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写作练习九 感谢信
1.概述：感谢信是指在日常学习和生活中，当收到馈赠、邀请、赴宴、照顾、慰问、祝贺时，给对方道谢的信件。
2.注意事项：感谢信应写得真诚、具体、及时；同时提到对方给予帮助时为已经发生的事，因此时态为过去时。
3.谋篇布局:
首段： 打招呼+写信目的（表达谢意）；
中间段： 感谢的原因（描写受恩惠的经过）；
尾段： 提出希望以表回报，再次感谢。
Useful expression：
be truly/deeply grateful/thankful to sb. for sth.因某事真心感谢某人
express/convey/extend my sincere/heartfelt thanks/ gratitude/ appreciation to sb. for sth.因某事真心感谢某人
写作练习
假设你是李津，你上学期参加了学校举办的第十届英语演讲比赛，并荣获”十佳奖"。在准备参赛期问，你的外教Mr Craige对你提供了很多指导和帮助。现请你用英语给他写一封感谢信。内容包括:
获奖情况;
回顾准备过程并感谢他的帮助;
邀他来家做客。
注意:(1)100词左右;
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇: 十佳奖Top Ten Prize
Dear Mr Craige,
首段：
问候：How is everything going with you lately I miss you so much.
写信目的+获奖情况
On/upon hearing the news that I won the Top Ten Prize in the 10th English Speaking Contest, I can’t wait to express my sincere gratitude to you for your help in English learning.
Learning that I won the Top Ten Prize in the 10th English Speaking Contest ,I am eagerly writing to extend my heartfelt appreciation to you for giving me many useful suggestions on writing.
I am writing to convey my sincere gratitude to you for your generous and patient help.
Thanks to your help, I have got the “Top Ten Prize” in the 10th English Speaking Contest held by our school.
中间段：回顾准备过程
Looking back on（回顾） the preparation process，I still remember that you spent much time helping me polish my writing（润色我的文章） again and again.
Definitely,it was under your professional guidance that I was able to learn more useful expressions and presentation skills.
When I was under great pressure,it was your encouragement that enabled me to go through the hard times.
What counted most was that you offered me useful speaking skills and practiced with me.
What was the most important was that you taught me how to choose a suitable topic and how to use body language properly(恰当地；合适地).
But for/without your assistance,I wouldn’t have made such great progress in my English and finally won the prize.
Thanks to your patient guidance and selfless help, I overcame my fear of speaking in public and became more outgoing.
句式：
It was+强调部分+that +剩余部分
It was your+n. +that enabled me to do...
What counted most was that +完整句子
What was the most important was that+完整句子
But for/Without +n.,I wouldn’t have done...
Thanks to +名词,I....
邀请：To express my thanks,I sincerely invite you to my home during the winter vacation.
尾段：
再次感谢：
Thank you again for everything you have done for me.
Never will I forget your professional guidance and timely help.
My gratitude is beyond description.
I can never thank you enough.
Wish you all the best and I am looking forward to your coming.
参考范文
Dear Mr Craige,
How is everything going with you lately On hearing the news that I won the Top Ten Prize in the 10th English Speaking Contest, I can’t wait to express my sincere gratitude to you for your help in English learning.
Looking back on the preparation process,I still remember that you spent much time helping me polishing my writing again and again. When I was under great pressure,it was your encouragement that enabled me to go through the hard times.But for your assistance,I wouldn’t have made such great progress in my English and finally won the prize. To express my thanks,I sincerely invite you to my home during the winter vacation.
All in all,thank you again for everything you have done for me.Wish you all the best and I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Jin

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