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Through the dining room window, the rays of the setting sun glowed orange and gold. It looked like a huge traditional lantern(灯笼)lit in the sky for the whole world to see, as Ramadan(斋月), the Muslim(穆斯林)holy month, came to an end.
透过餐厅的窗户，落日的光芒闪耀着橙色和金色。它看起来像一个巨大的传统灯笼(灯笼)照亮天空，让全世界都能看到，就像斋月一样(斋月), 穆斯林(穆斯林)神圣的月份，结束了。
During Ramadan, Muslim children dance in the streets, swinging traditional lanterns of all sizes. This year, Ayasha's grandparents in Egypt had sent a lantern to Kamil, Ayasha's younger brother. Kamil's lantern was bright blue, with a battery-powered flashing light instead of a candle. Ever since Kamil had opened the package, he had been joyously swinging( 旋转) his flashing lantern.
斋月期间，穆斯林儿童在街上跳舞，挥动各种大小的传统灯笼。今年，Ayasha在埃及的祖父母给Ayasha的弟弟Kamil送了一盏灯笼。卡米尔的灯笼是亮蓝色的，用电池供电的闪光灯代替了蜡烛。自从卡米尔打开包裹后，他就高兴地摆动着（旋转)他闪烁的灯笼。
“His lantern is really just a holiday toy,"Ayasha said to herself as she watched him,"My lantern is special,something I want to keep forever". Her lantern,made of beautiful shiny glass, was a loving touch of home. Her grandparents had sent it to her when her family moved to America for her dad's new engineering job. Ayasha smiled proudly as she lit the candle inside her lantern.
“他的灯笼真的只是一个节日玩具，”Ayasha看着他对自己说，“我的灯笼很特别，我想永远保存下去。”她的灯笼是由美丽闪亮的玻璃制成的，是一种充满爱的家的感觉。当她的家人搬到美国为她父亲的新工程工作时，她的祖父母把它寄给了她。Ayasha骄傲地笑着点燃灯笼里的蜡烛。
Tomorrow would be a day for celebration —for wearing new clothes to morning prayers(祷告)for sharing gifts and sweet treats and for showing love to family and friends. Ayasha couldn't wait.
明天将是庆祝的日子——穿着新衣服去做晨祷(祷告)分享礼物和甜食，向家人和朋友表达爱意。Ayasha等不及了。
“Timefor dinner!The food smells delicious!”Dad announced.“My favorite cake!”Kamil cried excitedly, swinging his lantern in circles.“Be careful,Kamil!”Mom cried and carefully avoided the swinging lantern as she carried a large bowl of soup to the table. But Kamil was too excited to calm down. The blue light kept swinging until unfortunately, he knocked into Mom. His lantern fell onto the sofa and was intact(完好无损的),but the bowl Mom was holding fell to the floor,spilling(洒)the soup and sending broken pieces everywhere!
“晚饭时间到了！食物闻起来很香！”爸爸宣布。卡米尔兴奋地喊道：“我最喜欢的蛋糕！”他把灯笼转了一圈。“小心点，卡米尔！”妈妈一边哭一边小心翼翼地避开摆动的灯笼，一边端着一大碗汤端到桌子上。但卡米尔太激动了，无法平静下来。蓝光一直在闪烁，直到不幸的是，他撞到了妈妈。他的灯笼掉在沙发上，完好无损(完好无损的),但是妈妈拿着的碗掉到了地板上，洒了出来(洒)汤和发送碎片到处！
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2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
To make things worse, Kamil stumbled(绊倒)against the table,knocking over Ayasha’glass lantern.
Ayasha opened the door and saw Kamil standing there with his most-treasured lantern.
