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(共26张PPT)
Write a blog post
Unit 3
The Internet
Wire Fraud （电信诈骗）
cyberbully (网络暴力）
identity theft (身份盗窃)
Information leakage (信息泄露)
troll (网络挑事者)
What problems are mentioned in the picture
Online Safety Problems
Lead in
How can we stay safe online
2
What type of passage is it
A blog
comments
Title
Beginning/
Introduction
Body
Ending
Comment
structure
Pre-writing
Read paragraph 1 and find out the main idea of the blog post
1
Today I thought I'd blog about a question that has been asked many times—how do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet I'm not an expert, but many years as a blogger have taught me a thing or two.
Introduction Tell the reader about yourself and what you know about the topic.
_______ _____________ 。
Online Safety/How to Stay Safe Online
Try to write a title for the blog post.
To make the composition more persuasive
Pre-writing
Read paragraph 2 and find out 3 guidelines the author provided
1
Body Tell the reader what they should do or keep in mind.
Define new words or key terms.
dos don'ts



If…leave the site immediately
protect your privacy
be polite
post comments/click on anything
give out your address/
phone number
Tip1： Use imperative sentences(祈使句) to make the language powerful,and persuasive.
To make the composition more persuasive
Pre-writing
1
How are the guidelines connected
besides; in addition; additionally; moreover; furthermore; what's more; on top of that;
first of all; to begin/start with; in the first place; first and foremost
lastly; most importantly, last but not the least; in the end
Signal Words
Tip2： Use linking words to express ideas clearly, logically and coherently (连贯地).
Pre-writing
Read paragraph 2 again and find out 3 online troublemakers the blog post mentions.
1
Identity theft
Troll
Cyberbully
a common and serious problem
explanation
…is a person who …stir up ...
definition
Like a troll...however..
comparison
Tip 4: Add details and use skills such as explanation、definition and comparison to make the information clear and understandable.
How does the writer end the post
A. By asking questions.
B. By answering questions.
C. By asking and answering questions.
D. By asking readers to write comments.
√
Pre-writing
Read paragraph 3 and choose the best answer.
1
Ending End by asking the readers to write comments.
strong interactivity(互动性)
Why do we have comments in a blog
To put heads together and come up with more ideas
To hear different voices from the outside world
Blog post
Title
introduction
Body
Ending
Tell the main idea.
Introduce the topic.
Background information.
Guidelines/ suggestions/ tips
Use linking words to express clearly.
Use imperative sentences to make the language powerful.
Add details. （Examples/Definitions/Comparison)
Ask for comments.
A summary of a blog post.
Headline
标题醒目
Introduction
引入话题+背景
Ending
邀请评论
How to write a blog post
Organization of a blog post
博文结构
Body
围绕话题提出建议
Use what you have learnt to write a blog post about online safety.
Online shopping sites
Use a website you are familiar with.
Use strong passwords.
Don’t use public computers.
Social networking apps
Don’t post personal information.
Don’t believe everything.
Be polite.
Online chat rooms
Don’t give out too much information.
Never meet someone you met online alone.
Choose one of the topics below and use the notes to draft your blog post.
Writing
2
Useful expressions about giving advice：
1. I highly recommend/suggest/advise that you should do…
2. It is highly/strongly/intensely recommended that sb. should do ...
3. Why not / Why don't you do…
4. It is a definitely good idea/choice/option to do…
5. I attach great importance to doing sth.
=Great importance should be attached to doing sth.
6. You might as well do sth.
7. If I were you, I would do sth.
=Were I you, I would do sth.
Evaluation Criteria 评价标准
items Scores (25’)
Contents内容(10’) Introduce the topic
Include examples, comparisons, or explanations
Ask readers to leave comments or suggestions
Structure (6’) The tips and suggestions are well organized(有条理的) by using signal words
Include transitional sentences过渡句
Language (6’) Advanced高级的 expressions or sentence patterns句型 ; grammar or spelling mistakes
Others (3’) Handwriting书写
Let's polish the passage.
1.当谈及网上购物安全，作为一个有经验的网民，我确信对此我还是
略知一二的。
Para1: introduction
When it comes to online shopping safety, as an experienced netizen, I am
sure that I know one thing or two.
2.随着网络的快速发展，在过去几年里网上购物也大幅度地增长。但网上
购物真的安全吗？当然不！
With the rapid development of the Internet, online shopping has greatly grown in the past few years. However, is online shopping really safe
Of course not!
3.虽然网上购物给我们带来极大的便利，但也有着很多不安全的隐患。我
们要如何使网上购物更加安全呢？
Although online shopping brings us great convenience, there are many insecure risks. How should we make online shopping safer
1.有着以下几点简单的建议，你可以愉快地享受网上购物的便利。
Para1: introduction
With these following simple tips, you can enjoy the convenience of
online shopping with much pleasure.
