2024年1月“九省联考”英语真题解读与考后变式训练 专题10 应用文写作(含解析)

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2024年1月“九省联考”英语真题解读与考后变式训练 专题10 应用文写作(含解析)

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《2024年1月“九省联考”英语真题解读与考后变式训练》
专题10 应用文写作-通知+节约 (二次开发+微技能+名校模拟拟) 解析版
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原题呈现
) 变式方向:通知类词汇,通知类句式,句式仿写,满分作文,通知类试题汇编
书面表达关键词:人与社会,书面通知,节约粮食,活动通知,“德智体美劳”五育并举
你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动,节约粮食”的作文比赛。请你写一则活动通知,内容包括:
(1)介绍活动目的;
(2)说明参赛要求。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
(
答案解析
)
【答案】
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, themed “Hand in Hand, Save the Food”. The competition aims to raise awareness about the importance of saving food.
All students are encouraged to participate. Entries should consist of an original piece of writing, focusing on the theme of food waste and showing how we can contribute to its reduction. Please submit your entries to the English Department mailbox by the deadline of June 1st.
We look forward to your participation and creative submissions.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动,节约粮食”的作文比赛写一则活动通知。
第一步:词汇积累
比赛:competition→contest
集中:focus on→concentrate on
鼓励:encourage→hearten
主题:theme→topic
第二步:句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, themed “Hand in Hand, Save the Food”.
拓展句:Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, whose theme is “Hand in Hand, Save the Food”.
第三步:高分句型
[高分句型1] The competition aims to raise awareness about the importance of saving food. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] Entries should consist of an original piece of writing, focusing on the theme of food waste and showing how we can contribute to its reduction. (运用了how引导宾语从句)
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2023年四省联考
)
你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论,内容包括:
1. 音乐会特点;
2. 观看感受;
3. 意见建议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
【答案】
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
The performers from the two schools have done their best in entertaining the audience with one song after another. Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one. I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. They performed the song in a way that touched my heart and gave me a feeling of connection.
I hope there will be more opportunities in the future for us Chinese students and our international friends to learn about and from each other.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生就学校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会,在线上留言板上写一则评论。
第一步:词汇积累
确定无疑地:undoubtedly→without doubt
尤其地:particularly→ especially
感动:touch→ move
希望:hope→ expect
第二步:句式拓展
同义句
原句:Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.
拓展句:There is no doubt that their performances are of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.
第三步:高分句型
【高分句型1】Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
(
同款高考真题
)
(2018·全国·高考真题)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together,内容包括:
(1)短片内容:学校的发展;
(2)放映时间、地点;
(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【满分范文】
Notice
There is an English short film Growing Together produced by our teachers and us senior students. In order to learn more about the development of our school, all the students are welcome to watch the short film, which is a documentary on the history of our school.
As arranged, the film is to be shown in the school hall from 2:00 to 3:00 this Friday afternoon.If you are curious about the history of our school or concerned about its future, you mustn't miss this excellent opportunity! We encourage any kind of feedback on the film from our viewers.
We are looking forward to your participation.
The Students' Union
(
考点变式训练
)
一、语篇填空再练(完全重新设空,符合高考命题理念)
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, 1 (theme) “Hand in Hand, Save the Food”. The competition aims 2 (raise) awareness about the importance of saving food.
All students 3 (encourage) to participate. Entries should consist of an 4 (original) piece of writing, 5 (focus) on the theme of food waste and showing 6 we can contribute to its 7 (reduce). Please submit your entries to the English Department mailbox 8 the deadline of June 1st.
We look forward to 9 (you) participation and creative 10 (submission).
【参考答案】
1. themed 2. to raise 3. are encouraged 4. original 5. focusing 6. how 7. reduction 8. by 9. your 10. submissions
二、高频句式一句多译
一)比赛的细节如下。
1. The detailed information concerning the competition is as follows.
2. The following is the detailed information with regard to the competition.
3. I’d like to share with you the specific information relevant to the competition as follows.
二)比赛将于周五下午三点举行,五点结束。
1. The competition is scheduled to begin at 3:00 pm on Friday and end at 5:00 pm.
2. The competition is due to start at 3:00 pm on Friday, ending at 5:00 pm.
3. As scheduled, the competition is to take place at 3:00 pm on Friday, lasting approximately two hours.
三)比赛机会难得,不容错过。
1. The contest is such a golden chance that you can’t afford to miss it.
2. The contest is such a precious opportunity that you can’t afford to miss it.
3. So valuable a chance is the competition that you can’t afford to miss it.
四)盼望你的参与。
1. Earnestly looking forward to your participation in the competition as soon as possible.
2. Looking forward to your involvement in the competition with great expectation.
3. Looking forward to your joining in the competition sooner/earlier.
三、书面通知必备十句话
1. 为了提高人们的环保意识,我们学校将在下周日组织一次以垃圾分类为主题的有意义的活动。
1. To raise people’s awareness of environmental protection, our school will organize a meaningful activity with the theme of Rubbish Sorting next Sunday.
