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高三读后续写
双线梳理原文
构思精彩续写
策略指导
1.输入与输出
读是输入，写是输出，只有在读的过程中提
取有效的文本信息才能更好地续写故事
2. 五大要素
Who, When, Where,How, What(main idea)
3.文本双线推进
文本的情节线和人物的情感线
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didn’t understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.
I didn’t really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker（牲畜运输卡车司机）, and I thought that I would surpass（超过）anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation.
Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback（枢纽前卫） on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone（长号）.
The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up（拖拉机发动起来） and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals（喷洒化学药品）. After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lamb’s-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle（苍耳草、羊角草、狐尾草和杂草之王——美丽的紫色蓟）. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasn’t sure how much it would amount to.
At home, my dad said, “A job’s a big step to growing up. I’m glad you will be contributing to the household.” My dad’ s words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.
My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasn’t interested. I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I brought my paycheck home--it was $119--my dad wanted to talk to me.
I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished.
解题过程
1.梳理原文要素
体裁：_______
人称：_________
时态：____________
记叙文
第一人称
一般过去时
读五要素
（1） Who
（2） When
（3） Where
（4） How
（5） What (main idea)
my dad George, a livestock trucker; I
my grandpa Albert；a neighboring farmer
My dad (quiet→responsible→_____)
I (active→energetic→disappointed→unfair→_)
in my family; in the field
The summer before my eighth grade，I worked in a field to earn money, I didn’t want to contribute my earnings to the household,instead,I wanted to use the money as I wished.
the summer before my eighth grade
2.把控故事中的冲突和文章主题
1.What is the conflict between the main characters of the
passage
__________________________________________
__________________________________________
2. What is the theme of the passage
______________________________________________
My dad wanted me to contribute the earnings to the
household but I was unwilling to do so.
Excellent quality-sense of family responsibility
3.梳理原文情节情感双线(Divide the whole pasasge into several parts)
情节线：________________→________________
→________________→________________
情感线：________________→________________
→________________→________________
My dad and I didn’t understand each other and I wanted to surpass him
confused, ambitious
I spent my summer vacation working in a field and looked forward to the pay
expected, hopeful, active
My dad encouraged me to contribute the money to the household
disappointed, unwilling
4. 分析段首句，合理推测情节
Paragraph 1: When I brought my paycheck home--it was $119--my dad wanted to talk to me.千万不要忘记第二段首句哦！！！
情节线：________________→_______________
→________________→________________
情感线：________________→________________
→________________→________________
My father talked with me,hoping me to contribute the money to the household. I thought of my plan and cried sadly.
My actions after knowing my dad’s intention
My father agreed me to spend the money as I wished
unwilling, unhappy; excited, sad
upset, anxious,annoyed
surprised(第二段首句)
4. 分析段首句，合理推测情节
Paragraph 2: I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished.
情节线：________________→_______________
→________________→________________
情感线：________________→________________
→________________→________________
I asked my dad why he agreed me to spend the money as I wished and he told me the reason
ashamed, proud
I jumped with joy and hugged my dad, noticing his grey hair
I looked back at my behaviors, felt ashamed and decided to contribute my money
confused
happy, amazed
I decided to work for more time to earn more money to buy what I wanted at the beginning
ambitious, hopeful
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I brought my paycheck home--it was $119--my dad wanted to talk to me.
I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished.
2.把控故事中的冲突和文章主题
1.What is the conflict between the main characters of the
passage
__________________________________________
__________________________________________
2. What is the theme of the passage
______________________________________________
My dad wanted me to contribute the earnings to the
househould but I was unwilling to do so.
Excellent quality-sense of family responsibility
Keep In Mind
范文
When I brought my paycheck home—it was ＄119—my dad wanted to talk to me. Knowing that he would talk about my earnings, I pretended not to see his hesitation and walked straight to my room. “Congratulations to you on the paycheck” Dad exclaimed, wearing an accessible expression. Hearing that, my heart sank. What I had been looking forward to—a dreamy new football outfit装备 would finally give way to family expenses. Annoyed and upset tears began to blur模糊 my vision. But after what seemed a long time, all he said to me was "You can use the money as you wish, and you deserve it!" For an instant一瞬间, I stared at him in disbelief, hardly believing my ears.
I was surprised that my dad allowed me to use the money as I wished. He smiled awkwardly. “Why ” I asked my dad eagerly.“ Because you have a future to plan for.Use it wisely, son. I looked at my dad with gratitude, stepped closer and hugged him tightly. Just at that moment, I noticed his grey hair and stiff neck. I realized how much he had contributed to the family through his tiring work of being a trucker. I felt ashamed and uneasy and realized how selfish I was. “Dad, thanks for your hard work these years. I shouldn’t have been so selfish and I am willing to contribute my money. The farmer said there would be more work later, I can contintue to work to earn more money to buy the outfit.” On that day, I began to understand Dad’s world and it seemed that he was also on the way into my world.
The end
Thank you

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