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人教版九年级上册必背作文8篇（含解析）
1.假设你有一个名叫Tom的好朋友，进入初三后他变化了很多，请根据以下表格内容介绍一下他在学习、生活中的成长变化，写一篇100词左右的作文。
注意：（1）文中不得出现真实的校名、人名。
（2）内容完整、层次清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯。
（3）100词左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Tom is my good friend._______________________________________________________
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【答案】 Tom is my good friend. He has changed a lot.① Let me introduce what he has changed.
He is 15 years old boy. And he is a student in a middle school. He is in Class 1, Grade 9. ② Yellow is his favorite color, because he thinks that yellow can cheer him up. He used to has a lot of homework. He has no choice but to stay up late. He used to play computer games, and he refused to talking with his parents. But now he want to live a good day. He makes a good plan every day. And he studys hard, he is strict with his study. He is more confident than before. He joins the School basketball team.
He want to to be a famous basketball player all over the world. Because he loves basketball very much and he wants to be famous.
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇作文，主要讲述的是我的朋友汤姆的变化，过去与现在的变化，写作时要注意运用时态和用词，可以适当增加衔接词，使文章可以通顺。
【亮点词汇】① changed a lot改变很多
② have no choice but别无选择
③all over the world全世界
【高分句型】①Let me introduce what he has changed（Let 让字句）② Yellow is his favorite color, because he thinks that yellow can cheer him up. （because连接的原因状语从句）
【结构布局】①总起开头，告诉读者自己要介绍的话题。
②接下来介绍汤姆过去的表现，以及他现在的变化
③介绍他将来要做什么
【拓展词汇】① all over the world② strict with
【拓展句型】①Let me introduce what he has changed.
2.书面表达
Karen 和Kelly是好朋友，请根据表格内容写一篇关于她们的短文，其中包括两人的相同点和不同点以及两人上周的活动和感受。
要求：1．包括所有提示内容，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 2．不少于 60词．
name 相同点 不同点 上周的活动
Karen 1. 都有长的黑色的头发 2. 一样高 3. 都喜欢看电影。每周去Screen city 两次，因为有最舒服的座位。 Karen更外向，受欢迎得多。 一起爬山，拍了很多照片 感受...
Kelly Kelly更友好，成绩也更好，更擅长画画。
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【答案】karen has a good friend whose named Kelly. They are in the same. They have a black long hair. Karen is tall as Kelly. They are all like watch movies. And they go to Screen City twice a week, because there are comfortable seat. Through they have someyhing in common, there still something differences bewteen them. Karen is outgoing,but Kelly doesn't. And Karen is more popular than Kelly because of outgiong. Kelly is more friendly than Karen. Kelly usually gets high marks,but Karen doesn't. Also, Kelly is good at drawing. Last week, they climbed mountains and take a lot of photos. They are very happy. And they want it again.
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇介绍个人的作文，写作时要注意用第三人称来介绍，注意用词和句式，适当增加衔接词，使文章更加通顺。
【亮点词汇】
①high marks高分
②outgoing 外向的
③ have in common共同之处
④ twice a week 一周两次
【高分句型】
①Karen has a good friend whose named Kelly,由whose引导的定于从句
【结构布局】
首先介绍两个人的相同点，其次介绍不同之处，最后介绍爬山以及感受
【拓展词汇】
①have in common② be good at ③ a lot of
【拓展句型】
① Karen has a good friend whose named Kelly
②Kelly is good at drawing
3.哈佛大学的一项研究表明，爱做家务的孩子更容易体验到幸福感，更有前途。请你以"Help with Some Housework"为题写一篇8o词左右的英语短文，描述你平时所做的家务以及你对做家务的看法。
参考词汇：
Chores take out the rubbish sweep the floor
wash the clothes do the dishes
water the flowers cook breakfast/lunch …
…
Opinions Pros：develop our independence take care of ourselves
…
Cons：a waste of time no need to …
…
注意：文中不得出现真实的校名和人名．
Help with Some Housework
It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy． As for me， I____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Help with Some Housework
It is reported that children who love doing chores have a better future and are easy to feel happy． As for me， I often help them do housework． I take out the rubbish away and sweep the floor in the morning． I help my mother cook the lunch．I always wash clothes and do the dishes
