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Passage 1风雨中助人
I went up to the roof for a break after studying for an hour and watched the 50 or so people swimming in the natural rock pool below our house. It was a sunny day--a blue, cloudless sky over a calm sea. But then, as I looked in the distance, I discovered three or four big waves heading towards the shore. I'd seen these mini-tsunamis(海啸) many times before. They were heading at speed in the direction of the pool. Most people knew how to look out for them, but from the screams that started coming from the beach, I could tell someone was in trouble. Without thinking, I ran down into the street, holding my body board(俯伏冲浪板) on the way and shouted at a stranger to go inside my house and call the coastguard. My neighbor Moises had heard the screaming as well and was also outside with his body board, so together we rushed to the steps that led down to the sea .Once we got closer, we discovered the waves had pulled a boy and a girl from the pool and into the open sea. I knew that the nearest boat would take at least 30 minutes to reach us. Waiting for help wasn't a choice. I wasn't used to this sort of emergency--I’d never been trained as a lifeguard-but I didn't think twice about trying to save them. I supposed in a way I wanted to impress everyone: at 19, a deal like that can seem like a good opportunity to show off. Moises and I dived into the water and it took us 10 minutes to get to them. When we finally reached them, they were almost lifeless with only their heads coming in and out of the water. We could tell they were still alive from their small breaths but it was clear they wouldn't have been able to stay there much longer. I held the boy and pulled him over my board. Moises moved the girl onto his board. We discussed pushing them back to the shore, but we were too far out.
注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；
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2:That night, word came from the hospital that the two people were in good condition.
We had to wait. We eagerly hoping for the arrival of the saving boat. The wild wind blew and the freezing sea water clapped our bodies continuously. 30 minutes seemed much longer as we just helplessly floated on the boundless sea. After a long time, a light spot appeared in the distance! We waved our hands and yelled out for help. The boat finally reached us and took all of us back to the shore. The two children were immediately sent to the nearest hospital.
That night, word came from the hospital that the two people were in good condition. Picturing what the merry scene would be, relief lay in my heart and happiness etched on my face. The next morning, all the people I met smiled to me and could not stop praising me. It seemed like a good opportunity to show myself off, but I didn’t mean to. In fact, I was ashamed I had thought about it. It occurred to me that helping others was priceless and everyone should be a lifeguard.
Passage 2 被困瀑布下
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 续写的词数应为150左右。
David knew the waterfall was coming. It wasn't his first visit to the river in central California. He figured he would hop out of his raft into the shallow water, rappel down the rocks (沿岩壁下降)on either side of the fall, and continue on his way, as he had on a previous trip. But this year was different. Heavy snow and spring rains had turned the usually manageable falls into something fierce. And this year, instead of his friends, David's companions were his girlfriend, Sara, and his l3-year-old son, Hunter. As the three of them approached the falls late in the afternoon of the third day of their camping trip, David could tell from the increasing roar of water in the narrowing valley that they were in serious trouble. There was no way they’d be able to rappel down the rocks as planned. They could wade (蹚水) to the shore, but would anyone find them there They had no phone service, and they hadn't seen a single person in the past three days. And David knew they'd be sharing the ground there with snakes and mountain lions. As he wondered what to do, David hit on a bit of luck he heard voices coming from the other side of the fall. He yelled, but the sound of the rushing water drowned him out. We had to do get these people a message, David thought. He caught a branch and pulled out his pocketknife to carve “Help" in it. Then he tied a rope to it so the people would know it wasn't just any branch. He tried flying it over the falls, but it floated away in the wrong direction. Then he spotted his green water bottle David grabbed it and carved “Help!” on it Sara also reminded him that he had a pen and paper, which she'd brought to play games with, in his backpack. David knew it was just an attempt. But he wrote down“6- 15-19 we are stuck here at the waterfall. Get help please “and pushed the note into the bottle.
Paragraph 1: This time, his throw over the waterfall was perfect.
Paragraph 2: The next morning. they heard a helicopter hovering (盘旋) above them.
Paragraph1:“All right, that’s all we can do,” David told Sara. Then they went back to the beach where they’d had lunch. They made a fire and laid out a tarp. As the evening wore on, they placed a headlamp with a flashing light on a ledge. By about 10:30 p.m.，they decided they probably weren’t going to get rescued that night, so they pulled out their sleeping bags. Before sleeping， David added more wood to the fire to keep the mountain lions away. Then, just after midnight, David suddenly woke up because he dreamed that they heard a helicopter hovering above them and they heard the magic words: “This is Search and Rescue. You have been found. “Unfortunately, looking around, he could see nothing but endless darkness. He then fell into sleep again.
Paragraph 2:David’s dream became true! The helicopter circled as the pilot looked for a good place to land. Finally the helicopter landed safely and it was a moment of pure happiness as the three chatted with the officers who had rescued them. When the officers dropped them back at the Finch Campground, the family learned more about the long shot events that had saved them: Some hikers had seen the water bottle in the water. When they picked it up, they noticed the writing on it — “Help!”. Then they realized there was a note inside. After they read it, they hightailed it to the campground, turned the bottle in. David is planning on having a big barbecue to meet the hikers — and thank them. “I imagine it’s going to be one of the greatest moments of my life.” he says.
