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高考英语写作——写作论述方式（例证）
中国人通常写出一些 “高大上” 文章的原因，其实就是举出实例来论证主题，这是写作中最常见的扩展段落的方法，也是用于说明段落主旨、阿述细节最简洁有效的方法。但是必须注意的是，例子绝对和中;心相关，并且单词、语法 不要出现大的错误。
比如关于谦虚的例子：
Newton, one of the most influential scientists throughout the history of mankind, could be the best case of how modesty works in the course of making further progress and achieving greater success. Just imagine, having discovered the Newton's first law of motion, how could he have succeeded in establishing the Throe Laws of Morion if he had simply taken pride in his past achievements
【翻译】牛顿是人类历史上最具影响力的科学家之一，他可能是证明在取得重大进步和收获更大成功的过程中谦虚的作用的最好的例子。想象一下，在牛顿发现运动第一定律之后，如果他对自己过去的成就感到骄傲自满，他怎么可能成功地建立起三大运动定律呢？ 下面这个是关于勤奋的例子：
Kobe Bryant can be a most favorable example of how diligence functions in our career. When asked by one of his friends that what was the secret of his success, he replied with humor and implication that, "Do you know how Los Angelos looks like at 4 o'clock a.m. I know." Obviously, how could he, one of the greatest basketball players throughout the history of mankind who was once deemed not appropriate for playing basketball, have achieved unprecedented success in NBA without diligence
【翻译】科比 布莱恩特可以成为验证勤奋如何在我们职业生涯中发挥作用的最好的例子。当他的一个朋友问他成功的秘决是什么时，他幽默地暗示道：“你知道凌晨 4 点时洛杉机的样子吗？ 我知道。”显然，他作为人类历史上最伟大的篮球运动员之一，曾经被人们认为不适合打篮球，如果没有勤奋，他怎么可能在 NBA 取得前所未有的成功呢？
下面的这个例子是关于林肯的，几乎是关于人生哲理类的全能例子：
Although there is so abundant cases that could account for my perspective, the one as to Abraham Lincoln is pretty impressive. As he was born in a poor family, he was exceedingly diligent. As a consequence, he became President of the United States.
Apart from the many fine qualities that Lincoln possessed, I appreciate him in that he dared to do what he thought was right at a time when his beliefs were very unpopular with many people. He also had infinite patience and tolerance for those who disagreed with him, and bore their discourtesy toward him with admirable restraint. He also had the manliness to forgive his opponents. When the Civil War ended, he treated his erstwhile enemies with great generosity. So the case vividly clarifies a truth that _____ has played a crucial role in our success.（横线可填某种品质。）
【翻译】尽管如此多的案例可以解释我的观点，但关于亚伯拉罕·林肯的案例令人印象尤为深刻。由于他出生在一个贫穷的家庭，他非常勤奋。结果，他成了美国总统。
除了林肯所拥有的许多优秀品质外，我欣赏他敢于做他认为正确的事情，因为当时他的信仰在很多人当中非常不受欢迎。他对那些不赞同他的人也有无限的耐心和宽容，并以令人钦佩的克制忍受着他们对他的无礼。他也很有风度地原谅了他的对手。内战结束后，他对昔日的敌人非常慷慨。这个案例生动地阐明了一个事实，那就是_____在我们的成功中扮演着重要的角色。
举例的时候需要注意：
①一定要使用自己拿得准的单词和句型，正确最重要；
②注意句子间的逻辑关系，多用逻辑关系词；
③ 如果举的例子是过去的事情，一定要用过去时态。
下面按照这个思路举一个普通人的例子：
To clarify the truth that love looks like a lamp, which appears brighter in scaring darkness, I would like to point out a vivid case as follows. The other day, I got sick but nobody stayed with me for all students in my dormitory went shopping on Sunday. At that moment, my teacher, Mr. Liu, came in to supply me with certain medicines. Soon, I recovered and could attend class normally. It might be, in the eye of the teacher, one small thing. However, I was really grateful for his assistance. If there were no help from my dearest teacher, I would become worse on that day.
【翻译】为了说明爱心就像一盏灯，它在可怕的照暗中显得越明亮这个事实，我想作出如下这个生动的例子。前几天，我生病了，但没有人陪我，因为同宿舍的所有同学周日都去购物了。就在那时，我的老师刘老师，进来给我送了一些药。很快，我就康复了，可以正常上课了。在老师看来，这可能是件小事。然而，我真的很感谢他的帮助。如果没有我最亲爱的老师的帮助，我那天就会病得更严重。
举例常用的表达是：
①Examples to prove the view are abundant. The most persuasive one is the case of sb. who...
证明这一观点的例子很多。最有说服力的例子是关于某人…
② This can be illustrated by the example of sb. who..
这可以用某人 的例子来说明。
③ Such stimulating/less impressive cases/ stories are not rare in our daily life.
在我们的日常生活中，这样给人印象深到/不那么令人印象深刻的案例/ 故事并不罕见。
④To examine this, let's return to the example of sb./sth.
为了说明这一点，让我们回到某人/ 某物的例子。
⑤There exist too plentiful cases like this in the routine of our life to list. However, the most impressive one is about myself.
在我们的日常生活中，这样的例子大多了。但最令人印象深刻的例子是关于我自己的。
⑥Although so abundant cases can support my simple view, the following one is the most favorable.
虽然有这么至的例子可以支特我的简单观点，但下面这个例子是最合适的。
⑦So the case vividly clarifies a truth that... has played a crucial role in our success/life. 因此，这个例子生动地阐明了一个事实：……在我们的成功/生活中起了至关重要的作用。
⑧ If there were no..., sb./sth, would do... 如果没有…，某人或某物将会…

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