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【2023·四川德阳一模】假如你叫李华，你的英国笔友Mike 明年将来中国留学，写信向你询问中文学习相关情况，请你用英语写一封回信，内容包括：
1.推荐学习中文的方法(两种)。
2.推荐理由。
注意：
1.字数 100 词左右；【练习字数不限制，自由发挥】
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
{优秀范文}
Dear Mike,
It's great to hear from you! I'm more than happy to share my thoughts on learning Chinese as you're planning to study it next year. In my opinion, the most effective methods are to immerse yourself in the language and to practice speaking and listening skills regularly.
Firstly, immersing yourself in the language means surrounding yourself with Chinese speakers and Chinese culture. This could involve watching Chinese movies, TV shows, or reading Chinese books. By doing this, you'll pick up the language naturally and understand how it's used in real-life situations.
Secondly, practicing speaking and listening skills is crucial. You can try speaking Chinese with native speakers or language exchange partners, and listen to Chinese podcasts or radio stations. This will help you improve your pronunciation and listening comprehension.
I believe these methods are effective because they allow you to learn Chinese in a practical and engaging way. By immersing yourself in the language and practicing speaking and listening skills, you'll gain a deeper understanding of the language and culture.
I hope this helps and I'm looking forward to hearing about your progress in learning Chinese!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
{名师点评}
用词角度：本文使用了诸如"immerse yourself"、"effective methods"、"surrounding yourself with"等高级词汇和词组，准确地表达了学习中文的方法和重要性。
语法遣词造句：文章使用了正确的时态和语态，如"try speaking Chinese with native speakers or language exchange partners"中的动名词短语作宾语，表达了一个持续的动作。
句法搭配：文章的句子结构多样，使用了并列句和复合句，如"Firstly, immersing yourself in the language means surrounding yourself with Chinese speakers and Chinese culture."，使文章内容更加丰富和连贯。
文章行文流畅度：整体而言，文章行文流畅，观点清晰，逻辑性强。建议Mike沉浸式学习和练习口语，这符合实际语言学习的需求。文章的结尾也很好，表示期待听到Mike的进步，使文章显得更加亲切和自然。
【2024·江苏南通】假定你是李华，2024年元旦你校举行了登高迎新年活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 活动过程；
2. 活动感想。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A climbing event to celebrate the New Year
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【优秀范文与点评】
A climbing event to celebrate the New Year
On New Year's Day in 2024, our school held a mountaineering event to welcome the new year. The event was meticulously planned and executed, allowing participants to fully immerse themselves in the spirit of the occasion.
The activity began with a gathering of participants at the base of the mountain, where they were briefed on safety precautions and the route they would take. As they ascended, the breathtaking scenery and the sense of accomplishment upon reaching the summit were profound experiences for many.
Upon reaching the top, the panoramic view of the city was nothing short of stunning. The air was filled with excitement and anticipation as students gathered to celebrate the coming year. The event concluded with a group photo and a shared meal, fostering a sense of unity and camaraderie among participants.
This event was truly memorable, offering students a unique and invigorating way to welcome the new year. The shared challenges and triumphs will undoubtedly serve as valuable life lessons and create lasting memories.
{精华点评}
用词角度：本文使用了如"meticulously planned and executed"、"breathtaking scenery"、"panoramic view"等高级词汇和词组，准确地描述了活动的过程和感受。
语法遣词造句：文章使用了正确的时态和语态，如"The event concluded with a group photo and a shared meal"中的过去时态，描述了活动的结束。
句法搭配：文章的句子结构多样，使用了并列句和复合句，如"The activity began with a gathering of participants at the base of the mountain, where they were briefed on safety precautions and the route they would take."，使文章内容更加丰富和连贯。
文章行文流畅度：整体而言，文章行文流畅，观点清晰，逻辑性强。通过描述活动的过程和感受，让读者仿佛亲临其境。文章的结尾也很好，总结了活动的意义，使文章显得更加完整。
3.【2024·江苏连云港高三】 假定你是李华，外籍心理学教授Mr Peterson正在做一个关于中学生学习压力现状的调查，作为调查对象，请你结合自身经历给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 原因及其影响；
2. 压力缓解方式。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr Peterson,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
{优秀作文点评}
Dear Mr Peterson,
I am writing to share my perspective on the study stress experienced by middle school students like me. The pressure stems from high academic expectations and rigorous exams, which not only impact our mental health but also affect academic performance.