2. 照片的要求如下。
2. The requirements for the photographs are as follows.
3. 根据安排,这部电影将于本周五下午2点至3点在学校礼堂放映。
3. As arranged, the film is to be shown in the school hall from 2:00 to 3:00 this Friday afternoon.
4. 它提供给所有渴望展现中国诗歌才华的留学生。
4. It is available to all the overseas students who are eager to show talent for Chinese poetry.
5.如果你感兴趣,请在9月25日前在国际部大厦301室报名。
5. If you are interested, don’t hesitate to sign up in Room 301 of the International Department Building by September 25th.
6.我们衷心希望热心观鸟爱好者为这项运动作出贡献。
6. We genuinely hope that enthusiastic fans of bird-watching will contribute to the campaign.
7.我相信,只有每个人的贡献和参与,这场运动才能创造奇迹。
7. I’m convinced that only with everyone’s contribution and participation can the campaign work wonders.
8.亲爱的朋友们,不要错过这个机会,与我们分享你们最喜欢的中国节日。
8. Dear friends, don’t miss this opportunity to share your favorite Chinese festival with us.
9.在我们的共同努力下,我们周围的环境将焕然一新。欢迎任何人加入我们!
9. With our joint efforts, our surroundings will take on a new look. Whoever wants to join us is warmly welcome!
10.任何想报名的人都填写申请表,并在本周五之前与我们联系。
10. Anyone who wants to sign up for it fills in the application form and contacts us by this Friday.
四、满分范文(六篇)
【范文1】Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
We are excited to announce the "Join Hands, Save Food" English Writing Competition. This event aims to promote sustainable practices and raise awareness about the importance of conserving food resources.
All students of our school are encouraged to participate. To enter, simply submit an original essay in English on the topic of saving food. Your essay should be between 300-500 words and include your name, grade, and class on the cover page. The deadline for submissions is Jan 20.
We encourage all students to take advantage of this opportunity to showcase their creativity and language skills. Let's work together to create a greener and more sustainable future.
the English Department
【范文2】Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
We are pleased to announce that our school’s English newspaper is organizing an essay competition with the theme “Take Action, Save Food.” The purpose of this competition is to raise awareness about the importance of conserving food and encourage everyone to take active measures towards reducing food wastage.
To participate, please take note of the following requirements: First, essays should be written in English and be original. Second, the word count should be around 80 words. Third, the content should focus on the significance of saving food and suggest practical ways to minimize food waste. And remember that submissions should be sent to the English Department by the specified deadline.
Joining this competition provides an excellent opportunity to showcase your English writing skills while promoting an important cause. Let’s come together and make a difference!
the Student Union
【范文3】Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
In order to raise people's awareness of the importance of food conservation, our school's English newspaper is planning to organize a writing competition themed “join hands, save food”.
Participating students are required to write an essay between 300-500 words and submit to the school English newspaper office before the deadline of February 28. The top three winners will have the opportunity to have their essays published.
We encourage you to use this opportunity to voice your thoughts and share your ideas on how we can all contribute to reducing food waste. Looking forward to your active participation.
the Students’ Union
【范文4】Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
To raise people's awareness of the importance of food conservation and encourage everyone to take action, our school's English newspaper is organizing a writing competition on the theme of “Join Hands, Save Food".
The competition requirements are as follows. First of all, your essay should be closely related to the theme, well-structured, and free from plagiarism, with a minimum of 500 words. We encourage you to be creative and use persuasive language to convey your message effectively. In addition, please submit your essays via email attachment, including your full name, grade level, and contact information in the body of the email by next Friday.
We believe that everyone can make a difference in food conservation, and we hope to see your active involvement and contribution.
the Students’ Union
【范文5】Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
We are excited to announce that our school's English newspaper is organizing an essay competition with the theme "Join Hands, Save Food." The details are as follows:
The aim of this activity is to raise awareness about environmental protection and promote the importance of saving food. Through your essays, we hope to encourage everyone to adopt responsible eating habits and reduce food waste, contributing to a sustainable future. Participants are required to submit an essay in English with a word count of approximately 150-200 words. Your essay should reflect a positive and proactive approach towards food conservation, emphasizing the significance of the issue and offering practical suggestions. Please submit your entries to the editorial department of the English newspaper by the end of this month.
Let's join hands and take action together to build a society that values food conservation! Stay tuned for further updates and more details in the English newspaper.
the Students’ Union
【范文6】Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
Our school is scheduled to organize an English writing competition themed with "Joint Efforts to Save Food", with the purpose of enhancing the students' awareness to cherish food and put an end to waste, so that they learn thrift as a habit by heart and bear it in mind.
The article is required to be focused on the theme, with the sharing of the students' practices and opinions of saying no to food waste as well as the specific measures to promote the "Clean Plate Campaign". Each and every article may as well be limited to no more than 500 words, attached with the class and name of the author.
