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When I was a young girl, I used to love going adventuring. My dad always took me down to the bush every weekend and we collected many sticks and stones to add to our collection. I wasn’t like any ordinary girl as 1 loved the outdoors even as a young kid. I was never into dolls and tea parties.
Soon I became old enough to venture out on my own. When I ventured forth through the Australian bush land, I felt as if I was in heaven. There was nothing more beautiful than feeling the cool air brushing across my back. The leaves crushed beneath my feet at every step. I felt as if I was home.
As the sun dipped down beyond the horizon, there was nothing more to do than to head back home.On my way I heard a screeching(尖叫声). It was the most horrible sound I had ever heard in my life.Sure enough, I just had to investigate. In the dead of night, I headed towards the screech and came across a lake or river of some sort. Looking up and down the river, I couldn’t find a way to cross it. In much shame I decided to give up. It was about one o’clock in the morning and I thought my dad must be getting worried.
As I moved away from the lake, there was only one problem that I did not remember which direction I came from. My brain told me left but my instinct(直觉) told me right. In my past experiences I had always gone with my instinct. So of course I went with my instinct. As I walked off into the distance, I could see the sun breaking out in my distant view.
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l.续写词数应为150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After what seemed like hours, I felt a sigh of relief rush through my body.
“You are alive!” my dad shouted, “You are alive!”
【续写思路一】主题上突出主人公在困境中的坚韧与勇气，以及父爱、亲情和自我坚持的重要性。
续写第一段可以描述主人公在荒野行走过程中对于选择正确方向的挣扎，以及在绝望中依然坚持前行的决心。为更好地与第二段首句衔接，可在本段构思一个场景：附近传来的沙沙声让“我”不禁停了下来。“我”的心脏怦怦跳着，紧张地努力透过黑暗想看清楚是什么，“我”不知道那是野兽潜伏在阴影中，还是风在“我”耳边耍花招，“我”屏住呼吸，静待变化。
续写的第二段描述主人公与父亲重逢时的感人一刻，并对主题进行升华。可以承接第一段描写当“我”听到父亲的喊声时，心中涌起了一种无法言喻的喜悦和安心。原来“我”听到的沙沙声是父亲在寻找我时发出来的。本段可通过强调家庭的力量和父爱的重要性，以及主人公从这次经历中所得到的成长和启示来进行结尾。
【续写思路二】主题上可表达亲情和坚持的主题，突出主人公面对困境时的勇气和坚持，以及父亲的关心和支持。
在第一段中可续写主人公最终在疲惫和不安中找到了家的方向。熟悉的环境和凉爽的空气使她确信自己离家很近。在迷雾中，模糊但熟悉的身影站在家前的高大树木下，原来是她的父亲！她鼓足勇气朝着家跑去。这段时间似乎漫长无尽，但最终她感到一阵如释重负的宽慰，因为她坚信自己的选择是正确的。
在第二段中可续写主人公被父亲发现的情景。父亲可能会表现出担心和紧张，但同时也充满了对女儿终于能平安回来的喜悦和庆幸。他可能会温柔地安慰主人公，告诉她一切都会好起来，并且承诺会永远保护她。这时，主人公感受到一股温暖和安心，知道自己不再孤独，因为有父亲的陪伴和支持。1
范文1：
After what seemed like hours, I felt a sigh of relief rush through my body. The night enveloped me in its dark, unsettling atmosphere, with only the faint glow of the stars above to light my way. Every step I took felt heavy with uncertainty, and fear gnawed at the edges of my mind. But I pressed on, determined to find my way back home. Suddenly, a rustling sound nearby made me freeze in my tracks. My heart pounded in my chest as I strained to see through the darkness. Was it a wild animal lurking in the shadows, or just the wind tricks on my ears I held my breath, waiting for any sign of movement.
“You are alive!” my dad shouted, “You are alive!” His voice cut through the silence like a beacon of hope, guiding me towards safety. With a surge of relief, I stumbled towards the familiar sound, tears of gratitude streaming down my cheeks. My dad rushed to embrace me, his strong arms wrapping around me in a protective hug. In that moment, all my fears melted away, replaced by overwhelming gratitude for his unwavering love and support. As we made our way back home together, I vowed never to underestimate the power of instinct and the importance of family in guiding us through life's darkest moments.