【详解】前文主要讲述了David一家去野营，大雪和春雨把通常可以控制的瀑布变成了水流汹涌的瀑布，使得他们一家困在了山上，他们听到瀑布另一侧有人的声音，下决心要把信息传递给这些人，最后他们在所携带的绿色水壶上刻下了“帮助”两个字，并用所带的纸笔写下了“ 6- 15-19我们被困在瀑布了。 请寻求帮助”，然后将纸条塞入瓶子。根据给的第一段开头This time, his throw over the waterfall was perfect.（这次，他完美地将水壶扔过了瀑布。），可知本段是续写水壶被扔过瀑布之后，David他们等待救援的过程。第二段是以The next morning. they heard a helicopter hovering (盘旋) above them.（第二天早上。 他们听到一架直升机盘旋在他们上方。）开头，由此可知他们最后获救了，所以这段重点写他们是如何被救以及被救之后的事情。
【点睛】续写范文语言地道，句型多变。比如Then they go back to the beach where they’d had lunch.中使用了where引导的定语从句；he dreamed that they heard a helicopter hovering above them and they heard the magic words使用了that引导的宾语从句；The helicopter circled as the pilot looked for a good place to land.使用了as引导的状语从句。
Passage 3 水中救人
Brady was a recently retired search and rescue dog. He was not happy and missed his owner Al because Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him. Al’s nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his friend Zach went on a overnight hike. But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they realized that lightning had set the woods on fire. Wind-blown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to another. The long dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox(火绒箱) and the thunderstorm wasn’t helping much. It had more wind and lightning than rain. Zach pulled Steve’s arm. “Let’s go! We can make it back to the river we crossed today.” Steve pulled Brady’s leash（皮带） and their heads down against the strong fire-wind, they hurried down the path they had followed earlier. The air was full of smoke，and pine branches broke from burning trees with a crisp sound. Steve kept his eyes on the route. All they had to do was to make it down to the river… Brady barked a sharp warning. Ahead of them lay a dense curtain of smoke across the path. They’d never make it through that. They would have to find another escape route. The dog was pulling at his leash trying to draw them away from the smoke. This was what Brady was trained to do, and yet Steve was uneasy. It seemed to him they were moving away from the river. Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoky wind. Suddenly, the dog ran away and disappeared. The boys yelled and shouted for him，but he didn’t come back. They had no choice but to leave him behind. Heartsick, Steve and Zach went up aslope（斜坡）. He couldn’t blame Brady for panicking and escaping. He himself wanted to run even though he didn’t have a clue which way. They hadn’t gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady came running toward him.
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“Where’ve you been ” Steve cried._______________________________________________________________________
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Paragraph 1:“Where’ve you been ” Steve cried. Brady stopped directly in front of him and started pushing him back toward the slope they’d just climbed. When Steve still didn’t get it, Brady grabbed the boy’s jeans and pulled harder. The message was clear, but Steve hesitated. Of course he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady saving his life, but that had been a long time ago. Was he still sharp enough to get them through this Brady pulled again, urgently. “OK, big guy,” Steve decided.
Paragraph 2:Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees. Several times the big dog stopped to get his escape route. Often he changed direction. How long they’d walked Steve had no idea. He just held onto Brady’s leash with one hand and kept putting one foot in front of the other. He was almost numb when he heard the wonderful sound of rushing water. The river! With a yell the boys ran unsteadily forward until they jumped in cool, running water. “Brady, you did it!”
Passage 4 落水被救
“If mum finds out that I'm going to the beach, I'll be in big trouble.” I said to myself softly in a low voice. I went downstairs slowly and tried to walk casually into the kitchen. As I was walking towards the back door, mum asked without looking up from her “dish-washing”, “Where are you going ” I answered back without hesitation,“ I am going to the garden to play.” After I got out of the kitchen, I breathed a sign of relief. My plan had worked out fine so far. I climbed the fence and jumped onto the muddy field next to my house and started running towards the bus stop at top speed. After half an hour I was at the beach scanning the crowd for my friends, Jimmy and Bobby. Two young men were racing in the canoes (独木舟). After a while, I saw them near a coconut tree. I ran towards them and got into my swimming trunk (游泳裤). For about an hour, we played volleyball happily. Suddenly, Bobby hit the ball too hard and the ball fell into the sea. Just as Bobby was going to pick up the ball, the tide came in and carried the ball further and further away from the shore. I wanted to show off my swimming skills so I declared to help get the ball for them. I dived into the water and started swimming at a steady pace. After swimming for about ten minutes, I became tired but when I saw that the ball was only a few feet away from me, I put in an extra burst of speed. However, just as I was going to get the ball, a very strong current swept the ball further away from me. At that moment, a string of weed (海草)tangled (缠绕) up with my feet and I could not swim properly. I struggled to keep afloat but it was no use. “ If I had listened to my parents, this would never have happened, “I thought silently.
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Finally, after struggling for a minute or two, I still got pulled underwater.______________________________________________________________________________
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When I woke up, I was in an empty room lying on a bed.______________________________________________________________________________
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Finally, after struggling for a minute or two, I still got putted underwater. I told myself I should never give up. Then I pulled the weed again with great efforts. The weed finally broke. I swam back to the surface to take a deep breath. I saw two young men in canoes, racing each other. I was exhausted and shouted for help. The two men saw me and raced towards me. By the time they reached me, I had been already unconscious.
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When I woke up, I was in an empty room lying on a bed. It was not until a doctor came into the room that I realized that I was in a hospital. Jimmy and Bobby told me the two young men brought me to the shore and sent me to the hospital. After a few minutes, my parents with half angry and half worried faces walked in. My parents scolded me for running out of the house secretly but were also glad that I was not seriously injured. I will never forget that terrifying experience. Neither will I ever want to show off again.
Passage 5漂流瓶救人
Rescue in a Bottle Curtis Whitson had rafted down the Arroyo Seco, a river in central California, several times before. This year, Curtis Whitson knew the water-fall was coming. He figured he would get out of his raft into the shallow water, get down the rocks along ropes on either side of the falls, and continue on his way, as he had on a previous trip. But this year was different. Heavy snow and spring rains had turned the usually manageable falls into something fierce. And this year, instead of his friends, Whitson’s companions were his girlfriend, Krystal Ramirez, and his 13-year-old son, Hunter. As the three of them approached the falls late in the afternoon of the third day of their camping trip, Whitson could tell from the increasing roar of water in the narrowing canyon(峡谷) that they were in serious trouble. There was no way they’d be able to get down the rocks as planned. “The water was just roaring through there with tremendous force,” recalls Whitson, 45. They had no smart phone service, and they hadn’t seen a single person in the past three days. And Whitson knew that they’d be sharing the ground there with rattlesnakes and mountain lions. As he was thinking what to do, Whitson hit on a bit of luck---he heard voices coming from the other side of the falls. He yelled, but the sound of the rushing water drowned him out. “We have to get these people a message,” Whitson thought. He grabbed a stick and pulled out his pocketknife to carve “Help” in it. Then he tied a rope to it so the people would know it wasn’t just any stick. He tried throwing it over the falls, but it floated away in the wrong direction. “We’ve got to do something!” Whitson yelled to his son. “Have we got anything else ” Then he spotted his water bottle. Whitson grabbed it and carved “Help!” on it. Ramirez also reminded him that he had a pen and paper in his backpack. Whitson knew it was a slim hope. But he wrote “6-15 19:00 we are stuck here@ the waterfall. Get help please” and pushed the note into the bottle. This time, his throw over the waterfall was perfect. “All right, that’s all we can do,” Whitson told Hunter.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
3. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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It took 30 minutes to get back upstream to the beach where they’d had lunch.
