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八年级英语精品课及练习
第20讲 书面表达题型解题技巧
第一部分 题型解题技巧
一、书面表达题型简介
英语书面表达试题属综合性运用试题，是考查学生运用各项语法知识、正确进行书面表达的能力以及善于理解情景提示的内容，抓住要点和中心思想的能力，是“压轴题”，属中考英语重大题型。能否把书面表达题型做好对于英语成绩总成绩能否考好非常重要。
二、书面表达题型做题技巧
书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
写作六步法：
1.审题：文体，时态，人称。
2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。
3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。
4.连句成文，合理使用连词。
5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。
6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁.
第二部分 书面表达专项训练（含解析）
一、书信作文
假设你是Ricky，你要推荐的你的好朋友Wilson 获得今年的最佳学生奖（Best Student Award）。请依据以下线索，合理想象，并适当发挥，写一封推荐信给学生会主席，90词左右，信的格式和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
推荐理由 关键词 事例
治学有道 学科；文章。 赢得写作比赛(a writing competition)第一名。
学有所长 计算机；排球。 帮助邻里；有望进入校队。
助人为乐 （请合理想象，并适当发挥，至少写出一个事例。）
Dear Chairperson,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wilson is such a good student like no other. He deserves an award for being hard-working and what he has achieved. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Ricky
二、书信作文
假设你是李明，你的美国笔友Steve上周从报纸上读了关于东北虎（manchurian tiger）正濒临灭绝的文章，他想制作一份海报，让更多的人了解保护野生动物的重要性，他写了封邮件想向你询问如果是你，你会怎么做，请根据Steve的邮件内容给他进行回复。
To: liming@
From: steve@
Subject: something about the poster on manchurian tiger
Dear Li Ming,How are you I hope everything goes on well with you. Last week, I read an article about manchurian tigers from the newspaper. I’m terribly sorry to find that they are endangered animals now! I want to design a poster about them. Would you please tell me how to do it if you were me ●How will you make the poster ●What slogan（标语）will you choose to write ●Do you think it meaningful to make such a poster Why Please email me whenever you are not busy.Best wishes!Steve
注意事项：1.字数90左右，开头已经写好，不计入总字数；
2.回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、顺畅；
3.中文不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Steve,
I’m glad to hear from you. Here are my suggestions. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、材料作文
根据内容提示用英语写一篇短文，可适当发挥。词数：90词左右。内容提示：
1. 南京是江苏省的省会。
2. 那儿有许多风景名胜，每年吸引上百万的游人。
3. 我早就在电视上目睹了南京的秀丽景色，但我却从来没有去过那儿。
4. 下周我要去南京开会，昨晚我兴奋得无法入睡。
5. 我相信我的南京之行肯定会很愉快。
A Trip to Nanjing
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四、材料作文
为了争做“阳光好少年”，近期阳光中学八（1）班开展了一次主题为“读好书、走好路、扫好地”的班会活动，根据下列提示信息，完成短文内容，完成一篇短文。
要点：
读好书 获取知识，开拓视野；
……（自拟一点）
走好路 遵守交规，严禁插队；
……（自拟一点）
扫好地 保护环境，健康生活；
……（自拟一点）
希望 人人参与，变得优秀
要求：
1.90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2.短文内容必须包括所给的提示，并按要求做适当发挥。
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Be an excellent student
Recently, we have held a special class meeting. The purpose of it is to help us students form good habits and to be an excellent student.
As students, we should read more.
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五、材料作文
最近你班级进行了“我最喜欢的季节”的讨论，50%的同学最喜欢春天，40%的同学最喜欢秋天，而你喜欢的季节与他们都不同。请根据讨论结果写一篇报告，并描述自己最喜欢的季节。
季节 理由
春天 1.天气转暖，气候宜人。2.万物生长，一片生机。3.蜂蝶成群，鸟语花香。4.活动（自拟）。
秋天 1.秋高气爽，万里无云。2.树叶变黄，落地成堆。3.鸟儿南飞。寻找温暖。4.活动（自拟）。
你最爱的季节 理由自拟。（2点以上）
要求：
1.90词左右，开头已经给出，不计入字数。
2.涵盖所有要点，可以适当发挥。
We had a discussion about our favourite season recently.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6． 保持健康对于成长中的我们来说是非常重要的。请你根据以下提示内容，以“How to keep healthy”为题，谈谈你的看法。
提示：(1)饮食健康； (2) 锻炼身体； (3) 良好的生活习惯；(4) 空闲时间读书、听音乐，学会放松。
要求：语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；不少于70词
How to Keep Healthy
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参考答案
一
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to recommend Wilson for this year’s Best Student Award.
