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2024年人教版英语中考一轮复习写作指导
话题5　制订计划
话题项目 周末活动;节日与假日;庆祝活动;梦想与计划;文艺与体育
教材链接 八年级(上) Unit 5 Do you want to watch a game show 八年级(上) Unit 6 I’m going to study computer science. 八年级(上) Unit 10 If you go to the party, you’ll have a great time! 八年级(下) Unit 3 Could you please clean your room 九年级　Unit 2 I think that mooncakes are delicious!
【词句技能磨炼】
一、短语集锦
1.当志愿者
2.熬夜看足球赛
3.计划做某事
4.参观博物馆
5.关于……学到了很多
6.将要做某事
7.长大
8.决定做某事
9.等不及要去做某事
10.实现我的梦想
11.令人兴奋的一天
12.度过有意义的假期
13.去某地旅游
14.我的梦想是……
15.盼望
二、句式练习(用所给句子结构造句)
1.I plan to work as…

2.can’t wait to travel to…

3.I hope my dream can…

4.This is an…day!

5.I will spend most of time…

6.I am sure we will have…day.

三、合扩升技能训练
1.I am very excited. I can’t fall asleep.(用 too…to…合句)
合:
2.I will also relax myself. I will listen to music and watch movies with my friends at home.(用by doing合句)
合:
3.My parents want me to prepare for my high school.(用 because扩句)
扩:
4.First, I will get up early and exercise every morning.(用具体数据扩句)
扩:
5.I think I will have a good time in my coming holiday.(用 with…升句)
升:
6.My first holiday after graduation is coming. I am so happy.(升级I am so happy)
升:
四、美句储备
1.Every way of planning is a treasure.
2.The future is what we make it.
3.Where there is a will, there is a way.
4.There is no success without effort.
【实战演练】　
假如你是九年级学生肖红,暑假即将来临,你的美国笔友Jessie来信询问你将如何度过初中毕业后的第一个假期。请你根据以下写作要点,给她写一封回信,告诉她你的打算。
写作要点:1.假期充满期待。
2.父母的意见:(1)为高中生活做准备;(2)学做家务。
3.你打算如何度过一个轻松的假期。
写作要求:1.不得使用真实姓名、地点和班级、学校名。
2.适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.80~120词。
Dear Jessie,
I’m pleased to hear from you.

Best wishes.
Yours,
Xiao Hong
【演练技巧】
一、审
审主题
审文体
审人称
审时态
二、列(结构、内容)
Para.1 Beginning　 　期待假期　 　①the first…is around the corner
②
③
Para.2 Body
Para.3 Ending　 　总结　 　①In a word
②
③
【成果精练】　
及格篇(三档)
Dear Jessie,
I’m very pleased to hear from you. I am looking forward to my first holiday after graduation. I want to watch movies, go out to play with my friends and sleep late. I can also watch soap operas, play tennis or eat junk food at home. It is fantastic.
But my parents want me to prepare for my high school life and also they want me to learn to do housework.
I plan to do these things this holiday. First, I want to get up early every morning and run for thirty minutes every day. Second, I will spend time studying my high school lessons every day after breakfast for 3 hours. Third, I will make the bed and do other housework. Last, I will also spend time relaxing. I will travel to other places and visit my grandparents.
So, this is my plan. What do you think of it Please write back to me soon.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Xiao Hong
升级篇(四档、五档范例)
Dear Jessie,
I’m very pleased to hear from you. Nothing is worth expecting than having a vacation that I want. During the coming vacation, I feel like trying something I have never done before, for instance, staying up late to watch soap operas, eating junk food, even having some risks. It might be quite fantastic.
However, my parents expect me to prepare everything well in high school. Therefore, they push me so hard to take too many after-school activities. How terrible! I am old enough to make up my own mind.
As for the vacation, what I am eager to do most is that I can work as a volunteer. Roses given, fragrance in hand. Since I was helped by a stranger, the meaning of kindness was deeply grown in my heart. Realizing how much important to offer others help, I have a strong desire to be a member of Old People’s Home. If I can be a volunteer,I will give them enough care. And in my spare time, I’m going to share happiness and sadness about my school life with them. Whether they have family or not, for me, they are like my grandparents. In order not to make them lonely, I can also invite the classmates to give them a show.
Although I may not spend my vacation as they told, I will bring out the best in me. Every way of planning is a treasure. So, this is my plan.
What do you think of it
Best wishes.
Yours,
Xiao Hong
参考答案
【词句技能磨炼】
一、1.work as a volunteer　2.stay up late to watch the soccer game
3.plan to do sth.　4.visit the museum　5.learn a lot about…
6.be going to do/will do sth.　7.grow up　8.decide to do sth.
9.can’t wait to do sth.　10.realize my dream　11.an exciting day
12.have a meaningful holiday
13.travel to some place/go on a trip to some place
14.my dream is to do/be…
15.look forward to
二、1.I plan to work as a volunteer.
2.I can’t wait to travel to Hainan.
3.I hope my dream can come true.
4.This is an exciting day!
5.I will spend most of time reading at home.
6.I am sure we will have an interesting day.
三、1.合:I am too excited to fall asleep.
2.合 I will also relax myself by listening to music and watching movies with my friends at home.
3.扩:My parents want me to prepare for my high school because this can help me feel more confident about my learning in the future.
4.扩:First, I will get up early at 6 a.m. every morning and run for 5 kilometers.
5.升:With careful plans and real actions, I think I will learn a lot and also be happy in my coming holiday.
6.升:My first holiday after graduation is coming and I am so excited that I can’t fall asleep at night.
【实战演练】
一、假期计划; 书信(应用文); 第一人称; 一般将来时和一般现在时
二、②can’t wait ③have a lot of things to do; ③(自设); ①independent ②make my bed…③learn; ①to relax ②in July/Hainan; ①listen to music ②watch movies; ①running ②to keep fit; ①my grandparents ②in the countryside; ②important ③ask for opinions

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