2.当你在网上购物时，这些简单的建议能够帮助你避免一些糟糕的购物
体验。
When you shop online, these simple suggestions can help avoid some
terrible experiences.
3.建议当你在网上购物前，有必要阅读以下几点建议，这会使网上购物
毫无风险。
It is recommended that it is necessary to read the following advice
before shopping online, which makes your online shopping risk-free.
+ transitional sentences过渡句
首先，挑选熟悉的购物网站。最好在你了解且信任的网站上购物，它会保护好你的隐私。如果你很需要从不知名的网址购买商品，在购买前先试着去浏览一下网站的其他评价。
Para2: rules/ advice
First of all, choose the website you are familiar with. It’s best to shop from the website you know and trust, because it can protect your privacy. If you feel the need to shop from an unknown website, try to go through others’ reviews on it.
linking words+imperative sentences
其次，使用较为复杂的密码。只有几个数字或字母的简单的密码很容易被入侵(hack)。为了安全起见,更加推荐使用较为复杂的密码。而且,不要轻易泄露你的密码。
Para2: rules/ advice
Second, use a strong password. A simple password with only few numbers
or letters is easily hacked. For better safety, a strong password is highly recommended. Plus, don’t give out your password.
linking words+imperative sentences
最后，勿使用公共网络购物。使用公共网络购物有着巨大的风险。你可以使用手机热点(hotspot)去购物，而不是公共网络。或者，可以将你想要购买的商品加入购物车，直到回家后再使用安全网络去购买。
Para2: rules/ advice
Third, don’t shop on public network. Shopping on public Wifi is a huge risk. (You can) use your phone as a hotspot instead of public Wifi. Or, add those items that you want to buy into your shopping cart and shop until you are at home and on your safe network.
linking words+imperative sentences
1.你有什么关于安全网上购物的建议吗？欢迎在下方评论！
Para3: Ending (ask others to give comments)
Do you have any good tip about shopping online safely Your ideas
are welcomed below!
2.欢迎大家分享自己的故事和发表任何与安全网上购物的评论！
You are welcomed to share your stories and make any comment on
online shopping safety!
Sample writing1:
Online Shopping Safety
When it comes to shopping online safety, as an experienced netizen, whose net age is more that 10 years, I’m sure that I know one thing or two. Here are some tips for you.
First, it is highly recommended that you use the shopping websites you are familiar with. Download familiar app or software like taobao. In addition, when registering a shopping website, you might as well use a strong password and keep it well. Furthermore, never use public computers to shop online, or your privacy will be recorded in the computers. Last, great importance should be attached to installing a firewall to watch over your information. A firewall is a kind of software to protect your using Internet.
Do you have any good tips about shopping online safely？Your ideas are welcomed below!
Today, I want to blog about shopping online safety, which has drawn wide attention nowadays. With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.
Shopping online embraces many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy whatever you’re interested in without going outdoors. When shopping online, you can choose from varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.
Nevertheless, some people hold the belief that its drawbacks overweigh merits. Initially, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. In addition, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not urgently needed.
From my standpoint, the Internet is a double-edged sword. Only if we use the Internet more normatively，can we shop online more safely. What’s your opinion about shopping online Post your comments below!
Sample
Sample writing 2:
How to stay safe in the online chat room
Today I thought I'd blog about a question that has been asked many times--- how do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences in the online chat room I'm not an expert, but many years as a blogger have taught me a thing or two.
First of all, there's the golden rule of the Internet: keep out of what makes you uneasy. Don't post comments or click on anything. Besides, protect your privacy. Don't give out too much private information like your address, phone numbers, the ID numbers, etc. The more cautious you are online, the less likely you are to become the easy target of cyberbully. Last but not least, be polite. If you are polite to others on the Internet, you won't be attacked in normal situation. Finally, don't believe in others easily and never meet someone you met online alone. It is very dangerous.
Have you had any bad experiences online, or do you have some good advice for staying safe Post your comments below!
□1. Does the writer tell the reader what he/she knows about the topic
□2. Are the tips and suggestions well organized
□3. Has the writer defined the new words
□4. Does the author include examples, comparisons, or explanations
□5. Does the writer end by asking readers to leave comments and/or suggestions
□6. Can you find any grammar or spelling mistakes？
Let's polish the passage.
writing
互联网现在在人们生活中不可或缺 ，它已经成为人们生活的一部分。但网络有利有弊，请在你的博客上写一篇关于“网络利弊”的文章 并提出你的观点或建议。
注意：1、字数 80字左右；
2、 不出现真实人名与地名。
Homework
Polish your writing .

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