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2024年人教版英语中考一轮复习写作指导
话题8　和谐人生
话题项目 学校生活;社会行为;安全守则;指令与说明
教材链接 八年级(下) Unit 1 What’s the matter 八年级(下) Unit 4 Why don’t you talk to your parents
词句技能磨炼　
一、短语集锦
1.迟到
2.与……打架
3.在我们的日常生活中
4.顶嘴
5.校规/班规/家规
6.制定/遵守/打破规则
7.到处乱扔垃圾
8.考试作弊
9.换位思考
10.避免接近
11.后悔做了某事
12.后悔要做某事
13.保护我们自己远离危险
14.对某事严谨
15.对……有影响
16.在……发挥作用
17.有机会做某事
18.自己做决定
二、句式练习(用所给句子结构造句)
1.It’s wrong for everyone to…with others.

2.My daily life is full of…

3.I like my home very much, but there are…

4.My parents take pride in me, because I always…in my free time.

5.We should follow the rules instead of…

6.Although I want to go out, I have to…first.

三、合扩升技能训练
1.We shouldn’t throw rubbish. We can take it away.(用 instead合句)
合:
2.There are some uncivilized behaviors. They make the villagers unhappy. (用定语从句合句)
合:
3.A child picked a beautiful flower.(用 and then扩句)
扩:
4.Let’s be a civilized man.(用 take action扩句)
扩:
5.Some plastic bags fly around in the wind.(用 there be…doing结构升句)
升:
6.To be a good man, we should follow the social rules.(用It’s+adj.…升句)
升:
四、美句储备
1.Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards.
2.Rules are meant to be followed, not broken.
3.Rules are bound and protection.
4.Everyone is expected to stick to the rules.
5.Schools have no discipline like there is no water in the mill.
6.Everyone is the strength of the rule of law; all is the image of civilization.
实战演练　
生态旅游已经成为越来越受欢迎的周末活动,假设你是李磊,上周末你在旅游中发现了一些不文明的行为,请给某英文报社写一封反映问题、提出建议的信。
要求:1.词数:80~120;　　2.至少两条建议。
参考词汇:Uncivilized behaviors:throw rubbish around,
climb trees, step on crops…
Suggestions: take away the rubbish…
Dear Editor,
I was shocked to see some uncivilized behaviors when I took a trip to a village last weekend.

Yours sincerely,
Li Lei
【演练技巧】
一、审
审主题
审文体
审人称
审时态
二、列(结构、内容)
Para.1 Beginning 提出问题 ①uncivilized behaviors②
Para.2 Body
Para.3 Ending 总结/倡议… ①to sum up
②helpful
③
成果精练　
及格篇(三档)
Dear Editor,
I was shocked to see some uncivilized behaviors when I took a trip to a village last weekend.
Some visitors threw rubbish everywhere. Some picked flowers. Some climbed the trees. Some stepped on the crops. I think it’s wrong to have fun by doing these things. Visitors should protect the environment. They can put the rubbish into bins or take it away. They should enjoy the flowers politely not to pick them. These uncivilized behaviors would influence the life of the villagers. We should respect the villagers and the environment.
Let’s be a civilized person. After that, we can have a better society.
Yours sincerely,
Li Lei
升级篇(四档、五档范例)
Dear Editor,
I was shocked to see some uncivilized behaviors when I took a trip to a village last weekend.
Taking a look around, I could find many examples. Some visitors threw rubbish around and left plastic bags.Also, I could see the used paper flying around. Some visitors picked flowers and took photos. Moreover, they even showed off the pictures online. Some boys climbed the trees to get the fruit, which might cause serious accidents.
In the face of these behaviors, it’s time for us to take steps to improve this situation. First, from my point of view, we visitors are supposed to protect the environment, like putting rubbish into proper bins. Second, we should pay attention not to bringing trouble to the local villagers, such as not stepping on the crops and not climbing around. What’s more, our government has the responsibility to educate every citizen to regulate his or her behaviors. At the same time, we can also leave the beautiful sights to other visitors.
Only in this way can we have a greener, cleaner and more harmonious place to live in.
Yours sincerely,
Li Lei
参考答案
【词句技能磨炼】
一、1.be/arrive late for　2.fight with/have a fight with
3.in our daily life　4.talk back to　5.school/class/family rules
6.make/follow/break the rules　7.throw rubbish around
8.cheat in the exam　9.stand in others’ shoes
10.keep away from　11.regret doing sth.　12.regret to do sth.
13.protect ourselves from any possible danger　14.be strict in sth.
15.make a difference to…　16.play a role in…
17.have a chance to do sth.　18.make one’s own decision
二、1.It’s wrong for everyone to fight with others.
2.My daily life is full of pleasure/happiness/love.
3.I like my family very much, but there are too many rules.
4.My parents take pride in me, because I always help the old in my
free time.
5.We should follow the rules instead of breaking them.
6.Although I want to go out, I have to finish the homework first.
三、1.合:We shouldn’t throw rubbish; instead, we can take it away.
2.合:There are some uncivilized behaviors with/that make the villagers unhappy.
3.扩:A child picked a beautiful flower and then he gave it to his mother as the birthday gift.
4.扩:My dear friends,let’s take action to become a civilized man.
5.升:There are some plastic bags flying around in the wind.
6.升:It’s important to follow the social rules in order to be a polite man.
【实战演练】
一、环境保护;记叙文;第一、二、三人称;一般现在时、一般过去时
二、②pollute the environment…; ②climb the trees ③step on the crops ②protect…; ③care for the crops; ②in a word ③generally speaking

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