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It was a freezing winter morning. The sun was on its rising journey to warm the world, and Josie was on her way to school. The 10-year-old girl was walking forward followed by her father. As usual, Josie was curious about everything and observing. The office workers were hurrying to work. A guitar player was playing and singing surrounded by passers-by and tourists. A grey and black bird was hopping (双足齐跳) on the ground. Josie imitated (模仿) the little creature, hopping and laughing.
那是一个寒冷的冬天早晨。太阳正在冉冉升起，温暖着世界，乔西正在上学的路上。这个10岁的女孩在她父亲的身后向前走去。和往常一样，乔西对一切事物都很好奇，并善于观察。上班族匆匆忙忙地上班，一名吉他手在路人和游客的簇拥下弹唱。一只灰黑色的鸟在跳(双足齐跳) 在地面上。乔西模仿(模仿) 这个小家伙又跳又笑。
When she turned around to see if her father was within reach, she noticed a beggar in rags sitting on the steps of a building with a hat by his feet. He held up a sign with some words on it. With curiosity, Josie held her father's hand and moved closer to the beggar. Josie found the beggar was an old blind man and his sign read, "I am blind. Please help." There were only a few coins in the hat. Josie's father took a few coins from his pocket and dropped them into the hat. “We need to go, honey, or you will be late for school. " The father held the girl's hand and they left, but little Josie turned her head several times until they turned left to another street and the blind man was invisible.
当她转过身来看看父亲是否触手可及时，她注意到一个穿着破烂的乞丐坐在一栋楼的台阶上，脚边戴着一顶帽子。他举起一块写着字的牌子。带着好奇，乔西拉着父亲的手，向乞丐靠近。乔西发现乞丐是一个老盲人，他的牌子上写着：“我是盲人。请帮帮我。”帽子里只有几枚硬币。乔西的父亲从口袋里掏出几枚硬币，扔到帽子里。“我们得走了，亲爱的，否则你上学会迟到的。”父亲拉着女孩的手，他们离开了，但小乔西几次转头，直到他们向左拐到另一条街上，盲人看不见了。
"I want to help the poor old man. " Josie was thinking about how to help the poor old man the whole day. At 3:00 p.m. in the afternoon, Josie's father showed up at the school gate to pick up Josie. "I want to help the poor man," Josie told her father, "but I have no idea." It was the warmest time of a cold day. The sun was casting its warm light generously on the father and the daughter.
“我想帮助这个可怜的老人。”乔西整天都在想如何帮助这个可怜老人。下午3点，乔西的父亲出现在学校门口接乔西。“我想帮助这个可怜的人，”乔西告诉她的父亲，“但我不知道。”那是寒冷的一天中最温暖的时候。太阳把温暖的光慷慨地照射在这对父女身上。
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Suddenly, an idea occurred to Josie that she could change the words on the man's sign.______________________
Seeing the new sign, more people paused their steps and soon the hat began to fill up._______________________
文本分析：
续写故事大意---这是一个寒冷的冬日早晨, 乔西正在上学的路上，父亲走在她前面。 她注意到一个衣衫破烂的乞丐坐在台阶上，乔西的父亲从口袋里拿出几枚硬币，扔进帽子里。他们离开了，但小乔西转了几次头，直到他们看不见盲人了。“我想帮助这位可怜的老人。” 乔西一整天都在想如何帮助这位可怜的老人。下午3:00，乔西的父亲出现在学校门口接乔西。“我想帮助这个可怜的人,” 乔西告诉她的父亲，“但我不知道怎样能帮他。”
续写情节发展：
--突然，乔西想到了一个主意，她可以改变这个男人标志上的文字。在他的同意下，她抓起一个制作者，把这个简单的恳求变成了一句发自内心的有力句子：“我是盲人，但我会唱歌。”乔西建议他们一起唱歌，以驱散严寒，温暖路人和游客的心。沐浴在阳光下，新的标志闪闪发光。
--看到新的标志，更多的人停下脚步，很快帽子就满了乔西感到很兴奋，乞丐也很兴奋。虽然他什么也看不见，但硬币掉下来的声音拨动了他的心弦。乞丐带着灿烂的笑容，不停地向乔西表示感谢。如果没有她的帮助，他在这个冬天只会得到几枚硬币。乔西的小小善举引发了一股慷慨的浪潮，感动了许多人的生活，证明了有时，只需要一点同理心和创造力就能有所作为。
参考范文1
Suddenly,an idea occurred to Josie that she could change the words on the man's sign.The words on the sign might be more attractive and impactful if it was rephrased to what the man was able to do though he was blind. Inspired and motivated, Josie stepped towards the man, shared her idea and asked for his permission to alter the sign. With his consent, she grabbed a maker and changed the simple plea into a heartfelt and powerful sentence that read:“l am blind, but l can sing."Josie suggested that they sing together to dispel the freezing cold and warm the heart of the passers-by and tourists. Bathed in the sunlight, the man and Josie immersed themselves in singing,playing and even dancing, with the new sign shining around.
Seeing the new sign, more people paused their steps and soon the hat began to fill up .Looking at the coins dropping into the hat one by one, Josie felt exhilarated,so did the beggar.Though he couldn't see anything,the sounds of dropping the coins tugged his heartstrings. Beaming with a radiant smile, the beggar kept expressing his thanks to Josie. Without her help, he would end up this winter day with only a few coins. Josie, floating in the sea of happiness to offer help, was surprised to find that the revised words on the sign could have such an impact. On this freezing winter afternoon.people were warmed not only by the warm light from the sun, but also from the shining hearts. Josie's small act of kindness had sparked a wave of generosity that touched many lives, proving that sometimes, all it takes is a little empathy and creativity to make a big difference.
参考范文2
Suddenly,an idea occurred to Josie that she could change the words on the man's sign.She couldn't help whispering to her father about her idea. Hearing that, he nodded in agreement with a bright smile. Without hesitation, they made their way to find the beggar in case he might leave. To their surprise, he was sitting still on the ground. Josie tiptoed towards the blind beggar, grabbed his sign by his feet and changed the words on it. instead of informing him of her good deeds, she just put the sign back and walked away in silence. After that，Josie observed the pedestrians in the distance hoping her idea would help. Biting her lips, she waited anxiously with clenched fists. The sun shone and it got warmer in the afternoon. Things began to change.People were no longer in a rush but slowed down.
Seeing the new sign, more people paused their steps and soon the hat began to fill up. Half confused and half delighted, the beggar was totally unaware of why people changed their attitude and showed great sympathy for him. He said “thank you constantly with misty eyes. Beside his feet stood the sign, reading “The sun is beautiful, but l can't see it.”Seeing his warm-hearted daughter offer to help a stranger and ask for nothing in return, the father felt proud of her wisdom and consideration, a smile of gratification beaming on his face. Her little girl's words on the sign were just like the sunshine.dispelling the cold and haze both in winter and people's heart.

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