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Brianna Kemp's father had to move her entire family from Chicago to a small town in Maryland after his business went bankrupt, He didn't lose faith in life, though, and decided to start his family's new life there.
Along with the move came a new school for Brianna, who was 14 years old. She had a difficult time accepting the move, as she was a popular cheerleader at her school in Chicago. She also had a good set of friends, and she didn't exactly like meeting new people.
When it was time to go to school, her father drove her there to wish her well. “Good luck sweetheart. I know this is going to be difficult for you, but you can do it. I know you can!” he said.giving her a kiss on the forehead.
“Thanks, Dad,” Brianna said quietly before leaving the car. While she was sad, Brianna didn't want her dad to worry even more, so she put on a brave smile and waved before her father drove away.When she got to the school, she was greeted by the school secretary, Mrs. Keppler. “Hello,welcome to Chester Middle School! I'm going to give you a quick tour ofthe school," she said.
“Thank you,” Brianna responded shyly and nervously.Mrs. Keppler showed Brianna around, pointing her to the cafeteria, the school auditorium, and the gym. They also passed through the art and music rooms, the science laboratories, and the kitchen.Finally, Brianna was led to the classroom and started her suffering first school day. Faced up with so many new faces, she made a brief self-introduction, still nervous. Then she was guided to sit in the back row alone. During the breaks, all the students seemed so familiar with each other. Brianna found it hard to start a conversation with any one of them, as they were always busy with their own friends.She felt like she was an outsider and didn't belong. What a suffering the first school day was! So were the following weeks.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When the day was finally over, Brianna shared her day with her father
Over the next few weeks, things changed beyond Brianna 's imagination.
原文分析：
人物:
Brianna; Brianna's father, Mrs. Keppler, classmates
原文情节:
讲述了Brianna Kemp的父亲的生意破产后，全家从Chicago搬迁到一个Maryland的小镇。
Brianna Kemp第一天来到学校，学校秘书带她参观了学校，但是看到其他同学，她在新学校感觉自己像个局外人，新学校的第一天过得很糟糕.
续写思路发展：
When the day was finally over, Brianna shared her day with her father.
Over the next few weeks, things changed beyond Brianna's imagination.
由第一段首句内容“这一天终于结束了，Brianna与父亲分享了她的一天。”可知，第一段可描写父亲与Brianna的互动。由第二段首句内容“在接下来的几周里，事情的变化超出了Brianna的想象。”可以推测，在第一段里需要写父亲安慰并鼓励Brianna，Brianna受到启发后决定积极参与学校生活:
由第二段首句内容和正能量原则.可以推测第二段可描写Brianna积极融入学校生活，她心理的转变。
还可以与第一段进行协同呼应再次描写Brianna与父亲互动，分享喜悦，体现出情节的变化。
由于父亲的鼓励，Brianna融入了新学校，展开了生活的新章，那么Brianna的改变会对父亲有什么样的影响呢 可以与原文进行协同呼应，(原文中写到搬到这个小镇是因为父亲破产宽慰，自己也对未来有了更多信心→父亲看到Brianna的变化.
续写情节安排：
When the day was finally over, Brianna shared her day with her father.
①听到Brianna的话，父亲担心，鼓励(表情，语言，动作，心理)
②Brianna对于父亲鼓励的回应(表情，动作，心理)
③Brianna为fit in作出的努力
④事情的好转，心中的期待
Over the next few weeks, things changed beyond Brianna's imagination.
①周围情况的转变-给了生活和心理的变化
②)Brianna和父亲分享喜悦
③父亲看到Brianna的变化，宽慰，为对未来有了更多信心
④升华
妙用句式：
When the day was finally over, Brianna shared her day with her father
①听到Brianna的话，父亲担心，鼓励
Upon hearing Brianna's words,,“New life means not only new challenges but also opportunities," Brianna's father comforted her in a gentle voice, patting her on the head.
【衔接+语言描写+具体动作描写】【非谓语+not only...but also)
②)Brianna对于父亲鼓励的回应
Catching sight of her father's determined look,Brianna was. With no words said, overwhelmed by a strong surge of confidence，a smile of understanding flashed across her face. She knew that fitting in wasn't going to be easy, but she was ready to make an effort.衔接+表情描写+心理活动描写】【非谓语+with复合结构】
③Brianna为fit in作出的努力
During the next few days, she encouraged herself to reach out to some of those who were talkative, and actively involved in their conversations.
固定搭配+定语从句)
④事情的好转，心中的期待
To her surprise, most of them were easy to get along with. At that time, the initial anxiety gradually disappeared, converting into a sense of belonging【衔接】【非谓语:描述心情变化的万能句式】
⑥周围情况的转变-给了Brianna更多的信心Thanks to her courage, Brianna was finally able to break into her class's social circle at the new school. She got to know more classmates and be friended them. They chatted about their interests, had fun together after school, and supported each other during tough times, which filled Brianna with confidence and happiness.
【衔接】【动作链+定语从句】
⑦Brianna和父亲分享喜悦Back home, Brianna shared the new changes at school with her father. Her face lit up with a charming smile and her eyes glittered with excitement.
【表情描写:喜悦】
⑧父亲看到Brianna的变化，宽慰，为对未来有了更多信心Looking into Brianna's sparkling eyes, her father breathed a sigh of relief and he could see a bright future for their family in this town.
【衔接+心理活动描写】
⑨升华【多种特殊句式】
It was not until then did sb realise the significance of...(倒装(强调)It was at that moment that sb realised what mattered most was..But for/ Without... , sb wouldn't have realise/sth wouldn't have turned out to be...(虚拟)
Only when we take the initiative to change ourselves, can we successfully adapt to a new environment.(倒装)
参考范文：
When the day was finally over, Brianna shared her day with her father.Upon hearing Brianna's words, “New life means not only new challenges but also opportunities," Brianna's father comforted her in a gentle voice, patting her on the head. Catching sight of her father's determined look, Brianna was overwhelmed by a strong surge of confidence. With no words said, a smile of understanding flashed across her face. She knew that fitting in wasn't going to be easy, but she was ready to make an effort. During the next few days, she encouraged herself to reach out to some of those who were talkative, and actively involved in their conversations.To her surprise, most of them were easy to get along with. At that time, the initial anxiety gradually disappeared, converting into a sense of belonging.Over the next few weeks, things changed beyond Brianna's imagination.Thanks to her courage, Brianna was finally able to break into her class's social circle at the new school. She got to know more classmates and befriended them. They chatted about their interests and had fun together after school, and supported each other during tough times, which filled Brianna with confidence and happiness. Back home, Brianna shared the new changes at school with her father, and she could hardly contain her excitement. Looking into Brianna's sparkling eyes, her father breathed a sigh of relief and he could see a bright future for their family in this town. Only when we take the initiative to change ourselves,can we successfully adapt to a new environment.

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