默写版：
After what seemed like hours, I felt a sigh of relief rush through my body. _____________________________________________________________________夜晚把我笼罩在黑暗而令人不安的气氛中，只有上方微弱的星星照亮了我的路. Every step I took felt heavy with uncertainty, and fear gnawed at the edges of my mind. _______________________________________________________________我坚持了下来，决心找到回家的路. Suddenly, a rustling sound nearby made me freeze in my tracks. My heart pounded in my chest as I strained to see through the darkness. Was it a wild animal lurking in the shadows, or just the wind tricks on my ears _________________________________________________________我屏住呼吸，等待任何移动的迹象.
“You are alive!” my dad shouted, “You are alive!” His voice cut through the silence like a beacon of hope, guiding me towards safety. ______________________________________________________我如释重负，跌跌撞撞地走向熟悉的声音，感激的泪水顺着脸颊流了下来. My dad rushed to embrace me, his strong arms wrapping around me in a protective hug. __________________________________________________________________在那一刻，我所有的恐惧都烟消云散了，取而代之的是对他坚定不移的爱和支持的感激之情. As we made our way back home together, ___________________________________________________________发誓永远不会低估本能的力量 and the importance of family in guiding us through life's darkest moments.
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范文2：
After what seemed like hours, I felt a sigh of relief rush through my body. Lost in the dense Australian bush, surrounded by unfamiliar sounds and shadows, fear had gripped me tightly. But as I continued to follow my instinct, the path lit by morning sun light eventually led me to a familiar clearing. The relief flooded over me like a warm wave, washing away the panic and uncertainty. It was a moment of triumph, a testament to the resilience of the human spirit in the face of adversity.
“You are alive!” my dad shouted, “You are alive!” His voice echoed through the trees, filled with a mixture of relief and concern. Rushing towards me, he enveloped me in a tight embrace, his warmth and familiar scent comforting me like nothing else could. Tears welled up in my eyes as I realized how close I had come to danger, how fortunate I was to have found my way back. In that moment, I knew that no matter where life's adventures took me, I would always find my way home, guided by the love and support of those who cared for me.
默写版：
After what seemed like hours, I felt a sigh of relief rush through my body. ___________________________________________________迷失在茂密的澳大利亚灌木丛中, surrounded by unfamiliar sounds and shadows, fear had gripped me tightly. But as I continued to follow my instinct, the path lit by morning sun light eventually led me to a familiar clearing. _____________________________如释重负如暖波般涌上心头，洗去了恐慌和不确定性. It was a moment of triumph, a testament to the resilience of the human spirit in the face of adversity.
“You are alive!” my dad shouted, “You are alive!” ___________________
__________________________________________他的声音在树林中回响，充满了宽慰和担忧. Rushing towards me, he enveloped me in a tight embrace, his warmth and familiar scent comforting me like nothing else could. ____________________
__________________________________________________当我意识到自己离危险有多近，能找到回来的路是多么幸运时，泪水夺眶而出. In that moment, I knew that no matter where life's adventures took me, I would always find my way home, guided by the love and support of those who cared for me.
范文3：
After what seemed like hours, I felt a sigh of relief rush through my body. Despite the darkness enveloping me and the uncertainty of my surroundings, I pressed on, guided only by my instinct. Every step I took felt heavier than the last, as if the weight of my decision to trust my gut was bearing down on me. The cool morning air whispered secrets as I walked forward, my heart pounding in my chest with each passing moment.
“You are alive!” my dad shouted, “You are alive!” His voice breaking through the stillness of the dawn like a beacon of hope. Tears welled up in my eyes as I stumbled towards him, my legs trembling with exhaustion and relief. In that moment, his embrace felt like the safest place in the world. As we made our way back home, the first light of dawn painted the sky with hues of pink and gold, illuminating our path forward. Though I had wandered into the darkness, I emerged with a newfound appreciation for the guiding light of family and the resilience of the human spirit.

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