Wilson works hard on all his subjects and does very well in all the lessons. Also, he writes good articles and in a writing competition, he won first prize.
In addition, Wilson practices volleyball hard and well. Hopefully, he will get into the school volleyball team next year.
Wilson is good at computers. At weekends, he always helps his neighbors check and fix their broken computers at the community center.
Wilson is a helpful boy. He often helps his classmates with their homework.
Wilson is such a good student. He deserves an award for being hard-working and what he has achieved. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Ricky
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目是书信类书面表达，根据表格内容提示完成推荐信，信件的开头和结尾已经给出，补充剩余内容即可。
2.写作指导：该题目人称主要使用第三人称，时态主要使用一般现在时，内容包含Wilson学习、特长、性格方面的内容，保证结构清晰条理。
二
Dear Steve,
I’m glad to hear from you. Here are my suggestions.
First, I will draw a picture of manchurian tiger on the poster. Then, I’ll write the number of them to tell more people about their terrible situation. Next, I’ll write why we should protect them. Finally, I’ll write how to protect them.
I will choose the slogan“Everyone should protect manchurian tigers”as the top of the poster. I think it’s very meaningful to make such a poster. Because more people will pay more attention to protecting them. And protecting animals is our responsibility.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。按照Steve信中提出的问题一一进行解答。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。先介绍自己如何制作这张海报，再介绍自己会选什么作为这张海报的标题，最后讲述自己对制作这个海报的评价以及原因。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
三
A Trip to Nanjing
Nanjing is the capital of Jiangsu Province. It is a beautiful place. There are many places of interest attracting millions of travelers. There are also many kinds of delicious food attracting tourists. I saw the scenery of Nanjing on TV. But I have never been there before. I will attend a meeting in Nanjing next week. I was too excited to sleep last night. I will visit some places after meeting and eat nice snacks there. I believe the trip to Nanjing will be great.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点进行写作，描写南京的情况，突出南京的美，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，用第一人称和第三人称相结合来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
四
Be an excellent student
Recently, we have held a special class meeting. The purpose of it is to help us students form good habits and to be an excellent student.
As students, we should read more. Reading can not only help us learn more knowledge but also open up a whole new world to us. What’s more, it’s a good way to relax ourselves and enrich our lives.
It’s necessary for us to obey traffic rules. We should queue and avoid pushing in before others. Moreover, it’s dangerous for teenagers to ride too fast.
It’s our duty to protect the environment and live a healthy life. Also, we can pick up the litter if possible or do housework, such as sweeping the floor.
I hope everyone can take an active part in order to make ourselves excellent.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕主题“读好书、走好路、扫好地”的班会活动来完成一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。第一段引出主题；第二段介绍阅读的重要性；第三段介绍遵守交通规则的重要性；第四段介绍保护环境的重要性；最后一段呼吁每个人都要行动起来。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强。无语法和标点错误。
五
We had a discussion about our favourite season recently. Here are the results.
50 percent of my classmates like spring best. Because it is getting warmer and the weather is pleasant. Everything grows and is lively. Bees and butterflies are flying around. And we can enjoy the twittering of birds and the fragrance of flowers. We can fly kites in spring.
40 percent of my classmates like autumn best. Because the air is cool and it is cloudless. Leaves turn yellow and fall in piles. The birds fly to the south to find warmth. We can go climbing in autumn.
As for me, I like winter best. I like snow and I really enjoy the snowball fights and seeing ice lanterns.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据表格信息，以“最喜欢的季节”为主题进行写作。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四段，第一段承接上文，引出话题；第二段介绍喜欢春天的同学们的原因；第三段介绍喜欢秋天的同学们的原因；第四段介绍自己最喜欢的季节和原因。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
六
How to Keep Healthy
As we all know, it’s very important to keep healthy. But do you know how to keep healthy Here are some advice.
Firstly, I think we must have enough food to keep us healthy. Breakfast is necessary. It gives us energy for the whole morning. We must also have the right kind of food. Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables, but less junk food. Don’t forget to wash your hands before meals.
Secondly, it’s necessary for us to take exercise. Exercise will keep us active and strong.
Thirdly, I think staying up is bad for our health. If we can’t get enough sleep, we may have a headache. We should go to bed early and get up early.
Lastly, when we have free time, we should listen to music or read books. Because they can make us feel relaxed. Too much pressure does harm to our health.
In a word, if we arrange our time properly and form good habits, we’ll be happier and healthier.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：文章属于材料作文，主要是以“How to Keep Healthy”为主题展开描写，内容按照题目中所给的信息提示描写，也可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时，人称用第一人称展开描述。主要是介绍如何保持健康的方法，包括饮食、锻炼、生活习惯等。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。

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