Your active participation is highly expected, and please keep those around you informed.
the Students’ Union
(
解题指导
)
一、通知常用地点语料库
1. at the meeting room
2. in the lecture hall
3. in the auditorium 在礼堂
4. in the teachers’ office
5. at the school gate
6. on the playground
7. in the lab
8. on the second floor
二、通知常用时间语料库
1. on Saturday morning
2. from 9:00 am to 11:00am
3. in September, 2024
4. on Wednesday, December 12, 2024
5. on the morning of this Sunday
三、通知常用“目的”多样化表达语料库
1. in order to do
2. to do…
3. Aimed at…
4. Targeted at…
5. With the aim of
6. With the intention of…
7. With the purpose of…
8. For the sake of…
四、通知常用“参加”多样化表达语料库
1. join in…
2. take part in
3. participate in
4. be involved in
5. be engaged in
6. sign up for
7. register for,,,
8. enroll sb in…
五、通知常用“第一”多样化表达语料库
1. first/firstly
2. to begin/start with
3. first and foremost
4. in the first place
5. first of all
六、通知常用“欢迎参加”多样化表达语料库
1. Whoever is interested is welcome to participate.
2. You are welcome to participate and share!
3. Looking forward to your photography works.
4. We are looking forward to your participation.
5. Your active engagement is highly anticipated.
七、通知常用“学生会”多样化表达语料库
1. the Student Union
2. the Students’ Union
八、书面通知思维导图
注意事项:
1.通知的内容要齐全,对象、缘由、时间、地点等一定要明确;
2.通知通常是告知未来要做的事情,因此时态一般用将来时;
3.通知要语言简明、条理清晰。
九、书面通知答题模板
Notice
In order to_________(通知缘由), we are going to hold_________ (具体活动) at_________ (活动时间、地点).
By then, _________ (活动介绍). All the_________ (参加者)are expected to _________ (注意事项1). More importantly, _________(注意事项 2).
We are looking forward to your active participation.
(发通知单位)
(发通知时间)
注意事项:三大部分
1. 标题:NOTICE
2. 主题:首段阐明通知缘由;第二段详细交代通知注意事项;第三段表示欢迎和期待。
3. 通知单位:右下角,发出通知单位和时间
十、书面通知经典背诵
Notice
Aimed to arouse our interest in reading and enrich our school life, the Student Union is scheduled to hold Classic Books Sharing activity.
Themed “Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”, the activity is arranged in the lecture hall on February 24, which starts at 2:00 pm and lasts approximately two hours. Any student who has a passion for this activity can bring your favourite book and share your comments and experiences. If possible, you can make powerpoint to make it more vivid and effective.
If you are interested, please sign up in Room 101, Building 2 before February 15. We are looking forward to your participation.
The Students’ Union
(
名校好题汇编
)
1.(2023上·海南·海口一中校考期中)假定你是某国际学校学生会主席,你校本周五下午将举办一场主题为“安全上网 (Safe Internet Access)”的讲座。请你代表学生会,写一份书面通知。
内容包括:
1. 讲座的具体信息(目的、主题、时间、地点、内容等);
2. 参加讲座的注意事项。
NOTICE
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Student Union
【答案】
A special lecture on network security will be organized in the school hall from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. on November 8th, mainly aimed at improving awareness of Internet security of teachers and students in our school.
The lecture will be made by a network security expert from City Police Station, who will show us some cases in Internet scam. In addition, we will be taught some useful ways to protect us and our property. What’s more, we can also consult our problems about Internet security.
Undoubtedly, the lecture is a valuable opportunity for us. Please participate actively and arrive on time.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生代表学生会就学校本周五下午将举办的一场主题为“安全上网”的讲座写一篇书面通知。
第一步:词汇积累
积极地:actively→zealously
提高:improve→raise
此外:in addition→besides
有用的:useful→helpful
第二步:句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:A special lecture on network security will be organized in the school hall from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. on November 8th, mainly aimed at improving awareness of Internet security of teachers and students in our school.
拓展句:A special lecture on network security will be organized in the school hall from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. on November 8th, which is mainly aimed at improving awareness of Internet security of teachers and students in our school.
第三步:高分句型
[高分句型1] The lecture will be made by a network security expert from City Police Station, who will show us some cases in Internet scam. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] A special lecture on network security will be organized in the school hall from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. on November 8th, mainly aimed at improving awareness of Internet security of teachers and students in our school. (运用了过去分词作后置定语)
2.(2022·河南·西平县高级中学校联考模拟预测)假定你是学生会主席李华,你校将举办一场中外交流活动,征集以“我和春节”为主题的优秀摄影作品。请你用英语写一则通知,内容包括:
1. 活动的目的;
2. 活动的要求;
3. 表达期待。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Notice
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The Students' Union
【答案】One possible version:
Notice
The Spring Festival, one of the most important traditional festivals of China, is drawing near. Thus, our school will hold a photography competition to show overseas students the celebrations of Chinese New Year from your points of view.
Through this activity, not only can you have a better understanding of our Chinese traditional festival, but you can also help foreign students know more about our precious cultures and ancient customs. Please send your photos to the appointed address before the start of school. And make sure they are clear and positive. All the selected works will be published on the school’s website.
Please take an active part in the contest. Looking forward to your photography works.
The Students' Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生为学校将举办的一场中外交流活动,写一则通知,征集以“我和春节”为主题的优秀摄影作品。
第一步:词汇积累
重要的:important → significant
传统的:traditional → conventional
靠近:draw near → approach
因此:thus → therefore
第二步:句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Thus, our school will hold a photography competition to show overseas students the celebrations of Chinese May Day from your points of view.
