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Unit1 What’s the matter？话题作文
一、书面表达
1．假如你是李华，你的网友Peter打篮球时意外受伤，请根据以下内容是示，用英语给Peter写一封电子邮件。
提示：1. 询问病情并提出建议；
2. 介绍一下你学校的近期活动；
3. 表达祝愿。
要求：80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you got injured while playing basketball.
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Hope you’ll get better，and be back to your school as soon as possible.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you got injured while playing basketball. How are you feeling now I think you should have a good rest at home. And you’d better take care of yourself when you do sports.
Everything goes well here! I enjoy great changes in my school. Now, the teachers make their teaching styles colorful. In my science class, my teacher always encourages us to think, and cultivates our ability to study independently. In addition, we have plenty of time to try what we want to do. We had our School Day last week. There were different kinds of activities, such as the speech contest, the talent show, volunteering…I took part in the English speech contest, and I won the first prize. I will send you some photos about my School Day if you like.
Hope you’ll get better, and be back to your school as soon as possible.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，询问病情并给出建议；
第二步，介绍一下你学校的近期活动。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
②in addition另外
③plenty of许多
④such as例如
⑤win the first prize获得了一等奖
[高分句型]
①I think you should have a good rest at home（省略that的宾语从句）
②There were different kinds of activities, such as the speech contest, the talent show, volunteering（there be句型）
2．你的朋友Jim非常喜欢玩游戏。由于长时间玩电脑游戏，现在头痛、眼睛不舒服、腰酸背痛，并且晚上睡不好觉。请你写一篇英语短文，介绍一下他的情况，并指出你对他的建议。
具体要求：
1. 内容包含上述所提供的信息，可适当发挥；
2. 书写认真，句子通顺，语法正确；
3. 词数：80词左右。
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【答案】范文
Jim is my friend. He likes playing computer games very much. He often sits in the same way for too long without moving. Now he has a headache, sore eyes and a sore back. He doesn’t sleep well at night, so he feels tired every day.
I think he should take breaks away from the computer. He shouldn’t use the computer for a long time. He should do eye exercises to relax his eyes and go to bed early at night.
I think if he has a good rest, he will feel well soon.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍Jim的基本情况；
第二步，阐述自己给出的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth喜欢做某事
②in the same way以同样的方式
③do eye exercises做眼保健操
[高分句型]
①I think he should take breaks away from the computer.（省略that的宾语从句）
②I think if he has a good rest, he will feel well soon.（if引导的条件状语从句）
3．请根据表格中的提示，写一篇关于火灾的报道。词数80左右，可以适当发挥。
A report about a fire
时间 昨天下午三点钟
地点 李先生家
经过 房子着火时，李先生的父亲独自一人在家，在客厅看电视；他很害怕，拨打了119电话；最终消防员们将他救出；他的右手臂受了伤。
逃生提示 给出火灾逃生提示（至少两点）。
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【答案】范文
A report about a fire
There was a fire at Mr Li’s home at three o’clock yesterday afternoon. When the house caught fire, his father was alone at home, and he was watching TV in the living room. He was very frightened and he called 119. Finally the firemen helped him out. His right arm was hurt.
Fire is very dangerous. We should be careful with it. When our building is on fire, try to get out as soon as possible. We should use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose and stay low to the ground to protect ourselves from thick smoke.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于火灾的报道的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“写一篇关于火灾的报道”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、地点、经过等”几个方面重点介绍火灾的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，介绍“我们应该用湿毛巾盖住我们的嘴和鼻子，保持贴近地面，以保护自己免受浓烟的伤害”的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①catch fire着火；
②help sb out帮助某人摆脱困境；
③as…as possible尽可能……；
④protect…from…保护……不受……的伤害。
[高分句型]
①There was a fire at Mr Li’s home at three o’clock yesterday afternoon. (“there be”句型)
②When our building is on fire, try to get out as soon as possible. (when引导的时间状语从句)
4．对于每个人来说，生命只有一次。注意安全，就是善待和珍惜生命的一种有效途径。每年因意外事故伤亡的中学生有很多，为了让自己健康平安成长，你该如何保护自己的人身安全呢？请根据提示，以“Protect ourselves, cherish(珍爱)our lives”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。
1. get on well with your classmates, not fight
2. not swim alone, not swim in dangerous places
3. surf the internet safely, not meet net—friend alone
4. not smoke or drink wine(酒), make sure your food is safe
5. follow the traffic rules, walk on the zebra crossing(斑马) when crossing the street
6. …
注意：
1. 文中请勿使用真实人名，校名和地名；
2. 内容应包含表格中的要点并适当发挥；
3. 词数：80词左右；
4. 文章的开头已经给出，单不计入总词数。
Protect ourselves, cherish our lives
Life is only once for everybody. It's important to cherish our lives. As students, what should we do
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【答案】范文：
Protect ourselves, cherish our lives
Life is only once for everybody. It's important to cherish our lives. As students, what should we do
First, we should get on well with our classmates at school. Don’t fight with them. If we really have trouble in communicating with them, we can ask our teachers for help. Second, we shouldn’t swim alone or swim in dangerous places. It is dangerous. Third, we should surf the internet safely, and we shouldn’t meet net-friends alone. Fourth, we had better not smoke or drink wine and we must make sure our food is safe. What’s more, there are more and more cars nowadays. So we must follow the traffic rules. We should walk on the zebra crossing when crossing the street.
