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应用文专题之咨询信
一．信件介绍
询问/咨询信是针对某项活动或相关情况，希望了解详细信息的信件，表明写信人对某方面的信息感兴趣。询问/咨询信，问句较多，写时要避免句式单调。咨询信是写信人对某方面的信息感兴趣，希望了解详细信息的信件。
二．信件格式
（1）自我介绍说明；说明自己的计划或目的；写信的目的
（2）询问具体信息, (如时间地点, 活动安排, 课程安排, 活动费用, 衣食住行, 其他注意事项或准备事项等）
（3）表示感激, 期待回复
三．第一段谋篇布局：自我介绍（开头是否需要）+ 写作背景（消息来源+ 参加活动的欲求）+ 写作目的（咨询）
自我介绍
①我是李华，一个主修新闻的大学生。
I’m Li Hua，a college student __________________.
②我是李华，一个交换生。
I'm Li Hua, _____________________.
背景信息+写信目的
①已经阅读了你们网站上实习生的招聘信息，我写信询问路透社目前的职位空缺。
_____________________________ of interns on your website，I am writing to ________ about job opening in Reuters at present．
②听说你将举办一个六周的课程，我写信来咨询这个课程的相关细节。
______________ you will hold a six-week course, I’m writing to ________ the details _______ the course.
③了解到我们可以在学校的英语报上向你写信，我迫切想要咨询一下关于你工作和生活的更多细节。
____________we can write letters to you from our school English newspaper, I _________ want to _________________ concerning more detailed information about your work and life.
④有消息说，我们学校准备举办一个有关中国传统习俗的班会。为了做好准备，我想咨询一下相关的信息。
______________ our school is going to hold a class meeting ____________ is related to Chinese traditional customs. ____________ make good preparations, I would like to ______ about more relevant information.
四．第二段谋篇布局（注重询问的方式要有不同）
主题句
①我想要了解以下几点。
What I want to know about are as follows.
②我想要了解以下几点。
Here are some details I want to know about.
具体询问句式
①首先，关于英语，尤其是口语，我需要满足什么条件？
_____________________, ___________________ do I have to __________ concerning language, especially spoken English
②首先，我想知道你们宇航员是否适应了太空环境，这与地球环境完全不同。（定语从句补充信息）
_______________, ________________ is whether you have adapted to the environment, _____ is quite different from that of the earth.
③我想要弄清楚的是价格问题。（主语从句）
_____________________________ more clearly is the price issue.
④我感到困惑的一件事是是否包括午饭。（定语从句）
One thing_______________________________ is whether lunch is included.
⑤更重要的是，我不太清楚的一件事是当你想他们时，是否能和家人视频通话。（it形式主语）
______________, ______________________ whether you can make video calls with your family members when __________ them.
⑥除此之外，如果你能告诉我返回的时间，我将感激不尽，这样我就可以更合理地安排我的时间。（固定句式+so that结果状语）
__________________, _________________ if you could tell me the time we possibly return ___________I can schedule my time more properly.
⑦如果你能告知我那些必须经过的程序我将不胜感激。（固定句式+宾语从句）
________________________ if you let me know ________the procedures I have to go through.
⑧我强烈的想要知道到底是中国传统文化的哪方面最使你感兴趣。（固定句式+宾语从句）
______________________________ which aspects of traditional Chinese culture arouse your curiosity most.
⑨最后，如果你能让我知道如何成为像你一样的英雄的话，我将感激不尽。（固定句式）
___________________, _______________________ if you could let me know what I can do to become a hero just like you .
⑩我想要知道一些细节，比如宿舍的大小和一间寝室学生的数量。（举例说明）
I want to know about the details, ___________ the size of the dormitory________ the number of students per room.
五．第三段谋篇布局
①感谢您的关注，期待一个有益的答复。
Thanks for your attention and looking forward to a favorable reply.
②感谢你的考虑。你的尽早回复，我将不胜感激。
Thanks for your consideration and your prompt reply to this letter will be highly appreciated.
③我真诚希望你能关注一下我的咨询。你的尽早回复，我将不胜感激。
I sincerely hope that you can take my enquiry seriously.I would appreciate it very much if you could provide me with a favorable reply.
④你的尽早回复，我将不胜感激。期待你的回信
Your prompt attention will be highly appreciated. I am looking forward to your reply.
真题演练
假定你是李华，下周你校外教Mr. Smith将组织主题为“Create Green Campus”的活动，需要招募活动志愿者，你想申请加入。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.咨询详情；
3.期盼回复。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华，作为交换生在国外某学校学习，得知该校即将举办国际服装文化节(International Costume Day),你有意向参加服装展示环节，请你写一封邮件咨询相关信息，内容包括:
1.写信目的:
2.咨询信息(如服饰要求，展示形式等)
3.表达期待
注意:
1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear ladies or gentlemen,
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
I’m Li Hua，a college student majoring in journalism．
I'm Li Hua, an exchange student
Having read the recruitment information of interns on your website，I am writing to inquire about job openings(职位空缺) in Reuters at present．
Knowing that you will hold a six-week course, I show great interest in it. I’m writing to inquire about the details of the course./I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information concerning the course.
Knowing that we can write letters to you from our school English newspaper, I desperately want to make an enquiry concerning more detailed information about your work and life.
Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. In order to make good preparations, I would liketo enquire about more relevant information.
I am writing to inquire some details with regard to the accommodation your school provides.
What I want to know about are as follows.Here are some details I want to know about。
First and foremost, what requirements do I have to meet concerning language, especially spoken English
First and foremost, what I'm wondering is whether you have adapted to the environment, which is quite different from that of the earth.
What I want to figure out more clearly is the price issue.
One thing that I’m confused about is whether lunch is included.
Moreover, it seems unclear to me whether you can make video calls with your family members when missing them.
On top of that, I would be grateful if you could tell me the time we possibly return so that I can schedule my time more properly.
I would be obliged to you if you let me know what the procedures I have to go through.
如果你能告知我那些必须经过的程序我将不胜感激。
I am strongly eager to know which aspects of traditional Chinese culture arouse your curiosity most.
Last but not least, I would be very grateful if you could let me know what I can do to become a hero just like you for the reason that I really admire you.
I want to know about the details, such as(下义词延伸) the size of the dormitory and the number of students per room.(平行补充)
Thanks for your attention and looking forward to a favorable reply.
感谢您的关注，期待一个有益的答复。
Thanks for your consideration and your prompt reply to this letter will be highly appreciated.
感谢你的考虑。你的尽早回复，我将不胜感激。
I sincerely hope that you can take my enquiry seriously.I would appreciate it very much if you could provide me with a favorable reply.

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