拓展句:Thus, our school will hold a photography competition, which is intended to show overseas students the celebrations of Chinese May Day from your points of view.
第三步:高分句型
[高分句型1] The Spring Festival, one of the most important festivals of China, is drawing near.(运用了名词短语作同位语)
[高分句型2] Through this activity, not only can you have a better understanding of our Chinese traditional festival, but you can also help foreign students know more about our precious cultures and customs. (运用了“not only...but also...”固定句式和部分倒装)
3.(2023·河北·校联考三模)假定你是校学生会主席李华, 学生会将举行以“Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”为主题的校园读书分享活动。请你根据提示写一则通知告知国际部学生,内容包括:
1.活动意图;
2.活动内容;
3.欢迎参加。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Student Union
【答案】参考范文
Notice
Aiming to arouse our interest in reading and enrich our school life, an activity will be held for us to share our books and reading experiences.
With the theme of “Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”, the activity will take place in the lecture hall on June 24, which will start at 2:00 pm and last approximately two hours. Any student who has a passion for reading can bring your favorite book and share your comment. If possible, you can use PowerPoint to make it more vivid and effective.
If you are interested, please sign up in Room 101, Building 2 one day in advance. We are looking forward to your participation.
The Student Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生代表学生会写一则通知,告知国际部学生学生会将举行以“Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”为主题的校园读书分享活动,以及活动的相关事宜。
第一步:词汇积累
目的是:aim to to→be aimed at doing
主题:theme→subject
喜欢:hava a passion for→be passionate about
提前:in advance→ahead of time
第二步:句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:With the theme of “Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”, the activity will take place in the lecture hall on June 24, which will start at 2:00 pm and last approximately two hours.
拓展句:The activity, whose theme is “Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”, will take place in the lecture hall on June 24, which will start at 2:00 pm and last approximately two hours.
第三步:高分句型
[高分句型1]Aiming to arouse our interest in reading and enrich our school life, an activity will be held for us to share our books and reading experiences.(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]With the theme of “Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”, the activity will take place in the lecture hall on June 24, which will start at 2:00 pm and last approximately two hours.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
4.(2023下·浙江绍兴·高二统考期末)假定你是某国际学校学生会主席李华,你校将于近期举办一场有关急救知识的讲座。请你以学生会的名义写一则英语通知。内容包括:
1.时间及地点;
2.活动内容;
3.注意事项。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Notice for a Lecture on First Aid
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Student Union
【答案】One Possible Version:
Notice for a Lecture on First Aid
To provide students with a basic knowledge of first aid, the school is to hold a lecture titled First Aid Care on June 15th in the school’s auditorium.
A specialist from the Red Cross will be invited to deliver the lecture, which is aimed to help participants recognize and respond appropriately to emergencies. Apart from essential explanation of the relevant definitions, signs and symptoms, the expert will maximize the amount of hands-on skills practice time. CPR and other lifesaving skills will be demonstrated first and practised subsequently.
Please note that all the freshmen are anticipated to attend the lecture before 6: 30 pm. Take time to learn and it will enable you to respond quickly and save life!
The Student Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生会的名义写一则英语通知——学校将于近期举办一场有关急救知识的讲座。
第一步:词汇积累
举行:hold→host
演讲:lecture→speech
参加:attend→take part in
常识:basic knowledge→common sense
第二步:句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Apart from essential explanation of the relevant definitions, signs and symptoms, the expert will maximize the amount of hands-on skills practice time.
拓展句:Not only does the expert give essential explanation of the relevant definitions, signs and symptoms, but also the expert will maximize the amount of hands-on skills practice time.
第三步:高分句型
[高分句型1] To provide students with a basic knowledge of first aid, the school is to hold a lecture titled First Aid Care on June 15th in the school’s auditorium. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2] A specialist from the Red Cross will be invited to deliver the lecture, which is aimed to help participants recognize and respond appropriately to emergencies. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
5.(2023·黑龙江大庆·统考三模)为激发学生英语学习的兴趣,你校将举办英文配音(voice acting)作品大赛。请你以校学生会的名义用英语写一则通知,内容包括:
1. 比赛目的;
2. 作品要求;
3. 截止日期。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Students’ Union
【答案】
Notice
Aimed at arousing and cultivating students’ enthusiasm in learning English, our school is to hold an English Voice Acting Competition. If you’re interested, such a good opportunity is this that it is highly recommended that you participate.
In accordance with the rules of the competition, all entries are required to have clear sound quality and be no longer than 15 minutes, otherwise it will be disqualified. However, no restriction is imposed concerning the theme on condition that it is appropriate. Lastly, be sure to submit your work to studentunion123@abc.com by May 1st.
We’re expecting to appreciate your wonderful talents! Looking forward to your participation!
The Students’ Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。为激发学生英语学习的兴趣,你校将举办英文配音(voice acting)作品大赛。请你以校学生会的名义用英语写一则通知。
第一步:词汇积累
旨在做……:be aimed at (doing) sth.→be designed for (doing) sth.