for my family． My parents are very happy． Besides， Watering the flowers is also my duty． I like them very much and take good care of them． After supper， I always wash dishes．（平时所作家务）
I think it can develop our independence and take good care of ourselves．【高分句型一】 In a word， the more housework I do， the happier my parents will be．（家务的看法）【高分句型二】
【解析】【高分句型一】
I think it can develop our independence and take good care of ourselves．
我认为它可以培养我们的独立性，并且能照顾好我们自己。think后加的省略了that的宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
the more housework I do， the happier my parents will be．
我的家务活做的越多，我的父母就会越快乐。the+比较级，the+比较级：越……就越……
能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
4.中学生在成长过程中经常会碰到一些烦恼。假设你是李华,请根据下表提示,用英语写一篇发言稿,在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。
你的烦恼 你的做法
个头不高,相貌平常 不必在意,相信自己
父母不理解,朋友少 学会沟通,友善待人
学习压力大, 课外活动少 …… (自主发挥,至少两点)
要求:1．词数100左右。
2．所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息,并作适当的发挥。
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【答案】Hello everyone,
I am Li Hua. I'd like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. I'm not tall and I am not good-looking. But I don't care about these. I always believe in myself. My parents sometimes can't understand what I do and say. I have few friends at school. So I often communicate with them and I am always friendly to my classmates at school. I have too much pressure in study too and often have few after-school activities. So I often relax myself. When I have spare time, I often do sports, or listen to music. Sometimes I go shopping with my parents or friends. In this way, I can get better grades and enjoy the colourful life.
That's all. Thank you.
【解析】这是一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。审题可知时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一人称。写作时注意内容全面，语法正确，书写规范整洁。要点给出了汉语，在写作时避免汉式英语，正确使用英语句式。词数100左右，所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥。
5.体育运动是中学生的共同爱好。请你根据下列提示写一篇题为“What We Get from Sports”的英语短文。短文应包含以下要点:
1．学生参加体育运动的兴趣不同,理由各异。
2．多数学生学习疲倦时,通过运动来放松自己。
3．男孩们参加各项体育活动,希望运动能使自己更强壮。
4．女孩们也喜欢运动,希望运动能帮助自己减肥和保持苗条。
5．你对运动的观点。
注意:文中不能出现自己的姓名和学校名称。80词左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。不要逐字翻译。
参考词语: lose weight (减肥), keep slim (保持苗条)
What We Get from Sports
Students in our school have one thing in common—an interest in sports. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】 What We Get from Sports
Students in our school have one thing in common—an interest in sports. Different students have different ways to relax. Sports can help them relax after a period of exhausting studying. They do the sport that they like best. Most of the boys take part in all kinds of sports, because they think it can make them stronger. As for girls, they want to lose weight as well as to keep slim, so they also like taking exercise.
I like sports not only because they can help me to keep healthy, but also because they make me relaxed. Studying all day long makes me tired, so I often do sports with my classmates after class. Now I feel much better than before. Let's take exercise as often as possible.

【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇给出提纲的命题作文。所给内容十分的详细，我们在写作时注意用一般现在时态，并且要适当的运用连词，注意句式的变化就可以了。短文能清楚地写出五个要点，行文连贯，句式丰富。温馨提示：①文中不能出现自己的姓名和学校名称。②短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。词数：80左右，不可逐字翻译。
【亮点词汇】
1.in common共有
2.take part in参加
3.In my opinion在我看来
【高分句型】
They take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger.为了更强壮，他们参加不同种类的运动。
6. 积极锻炼是非常重要的，为此，某英文报开展了一次关于初中生锻炼情况的调查活动。请你根据下列图表和相关文字提示，以“Exercising is important!”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点 具体内容
调查数据
锻炼的意义 有益身体健康；保持思维敏锐；变得自信快乐。
你的建议 就如何更好地开展锻炼，提出你的建议（至少两点）。
注意：
(1)短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
(2)词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)短文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名等信息。
(4)参考词汇：敏锐的sharp
Exercising is important!