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The next morning, the helicopter returned.
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It took 30 minutes to get back upstream to the beach where they’d had lunch. The night falling, they put up a tent and wolfed down a simplified dinner. Suddenly a low, buzzing sound appearing, Whiston raised his head glanced around and spotted a helicopter in the distance. Blood rushing to his face and heart palpitating fiercely, he leapt to his feet and yelled at the top of his voice. However, the sound of the helicopter drowned him out the helicopter hovered for a while and faded in the suffocating darkness. A tide of exhaustion and despair washed over him. Sensing the desperate gleam in Hunter's eyes, Whiston bent over to give him a tight embrace, comforting that they would be safe.
The next morning the helicopter returned. At the sight of the black dot on the horizon, Whiston made a smoky fire. The heavy smoke curling upward slowly into the sky, he clasped his hands tightly, praying in the depth of his heart that it would work. The black dot grew larger and larger against the orange sky, so was their hope of being rescued. After what seemed like centuries, the helicopter finally came to a halt over them and lowered a rescuer. Bubbling with overwhelming ecstasy, Hunter couldn't help bouncing ups and downs. They eventually made it to escape from the nightmare. During their pleasant chat, they learned it was exactly the message in the bottle that saved them.
Passage 6 水中逃生
The rain came down steady and hard. Jason Storie heard it but was not worried as he prepared for a day of caving with five friends in a remote spot 80 miles northwest of his home in Duncan, on Canada’s Vancouver Island.It was 6 a.m. on December 5, 2015. As a newcomer to the sport, Jason had gone caving only four times. This would be his toughest outing yet: a cave called Cascade. It was dangerous enough that the entrance was blocked by a locked metal door to keep the casual cavers out. About a mile long and 338 feet deep, Cascade was full of tums and barely passable tight squeezes.Jason was new among the group, with the least experience and, at 43, older by a decade or more. It was his friend Andrew Munoz, 33, who introduced him to the sport. Unlike Jason, Andrew was an expert caver-a former caving guide, actually. They hiked a bit before coming to the door, which sat in the ground—you’d miss it if you weren’t looking for it. It was 10 a.m. With their way lighted by headlamps, they walked down a narrow passage studded with sharp rocks. The silence was broken by a drip-drip-drip from above. Soon the drip turned into a light but steady flow, and they were wading in water up to their ankles, then to their shins. Two hours later, they approached one of the features that made the cave unique: a narrow passage not big enough to stand up in that led into a short, tight downhill. This had a name: Bastard’s Crawl. Four streams met here, and indeed, the water was flowing more quickly. The sound of the water had turned into a roar. When they finally neared the top of the Crawl, there were barely four inches of air left between the water and the ceiling. not enough for them to keep their heads up to breathe. They came to terrifying realization that they were in danger！
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
3. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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The water kept rising, and there was no hope of rescue.
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Slowly but steadily, the group made their way forward.
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The water kept rising, and there was no hope of rescue. The hours passed. Jason and Andrew didn’t dare to move for fear of slipping. They dozed off and then jerked themselves awake. Every once in a while, one of them turned on his headlamp to check the water level. An hour later, the water level went down enough that they could try an escape. Stiff from keeping in one position for 12 hours, they slowly unfolded their bodies. Jason screamed in pain, but he was determined not to let it stop him.
Slowly but steadily, the group made their way forward. Still, each time Jason moved a leg, he cried out. Over the next 90 minutes, they made their way toward the entrance, at times in chest-high water. Now, in a passage that was high enough for them to walk upright, Jason saw something flicker in the distance. “Lights! I see lights!” Jason shouted out. For the first time since entering the cave, over 20 hours earlier, Jason’s emotions got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks.
Passage 7水中遇险
“It’s not looking too good, darling. I think you’d better pack a few things and go to your mother’s place. And you’d better take Rosie and Monty with you.” Putting down the phone, Sara sighed. Tomorrow was her husband Tony’s birthday. She had planned to cook him a nice meal and then surprise him with the new mountain bike she’d bought for him. If she went to her mother’s house, Tony wouldn’t get his present for days. However, her mother’s house was the best place to be right now. Being on higher land, it would be safe from the floods. It had been raining heavily for almost two weeks and the river near Sara and Tony’s house was rising higher and higher all the time. Tony and others from the village had spent the last two days putting sandbags along the side of the river to stop it overflowing. Now they feared that their hard work had been useless and soon the whole valley would be flooded. Sara dressed baby James in warm clothes and collected the things she would need for him over the next few days. She put the lead on the dog, Rosie. Just as she was reaching for the car keys, Sara heard a sound like the noise bath water makes when you pull out the plug. She looked at the back door. Water was flowing in underneath. Turning around she saw dirty brown water fountaining out of the drain and filling the sink. Quickly she put James into her backpack and pulled it onto her back. Calling to Rosie, she picked up the cat basket and ran to the front of the house and out into the front garden.The water was already up to her knees. Rosie was swimming beside her. Knowing the water would soon be much deeper, Sara ran to the car and opened the doors. She threw the cat basket onto the roof of the car and pushed Rosie up beside it. Using the car seat as a step she climbed first onto the front of the car and then onto the roof. James, safely attached to her back, made no sound at all. Sara stared down at the water which was rushing past the car. It was already half way up the doors, and still rising. 注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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With the water still pouring, Sara began to feel cold. ______________________________________
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Suddenly, Rosie began to bark, and some noise came from far away. ______________________
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With the water still pouring, Sara began to feel cold. And fear slowly creeps upon her. She looked around, nervous and hopeless, trying to find someplace where she could shelter. Finally, she saw a spot which was higher. In order to keep warm, she held James tightly, with Rosie sitting beside her. There was no one around and it seemed that the whole village had become a large lake. Sara could do nothing but wait for help.