Safety comes first. So we must be careful at any moment.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，写作时要按说明文格式写。在写作时开头介绍珍爱生命很重要；第二段介绍如何保护自己的人身安全；第三段概括安全是第一位的。
2.范文分析：范文采用三段式；用第一、三人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时，介绍与同学好好相处，不要独自去游泳，在路上遵守交通规则等叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：
短语：get on well with；have trouble in；make sure；what’s more。
句型：条件状语从句If we really have trouble in communicating with them；省略句when crossing the street。
5．许多孩子喜欢吃零食，这是导致他们肥胖的主要原因之一。英语课上，老师引导学生就吃零食这一问题展开讨论。请你参考以下提示写一篇英语短文，简要谈谈你的看法。
提示：
1. 吃零食是一种坏习惯；
2. 科学家们说有些零食含有大量的脂肪和糖，人们摄取的脂肪和糖越多，越容易发胖。
要求：
1. 80词左右；
2. 可适当补充细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：snack n.零食 take in摄取 overweight adj.肥胖的；超重的
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【答案】范文
Most of the students in our class like eating snacks. I think it’s a bad habit. Snacks are delicious, but they are bad for our health if we eat lots of them. Do you know why Scientists say some snacks have too much fat and sugar. The more fat and sugar we take in, the more easily we will become fat. Becoming overweight can cause a lot of health problems and even illnesses. So in order to keep healthy, we shouldn’t eat lots of snacks.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为议论文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏作文提示里的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“大多数学生都吃零食”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“吃零食有害健康、科学家论证等”几个方面介绍具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。呼吁大家少吃零食，保持健康。
[亮点词汇]
①bad habit坏习惯
②delicious美味
③be bad for对……有害
④overweight超重
⑤health problems健康问题
[高分句型]
①the more fat and sugar we take in, the more easily we will become fat. (“the+比较级，the+比较”句型）
②So in order to keep healthy, we shouldn’t eat lots of snacks. (“in order to”引导目的状语)
6．暑假中，Leo喜欢玩手机游戏，最近他的脖子有点难受。假如你是Leo的朋友Denny，请你写一封信，帮Leo分析一下他的问题，并就此提出几点建议。
提示：（1）久坐不动有害健康；
（2）注意休息；
（3）适当增加锻炼。
词数：不少于80；开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
要求：语句通顺，不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Leo,
I am sorry to hear about your problems. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If you follow all these tips, you’ll be better soon!
Yours truly,
Denny
【答案】【参考范文】
Dear Leo,
I am sorry to hear about your problems. As we know, health is very important to all of us.
You shouldn’t play the mobile phone games all the time. It is harmful to sit in the same way for too long without moving. Since you have some problems with your neck, you should stop playing the mobile phone games first. Then you should take breaks after you play with your phone. Besides, exercise can help you keep healthy. So try to take more exercise. If you still have a bad neck pain, you should see a doctor.
If you follow all these tips, you’ll be better soon!
Yours truly,
Denny
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干和提示中对Leo的问题分析和建议，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，紧接首段，指出健康的重要性
第二步，指出Leo的问题在于长时间玩手机游戏，久坐不动；
第三步，针对Leo的问题提出具体的建议；
[亮点词汇]
①all the time 总是
②have some problems with 有问题
③take breaks 休息
[高分句型]
①It is harmful to sit in the same way for too long without moving.（运用句型：It is adj. to do“做某事是……的”）
②Since you have some problems with your neck, you should stop playing the mobile phone games first.（since引导原因状语从句）
③If you still have a bad neck pain, you should see a doctor.（if引导条件状语从句）
7．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安，请你用英文给他写封电子邮件，谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下：
1.经常做户外活动；
2.很少用电子产品；
3.坚持做眼保健操；
4. ......
注意:1.词数80-100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike
I'm sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】范文
I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life.
At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.
I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.
Yours,
【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份，给自己的英国笔友Mike写信，给他介绍一下你在保护视力方面的做法。审题可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时，第一人称来叙述，内容应包括：首先讲述题目中Mike的视力减退问题，并引出文章的主题；然后具体介绍自己在保护视力方面的做法，这一部分是文章的主体，可以按照题目中所列的内容进行介绍，并对第四条进行补充；最后提出自己的希望或祝愿。写作时应注意：短文按内容表达的需要，分成三段，每一段一个主题；内容应包括题目中的所有要点，不能遗漏；课根据表达需要，增加细节内容，使文章更加充实、丰富。其次应注意文章的表达，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，句式应符合英语的表达习惯。句子结构应完整，可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的衔接成分，使行文连贯，表达流畅。

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