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01读后续写原题
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
David was a windsurfer, who was serious and hardworking. He dreamed of becoming a city champion of the annual Teenager Windsurfing Race. To achieve it, he barely missed a single game or practice whatever the weather. After months of intense training, the big day finally arrived!
The beach was crowded with the excited audience, including reporters and photographers. The speaker system was announcing the names of the windsurfers, calling them to get ready for the race. And there was David, in a line with other windsurfers, all of them moving nervously up and down on the waves behind an imaginary starting line. They were all fighting for the best position to start and were tense as a result, ignoring the vast sea they were on.
The moment the starter's signal sounded, David was off, so natural and quick. He pulled hard at his sail to race just ahead of the group. As he picked up speed, gliding (滑行) over the waves, he felt the familiar joy and freedom that windsurfing always gave him. What he loved was simply being out at sea. He could hardly stop himself from shouting out in excitement, rushing to the finishing line for the first.
"Go!David!" The wind carried over a familiar voice.He looked around and spotted his elder sister Jessica on her speedboat upwind of him cheering for him. She waved at David and he nodded his head in acknowledgement, even though he knew she was too far away to see him. Just as he turned away, however, out of the corner of his eye, he saw smoke behind the speedboat on the shore. Knowing that the smoke could tell him the direction the wind was blowing, he decided to study it for a moment out of habit. Just as he was getting a better sense of how to use the wind to his advantage, he saw it.
注意：续写词数应为150左右；P1: Not just the smoke but a big fire!P2: The other windsurfers were far ahead of him at that time.
02 写作思路分析
这是一篇故事类续写。从所给前文可知，文章主要围绕有实力争夺年度青少年帆板比赛冠军的 David在比赛过程中发现火情后是如何抉择的来展开故事情节。
文章第一段主要介绍了帆板运动员 David 认真努力地训练，渴望夺得冠军，为续写的内容埋下伏笔。根据续写第一段首句“Not just the smoke but a big fire!”和续写第二段首句“The other windsurfers were far ahead of him at that time.”可以判断，虽然 David 很想拿冠军，但发现火情后并没有因为急着争夺冠军而置之不理，需侧重他面临抉择时的心理活动描写及如何示意 Jessica 的动作描写。
根据续写第二段首句“The other windsurfers were far ahead of him at that time.”可知，David 想要赢得比赛已是不可能的，第二段需侧重描写 David 虽然没能获得冠军但却做出正确抉择的心理感受及观众的反应。主题思想一定要体现积极向上的正确价值观导向。
注意：续写第一段最为合理的情节应该是正在参加比赛的David第一时间发出警示，示意姐姐Jessica拨打火警电话，但学生如果写 David 亲自参与救火也是合理的。
03 参考范文
Not just the smoke but a big fire! It seemed to have just started from a building and to spread out of control very soon. Desperate as he was for the championship, he felt he should do the right thing at this critical moment. Thinking of this, David decisively went off course and swung his sail towards Jessica’s speedboat. “Fire!” David yelled, pointing in the direction of the fire and signing her to make the fire call. Jessica looked away, got David’s message and reached out for her cellphone. David breathed a sigh of relief and tuned his attention to the race.
The other windsurfers were far ahead of him at that time. However hard he tried, it was impossible to catch up with them. Despite this, David didn’t regret helping with the fire. Back on land after the sail, David was immediately surrounded by the enthusiastic reporters and photographers. Then came the announcement from thespeaker system, “Though in the last place, David is our hero, who made the detour to raise the warning about the fire!” Prolonged applauses burst out. Some fans even pushed their way to present David with flowers, which lit up his face like rosy clouds.
默写版：
Not just the smoke but a big fire! _______________________________它似乎刚从一栋楼开始，很快就失控了. Desperate as he was for the championship, he felt he should do the right thing at this critical moment. ____________________
____________________________________考虑到这一点，大卫果断地偏离了航向，向杰西卡的快艇扬帆而去. “Fire!” David yelled, pointing in the direction of the fire and signing her to make the fire call. ______________________________
_________________________________________杰西卡看向别处，收到大卫的短信，伸手去拿手机. David breathed a sigh of relief and tuned his attention to the race.
The other windsurfers were far ahead of him at that time. _______________
______________________________无论他多么努力，都不可能赶上他们. Despite this, David didn’t regret helping with the fire. ______________________
_____________________________________________________启航后回到陆地，大卫立即被热情的记者和摄影师包围. Then came the announcement from the speaker system, “Though in the last place, David is our hero, who made the detour to raise the warning about the fire!” Prolonged applause burst out. ____
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一些球迷甚至为大卫献上鲜花，这些鲜花像彩云一样照亮了他的脸.

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