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Julia always enjoyed running through The Dark Walk towards the light at the end of it. It was a dark, damp tunnel (隧道) made of smooth branches. This year she had the extra joy of showing it to her small brother, Stephen, and of terrifying him as well as herself.
One day they found a hole on one side of the walk. Inside there was water, in which they perceived a panting trout (喘息的鳟鱼). They were both so excited that they were no longer afraid of the darkness as they bent down and peered at the fish panting in his tiny prison, his silver stomach going up and down like an engine; otherwise he was motionless. Julia wondered what he ate and thought of his hunger. She found him a worm. He ignored the food, and just went on panting. Bending over him, she thought how he had been in there. All the winter, in the dark tunnel, all day, all night, floating around alone.
Nobody knew how the fish got there. Her mother suggested that a bird had carried the egg. Her father thought that in the winter a small stream might have carried it down there as a baby, and it had been safe until summer came and the water began to dry up.
Before they went to bed, Stephen asked his mummy the whole story of the trout, not really interested in the actual trout, but in the story which his mum began to make up for him, and Julia, in her bed, presented her back to them and read her book. But she kept one ear cocked.“And so, in the end, this naughty fish got bigger and bigger, and the water got smaller and smaller…”Passionately, she turned around and cried,“mummy, don't make it a horrible old moral story.” Her mom even brought in a fairy (仙子) , who had made it rain and filled the hole, so that the trout could float away down to the river below. Staring at the moon she knew there was no such thing as a fairy and that the trout, down in the tunnel, was panting for his life.
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1.续写词数应为 150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
She sat up in the silent night and Stephan was sound asleep.
Julia poured the trout out of the pot into the river.
中文意思：
她在寂静的夜里坐了起来，斯蒂芬睡着了。她走出卧室，拿着一只锅跑向那条可怜的鳟鱼。尽管她在黑暗中感到害怕，但一种责任感涌上了她的心头。“这个小洞永远不会是你的监狱。”她喃喃自语地对气喘吁吁的生物说，“但我怎么能把你从深洞里救出来呢？”突然，她意识到，也许她可以像仙女一样把水装满洞。接下来的三个小时里，朱莉娅用附近河里的水把洞填满。最后，她抓住它，把它放进锅里，然后冲向河边。
茱莉亚把锅里的鳟鱼倒进河里。看着正在消失的鳟鱼，朱莉亚非常高兴，幸福的浪潮涌上了她的心头。她毫不拖延地向家里冲去，向全家人宣布了这个消息。在确认了她的所作所为后，她的父母竖起大拇指称赞她。斯蒂芬喊道：“你一定是个仙女。”他的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光。每个人灿烂的笑容照亮了黑暗之路。如果不是因为朱莉亚的勇敢和妈妈的离奇故事，鳟鱼不可能穿过黑暗的洞穴跑向光明的河流。
【文本解析】
1.人物（角色）：
① 朱莉娅：朱莉娅总是喜欢穿过黑暗之路，朝着尽头的光明奔跑。
② 鳟鱼：在人行道一侧的洞里气喘吁吁
③ 斯蒂芬：朱莉娅的弟弟
④ 母亲和父亲：对鳟鱼来源的猜想；妈妈给Julia的弟弟编了个故事
2. Theme: Man and Nature (Self)
Julia and her younger brother often run through the Dark Walk tunnel. One day, they discovered a struggling trout in a small puddle inside the tunnel, which made kind-hearted Julia unable to sleep at night. So, Julia
3. Continuing plot arrangement:
First paragraph: She sat up in the silent night and Stephan was sound asleep
① Julia has mixed feelings in her heart and doesn't know what to do
② Final decision: prepare to save the trout's life
③ Julia returned to The Dark Walk, loaded the fish into the pot, and then brought it to the nearby river bank
Paragraph 2: Julia pooled the trout out of the point into the river
① At the beginning, the figure of the trout appeared faintly under the moonlight and soon disappeared into the river
② Complex thoughts once again surged into Julia's heart
③ Julia's understanding of this matter (in nature, in herself)
故事大意--本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读文章可知，讲述了作者两兄妹看到在隧道里看到喘息的鳟鱼，请教大人，在妈妈讲的故事中得到灵感，亲自救了鳟鱼并把它放生到河里的故事。
段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容"她在寂静的夜晚坐了起来，斯蒂芬睡着了"可知，第一段可描写作者走出卧室来到隧道旁边，从小河里取水并成功地将鳟鱼捉住并飞快地跑到河边。
②由第二段首句内容"茱莉亚把锅里的鳟鱼倒进河里"可知，第二段可描写作者将鳟鱼放生后，全家人都赞扬她的举动。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【参考范文】
She sat up in the silent night and Stephen was sound asleep. She got out of the bedroom and ran to the poor trout with a pot. Although she was scared in the darkness, a sense of responsibility welled up in her heart. "Never can the small hole be your prison." She murmured to the panting creature, "but how can I rescue you from the deep hole " Suddenly, it dawned on her that maybe she could fill the hole with water like a fairy. Next three hours witnessed Julia's effort in filling the hole with the water fetched from the river nearby. Finally, she grasped it, put it into the pot and raced out to the river.
Julia poured the trout out of the pot into the river. Staring at the disappearing trout, Julia was in great joy, a wave of happiness flooding over her. Without any delay, she charged back home like an arrow and announced the news to the whole family. Having confirmed what she had done,her parents gave a thumbs up to praise her. "You must be the very fairy" yelled Stephen,his eyes twinkling like a diamond. The bright smile from everyone lit up The Dark Walk. Hadn't it been for Julia's bravery and Mom's weird story, the trout couldn't have run through the dark hole towards the light river.
【点评】
本书面表达要点齐全，上下文连贯，使用一定数量的句式结构，让句子更加生动丰满，同时运用了许多高级词汇和固定短语，提高文章的档次，体现了对英语的熟练的驾驭能力。例如：Although she was scared in the darkness, a sense of responsibility welled up in her heart.运用了让步状语从句；Never can the small hole be your prison.运用了倒装句；Suddenly, it dawned on her that maybe she could fill the hole with water like a fairy. 运用了宾语从句；Next three hours witnessed Julia's effort in filling the hole with the water fetched from the river nearby.运用了过去分词作定语；Staring at the disappearing trout, Julia was in great joy, a wave of happiness flooding over her. 运用了独立主格结构；Having confirmed what she had done,her parents gave a thumbs up(竖起大拇指)to praise her. 运用了现在分词的完成式作状语，宾语从句；"You must be the very fairy" yelled Stephen,his eyes twinkling like a diamond. 运用了独立主格结构；Hadn't it been for Julia's bravery and Mom's weird(离奇的，怪诞的)story, the trout couldn't have run through the dark hole towards the light river.运用了倒装句，虚拟语气。

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