故事梗概：
这是穆斯林斋月前一天，弟弟Kamil收到了爷爷奶奶的一份礼物——一个漂亮的电池蓝灯笼。当Kamil拿着灯笼开心得转圈炫耀时，姐姐Ayasha虽然有点羡慕，但是看到前两年爷爷奶奶送给自己的玻璃灯笼，感到也很自豪。
很明显Kamil有点兴奋过头了。当妈妈端着一大碗汤过来、并且提醒他不要再转圈、以防止碰到时，Kamil根本听不进去。突然，他碰到了妈妈，他的灯笼掉到沙发上。而妈妈的汤碗掉到地上碎了，汤撒了一地。
Para 1:更加糟糕的是，Kamil绊到了桌子，然后碰上Ayasha的玻璃灯笼。
Para 2: Ayasha打开门，看见Kamil手里提着他最珍爱的灯笼站在门口。
续写情节发展：
第一段1.the consequence of Kamil’s stumble乐极生悲
Ayasha’s feelings and reactions悲痛欲绝
Kamil’s feelings and reactions后悔不迭（注意衔接）
第二段：1.Kamil’s apology赔礼道歉
Ayasha’s reactions接纳迎接
Theme揭示主题
【初步构思】
To make things worse, Kamil stumbled against the table, knocking over Ayasha's glass lantern. The beautiful shiny glass shattered into pieces, scattering all over the floor. Ayasha felt her heart sink as she looked at the broken pieces of her special lantern. She couldn't help but feel upset and angry at Kamil for being so careless.
Ayasha opened the door and saw Kamil standing there with his most-treasured lantern. His eyes were filled with remorse, and he held out the lantern to her. "I'm so sorry, Ayasha. I didn't mean to break your lantern," Kamil said, his voice filled with genuine regret.
【衔接+升华】
To make things worse, Kamil stumbled(绊倒) against the table, knocking over Ayasha’s glass lantern. Its breaking glass sounded like a warning bell, and the candle inside blew out immediately. The room was very quiet for a moment. “Accidents happen,” Mom broke the silence with a sigh as she wiped up the spills. In a fit of anger, Ayasha stormed into her bedroom with her broken lantern, slamming the door behind her. The bright Ramadan sunset faded to darkness, and her excitement faded with it. For her, the celebration was spoiled before it even started. Ayasha cried herself to sleep. Suddenly, she was waken up by a knock on the door.
Ayasha opened the door and saw Kamil standing there with his most-treasured lantern.With his head drooping, he said softly, “You can have my lantern since I broke yours.” Knowing how much his first lantern meant to him, Ayasha was touched by his offer. Ramadan was a time for family and forgiveness, and lanterns were only symbols. The real light and warmth came from acts of kindness. Ayasha embraced her brother and answered, “Thank you, Kamil, but keep your lantern. Go to bed early tonight. We don’t want to be late for morning prayers tomorrow.” Ayasha smiled, determined to give thanks for strength, health, and all the blessings in life.（参考答案）
【下水作文】
To make things worse, Kamil stumbled against the table, knocking over Ayasha's glass lantern. The beautiful shiny glass shattered into countless pieces, scattering across the floor. Ayasha gasped in shock, her eyes welling up with tears as she looked at the broken remnants of her cherished lantern. The room fell silent, the excitement and joy that had filled the air just moments ago now replaced by a heavy atmosphere of disappointment. Ayasha's parents rushed to clean up the mess, carefully picking up the broken glass and wiping away the spilled soup. Kamil stood in the corner, his face filled with regret and sadness. He knew he had caused a great deal of trouble and had ruined his sister's precious lantern. Unable to contain her emotions any longer, Ayasha ran to her room and closed the door behind her. She sat on her bed, feeling a mix of anger and sadness. But as she wiped away her tears, a thought occurred to her. Perhaps this accident was a reminder of what truly mattered during this special time of celebration.
Ayasha opened the door and saw Kamil standing there with his most-treasured lantern. Its bright blue light still flashed, illuminating the hallway. In that moment, Ayasha realized that material possessions could be replaced, but the love and bond between family members were irreplaceable. With a genuine smile on her face, Ayasha hugged Kamil tightly and said, "It's okay, Kamil. What matters most is that we are together and safe. Let's focus on the true meaning of this holiday and cherish the moments we have with each other." Kamil's eyes lit up with relief and gratitude. He hugged Ayasha back, understanding the importance of their connection and the forgiveness she had shown him. From that day forward, Ayasha and Kamil celebrated Ramadan not just with lanterns and gifts, but with a deeper appreciation for the love and unity that their family shared. The broken lanterns became a symbol of their resilience and the strength of their bond, reminding them to cherish every moment and embrace the true spirit of Ramadan.

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