2024届高三英语写作专项:读后续写亲情类--伟人和他的女儿讲义素材

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2024届高三英语写作专项:读后续写亲情类--伟人和他的女儿讲义素材

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Once upon a time there was a great man who married the woman of his dreams. With their love, they created a little girl. She was a bright and cheerful little girl and the great man loved her very much.
从前,有一个伟人娶了他梦中的女人。用他们的爱,他们创造了一个小女孩。她是一个聪明开朗的小女孩,伟人非常爱她。
When she was very little, he would pick her up, hum a tune and dance with her around the room, and he would tell her, “I love you, little girl.” When the little girl was growing up, the great man would hug her and tell her, “I love you, little girl.” The little girl would pout and say, “I’m not a little girl anymore.” Then the man would laugh and say, “But to me, you’ll always be my little girl.”
当她很小的时候,他会抱起她,哼着歌,和她一起在房间里跳舞,然后他会告诉她,“我爱你,小女孩。”当小女孩长大的时候,伟人会拥抱她,告诉她,”我爱你。“小女孩会嘟着嘴说,”我不再是小女孩了。“然后男人会笑着说,”但对我来说,你永远是我的小女孩。“
The little girl who-was-not-little-anymore left her home and went into the world. As she learned more about herself, she learned more about the man. She saw that he truly was great and strong, for now she recognized his strengths. One of his strengths was his ability to express his love to his family. It didn’t matter where she went in the world. The man would call her and say, “I love you, little girl.”
这个已经不小了的小女孩离开了家,来到了这个世界上。随着她对自己的了解越来越多,她对这个男人的了解也越来越多。她看到他真的很伟大,很坚强,因为现在她认识到了他的优点。他的优点之一是能够向家人表达自己的爱。她去了哪里并不重要。男人会打电话给她说:“我爱你,小女孩。”
The day came when the little girl who-was-not-little-anymore received a phone call. The great man was damaged.
有一天,这个已经不小了的小女孩接到了一个电话。这位伟人受到了损害。
“He had had a stroke. He was aphasic,” they explained to the girl. He couldn’t talk anymore and they weren’t sure that he could understand the words spoken to him. He could no longer smile, laugh, walk, hug, dance or tell the little girl who-was-not-little-anymore that he loved her. And so she went to the side of the great man. When she walked into the room and saw him, he looked small and not strong at all. He looked at her and tried to speak, but he could not.
他们向女孩解释说:“他中风了。他失语症了。”。他不能再说话了,他们也不确定他是否能听懂对他说的话。他再也不能微笑、大笑、走路、拥抱、跳舞,也不能告诉这个不再是小女孩他爱她。于是她走到伟人身边。当她走进房间看到他时,他看起来很小,一点也不强壮。他看着她,想说话,但说不出来。
注意:
1.续写词数应为 150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The little girl did what she had been longing to.
And then she heard from within the man, the beat of his heart.
文本分析:
故事大意---有一个伟人,有了自己心爱的女儿,非常爱他。女儿长大,离开了他们身边,女儿逐渐意识到伟人的伟大和优点,而且伟人一直告诉女儿,他非常爱她。直到有一天,伟人病了,中风了。伟人不再伟大,他看着她,想说话,但说不出来。
读后续写情节发展:
-她回到了伟人身边。泪水从他们的眼睛里流了出来,她把胳膊搂在父亲虚弱的肩膀上。她的头枕在他的胸前,许多美好的回忆涌上她的脑海——他们在一起的美好时光,以及在伟人的保护和珍惜下她一直感到的幸福。“我爱你,伟人,”小女孩低声说。
-小女孩从跳动的心脏里感觉到,这位曾经的伟人似乎急于表达很久没有人听到的“我爱你”这个词。小女孩把头靠在他的胸口。她听到的是一个清晰、低沉、熟悉的声音:“我爱你,小女孩。”魔法发生了,爱确实可以创造奇迹。
One possible version:
The little girl did what had longing to. She climbed up on the bed next to the great man. Tears ran from both of their eyes and she drew her arms around the weak shoulders of her father. Her head on his chest, many graceful memories crowded in her mind — the wonderful times they spent together and the happiness she had always felt when protected and cherished by the great man. Tears were welling up in her eyes when she recalled father’s past company and the simple yet warm words. She felt grief for the loss she was to endure, the words of love that had comforted her. How she wished time could be turned back. “I love you, Great Man,” the little girl murmured.
And then she heard from within the man, the beat of his heart. The heart where the music and the words had always lived beat faster with her words. The heart beat on, steadily unconcerned about the damage to the rest of the body. The little girl felt from the beating heart as if the once great man was eager to express the long-time-no-heard word “I love you.” Excitement rushed through her and the little girl stuck her head closer on his chest. What she received was a clear, low and familiar voice, "I love you, little girl." She heard what she had desired to hear. Enveloped by fragrant air, she felt as if she were in the wonderland. Cheerful atmosphere filled in the house. The magic happened, and love could indeed create a miracle.
默写版:
The little girl did what had longing to. She climbed up on the bed next to the great man._________________________________________________________他们的眼泪夺眶而出,她把胳膊搂在父亲虚弱的肩膀上. Her head on his chest, many graceful memories crowded in her mind — the wonderful times they spent together and______________________________________她一直感到的幸福when protected and cherished by the great man. Tears were welling up in her eyes _____________________________________________________当她回忆起父亲过去的陪伴和那些简单而温暖的话语时. She felt grief for the loss she was to endure, the words of love that had comforted her. _________________________________________________________________她多么希望时光倒流啊. “I love you, Great Man,” the little girl murmured.
And then she heard from within the man, the beat of his heart. _________________________________________________________________音乐和文字一直存在的心灵随着她的文字而跳动得更快. The heart beat on, steadily unconcerned about the damage to the rest of the body. The little girl felt from the beating heart as if the once great man was eager to express the long-time-no-heard word “I love you.” _________________________________兴奋之情涌上心头,小女孩把头靠在他的胸口. What she received was a clear, low and familiar voice, "I love you, little girl." She heard what she had desired to hear. _____________________________________________________________芳香的空气笼罩着她,她感觉自己仿佛置身于仙境. Cheerful atmosphere filled in the house. The magic happened, and love could indeed create a miracle.

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