Suddenly, Rosie began to bark, and some noise came from far away. Sara stood up quickly and looked through the direction of the noise. There was light and a boat was coming. Feeling wild with joy, Sara shouted towards them. It turned out to be Tony and others from the village. They told Sara that they were also trapped until soldiers came to help. Sara looked at Tony with relief. She said with a smile, “I’m sorry your birthday present is now under the water. But I guess this will be the most unforgettable birthday for you.”
Passage 8 水中救娃
Lungs nearly bursting, I struggled to lift my head out of the water. Inch by inch, my tired body reached for the end of the pool. The extent of my swimming career was purely recreational, while the competitive swimmers nearby thought nothing of the seemingly simple task of a 500-meter swim test. Pushing myself to finish what I had started, I could only think: why not take the easy way out Earlier that week, I had turned in my first job application at a local pool. Overqualified, I was hired on the spot. However, the tasks were boring: helping confused visitors and measuring the height of children before they went down the slide, those sorts of things. I was capable of more. So a swim test was required, establishing the mere fact that I was not completely helpless in a pool. Midway through, the manager administering the test remarked, “This looks really easy for you. Why aren’t you applying to become a guard ” “The thought hadn't crossed my mind. ”“Well, lifeguarding demands more responsibility, strength and respect. Thus the position pays $2 more per hour. Your swimming skills are strong enough. All you need to do is complete a certification class. ”Inside I was unsure of myself, but his words inspired me-You never know what you are capable of until you force yourself to do it.Soon I passed the swim test. All left was to practice and learn first aid, CPR(心肺复苏），and procedures for different land and water-based emergencies. Work started soon. A well-intentioned yet anxious feeling in me soon passed. Days, weeks, and months went by without incident; emergencies were rare. The skills and training I had so carefully studied and acquired seemed unnecessary. Today appeared to be another uneventful day. However, shortly after the other guards signaled to the children to exit the pool, I noticed one boy was still in the middle while the others had climbed up.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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“Something must have gone wrong with him,” I thought to myself. ____________________________
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Having the boy on the floor,I put my ear to his mouth and my fingers at his neck. ________________
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“Something must have gone wrong with him,” I thought to myself. Sure enough, with a closer look, I found the boy waving his hands desperately. I quickly dived into the water, swimming towards the boy at full speed. By the time I reached him, he had sunk to the bottom of the pool, his head hanging down, which filled my heart with fright and concern. I picked the boy up and headed to the poolside, keeping his head above the water.
Having the boy on the floor, I put my ear to his mouth and my fingers at his neck. I could tell he had no heartbeat and wasn’t breathing. Every second counted! Without hesitation, I did first aid, giving him mouth-to-mouth breathing and doing CPR as trained. Other guards watching anxiously, I carried on, sweating. Suddenly, a stream of water burst out of his mouth and the boy coughed intensely. Seeing the boy regain consciousness, those around broke into cheers. Exhausted, I sighed with relief. I thought had I accepted that easy position, I would have been nothing but a bystander. I’m happy I didn’t take the easy way out.
Passage 9 水中救妻
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a rainy November morning. Overcome with anger I knew if I didn’t leave the house soon I would lose my temper with my husband, Joe. As rain came down in sheets, Joe offered to take me to work. I struggled into my jacket, seized my bag and teaching plans and ignored him.He insisted and reached for his boots. I looked at the piles of newspapers and the dirty dishes still on the table. “Don’t you have enough to do I can take care of myself” I stormed out, not even kissing him good-bye. Joe shouted after me not to take the shortcut (捷径).Joe and I had been eagerly looking forward to our retirement when a heart attack that past spring forced him to leave his job earlier than we had planned. As the medical bills mounted we realized I would have to continue working full-time while Joe stayed home and took over the housework.The new arrangement was a disaster. Exhausted after a day of full work, all I wanted was a hot home cooked meal and a good night’s sleep. However, what greeted me at the table was a microwave package. Sometimes he would serve oatmeal (燕麦)for several nights in a row. One night when I dragged myself to bed, I was terrified to discover Joe had turned our white sheets blue. He told me he had found out how to save on water, soap and electricity. He patted his blue trousers and announced proudly washing everything together was just the secret. Ten minutes later, ignoring Joes warning I turned off the main route. I thought it hadn’t rained enough to flood the road, but as I rounded the corner water rushed across my path. After a few feet, the car got stuck. I opened the door and water poured in. I hurriedly closed the door. I couldn’t risk walking in this. Almost 20 minutes passed. The car began to shake. I got frightened to death when I heard three long honks (喇叭声).
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1. 续写词数应为150左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck.
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I screamed that I couldn’t make it.
