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写作练习七 建议信
概述：建议信是书信的一种形式，属于应用文。建议信是写信人向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告，有可能是写给个人，就收信人遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服务等方面提出建议或忠告。
注意事项：
建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。
时态应以一般现在时为主。
由于是给别人提出建议，所以人称应该以第二人称为主。
谋篇布局：
首段：回顾背景并表明写作目的。
中段：提出建议（写理由）
尾段：希望自己的建议能被采纳、希望建议有帮助。
写作练习
假定你是李明。你的外国朋友 David 最近选修了中文课程。他来信向你咨询学好中文的方法。请你写一封回信，内容包括：
1．提出建议；2．表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
首段：
问候：How is everything going？
背景+目的：
Knowing that you have taken Chinese as an elective/optional course,I am writing to put forward(提出) some tips on how to learn Chinese well.
take...as an elective/optional course选修...课程
I am more than delighted to receive your letter where you consulted me about how to learn Chinese well. I feel great honored to offer you some practical（实际的；是用的） suggestions.
consult sb. about sth.咨询某人某事
I'm extremely delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.In response to（为了回应） your request,I'm writing to offer my suggestions.
中间段：（提建议）
建议1：观看中文节目或听中文歌，锻炼中文听力
It is a good idea to watch some Chinese programs and listen to some Chinese songs, which can help to practise your listening ability.
建议2：多读书看报，提高词汇量和理解能力
You are suggested to read Chinese books and newspapers, through which you can not only expand vocabulary（扩大词汇量） but also improve reading comprehension（理解力）.
建议3：利用社交媒体，了解中国文化。
It is advisable(wise明智的) to take advantage of social media,such as China Daily and TiK Tok,where you’ll find abundant（rich） learning resources to learn about Chinese culture.
利用：take advantage of；make use of；make the most of；make the best of
建议4：多多结交中国朋友，在交往中提高中文口语
Making Chinese friends is also a good choice.By immersing yourself in a real language environment, your spoken/oral Chinese(口语) is bound to(肯定会) get improved.
immerse oneself in沉浸在...
Doing sth. is a good choice/idea.
建议5：上好中文课，听从老师的指导
If I were you, I would follow teachers' instructions（听从老师的指导）.After all, they are professional and experienced.
If I were you,I would follow teacher’s instructions,which can lay a solid foundation for(为...打下坚实的基础) Chinese learning.
建议6：多复习学过的东西
You had better review what you've learned regularly to strengthen your memory.
建议7：亲自来中国看看
If possible,why not come to China in person（亲自） In this way, you will feel the charm of Chinese culture and eventually be eager to（渴望） learn more.
表达建议的句型：
It is a good idea to do sth.做某事是一个好主意
You are suggested/supposed to 你应该...
You should do你应该
You had better do你最好...
It is advisable/wise to do做某事是明智的
Doing sth. is a good choice/idea.做某事是一个好选择/注意。
If I were you, I would do...如果我是你，我会....
Why not do为什么不...样呢？
尾端：
希望：
I do hope my suggestions can be of great help.
I hope you will find these suggestions practical/ useful/ helpful.
祝愿：
May you make huge progress in learning Chinese.
I’m sure your constant efforts will be rewarded.
If you have other questions,don’t hesitate to contact me.
If you have other questions,please feel free to contact me.
参考范文
Dear David,
How is everything I’m more than delighted to know that you’ve taken Chinese as an optional course.In response to your request,I'm writing to offer my suggestions.
To begin with,it's advisable to expose yourself to Chinese frequently by listening to Chinese songs or watching Chinese programs.What’s more,making Chinese friends is also a good choice.By immersing yourself in a real language environment, your oral Chinese is bound to get improved.Definitely,if I were you, I would follow teachers' instructions.After all, they are professional and experienced.
All in all,I do hope you will find these suggestions practical.May you make huge progress in learning Chinese.If you have other questions,please feel free to contact me.
Yours,
Li Ming

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