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聚焦人教版2024中考英语写作 - 话题写作三 安全健康与防护
一、教材话题链接
Topics 教材链接 写作角度
Free time activities 八上Unit 2 How often do you exercise ①运动与健康 ②如何养成好习惯
Health and first aid 八下Unit 1 What's the matter 急救措施
Feelings 九全Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry 心理健康
Unexpected events 九全Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected 安全防护
二、话题词句拓展
◎必备短语和句型
1. ask for 请求
2. break out (战争、火灾等)突然发生，爆发
3. by accident/chance 偶然地
4. catch/have a cold 感冒
5. fall down 突然倒下；跌倒
6. get into trouble 陷入困境
7. give sb. a hand 帮助某人
8. help…out 帮助……解决难题、分担工作
9. in time 及时；来得及
10. keep…away from 避免接近；远离
11. knock into sb. 撞上某人
12. look out 留神，当心
13. put on weight 发胖；增加(体重)
14. put out 扑灭，熄灭
15. save one's life 挽救某人的生命
16. send for 派人去叫；请(某人)来
17. stay/keep fit 保持健康
18. take one's temperature 量体温
19. thanks to 由于……,多亏……
20. It's bad for… 对……有害。
21. It's good for… 对……有好处。
22. There is something wrong with……… 出问题了。
23. see/watch/hear sb. do sth. 看到/听到某人做某事
24. see/watch/hear sb. doing sth. 看到/听到某人正在做某事
25. warn sb. not to do sth. 警告某人不要做某事
◎基础句型写作
1. 人生的成功不是偶然发生的，而是需要努力和实践。 (by accident)
2. 如果有人遇到麻烦，你应该主动提供帮助。 (get into trouble)
3. 他的右肩膀出了点儿问题。(There is something wrong with…)
4. 良好的饮食习惯帮助你保持健康。(keep fit)
5. 警察经常警告我们在交通信号灯变绿之前不要过马路。(warn sb. not to do sth. )
6. 多亏你的有用的建议，我们制定了一个完美的计划。(thanks to)
三、满分作文五步法
典/例/分/析
为了增强同学们的安全意识，学校发出了“做自己的首席安全官——平安校园行”的倡议。你校的English Newsletter正以“Keep Safety in Mind”为题举行征文活动。请根据以下图示，从食物、运动和网络等方面着手写一篇征文。
1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Keep Safety in Mind
Safety is very important in our life, _____________________________.
I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety and keep
safety in mind.
Step 1审——审清题意
人称
时态：
功能：
要点：
1.
2.
(1)
(2)
(3)
3.
适当发挥 ……
Step 2 搭——列提纲，搭好框架
Step 3 连——连词成句
1. 引入主题：
① Safety is very __________________________ in our life. We should always keep safety in mind.
② How can we keep safe Here are __________________________.
2. 具体做法：
① We should eat __________________________ instead of junk food.
② We can __________________________ and make sure we are safe when we are doing sports.
③ We should __________________________ when we surf the Internet.
3. 提出倡议：
I hope all the students have a __________________________ life all the way.
Step 4 组——组句成篇
Keep Safety in Mind
Safety is very important in our life. ①We should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe Here are some suggestions.
First, we should eat healthy food instead of junk food. For example, we should eat more vegetables and fruit. Second, we can do more exercise and make sure we are safe when we are doing sports. ②Finally, we should be careful when we surf the Internet. Don't tell your real name and address to the person you don't know on the Internet. ③In a word, we should develop good habits in our daily life. ④
I hope all the students have a safe and healthy life all the way.
Step 5 修——修饰美化
① 扩写本句，建议人们尽量远离各种危险：
I think we should _______________ to keep ourselves away from __________________________ and keep safety in mind.
② 变换句型，采用高级表达的短语：
__________________________, we __________________________ be careful when surfing the Internet.
③ 用so that 扩写本句，说明养成好习惯的益处：
In a word, we'd better develop good habits in our daily life __________________________ we can keep safe and healthy.
④ 添加 if从句，再次强调安全健康生活的优点：
If each of us is careful enough and has a healthy lifestyle, I think we'll be ____________________.
◎小小加油站
[开头句]
1. As students, we should always keep safety in mind.
2. It's very important/necessary for us to keep safe during the vacations.
3. As middle school students, we should learn to protect ourselves from every possible danger.
4. Self-protection is one of the most important skills, especially for teenagers.
5. If you are ill and have a fever, you must go to the doctor at once.
[发展句]
1. We should always obey the traffic rules on the way to school.
2. We're not allowed to go swimming alone, especially in deep rivers or lakes.
3. We must remember it's dangerous for us to hang out at night.
4. First,we should keep calm and find the exit quickly.
5. If we are in danger, we can ask our parents or teachers for help, even the police.
[结尾句]
1. In a word, following these safety rules above can make us live in peace.
2. Learn to protect ourselves so that we can grow up safely and enjoy our wonderful life.
3. I hope more and more people can give a hand to make students grow healthily.
4. In my opinion,students should pay attention to their own safety.
5. We should keep away from smartphones and work hard.
话题佳篇创作
健康对每个人都很重要，我们 应该学会如何保持健康。请以“How to keep healthy” 为题，写一篇英语短文，向学校校刊投稿。
要求：
1. 文章必须包含表格中的至少4个要点信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名等信息；
3. 词数80左右；文章开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
should( √) shouldn't(×)
do sports every day refuse to exercise
keep a balanced diet have junk food
eat fruit and vegetables stay up too late
have enough sleep play computer games a lot
keep happy sit for a long timt
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正稿：
How to keep healthy
Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health. It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep healthy.
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All in all, if we follow these ways,each of us will have a healthy body.
自评(亮点与困难)：
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