培养:cultivate→raise
热情:enthusiasm→eagerness, zest
根据:in accordance with→according to, in line with
取消……的资格:disqualify→ban
但是:however→nevertheless, nonetheless
推行,采用:impose→enforce
第二步:句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Aimed at arousing and cultivating students’ enthusiasm in learning English, our school is to hold an English Voice Acting Competition.
拓展句:Our school, which is aimed at arousing and cultivating students’ enthusiasm in learning English, is to hold an English Voice Acting Competition.
第三步:高分句型
【高分句型1】If you’re interested, such a good opportunity is this that it is highly recommended that you participate.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句、such开头的倒装句、such… that引导的结果状语从句、that引导的主语从句)
【高分句型2】However, no restriction is imposed concerning the theme on condition that it is appropriate.(运用了on condition that引导的条件状语从句)
6.(2023上·浙江·高三校联考阶段练习)假如你是李华,某国际学校英语报“Cross-cultural Communication”栏目的负责人,请你写一则通知,呼吁全校学生向专栏投稿,内容包括:
1.栏目简介;
2.稿件要求;
3.投稿方式和截止日期。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
NOTICE
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The English Newspaper
【答案】
NOTICE
To enrich the column “Cross-cultural Communication” in our school’s English newspaper, I'd like to welcome you to write an article for us.
The “Cross-cultural Communication” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students, which introduces colorful cultures around the world and related stories. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. This time, we hope you could write about the different ways of cross-cultural communication and the opinion of various cultures.
Your article should be no less than 400 words and you are expected to email the article to culture@ before November 28.
The English Newspaper
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生作为某国际学校英语报“Cross-cultural Communication”栏目的负责人写一则通知,呼吁全体学生向专栏投稿。
第一步:词汇积累
受欢迎的:popular →well-received
相关的:related → relative
不同的:different →various
不少于:no less than → at least
第二步:句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.
拓展句:It carries articles which are written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.
第三步:高分句型
【高分句型1】To enrich the column “Cross-cultural Communication” in our school's English newspaper, I'd like to welcome you to write an article for us.(运用了不定式作目的状语)
【高分句型2】The “Cross-cultural Communication” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students, which introduces colorful cultures around the world and related stories.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
7.(2023上·安徽芜湖·高二统考期末)假定你是学生会主席李华,你校国际部将邀请Smith教授于本周五进行关于“How to learn effectively”的讲座,请根据以下内容写一则通知。
1. 时间和地点;
2. 演讲内容:高效学习的方法和优点;
3. 注意事项:佩戴口罩。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节。
Notice
It's hereby announced that there is going to be a lecture themed “How to learn effectively”.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Student Council
December 18, 2021
【答案】
Notice
It's hereby announced that there is going to be a lecture themed “How to learn effectively".
The lecture, to be given by a well-known educator, Professor Smith, will take place in the school hall at 8:00 am on May 21, 2021(this Friday). Divided into 2 parts, the speech will firstly cover several effective approaches to learning in senior high. In addition, the benefits of effective learning will also be included.
Meanwhile, there is another thing you're expected to pay special attention to: throughout the lecture, everyone present is required to wear a mask.
Whoever is interested is welcome. Please arrive on time.
Student Council
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则关于校国际部将邀请Smith教授于本周五进行关于“How to learn effectively”的讲座的通知。
第一步:词汇积累
著名的:well-known→famous
包括:cover→include
方法:approach→method
此外:In addition→moreover
第二步:句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The lecture, to be given by a well-known educator, Professor Smith, will take place in the school hall at 8:00 am on May 21, 2021 (this Friday).
拓展句:The lecture, which will be given by a well-known educator, Professor Smith, will take place in the school hall at 8:00 am on May 21, 2021 (this Friday).
第三步:高分句型
[高分句型1]It's hereby announced that there is going to be a lecture themed “How to learn effectively".(运用了that引导的主语从句且用it作形式主语)
[高分句型2]Meanwhile, there is another thing you're expected to pay special attention to: throughout the lecture, everyone present is required to wear a mask.(运用了省略that的定语从句)
8(2023春 福建厦门 校考期中)假定你是李华,你校下周将举办主题为“Healthy Lifestyle”的展览,请你以学生会的名义,写一则通知,内容包括:
1. 展览时间与地点;
2. 展览内容与亮点;
3. 希望大家踊跃参与。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Notice
Intended to raise students’ health awareness, an exhibition whose theme is Healthy Lifestyle is scheduled to be held at 2 o’clock sharp next Friday afternoon in the auditorium.
Practical health knowledge, ranging from balanced diets to regular exercise, will be vividly displayed through pictures. Additionally, real cases of applying psychological theories are also on show. The highlight is the speech section delivered by noted experts, in which students can interact and exchange personal experiences.
Your active engagement is highly anticipated. (80 words)
The Student Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生会的名义就学校下周将举办的主题为“Healthy Lifestyle”的展览写一则通知。
第一步:词汇积累
展览:exhibition→display
此外:additionally→in addition
部分:section→part
著名的:noted→famous
第二步:句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Practical health knowledge, ranging from balanced diets to regular exercise, will be vividly displayed through pictures.
拓展句:Practical health knowledge, which ranges from balanced diets to regular exercise, will be vividly displayed through pictures.