分析：首先一定要弄清这篇文章的要素：when, where, who:
I: the writer Joe: my husbandWhen: On a rainy November morning (rain came down in sheets)Where: On the way to work (in the shortcut)然后搞懂what: What is the story mainly about On a rainy November morning, I quarreled with my husband Joe for his bad performance in household. Too angry to remember Joe’s warning, I took the shortcut but had my car stuck because of a sudden heavy rain. Faced with this dilemma, I found that there appeared a truck with lights and honks on, so……续写一般都是：how思路：最后一句肯定是获救了，并且要和开头照应，确定主题是：丈夫最爱我，虽然不会做家务，所以他是最好的丈夫。（主题不一定多深奥，大部分都是比较浅显的，因此不要想多了）根据I screamed that I couldn’t make it.可以推测上面是失败的脱险尝试。根据Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck.就有两种文章行文思路：Who is the truck’s driver 司机是陌生人：这种思路下，司机不能作为主人公，一笔带过，辅助说明我的恐慌。司机就是Joe: 这种思路下，比较好展开，Joe直接救我了，没有多余的笔墨。下面会提供两种思路下的文章：
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恐慌Tears of frustration and horror gushing from my eyes, I felt I had sunk into hopelessness. A sense of terror sweeping through my body, I shouted in panic, “Help! Help!” Seized by a strong sense of fright, I struggled to shove（猛推）the door again. The hairs on the back of my neck prickled with dread and I was drenched in sweat. （汗毛倒竖；湿透）Swallowed by a wave of despair, I crossed my fingers, closed my eyes and prayed in a shivering voice. Trembling like a leaf, the car was ready to be flooded away at any time, which refrained me from moving a single inch.
看到救人的车子或人：Hope
The hope that had been submerged suddenly resurfaced .When I realized that he was my husband, I could hardly contain my excitement. Engulfed by a surge of guilt mingled with being moved, I shouted, “Go back! It is so dangerous!” 如何救：a ropea laddera life buoy 救生圈a kayak 皮艇扔过来：throw / cast抓住绳子 ：catch (hold of)/ hold on to/seize/grab /grip / capture / clutch …拉开门 tug /haul the door : pull （用力） 拖，拉，拽shove / thrust the door: push猛推burst the door open冲开门窗 wind (wound-wound) down the window 摇下车窗Joe 紧紧抓住我的手臂 take a firm grip/ grasp/ grab of my arm抓得更紧了 tighten his hold在水里行走（不可能rush, dash）wade: 跋涉，蹚（水或淤泥等）Joe leaped out and waded into the flood.struggle: 艰难地行进；吃力地进行I struggled up the hill with the heavy bags. struggle to one’s feet 挣扎着站起来plod:艰难地行走；吃力地Our horses plodded down the muddy track. 我们的马沿着泥泞小路蹒跚而行。We plodded on through the rain. 我们冒雨艰难地跋涉。stagger/ totter/ stumble 蹒跚；踉跄With jaws clenched, I resolved to keep edging closer, inch by inch.Mustering up my courage, I pushed the door open with all my might, seized Joe’s arm tightly, and we waddled （蹒跚而行）to the truck by holding each other up.I stretched out my arms to embrace him, and he patted me on the back slightly to show comfort.被救后的感受I failed to utter a word, with my eyes crammed with tears and my head resting against his chest.“I’m sorry, and I should have taken your advice,” I murmured, head drooping. Joe chuckled in relief, “You are safe. That’s enough.”The moment we pulled ourselves out of the water, the car was washed away. What a narrow escape!
环境描写：rainheavy rain: fall / pour / beat / hitRain came down in sheets. 大雨倾盆。pelt 倾泻；下得很大The rain now was pelting down. 雨这时正哗哗地下。splash / spatter / splatter 溅落Rain splashed against the windows. 雨点啪啦啪啦打在窗户上。Heavy rain splattered on the windshield. 大雨噼里啪啦地打在挡风玻璃上。wind / thunder / sky / floodAs splashing raindrops hit the windshield frantically and the skies were overhung with a blanket of grey, I could barely make out the figure in the truck.雨滴疯狂地打在挡风玻璃上，天空笼罩在一片灰色之中，我几乎看不清卡车里的人影。The fragile little tree cracked and fell in the wild howling wind.脆弱的小树啪地一下被狂风吹断了，倒在了地上。The water kept rising, as if it would engulf me alive.水不停地涨，仿佛要把我活吞下去。The wind howled, whipping the rain against the window.The rain was pouring and the winds roared. Hearing the trees creaking in the howling winds and the rain beating against the car window, my palms got sweaty. With rain frantically spattering down on his body, what I could see was a hero-like figure…Unfortunately, the water poured in and crept upon my waist.
下水文1：（司机是陌生人的写法）Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck.1.(司机的描写)The truck’s driver even popped his head out of the window, a look of worry and anger spreading across his face.2.(我的反应)Just then, my mind raced – why not call 911 and Joe 3. As if clutching the last wish-saving straw, I dialed the number again and again.4.（丈夫Joe的反应）To my surprise, Joe told me he was just behind the truck in a 911 car and would reach me soon.5. “Don’t panic. Try to back your car,” exclaimed Joe, his voice kind of trembling yet determined.6.（结局）However, misfortunes never come alone--the engine didn’t work!
I screamed that I couldn’t make it.1.(我的绝望) Fingers numbed by the chilly water, throat choked by icy wind, I felt on the verge of collapsing.2.（转机）Minutes creeping by, suddenly the 911 car came into sight alongside me.3.（我的激动）My terror soon gave way to excitement and the nearly-extinguished sparks of hope rekindled.4.（如何获救）They threw a rope at my car, pulling it towards the safe place.5.Luckily, it didn’t take long before my car was out of danger.6.（获救后的动作和想法）The rain pouring and the wind roaring, I dashed to Joe and hugged him tightly.7.（照应主旨）Only then did I realize that it was Joe who had been caring for me through thick and thin.
下水文2：Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. Peeking through the mounting rain, I struggled to make out the vague figure over there. It was Joe that shouted and waved violently. “Joe, I’m here!” I wound down the window, tears of horror mixed with rain streaming down my face. My car began to shake increasingly wildly. Picturing the road cracked and the car was flooded away, I felt more frightened and sensed death was waiting for me. “Jump out of the car and ran to me!” Joe yelled and got off the truck, waiting for my action.
