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新高考英语读后续写系统备考训练28
Cohesion & Coherence
语篇衔接与连贯性
词汇同现或词汇复现
●第一&二段开头→ 回应段首句的名词或动词→ 语义连贯
●第一段结尾→ 复现第二段首句的同词或同义词→ 无缝衔接
●第二段结尾→ 体现主题或回应伏笔→ 主题升华
Foreshadowing 伏笔：When an author mentions or hints at something that will happen later in the story.
Plot情节：Character+Action=Plot
【读后续写阅读填词篇】 人与动物和谐相处Rescuing Homeless Dogs
Last summer, I had a life-____________(change) experience when I decided to join a group of volunteers in rescuing homeless dogs. It all started when I read a post on social media about a group of _____________(abandon) dogs in desperate need of help.Without ____________(hesitate), I reached out to the organization leading the rescue mission.
Early one Saturday morning, our team gathered at a local animal shelter, ___________(arm) with _____________(determine) and a strong sense of purpose.We loaded the necessary supplies into our van, ________(include) food,water,blankets and leashes. As we set off, a mix of __________(excite) and __________(nervous) filled the air.
Our destination was a run-down area on the outskirts of town. The deserted streets were home to numerous homeless dogs, __________ had become victims of neglect.These innocent creatures, once someone's beloved pets, were now struggling to survive on their own. Upon _____________(arrive), our hearts sank at the sight of many poor dogs searching for food among the piles of garbage. It was a heartbreaking scene.We ____________(immediate) sprang into action, ____________(spread) out to cover every corner of the neighborhood.
_____________(Approach) the dogs _____________(cautious), we soon discovered that gaining their trust was not an easy task. Many had learned to fear humans after lasting unthinkable hardships. It took ___________(patient), gentle words and gestures to approach them without ___________(cause) distress.With each successful rescue, our spirits were uplifted. Some dogs _____________(willing) followed us, desperate to escape their miserable lives. Others required a bit more comfort, but ______________(eventual), we managed to lead them to ____________(safe). They received medical attention and were provided with much-needed love.
As the days went by, our team experienced both moments of joy and heartache. Some dogs were fortunate enough to find loving homes, _________ others faced challenges due to their ____________(extreme) unpleasant pasts. But through it all, we persisted, _____________(know) that saving every life made a ____________(different).
Our efforts began to produce positive results.The community took notice of our work, and more people joined in to lend a helping hand. __________(Slow) but surely, the situation began to change. More homeless dogs were rescued, and eventually adopted into caring families. Our small acts of ____________(kind) created a good effect that reached far beyond that neighborhood. We may not have been able to save every homeless dog, _____ the ones we did rescue inspired hope and sympathy.
Looking back on the summer, I am _________(fill) with a sense of pride and contentment. ___________(Rescue) homeless dogs taught me the value of ______________(selfish) and perseverance. Now, I know there are many creatures in this world that need our love, and that we humans should learn to live in ____________(和谐) with them. I appreciate these beautiful creatures because of their remarkable ______________(adaptable). It is an experience ______ changes my life forever and serves as a reminder that we all have the power to make a difference to the world.
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【读后续写实战篇】
Last summer, I had a life-changing experience when I decided to join a group of volunteers in rescuing homeless dogs. It all started when I read a post on social media about a group of abandoned dogs in desperate need of help.Without hesitation, I reached out to the organization leading the rescue mission.
Early one Saturday morning, our team gathered at a local animal shelter, armed with determination and a strong sense of purpose.We loaded the necessary supplies into our van, including food,water, blankets and leashes. As we set off, a mix of excitement and nervousness filled the air.
Our destination was a run-down area on the outskirts of town. The deserted streets were home to numerous homeless dogs, which had become victims of neglect.These innocent creatures, once someone's beloved pets, were now struggling to survive on their own. Upon arriving, our hearts sank at the sight of many poor dogs searching for food among the piles of garbage. It was a heartbreaking scene.We immediately sprang into action, spreading out to cover every corner of the neighborhood.
Approaching the dogs cautiously, we soon discovered that gaining their trust was not an easy task, Many had learned to fear humans after lasting unthinkable hardships. It took patience, gentle words and gestures to approach them without causing distress.With each successful rescue, our spirits were uplifted.Some dogs willingly followed us, desperate to escape their miserable lives. Others required a bit more comfort, but eventually, we managed to lead them to safety. They received medical attention and were provided with much-needed love.
As the days went by, our team experienced both moments of joy and heartache. Some dogs were fortunate enough to find loving homes, while others faced challenges due to their extremely unpleasant pasts. But through it all, we persisted，knowing that saving every life made a difference.
注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph1: Our efforts began to produce positive results.__________________________________________________
Paragraph2: Looking back on the summer, I am filled with a sense of pride and contentment. _____________________

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