第三步:高分句型
【高分句型1】Intended to raise students’ health awareness, an exhibition whose theme is Healthy Lifestyle is scheduled to be held at 2 o’clock sharp next Friday afternoon in the auditorium.(运用了whose引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】The highlight is the speech section delivered by noted experts, in which students can interact and exchange personal experiences.(运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句)
9(2023 全国 模拟预测)假定你是红星中学学生会主席李华,学生会准备开展一次“人工智能与未来教育”的专家讲座活动。请你写一则英语通知发布到学校英文网站,号召同学们积极参加,内容包括:
1. 活动时间和地点;
2. 专家简介和讲座内容;
3. 报名方式。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
Lecture: AI and Tomorrow’s Education
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
the Student Union
【答案】
Notice
Lecture: AI and Tomorrow’s Education
The recent rapid development of AI technology has attracted many students’ attention, so a lecture with the theme “AI and Tomorrow’s Education” is scheduled to be held in our school auditorium from 1:45 p.m. to 3:00 p.m. on June 20th.
The lecture will be delivered by Professor Wu, a leading researcher in AI technology. Firstly, he will offer you a general picture of this technology, which can help you become familiar with its history and development. Secondly, how AI technology can be applied to and affect tomorrow’s education will be further explained. Furthermore, there will be a question-and-answer session for you to raise relevant questions and get answered.
If you are interested in this lecture, don’t miss it. You can register with the Student Union before June 16th.
the Student Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生以学生会主席的身份发布一则“人工智能与未来教育”的专家讲座的通知,要求说明讲座的时间和地点,介绍主持讲座的专家的信息和讲座的内容,并提供报名方式,邀请同学们积极参与。
第一步:词汇积累
吸引某人的关注:attract one’s attention→capture one’s eye/appeal to sb.
熟悉:be familiar with→familiarize oneself with/have a good knowledge of/have a good understanding of
影响:affect→influence/impact
解释:explain→explicate/clarify
此外,而且:furthermore→moreover/what is more
第二步:句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:The recent rapid development of AI technology has attracted many students’ attention, so a lecture with the theme “AI and Tomorrow’s Education” is scheduled to be held in our school auditorium from 1:45 p.m. to 3:00 p.m. on June 20th.
拓展句:Since the recent rapid development of AI technology has attracted many students’ attention, a lecture with the theme “AI and Tomorrow’s Education” is scheduled to be held in our school auditorium from 1:45 p.m. to 3:00 p.m. on June 20th.
第三步:高分句型
【高分句型1】Firstly, he will offer you a general picture of this technology, which can help you become familiar with its history and development.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)《2024年1月“九省联考”英语真题解读与考后变式训练》
专题10 应用文写作-通知+节约 (二次开发+微技能+名校模拟拟) 原卷版
(
原题呈现
) 变式方向:通知类词汇,通知类句式,句式仿写,满分作文,通知类试题汇编
书面表达关键词:人与社会,书面通知,节约粮食,活动通知,“德智体美劳”五育并举
你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动,节约粮食”的作文比赛。请你写一则活动通知,内容包括:
(1)介绍活动目的;
(2)说明参赛要求。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动,节约粮食”的作文比赛写一则活动通知。
第一步:词汇积累
比赛:competition→contest
集中:focus on→concentrate on
鼓励:encourage→hearten
主题:theme→topic
第二步:句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, themed “Hand in Hand, Save the Food”.
拓展句:Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, whose theme is “Hand in Hand, Save the Food”.
第三步:高分句型
[高分句型1] The competition aims to raise awareness about the importance of saving food. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] Entries should consist of an original piece of writing, focusing on the theme of food waste and showing how we can contribute to its reduction. (运用了how引导宾语从句)
(
2023年四省联考
)
你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论,内容包括:
1. 音乐会特点;
2. 观看感受;
3. 意见建议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
This online concert is absolutely fantastic.
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生就学校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会,在线上留言板上写一则评论。
第一步:词汇积累
确定无疑地:undoubtedly→without doubt
尤其地:particularly→ especially
感动:touch→ move
希望:hope→ expect
第二步:句式拓展
同义句
原句:Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.
拓展句:There is no doubt that their performances are of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.
第三步:高分句型
【高分句型1】Their performances are undoubtedly of high quality, which makes the concert almost no different from a live one.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I enjoyed every second of the concert and was particularly attracted when the boys and girls from Britain started to sing the traditional Chinese song “Liang Zhu”. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
(
同款高考真题
)
(2018·全国·高考真题)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together,内容包括:
(1)短片内容:学校的发展;
(2)放映时间、地点;
(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意:
(1)词数100左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(
考点变式训练
)
一、语篇填空再练(完全重新设空,符合高考命题理念)
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
Our school English newspaper is excited to announce the upcoming writing competition, 1 (theme) “Hand in Hand, Save the Food”. The competition aims 2 (raise) awareness about the importance of saving food.
All students 3 (encourage) to participate. Entries should consist of an 4 (original) piece of writing, 5 (focus) on the theme of food waste and showing 6 we can contribute to its 7 (reduce). Please submit your entries to the English Department mailbox 8 the deadline of June 1st.