I screamed that I couldn’t make it. Yelling at the top of his lung, Joe tried to soothe me and convince me that it was the best way to escape the danger. I opened the door and reached out my foot, trying to find a proper land point. After confirming the safety, I inched forward in the muddy water and eventually rushed frantically towards my husband. Joe also ran in my direction, gathered me into his arms and kept patting my back. Sobbing in relief, I was overwhelmed by waves of guilt and remorse. I murmured sorry, reflecting that I should have taken his warning seriously.
下水文3：
Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. Hardly had I realized that someone would rescue me when my once violently bumped heart sank. I could see the driver get off the truck and stumbled towards me with the heavy rain pouring down. Meanwhile, the roaring water seemed to engulf me the next second, so the fright that had been submerged in my heart suddenly resurfaced. “Open the door!” I was shocked to hear the shout of Joe and realized who the warm-hearted stranger was. His words reignited the flame of hope in my heart，but I was still dread of the flood outside.
I screamed that I couldn’t make it. “Believe in me, you can do it!” His determined voice spread across the heavy rain and echoed in my head. Driven by his encouragement, I struggled to push the door with my full strength and submerged by the rapid current. When I was about to be carried away by the water, Joe grabbed my hand and dragged me to the safe place. We were both soaked to the skin. Looking into his deep blue eyes, I burst into tears, tears of remorse. Actually, it was the man right in front of me who understood how to take good care of me.
下水文4：
Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. Little by little, the lights seemed to dim. Off got a man. Upon recognizing the man was Joe, I couldn’t help restraining my excitement. “Honey, don’t be frightened! I'm throwing a thick rope, with which you can get out of the dilemma." He shouted affectionately. I did as he instructed, opening the door, slipping in the water and walking straight toward him, unafraid of surging water. Everything was going well until a powerful-looking wave approached me. I lost my balance but seized the rope tightly. Time passing, tiredness engulfed me with my feet stiff and shivering.
I screamed that I couldn’t make it. My lips quivered, big tears rolling down cheeks. Confronted with this situation, Joe constantly comforted me to calm down. Actually, the torrent was indeed temporary, so I gritted out my teeth and kept moving forward slowly and cautiously. The instant I grabbed hold of his hand, I struggle to throw myself at him. Joe patted me and sighed in great relief. I apologized to him for my fault, then we grinned merrily at each other. Poorly as Joe performed in doing housework, my safety was always his priority. There are lees to every wine, but rescuing me tooth and nail in the shortcut makes him my perfect husband.
原题参考范文：
Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. It was Joe! I couldn’t help bursting into tears. Joe shouted to me not to be frightened. Then he threw a thick rope so that I could hang on to it and walk straight toward him. I opened the door, grabbed it and inched out. However, a sudden fall left me in the rushing water.
I struggled to my feet, only to find a branch blocking the way right in front of me. I screamed that I couldn’t make it. Joe, however, remained calm! He urged me to take one step at a time and assured me I could make it. I moved forward slowly and cautiously before I fell into his arms. Sobbing against his chest, I apologized that I shouldn’t have taken the shortcut. Joe patted me saying his primary concern was my safety. Only then did I realize Joe actually understood how to take care of me despite his trouble with the housework.
Passage 10 水中自救
It was a Sunday morning. Bettywoke up earlier than usual. She couldn't sleep any longer because she was so excited that her uncle Mark was taking her to the beach. She had always loved going surfing with her uncle. She put her swimming suit on and took her bag quickly that she had prepared the night before and went outside to wait. She jumped up and down with joy when she saw her uncle's red jeep turn the corner down her street. Uncle Mark got out of the car and helped Betty get in. "Are you ready " he asked. "Yes!" replied Betty. Uncle Mark could see the excitement in her face. Suddenly he said seriously, "Well, before we go, I have to let you know that a shark appeared recently where were going to surf today." Scared and shocked, Betty couldn't say a word. "Ha ha! I'm kidding you." Uncle Mark burst out laughing. Betty laughed too. She knew Uncle Mark liked teasing others. "Let's go and have some breakfast. I know just the place," Uncle Mark said. They went to a breakfast shop and ate some tacos(炸玉米饼).After breakfast the two of them went down to Pacific Beach and got their surfboard ready. “First you have to wax(打蜡)the bottom," explained Uncle Mark. "I know. I've watched you do it before!" Betty said as she took the wax from Uncle Mark. It took about 15 minutes to wax the bottom of their boards. When Betty finished, Uncle Mark looked it over to make sure it was done well. "Nice job, Betty, you wax your board likes a true surfer. Finally, they were ready to get into the water. They carried their boards down to the beach and went out into the water. Betty was overly excited and tried to rush to catch a wave. Predictably, she crashed and had to start over, Next was her uncle's turn. He stood up on his first try and smoothly surfed the wave before jumping into the water. Betty cheered for her uncle's perfect run.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1: All of a sudden, Betty felt something touching the bottom of her foot.
Paragraph 2: “Help! Help!” Betty screamed in horror.
下水思路
1. 确定主题：水中遇险自救。
2. 时空变化：时空变化不大，霎时之间发生的险情。
3. 续写难点：具体的细节描写与心理活动。
下水续写
Paragraph 1: All of a sudden, Betty felt something touching the bottom of her foot.↓1. What was that She wondered. A sea fish ↓2. Before she could get on the surfboard, it bumped her in the foot once again.↓3. She suddenly had the feeling that an enormous fish, bigger than her, was circling around her.↓4. A chill feeling crept up her spine as she thought of the joke Uncle Mark played on her.↓5. And then Betty saw it: a gray triangle fin sticking up through the water, heading right for her.↓6. It was a shark, a massive shark that was swimming around, not far away from her.↓7. For a split second, her heart practically skipped a beat.
Paragraph 2: “Help! Help!” Betty screamed in horror.↓1. Hearing the terrible scream for help, Uncle Mark instantly realized that something bad was happening.↓2. Without thinking, he swam as quickly as he could towards Betty and yelled, “Get out! ...”↓3. But Betty seemed stuck, too scared to move.↓4.At the very moment, the shark’s jaws opened wide, showing rows of razor-sharp teeth.↓5. With all his might, Uncle Mark stabbed it in the mouth with his surfboard, scaring the monster away.↓6. And then he grabbed hold of Betty’s arm and dragged her to the beach.↓7. All this took only a few minutes, but Betty would never forget the frightening experience.
