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2024年人教版英语中考一轮复习写作指导
话题4　往事回顾
话题项目 情感;情绪;学校生活;天气、旅游与交通
教材链接 七年级(下) Unit 11 How was your school trip 七年级(下) Unit 12 What did you do last weekend 八年级(上) Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation 八年级(下) Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came 八年级(下) Unit 9 Have you ever been to a museum 九年级 Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected. 九年级 Unit 14 I remember meeting all of you in Grade 7.
【词句技能磨炼】
一、短语集锦
1.令某人惊讶的是
2.做某事有困难
3.难忘的记忆
4.有一种成就感
5.对某人感到失望
6.每当我不开心的时候
7.珍惜回忆
8.给某人带来幸福
9.我的多彩的校园生活
10.对某人/某事有信心
11.感到孤独
12.感到糟糕
13.和某人分享某事
14.使某人感动
15.最大的问题
二、句式练习(用所给句子结构造句)
1.This is one of the…days in my life.

2.He was really worried that he couldn’t…

3.I felt very…when I stayed at home.

4.If everyone…, the world will be a better place to live in.

5.Helping others gives me such a strong sense of…

6.Thanks to my teacher, I finally made progress in my…and felt…

三、合扩升技能训练
1.I didn’t do well in that test. You still taught me how to do better patiently. (用 although合句)
合:
2.I will be a better man. I will study hard. (用 in order to合句)
合:
3.First, I want to thank my parents.(用 who引出理由扩句)
扩:
4.Three years has passed. (用 How time flies!感叹句扩句)
扩:
5.I have something to say.(用修饰词升句)
升:
6.You answered me a lot of questions. (用 It was…who…升句)
升:
四、美句储备
1.Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
2.My favorite teacher is someone who is helpful and kind.
3.The longest journey begins with the first step.
4.Compared with last year, we have had more success this year.
【实战演练】　
初中三年的学习生活让人难忘,毕业之际,你校将举行以“感恩”为主题的英文演讲比赛,请你根据以下要点提示,写一篇英文演讲稿。
要点提示:1.感谢父母,教我如何生活……
2.感谢老师,教我许多知识……
3.感谢同学,给我美好回忆……
写作要求:1.词数100~120,开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数);
2.可适当增减词汇,使语句流畅、完整;
3.文中不能透露个人真实信息。
Good morning, everyone. I’m glad to be here to speak in front of you. Here I’d like to thank all of you.







That’s all. Thank you.
【演练技巧】
一、审
审主题
审文体
审人称
审时态
二、列(结构、内容)
Para.1 Beginning
Para.2 Body
Para.3 Ending 总结/倡议… ①all in all
②
③
【成果精练】　
及格篇(三档)
Good morning,everyone.I’m glad to be here to speak in front of you. Here I’d like to thank all of you.How time flies! We’ll graduate soon. I have so many words to say.
First, I want to thank my parents.You taught me how to be a man. You taught me about life too. When I had a cold, you took good care of me. When my grade was not great, you tried your best to help me.
Second, I also thank my teachers very much. You’ve taught me a lot and I enjoyed your lessons so much. When I did badly in my exam, you still encouraged me to keep trying and never give up. I made progress in this way.
Last, I want to say thanks to my classmates. We grew up together. We helped each other. We laughed and cried together. They are such sweet memories!
I can’t say thanks enough because I feel very lucky to meet all of you.
That’s all. Thank you.
升级篇(四档、五档范例)
Good morning,everyone. I’m glad to be here to speak in front of you. Here I’d like to thank all of you. How time flies! We’ll graduate soon. I have so many words from my heart to say.
First, I would like to thank my parents who are always there for me day and night. Every time I had a cold or got bad grades, you took good care of me and did everything you could to encourage me. Perhaps I am not as excellent as you thought, however, you never give me up but always treat me as your treasure. I know that’s love.
Second, I am so grateful for all my dear and experienced teachers. During those good old days with you, I have not only acquired much knowledge but also come to realize how to be an upright man. What impressed me most was that PE class. For my fault in class, it’s you that made me understand the meaning of rules. With your encouragement and guide, I finally made progress in my learning and I became much more confident than before.
Last,to my classmates, full of words like a flood in my heart, I don’t know where to start. But remember, those days when we laughed and cried together must be an unforgettable part in my life. No matter how hard the future is, the strong feeling of joy and satisfaction will light the road to the bright future.
I am thankful for those who are so kind and helpful to me. Words can’t show how lucky I am! Wherever I go, I make up my mind to spread love and warmth. What’s more, I will keep on working hard in the future. Best wishes to all of you.
That’s all. Thank you!
参考答案
【词句技能磨炼】
一、1.to one’s surprise　2.have a hard time/difficulty doing sth.
3.an unforgettable memory　4.have a sense of achievement
5.be disappointed with sb.　6.whenever I am unhappy
7.treasure the memories　8.bring happiness to sb.
9.my colorful school life　10.be confident with sb./sth.
11.feel lonely　12.feel terrible/upset/low/blue
13.share sth. with sb.　14.make sb. moved
15.the biggest problem
二、1.This is one of the best days in my life.
2.He was really worried that he couldn’t pass the exam.
3.I felt very bored when I stayed at home.
4.If everyone helps each other, the world will be a better place to live in.
5.Helping others gives me such a strong sense of achievement.
6.Thanks to my teacher, I finally made progress in my learning and felt a lot better.
三、1.合:Although I didn’t do well in that test, you still taught me how to do better patiently.
2.合:In order to be a better man, I will study hard.
3.扩:First, I want to thank my parents who are always there for me in my whole life.
4.扩:Three years has passed. How time flies!
5.升:I have so many words from my heart to say.
6.升:It was you who answered me a lot of questions.
【实战演练】
一、感恩父母、老师和同学; 演讲稿; 第一人称; 一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时
二、(自设); ③how to get along with others; ②cheer me up ③funny and interesting classes; ②help me with my study ③laugh and cry together; ②be grateful ③study hard

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