We look forward to 9 (you) participation and creative 10 (submission).
二、高频句式一句多译
一)比赛的细节如下。
二)比赛将于周五下午三点举行,五点结束。
三)比赛机会难得,不容错过。
四)盼望你的参与。
三、书面通知必备十句话
1. 为了提高人们的环保意识,我们学校将在下周日组织一次以垃圾分类为主题的有意义的活动。
2. 照片的要求如下。
3. 根据安排,这部电影将于本周五下午2点至3点在学校礼堂放映。
4. 它提供给所有渴望展现中国诗歌才华的留学生。
5.如果你感兴趣,请在9月25日前在国际部大厦301室报名。
6.我们衷心希望热心观鸟爱好者为这项运动作出贡献。
7.我相信,只有每个人的贡献和参与,这场运动才能创造奇迹。
8.亲爱的朋友们,不要错过这个机会,与我们分享你们最喜欢的中国节日。
9.在我们的共同努力下,我们周围的环境将焕然一新。欢迎任何人加入我们!
10.任何想报名的人都填写申请表,并在本周五之前与我们联系。
四、满分范文(六篇)
【范文1】Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
We are excited to announce the "Join Hands, Save Food" English Writing Competition. This event aims to promote sustainable practices and raise awareness about the importance of conserving food resources.
All students of our school are encouraged to participate. To enter, simply submit an original essay in English on the topic of saving food. Your essay should be between 300-500 words and include your name, grade, and class on the cover page. The deadline for submissions is Jan 20.
We encourage all students to take advantage of this opportunity to showcase their creativity and language skills. Let's work together to create a greener and more sustainable future.
the English Department
【范文2】Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
We are pleased to announce that our school’s English newspaper is organizing an essay competition with the theme “Take Action, Save Food.” The purpose of this competition is to raise awareness about the importance of conserving food and encourage everyone to take active measures towards reducing food wastage.
To participate, please take note of the following requirements: First, essays should be written in English and be original. Second, the word count should be around 80 words. Third, the content should focus on the significance of saving food and suggest practical ways to minimize food waste. And remember that submissions should be sent to the English Department by the specified deadline.
Joining this competition provides an excellent opportunity to showcase your English writing skills while promoting an important cause. Let’s come together and make a difference!
the Student Union
【范文3】Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
In order to raise people's awareness of the importance of food conservation, our school's English newspaper is planning to organize a writing competition themed “join hands, save food”.
Participating students are required to write an essay between 300-500 words and submit to the school English newspaper office before the deadline of February 28. The top three winners will have the opportunity to have their essays published.
We encourage you to use this opportunity to voice your thoughts and share your ideas on how we can all contribute to reducing food waste. Looking forward to your active participation.
the Students’ Union
【范文4】Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
To raise people's awareness of the importance of food conservation and encourage everyone to take action, our school's English newspaper is organizing a writing competition on the theme of “Join Hands, Save Food".
The competition requirements are as follows. First of all, your essay should be closely related to the theme, well-structured, and free from plagiarism, with a minimum of 500 words. We encourage you to be creative and use persuasive language to convey your message effectively. In addition, please submit your essays via email attachment, including your full name, grade level, and contact information in the body of the email by next Friday.
We believe that everyone can make a difference in food conservation, and we hope to see your active involvement and contribution.
the Students’ Union
【范文5】Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
We are excited to announce that our school's English newspaper is organizing an essay competition with the theme "Join Hands, Save Food." The details are as follows:
The aim of this activity is to raise awareness about environmental protection and promote the importance of saving food. Through your essays, we hope to encourage everyone to adopt responsible eating habits and reduce food waste, contributing to a sustainable future. Participants are required to submit an essay in English with a word count of approximately 150-200 words. Your essay should reflect a positive and proactive approach towards food conservation, emphasizing the significance of the issue and offering practical suggestions. Please submit your entries to the editorial department of the English newspaper by the end of this month.
Let's join hands and take action together to build a society that values food conservation! Stay tuned for further updates and more details in the English newspaper.
the Students’ Union
【范文6】Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
Our school is scheduled to organize an English writing competition themed with "Joint Efforts to Save Food", with the purpose of enhancing the students' awareness to cherish food and put an end to waste, so that they learn thrift as a habit by heart and bear it in mind.
The article is required to be focused on the theme, with the sharing of the students' practices and opinions of saying no to food waste as well as the specific measures to promote the "Clean Plate Campaign". Each and every article may as well be limited to no more than 500 words, attached with the class and name of the author.