Recently, we have done a survey about students’ exercising. According to the survey, ______
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【答案】Exercising is important! Recently, we have done a survey about students' exercising. ①According to the survey, 32% of the students spend over one hour every day doing exercise, while 68% of them spend less than one hour. The reasons are as follows: Firstly, 46% of them have too much homework, so they have no time to do exercise. Secondly, 29% of them are not good at exercise. Thirdly, 25% of them are not interested in it.
② As we all know, exercising is good for our health, which keeps our minds sharp and makes us confident and happy.
In my opinion, we should keep a balance between our study and exercising. Besides, we should develop a good habit of doing exercise.
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
本文是一篇提示作文，要求以Exercising is important!为题目，给某英文报写一篇关于初中生锻炼情况的调查短文，阐述积极锻炼是非常重要的，并写出锻炼的意义及自己的建议。
【亮点词汇】
①according to根据；
②spend time (in) doing sth.花时间做某事；
③be interested in对……感兴趣；
④be good for对…有好处；
⑤between...and...在……之间；
【高分句型】
①According to the survey, 32% of the students spend over one hour every day doing exercise, while 68% of them spend less than one hour.（while引导的并列句）
②As we all know, exercising is good for our health, which keeps our minds sharp and makes us confident and happy.（非限制性定语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：介绍调查数据；
中心：介绍锻炼的意义；
结尾：个人建议。
7.“自我悦纳”指个体能够正确评价和接受自己，并在此基础上不断改进、完善，取得更好的发展。它既是一种处世态度，也是一种处理困境的方式。某英文网站正在开展以“Self-acceptance”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享一段你的经历。在这段经历中，你认识到自己的缺憾或不足，勇敢面对，积极改进，并最终取得进步，完善了自我。
提示词语：difficult,realize,accept,improve
提示问题：● What challenge have you ever met
● What did you do to deal with it？
● What have you learnt from the experience
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【答案】 When I was in Grade 4, I didn't like being with my classmates. Instead, I preferred reading books alone.
①When I heard my classmates call me "nerdy", it hurt me a lot. I had many conversations with my parents and teachers. Then I came to realize that it was OK to be different and that I didn't need to be like others. But I did try something new to fit in: I began to share what I read with my classmates. ②I even join their games sometimes, which has helped me make new friends.
We are all different. Although I should accept myself for who I am, I can also do something to improve, which will help me become a better and happier "ME"!
【解析】【思路点拨】
【高分句型】
①When I heard my classmates call me "nerdy", it hurt me a lot.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I even join their games sometimes, which has helped me make new friends.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
8.南丁格尔（Florence Nightingale）是一位心地善良、乐于助人的人。她奉献于护士事业，为纪念她，人们把她的生日5月12日定为世界护士日（International Nurse Day）。请你根据下面信息，用英语写一篇短文简要介绍她的生平。
要求：词数80—100，可根据要点适当发挥。
1820 be born, in a rich family, in England
1851 be trained
During the war save soldiers’ lives, the front-line hospital
After the war become a national hero, open the world’s first nurse school
1910 die
1974 International Nurse Day
A Famous Nurse—Florence Nightingale
Florence Nightingale was a famous British nurse.
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【答案】A Famous Nurse—Florence Nightingale
Florence Nightingale was a famous British nurse. She was born in a rich family on 12th May 1820 in England. She was kind-hearted and always ready to help others, especially the sick. In 1851 she was trained as a nurse. During the war, she went to help in the front-line hospital and saved many soldiers’ lives. When she came back after the war, she became a national hero. Later Florence Nightingale opened the world’s first nurse school. Florence Nightingale died in 1910. In 1974, her birthday became International Nurse Day because of the great love and help she gave to people.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文主要根据表格信息，用英语写一篇短文简要介绍南丁格尔的生平。要求包括表格中所有内容，合理使用连接词，使得语句通顺，语意连贯，本文主要使用第三人称单数，一般过去时。
【亮点词汇】
1.be ready to准备好做某事；
2.because of由于。
【高分句型】
1.When she came back after the war, she became a national hero.（when引导时间状语从句）
2. In 1974, her birthday became International Nurse Day because of the great love and help she gave to people.（定语从句）

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