To cope with the stress, I find it helpful to set aside time for hobbies and relaxation. Furthermore, seeking support from family and friends and practicing mindfulness helps me maintain a healthy balance.
I hope my insights contribute to your research and improve the well-being of middle school students.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
用词角度：本文使用了如"impact"、"mental health"、"academic performance"等高级词汇，准确地描述了学习压力的原因和影响。
语法遣词造句：文章使用了正确的时态和语态，如"The pressure stems from high academic expectations and rigorous exams"中的现在时态，描述了压力的来源。
句法搭配：文章的句子结构多样，使用了简单句和复合句，如"To cope with the stress, I find it helpful to set aside time for hobbies and relaxation."，使文章内容更加丰富和连贯。
文章行文流畅度：整体而言，文章行文流畅，观点清晰，逻辑性强。尽管字数有限，但作者成功地传达了学习压力的原因和影响以及缓解方式。
4.假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Julia发来邮件，说一个同学的恶作剧（prank）让她的自尊心受到了伤害，而且对自我产生了怀疑。请你给她回一封邮件安慰她。注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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{优秀习作与点评}
Dear Julia,
I was truly sorry to hear about the prank that hurt your feelings and caused you to doubt yourself. Please remember that such incidents are often the result of someone's immaturity and should not reflect your worth as a person.
You are a talented and amazing individual, and the opinions of others should not shake your self-confidence. It's important to surround yourself with people who appreciate and support you.
Please don't hesitate to reach out if you need someone to talk to. I am always here for you.
Warmest regards,
Li Hua
用词角度：本文使用了如"truly sorry"、"immature"、"worth as a person"等高级词汇，准确地表达了安慰的情感和鼓励的意图。
语法遣词造句：文章使用了正确的时态和语态，如"Please remember that such incidents are often the result of someone's immaturity and should not reflect your worth as a person."中的现在时态，表达了鼓励的观点。
句法搭配：文章的句子结构多样，使用了并列句和复合句，如"You are a talented and amazing individual, and the opinions of others should not shake your self-confidence."，使文章内容更加丰富和连贯。
文章行文流畅度：整体而言，文章行文流畅，观点清晰，逻辑性强。通过表达同情、鼓励和支持，文章的安慰效果较好。
5. 假定你是李华，学校英语社团负责人。请给外教Jim写信，邀请他参加你社团将要举办的一场英语演出。内容包括：
1. 时间地点；2. 主要节目；3. 发出邀请。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
{优秀范文点评}
Dear Jim,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing on behalf of our school's English club to extend a warm invitation to you for our upcoming English performance.
The event will be held on December 10th at the school auditorium, starting at 7:00 p.m. Our club members have been diligently preparing a variety of exciting performances, including plays, singing, and dance, which are sure to entertain and impress.
We would be honored if you could attend and share your valuable insights as a native speaker. Your presence would undoubtedly enhance the cultural exchange and learning experience for our members.
Looking forward to your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
用词角度：本文使用了如"extend a warm invitation"、"upcoming"、"variety of"、"entertain and impress"等高级词汇和词组，准确地描述了邀请的目的和演出的内容。
语法遣词造句：文章使用了正确的时态和语态，如"The event will be held on December 10th at the school auditorium, starting at 7:00 p.m."中的将来时态，描述了演出的时间和地点。
句法搭配：文章的句子结构多样，使用了并列句和复合句，如"Our club members have been diligently preparing a variety of exciting performances, including plays, singing, and dance, which are sure to entertain and impress."，使文章内容更加丰富和连贯。
文章行文流畅度：整体而言，文章行文流畅，观点清晰，逻辑性强。通过准确地描述邀请的目的、演出的内容和时间地点，使文章内容丰富且具有说服力。

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