Your active participation is highly expected, and please keep those around you informed.
the Students’ Union
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解题指导
)
一、通知常用地点语料库
1. at the meeting room
2. in the lecture hall
3. in the auditorium 在礼堂
4. in the teachers’ office
5. at the school gate
6. on the playground
7. in the lab
8. on the second floor
二、通知常用时间语料库
1. on Saturday morning
2. from 9:00 am to 11:00am
3. in September, 2024
4. on Wednesday, December 12, 2024
5. on the morning of this Sunday
三、通知常用“目的”多样化表达语料库
1. in order to do
2. to do…
3. Aimed at…
4. Targeted at…
5. With the aim of
6. With the intention of…
7. With the purpose of…
8. For the sake of…
四、通知常用“参加”多样化表达语料库
1. join in…
2. take part in
3. participate in
4. be involved in
5. be engaged in
6. sign up for
7. register for,,,
8. enroll sb in…
五、通知常用“第一”多样化表达语料库
1. first/firstly
2. to begin/start with
3. first and foremost
4. in the first place
5. first of all
六、通知常用“欢迎参加”多样化表达语料库
1. Whoever is interested is welcome to participate.
2. You are welcome to participate and share!
3. Looking forward to your photography works.
4. We are looking forward to your participation.
5. Your active engagement is highly anticipated.
七、通知常用“学生会”多样化表达语料库
1. the Student Union
2. the Students’ Union
八、书面通知思维导图
注意事项:
1.通知的内容要齐全,对象、缘由、时间、地点等一定要明确;
2.通知通常是告知未来要做的事情,因此时态一般用将来时;
3.通知要语言简明、条理清晰。
九、书面通知答题模板
Notice
In order to_________(通知缘由), we are going to hold_________ (具体活动) at_________ (活动时间、地点).
By then, _________ (活动介绍). All the_________ (参加者)are expected to _________ (注意事项1). More importantly, _________(注意事项 2).
We are looking forward to your active participation.
(发通知单位)
(发通知时间)
注意事项:三大部分
1. 标题:NOTICE
2. 主题:首段阐明通知缘由;第二段详细交代通知注意事项;第三段表示欢迎和期待。
3. 通知单位:右下角,发出通知单位和时间
十、书面通知经典背诵
Notice
Aimed to arouse our interest in reading and enrich our school life, the Student Union is scheduled to hold Classic Books Sharing activity.
Themed “Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”, the activity is arranged in the lecture hall on February 24, which starts at 2:00 pm and lasts approximately two hours. Any student who has a passion for this activity can bring your favourite book and share your comments and experiences. If possible, you can make powerpoint to make it more vivid and effective.
If you are interested, please sign up in Room 101, Building 2 before February 15. We are looking forward to your participation.
The Students’ Union
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名校好题汇编
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1.(2023上·海南·海口一中校考期中)假定你是某国际学校学生会主席,你校本周五下午将举办一场主题为“安全上网 (Safe Internet Access)”的讲座。请你代表学生会,写一份书面通知。
内容包括:
1. 讲座的具体信息(目的、主题、时间、地点、内容等);
2. 参加讲座的注意事项。
NOTICE
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Student Union
2.(2022·河南·西平县高级中学校联考模拟预测)假定你是学生会主席李华,你校将举办一场中外交流活动,征集以“我和春节”为主题的优秀摄影作品。请你用英语写一则通知,内容包括:
1. 活动的目的;
2. 活动的要求;
3. 表达期待。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Notice
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The Students' Union
3.(2023·河北·校联考三模)假定你是校学生会主席李华, 学生会将举行以“Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”为主题的校园读书分享活动。请你根据提示写一则通知告知国际部学生,内容包括:
1.活动意图;
2.活动内容;
3.欢迎参加。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
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The Student Union
4.(2023下·浙江绍兴·高二统考期末)假定你是某国际学校学生会主席李华,你校将于近期举办一场有关急救知识的讲座。请你以学生会的名义写一则英语通知。内容包括:
1.时间及地点;
2.活动内容;
3.注意事项。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Notice for a Lecture on First Aid
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The Student Union
5.(2023·黑龙江大庆·统考三模)为激发学生英语学习的兴趣,你校将举办英文配音(voice acting)作品大赛。请你以校学生会的名义用英语写一则通知,内容包括:
1. 比赛目的;
2. 作品要求;
3. 截止日期。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
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The Students’ Union
6.(2023上·浙江·高三校联考阶段练习)假如你是李华,某国际学校英语报“Cross-cultural Communication”栏目的负责人,请你写一则通知,呼吁全校学生向专栏投稿,内容包括:
1.栏目简介;
2.稿件要求;
3.投稿方式和截止日期。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
NOTICE
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The English Newspaper
7.(2023上·安徽芜湖·高二统考期末)假定你是学生会主席李华,你校国际部将邀请Smith教授于本周五进行关于“How to learn effectively”的讲座,请根据以下内容写一则通知。
1. 时间和地点;
2. 演讲内容:高效学习的方法和优点;
3. 注意事项:佩戴口罩。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节。
Notice
It's hereby announced that there is going to be a lecture themed “How to learn effectively”.
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December 18, 2021
8(2023春 福建厦门 校考期中)假定你是李华,你校下周将举办主题为“Healthy Lifestyle”的展览,请你以学生会的名义,写一则通知,内容包括:
1. 展览时间与地点;
2. 展览内容与亮点;
3. 希望大家踊跃参与。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
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9(2023 全国 模拟预测)假定你是红星中学学生会主席李华,学生会准备开展一次“人工智能与未来教育”的专家讲座活动。请你写一则英语通知发布到学校英文网站,号召同学们积极参加,内容包括:
1. 活动时间和地点;
2. 专家简介和讲座内容;
3. 报名方式。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
Lecture: AI and Tomorrow’s Education
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the Student Union

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