Paragraph 1: All of a sudden, Betty felt something touching the bottom of her foot. What was that She wondered. A sea fish Before she could get on the surfboard, it bumped her in the foot once again. She suddenly had the feeling that an enormous fish, bigger than her, was circling around her. A chill feeling crept up her spine as she thought of the joke Uncle Mark played on her. And then Betty saw it: a gray triangle fin sticking up through the water, heading right for her. It was a shark, a massive shark that was swimming around, not far away from her. For a split second, her heart practically skipped a beat.
Paragraph 2: “Help! Help!” Betty screamed in horror. Hearing the terrible scream for help, Uncle Mark instantly realized that something bad was happening. Without thinking, he swam as quickly as he could towards Betty and yelled, “Get out! ...” But Betty seemed stuck, too scared to move. At the very moment, the shark’s jaws opened wide, showing rows of razor-sharp teeth. With all his might, Uncle Mark stabbed it in the mouth with his surfboard, scaring the monster away. And then he grabbed hold of Betty’s arm and dragged her to the beach. All this took only a few minutes, but Betty would never forget the frightening experience.
Passage 11 海里救人
After study for hours, I went outside and up to the roof nearby for a break and watched people swimming in the sea. It was a sunny day-a blue, cloudless sky over a calm sea. But then, as I looked in the distance, I discovered a series of three or four big waves heading towards the shore. I'd seen these mini- tsunamis(小型海啸) many times before. They were heading at speed in the direction of the swimming area. Most people knew to look out for them, but from the screams that started coming from the beach, I could tell someone was in trouble. Without thinking, I ran down into the street, holding my body board (冲浪板)on the way and shouted at a stranger to call the coastguard(海岸整卫) My neighbor Tom had heard the screaming as well and was also outside with his body board, so together we rushed to the steps that led down to the sea．Once we got closer, we discovered the waves had pulled a boy and a girl into the open sea. I know that the nearest boat would take at least 30 minutes to reach us. I wasn't used to this sort of emergency--I'd never been trained as a lifeguard--but I didn't think twice about trying to save them. I suppose in a way I wanted to impress everyone; at 19, a deal like that can seem like a good opportunity to show off．Tom and I dived into the water and it took us 10 minutes to get to them. When we finally reached them, they were almost lifeless with only their heads coming in and out of the water. We could tell they were still alive from their small breaths but it was clear they wouldn't have been able to stay there much longer. I held the boy and pulled him over my board. Tom then moved the girl onto his board.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
Para.1
We discussed pushing them back to the shore, but we were too far out.
Para 2.That night, word came from the hospital that the two kids were in good condition.
One possible version:
We discussed pushing them back to the shore, but we were too far out. We had to wait, trying to keep them on the body boards. Patting their faces to wake them up, we continuously told them to be strong. After what seemed a century, I felt extremely exhausted while swimming hard to keep myself afloat. Casting a look at Tom, I could tell he was also apparently worn-out. Looking at the vast sea, I felt a sense of horror surging through my whole body. Salt stinging(刺痛) my eyes, I could hardly tell how long I could hold on. But I still shouted in my head: focus. In sheer desperation(在绝望中), I finally caught sight of some boats with lifeguards on them heading towards us in the distance. Thank you, Lord. Quite soon, I felt strong arms pull me out of the sea onto the board, and the two kids were sent to the hospital without delay.
That night, word came from the hospital that the two kids were in good condition. Sighing in relief, I couldn’t stop thinking about the whole event. I knew they would have died if they had been in the sea for any longer. Obviously I had done a big deal which is surely a good opportunity to show off. I had expected to experience some sort of sense of wellbeing or greatness, but none of that came. Rather than feel like a hero, I believe anyone who could swim would have done the same thing
.Passage 12 漂筏遇险
I never pictured my family on a whitewater rafting(漂筏) vacation in Colorado. We had tried rafting several times before with instructors and guides. All of us liked it! I come from a family of excellent athletes, and I sometimes have to work hard at holding my own. I didn't even mind when my sister, Marta, who is fourteen, kept correcting my technique. Because she's three years older, Marta believes it's her mission in life to make sure I do everything perfectly. “Nina, hold your paddle(桨) this way. Nina, plant your feet firmly,” she corrects. Honestly, sometimes she's full of herself, although I guess she means well. That morning, Dad had us gather our equipment, as we had learned. He then took us through his checklist. Only Dad could read his checklist because his handwriting was so hard to read. “Paddles-check, helmets-check, life jackets-check, buckets-check,” until everything was accounted for. Then we boarded our rubber raft for our trip and headed down the beautiful Colorado River. Mom had mapped out our route. It felt great to paddle together with everyone else. Dad and I sat in the rear (尾部) of the raft. Mom and Marta sat in the front. From time to time, waves beat against the sides of the raft, spraying water in our faces. All of a sudden, our raft came to a complete stop. “What's wrong ” l asked, hoping I didn't sound nearly as anxious as I felt. “Yikes!” exclaimed Mom. “We're stuck on some rocks!” “Maybe a river guide will come by and help.” suggested Marta. However, there wasn't a soul in sight. She tried shouting, “HELLO, OUT THERE!” All we heard back was an echo. “Don't worry. I know what we can do,” said Dad. “It is the front of the raft that is stuck, so let's all sit in the rear. Our weight will probably get the raft off the rocks.” Cautiously, Mom and Marta moved to the rear. Nothing happened.
注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好;3.续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1: My heart sank.
Paragraph2: Suddenly I hit on an idea.
Paragraph 1: My heart sank.1. Nervous and anxious, I began to complain about what had happened.2. Dad and Mom tried hard to keep me calm.3. However, my sister, Marta, gave me a long hard stare and then said coldly,4. “Nina, it's no use complaining while we are in a dilemma. It's time for us to find a way out.”5. With these words, she suggested that all of us move to the front of the rubber raft.6. We moved the front cautiously as she instructed us, but still with no success.7. After that, we made all vain attempts to get the raft off the rocks, feeling desperately hopeless.
