into the ocean. We also need to publicize the importance of protecting the Marine environment. All of us need to volunteer to protect the Marine environment.
The earth is our common home, and we must protect it together. Let’s do it together. Our world will get better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“How to protect the sea”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍向海洋排放核废水的危害；
第二步，介绍我们可以如何保护海洋；
第三步，表达自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①get sick生病
②die from死于
③first of all首先
④get better and better变得越来越好
[高分句型]
①If the sea is polluted, Marine life will be dying.（条件状语从句）
②In order to protect the ocean and ourselves, first of all, we can’t throw litter into the ocean.（动词不定式作目的状语）
24．（2023上·广东深圳·九年级万科城实验学校校考期中）实施“双减”政策以后，学生生活发生了很多变化，学生拥有更多自由支配的时间。学校请你向在校学生分享，我们应如何安排课余生活。请根据下面的要点提示，从校园、家庭两方面完成一篇题为“Enjoy Study, Enjoy Life”的演讲稿。
要点：
1. 在过去：①作业多；②学习压力大。
2. 而现在，有更多课余时间，可以做以下事情：
校园：
①多去图书馆，培养对阅读的兴趣；
②……；
家庭：
①与家人交流，……:
②帮助做家务，……。
3. 呼吁大家合理利用时间，让生活变得多姿多彩、有意义。
要求：
1. 必须包含提示中的所有内容，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2. 条理清晰，语意连贯，语句通畅；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校；
4. 不少于80词，开头和结尾不计入总词数。
Enjoy Study, Enjoy Life
Thanks to the Double Reduction Policy, our lives have changed a lot. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】 Enjoy Study, Enjoy Life
Thanks to the Double Reduction Policy, our lives have changed a lot. However, now we have more spare time. So, how should we utilize this time effectively
We used to have more homework and study pressure, but now we have more spare time, so we can do many things. On campus, we can take advantage of the library by visiting it more often, cultivating our interest in reading. Additionally, we can participate in various activities that are organized by our school. At home, we can spend more quality time with our families, communicating with them and sharing our thoughts and feelings. We can also help with housework, which can lighten our parents’ burden.
In conclusion, we should make good use of our time to make our lives more colorful and meaningful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头提示，引出话题；
第二步，从过去的作业多，学习压力大和现在有更多课余时间去做的事情来写发生的变化；
第三步，呼吁大家合理利用时间。
[亮点词汇]
①Thanks to幸亏
②used to 过去常常
③have more spare time有更多的空闲时间
④take advantage of利用
⑤communicating with sb.与……交谈
⑥help with帮助
⑦In conclusion总之
[高分句型]
①Additionally, we can participate in various activities that are organized by our school. (that引导的定语从句)
②We can also help with housework, which can lighten our parents’ burden. (which引导的非限制性定语从句）
25．（2023上·广东深圳·九年级校联考期中）假定你是李华，你将在最新的一期学校英语报“Role Models”栏目上介绍我国首位戴眼镜执行飞行任务的航天员桂海潮。
简介 1986年11月出生于云南，毕业于北京航空航天大学；
主要经历 1. 2003年观看杨利伟进入太空，梦想将来可以进入太空； 2. 2005年进入北京航空航天大学学习； 3. 2018年参加航天员选拔，并于2023年7月进入太空。
感悟 ……（请补充至少2点）
注意：1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
4. 词数80左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词：北京航空航天大学Beihang University；选拔test。
Have you heard about Gui Haichao Below is some detailed information about him.
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Let’s learn from Gui.
【答案】例文：
Have you heard about Gui Haichao Below is some detailed information about him.
Gui Haichao is the first astronaut with glasses to enter space. He was born in Yunnan in November 1986. In 2003, while he was watching Yang Liwei, the first person in China, fly into space, he had a dream. He wanted to travel into space in the future. He then began to study hard. In 2005, he went to study in Beihang University. In 2018, he took part in the test of becoming an astronaut. After years of hard work, his dream finally came true in July 2023.
From my perspective, “No pain, no gain”, as the saying goes. Only with hard work can we succeed. In addition, nothing is impossible if one has a dream and fights hard for it.
Let’s learn from Gui.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：根据表格所给提示，介绍有关桂海潮的人生经历和你的感悟。
[写作步骤]
第一步：作文开头已给出，应领悟首句内容衔接好下文；
第二步：介绍桂海潮的人生经历（受到杨利伟的鼓舞，刻苦学习，努力实现航天梦），注意增加细节，使行文连贯；
第三步：说说你的感悟是什么，并号召大家向桂海潮学习。
[亮点词汇]
①enter space进入太空
②took part in参加
③came true实现
④no pain, no gain一分耕耘，一分收获
[高分句型]
①In 2003, while he was watching Yang Liwei, the first person in China, fly into space, he had a dream. (while引导的时间状语从句）
②In addition, nothing is impossible if one has a dream and fights hard for it. (if引导条件状语从句)

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