Paragraph 2: Suddenly I hit on an idea.1. Pointing to the river, I started shouting with excitement.2. "Dad, Dad... the river is very shallow. Why don't you get off the raft with your life jackets and pushed it off the rocks "3. They seemed to hear that a river guide was coming out of the river to help us and all looked down into the river.4. And then came loud laughter.5. Apparently, we got out of trouble without difficulty and continued the great trip with lots of laughs.6. What is worth mentioning is that Marta changed her attitude toward me after the experience.
Passage 13暴雨中救人脱困
It was 8 a.m. Kathy, a 25-year-old nurse, had just finished a 12-hour night shifts at a hospital. She was tired, but glad to be sailing along highway to where she lived. Although the local government had posted a snow alert(预警), the calm grey sky convinced Kathy the drive would be safe. “I figured I’d be in bed in an hour,” she says. Snow began when she was halfway home. Listening to the radio, Kathy learned the highway was closed because a tractor had slid off the road. She texted some friends and her mom, and tried not to sleep as she waited. After a couple of hours, however, conditions worsened. Strong winds began rocking Kathy’s car. She couldn’t see anything outside, and snow was drifting up her doors. It was, she says, “a total whiteout and rows of cars and trucks.” Late in the afternoon a police officer came and asked if she was in any difficulty. She said she was fine. She asked the police officer if there was any way to get past the trucks. “No, ma’am,” he answered. “You’re not going anywhere.” Once as it got dark, Kathy began to worry. She texted his brother Cris, telling him to drive snowmobiling buddy(雪地汽车) to get to the highway and find her. As Cris rode slowly alongside the rows of cars and trucks, people would roll down their windows and ask for help. “I was the first person they’d seen in six hours.” He explained he was picking up his sister. He told them, “Nobody’s coming and I can’t take you.” Near 10 p.m. Cris reached Kathy. He directed Kathy to pull her car onto the shoulder(紧急停车带) and asked her to get into his snowmobiling buddy. As they headed for home, the fun started. About five kilometers into the journey, Cris made a mistake. What he thought was a shallow ditch(浅沟) turned out to be a deep trough(水槽). Instead of coming out the other side, they just kept going down. They were trapped. And feathery snow was over their heads.
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；
Paragraph 1:At that moment, they had to take action and get out.
Paragraph 2:When Kathy arrived at her home, her mother was waiting for her.
_Paragraph 1:At that moment, they had to take action and get out. They shouted at the top of their voice, but no one could hear them. They began to worry and were convinced they had to stay in their snowmobiling buddy for the night. Suddenly, a good idea occurred to Kathy. She took off one of her clothes and burned it. Seeing the fire, people ran over and managed to pull her car out with all their efforts, making Cris ashamed for his refusal to others.
Paragraph 2:When Kathy arrived at her home, her mother was waiting for her. She asked Kathy what had happened. Kathy explained, “I made a terrible mistake. But for others’ help, I couldn’t have been home for the night.” When asked what she would do when someone had difficulty, Kathy answered immediately that she would do anything to help others because today’s experience turned out to be a great lesson for her.
Passage 14水中救小孩
I’m originally from Orange County, California, where I had the pleasure and honor of serving as a Newport Beach ocean lifeguard for five seasons. Whenever I could, I got shifts working the Point. If you wanted to save lives, that's where you worked. The Point was known for its massive rip currents（(激流）So, late in a shift, I was working Tower 15. Two blocks to my right was another guard named Mike, working Tower 17. I'd known Mike for a number of years. Mike had a rough upbringing. You can tell just by looking at him. He has a number of really frightening tattoos （纹身），and his bald head shows the scar he got from a broken beer bottle. Maybe he wasn't the friendliest guard on the beach. I admit, I didn't really get along with Mike. But everything he lacked in friendly appearance and social skills, he more than made up for in lifesaving ability.He called me over the phone and said, “Hey, I got a couple kids. I got to go give’ em a warning. Keep an eye on us. ”I said, "Sure, " and hung up. Anytime you get out of your tower, you're supposed to let somebody else know, in case a situation develops. And sure enough, as soon as he hung up the phone, a rip was snapped up under these two kids, and they're getting sucked out. Mike saw it before it's happening, and he's running full speed toward the ocean. I scanned the water. All I saw was two small. noses bobbing （上下浮动）in the water.I dropped my binos（望远镜）and I called in and said," "Double rescue 17-he's out. I'm going. " Mike was already punching through the surf line. By now, the mother of the two kids realized what's happening. She's on her feet and screaming.
注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好。3.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语
Paragraph 1：Mike reached the kids—a brother and sister around eight or nine years old.
Paragraph 2:Then the mother glanced back and got her first good look at Mike, as well as his tattoos.
One possible version：
Mike reached the kids—a brother and sister around eight or nine years old. He got to the boy first, and when he turned to the girl, he had to reach down into the water and catch her by the hair to pull her back up. Mike swam sideways out of the rip current into the clear water and started bringing them in. When I reached their mother, Mike was in waist-deep water. These kids were so exhausted that they couldn’t walk, and so Mike’s carrying them. He’s got one under each arm. I turned to their mom and said, “Hey, it’s going to be OK. They’re safe.” I saw the terror start to drain out of her.
Then the mother glanced back and got her first good look at Mike, as well as his tattoos. And a crazy thing happened. I saw a new kind of panic wash over her as though there’s some new, equally dangerous threat on her kids’ lives because of the tattoos on Mike’s arms. She rushed up to Mike and snatched her kids and turned up the beach. Not even a thank-you. Mike just glanced at me, shrugged, and jogged back to his tower. As I jogged back to my tower, I promised myself I’d never let my own fear or prejudice prevent me from recognizing a hero only because I don’t see friendly appearance in him.

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